The Crime Genre “The crime story concerns our desire for justice, and by extension the very security of our social structure. Because it explores a primal need, feeling secure in the fundamental notions of right and wrong, it remains and will always remain at the top of story popularity.” —Shawn Coyne https://storygrid.com/crime-genre/ Read The Tell-Tale Heart by Edgar Allen Poe Short Story Elements Story element Observations [Analysis) Title What situation or themes does the title imply? Exposition Introducing scenario and plot What do we know after the first paragraph or two? Description What do you know about place or character after the first page? Dialogue What does the dialogue reveal about the situation, characters, and other details? Development How does the opening scenario change, and (change/conflict what role does conflict or tension play? /tension) Ending Short Story Structure How does the short story’s ending tie it all together? The Arch Plot Structure Rising Action tension builds Begins with an Exposition introducing setting, scenario & characters Climax a crime is committed Conflict inciting incident Falling Action with the cover up & investigation Resolution perpetrator identified and justice restored Exposition Hooks the reader into the story and provides important background information (e.g. character backstory or historical setting). Typically, this moment is when an event thrusts the protagonist into the main action of the story. Exposition Writing Tips Conflict A struggle between two opposing forces, usually a protagonist and an antagonist. An inciting crime or an incitement to commit a crime. Internal conflict occurs when a character experiences two opposite emotions or desires – good/evil, love/hate – as in The Tell-Tale Heart. This disagreement causes the character to suffer mental agony, developing a unique tension in a story, marked by a lack of action. Inciting Incident Writing Tips External conflict occurs when a character struggles against other characters in the story, e.g. Harry Potter’s battle against Lord Voldemort. External conflicts can also occur with society or nature e.g. advocating for religious freedoms, or fighting for survival against the forces of nature. Rising Action Narrative events that grow in suspense and tension towards the highest point of the story – the climax. This key element begins with what characters want. The primary source of tension underlying conflict is your characters’ motives. What do they desire? What stands in their way? This is the seed of your story’s conflict. Rising Action Tips Climax The point in a narrative at which the conflict or tension hits the highest point. A structural part of a plot, and at times referred to as a “crisis.” A decisive turning point when the rising action turns around into a falling action. Story Climax Examples and Tips Falling Action Occurs right after the climax and wraps up the narrative, resolves its loose ends, and leads toward the resolution. Audiences expect a low ebb after every great tide to provide relief and a rewarding element in a story. It is like a road from climax to resolution, and if the road is vacant, the story may end abruptly. E.g. The interview scene in The Tell-Tale Heart (by Edgar Allan Poe) Resolution The final part of a story, unfolding of a complicated issue in a story. Resolution is also known as a “denouement.” Closing scenes provide resolution where ambiguous clues are explained, the puzzle solved and the perpetrator identified and perhaps, brought to justice. Following a heart-racing and anxiety-triggering climax, resolution gives audiences the opportunity to relax. It brings all disturbing conflicts into order, and helps the central theme of the story to resonate. Setting An environment in which a story takes place. It may provide information about placement and timing, such as Sydney, Australia, in the year 1788. Setting could be simply descriptive, like a lonely cottage on a mountain. Social conditions, historical time, geographical locations, weather, immediate surroundings, and timing are all aspects of setting. Both the scene and timeline of events are cleverly constructed through realistic and factually detailed references. Story Setting Ideas Mood Evokes various emotional responses in readers through words and descriptions. Word choices can convey deep feelings, and depict the events, places, and characters, affecting the way the reader feels about them. Creates atmosphere by means of setting, theme and tone, ensuring the readers emotional attachment to the piece. Examples of mood: ‘The Fall of the House of Usher’ by Edgar Allan Poe First-Person Narration The narrator tells a story, recounting events from their own point of view Reader and narrator uncover the case together in present tense creating a sense of immediate action, unfolding now. Character Protagonist Antagonist The central character or leading figure in a narrative. A protagonist is sometimes a “hero” to the audience or readers. A character, or a group of characters, which stands in opposition to the Protagonist, which is the main character. https://www.nownovel.com/blog/types-of-antagonists/ Characterisation Characters represent types of people, ideas and values, drive the action, determine the plot, and engage the reader. Details personalise the crime and increase suspense as the audience relates to the characters Characterisation exercises Tone An attitude of a writer/character toward a subject or an audience. Tone, in a piece of literature, decides how the readers read a literary piece, and how they should feel while they are reading it. Moreover, tone bestows voice to characters, and throws light on the personalities and dispositions of characters that readers understand better. Plot Sequence of events where each affects the next through the principle of cause-and-effect Plot is typically linear – starts with the crime, followed by clues, evidence, solutions and punishment. Other crimes may occur as subplots. Plot Exercises Clue Evidence that points to the criminals identity Clues point the audience in the right direction, leading to a solved case To Suspect To beleive that someone is guilty of doing something, usually a crime To think something is likely or possible without actual or adequate proof Suspense A state or feeling of excited or anxious that something might happen Guilt and innocence are often confused which delays the investigative process and helps build suspense & tension Obfuscate Make unclear, obscure or confusing Looking at evidence subjectively (personal or emotional bias) can obfuscate key evidence and stall investigations Red herring Something, especially a clue, that is meant to be misleading or untrue Directs the audience away from the right conclusion, through false trails or dead ends, creating a puzzle to solve through careful and logical thought Flashback A scene that takes place before a story begins. Takes the audience back in time, then forwards to the present time. Past events are a critical in providing context clues. Alibi A claim or piece of evidence that demonstrates that the suspect was not present at the crime. Evidence must show that the suspect was somewhere else, and the crime requires them to be there to commit it. Dialogue Spoken conversation between two or more characters Dialogue is important as theories are talked through Inner Dialogue – the characters speak to themselves and reveal their personalities. Outer Dialogue – a simple conversation between two characters, used in almost all types of fictional works. 421 Alternatives to 'said' Writing Tense Dialogue Motive A reason for doing something, especially one that is hidden or not obvious A clear reason for the criminals actions Justice Behavior that is according to what is morally correct and fair Provides readers with a resolution that does not always prevail in true crime Theme A main idea or an underlying meaning of a literary work, which may be stated directly or indirectly. A major theme is an idea that a writer repeats in his literary work, making it the most significant idea in the work. A minor theme, or motif, on the other hand, refers to an idea that appears in a work briefly, giving way to another minor theme. Guided Practice Fun, practical writing workouts on using tenses correctly: Let’s Write! Start writing your story... Online Planning Tool