UPPER SECONDARY SCHOOL SUPPORT MATERIAL FOR CONTINUOUS WRITING SECTION OF
SPM ENGLISH LANGUAGE 1119
ESSAY TYPE
THEME:
Instructions:
1. This module is divided into 6 sections: Let’s Recall, Let’s Discover, Let’s Learn, Let’s Replace,
Let’s Expand and Let’s Create.
2. You MUST attempt each section in sequence. DO NOT skip any section.
3. READ and understand all the instructions given.
English Language Teaching Centre (ELTC)
Ministry of Education Malaysia
2018
QUESTION
: Your town was hit by a major flood during the rainy season last year. Begin
your story with, “It had been raining all day …”
Look at this picture. Think of words or phrases that are related to it.
Write your words or phrases in the Circle Map below.
Image Source : https://www.businessinsider.my/malaysias-banks-are-stepping-up-to-help-flood-victims-with-funds-moratoriums-and-waivers/
Example: water, boat These are common words that are used in essay related to flood.
flooded
wiped out
belongings
boat
affected
natural disaster
evacuated
important documents
water
water
evacuation
Flood
downpour
continuous heavy rain
rainy season
emergencies
destroying home
boat
rescuers
four feet of standing water
flood relief centres
suffered
temporary shelter
flood victims
drowned
swept away car
covered in water and mud
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Read the sample essay below.
Type of essay: Narrative
Paper 1: Section B: Continuous writing
QUESTION: Your town was hit by a major flood during the rainy season last year.
Begin your story with, “It had been raining all day …”
You must begin your essay with words given
It had been raining all day. I was doing my homework in the living room. My two
brothers were playing in front of our house. The rain became heavier and heavier.
Just as I had finished my homework, my brothers ran to the living room and told
me that there was water everywhere. I went outside and noticed that the water in the
drain had overflowed! The water was flowing into the parking space. I quickly called my
parents. Within ten minutes, the water had already risen to our doorstep. My parents
quickly took some important things. The water level rose swiftly. Soon, we had to move
to the rooftop.
Some of my neighbours were already on the roof with their possessions. Most of
them were using umbrellas as it was still raining. It had turned dark and we hoped for
the best. We prayed for some assistance.
A few hours later, we saw flashes of light. To our delight, we discovered that it
was the rescue squad. We were overjoyed to see them coming to our rescue in boats.
Our family and all the other victims were brought to a relief centre which was located
in a school not affected by the flood.
For SPM, you are required to write at least 350.
This sample is to give you ideas on how to write your story.
You should elaborate more on certain parts to make it longer.
(204 words)
Adapted from: english312.com/rain.html
Glossary
noticed: become aware of
overflowed: be so full that the contents go over the sides
swiftly: at high speed quickly
posessions: things that you own
assistance: the action of helping someone by sharing work
delight:great pleasure
rescue:save someone from a dangerous or difficult situation
victims: a person harmed, injured, or killed as a result of an accident, crime or other event
affected: influenced or touch by an external factor
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Table I:
Read the information in the table below. The information in the table is from the sample
essay in Let’s Discover.
No.
1.
A
B
C
Words
Meaning in
context
Synonyms
noticed
observing or
paying
attention to
something
•
•
•
•
observed
detected
noted
spotted
D
E
Phrases/
Idiomatic
Expressions
Examples of use
• take notice
of
You should take
notice of the situation
around you.
• sit up and
take notice
Please sit up and
take notice as the
teacher speaks.
It may have escaped
• escape
somebody’s your notice, but I am
busy right now.
notice
2.
3.
overflowed
swiftly
so full that the
contents go
over the sides
at high speed,
in a very short
time
•
•
•
•
•
overloaded
overran
rapidly
quickly
briskly
• overflowed
with
The drain overflowed
with rubbish after
the rainstorm.
• overflowed
into
The drain water
behind our house
overflowed into our
kitchen.
• as swift as
an arrow
As swift as an arrow,
Mary finished her
exam and raced out
of the classroom.
• swift and
sure
Her dancing was very
swift and sure.
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No.
4.
5.
6.
7.
A
B
C
Words
Meaning in
context
Synonyms
things that you
own
• belongings
• goods
possessions
assistance
delight
rescue squad
help given to
someone
great pleasure
an emergency
service or
organisation
that uses
special
equipment or
knowledge to
rescue people
• help
• aid
• support
• happiness
• excitement
• glad
•
•
•
rescue
team
rescue
party
rescue unit
D
E
Phrases/
Idiomatic
Expressions
Examples of use
• in
someone’s
possession
The book is now in my
possession.
• take
possession
The bank took
possession of my car.
• come to
someone’s
assistance
A kind driver came to
our assistance.
• assist in
Ana is going to assist
me in this project.
• be in a
transport
of delight
I have been in a
transport of delight
ever since I got
engaged.
• ravished
with
delight
Mary was ravished
with delight with the
dozens of roses.
• come to
someone’s
rescue
The lifeguard came to
the drowning child’s
rescue.
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No.
8.
A
B
C
Words
Meaning in
context
Synonyms
victims
people who are
harmed,
injured or
killed as a
result of a
crime, accident
or other event
or action
9.
relief centre
a centre that
provides food,
temporary stay
and services
for people who
are in need
10.
affected
influenced by
an external
factor
•
•
•
•
•
•
•
sufferers
injured
parties
casualties
shelter
crisis
centre
influenced
touched by
D
E
Phrases/
Idiomatic
Expressions
Examples of use
• fall victim
to
Many families have
fallen victim to the
flash flood.
• fashion
victim
Sarah is a fashion
victim who always
needs to wear branded
items.
• go on
relief
I had to go on relief
since I lost my job six
months ago.
• affected
by
The family was
affected by the death
of the old man.
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Fill in the blanks with suitable words or phrases from Column C in Table I of Let’s Learn.
QUESTION: Your town was hit by a major flood during the rainy season last year. Begin
your story with, “It had been raining all day …”
It had been raining all day. I was doing my homework in the living room. My two
brothers were playing in front of our house. The rain became heavier and heavier.
Just as I had finished my homework, my brothers ran to the living room and told
noticed/saw
me that there was water everywhere. I went outside and ____________
that the water in
over_
_
_
_
_
_
the drain had ______________! The water was flowing into the parking space. I quickly
called my parents. Within ten minutes, the water had already risen to our doorstep. My
sw_ _ _ _ _
parents quickly took some important things. The water level rose ______________.
Soon,
we had to move to the rooftop.
poss_ _ _ _ _ _ _
Some of my neighbours were already on the roof with their _______________.
Most
of them were using umbrellas as it was still raining. It had turned dark and we hoped for
assist_ _ _ _
the best. We prayed for some _____________________.
del _ _ _ _
A few hours later, we saw flashes of light. To our _______________,
we discovered
res _ _ _
that it was the ______________
squad. We were overjoyed to see them coming to our
vic _ _ _ _
rescue in boats. Our family and all the other _______________
were brought to a
rel_
_
_
cen_
_
_
aff_
_
_
_
_
__________________ which was located in a school not _______________ by the flood.
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Introduction
Parts
Read the essay you have completed in Let’s Replace. Expand the essay in Column 2 by
answering the questions in Column 1.
Column 1
Column 2
Questions/Notes
for Expansion
Practice
in my hometown, Kedah.
1. Where was the rain?
It had been raining all day (1) ___________
It was bright and sunny the day before and we did not expect to be
2. Why were you doing your
__________________________________________
confined in the house on that day.
homework in the living room?
I was doing my homework in the living room
I did not want to be distubed by my overzealous siblings.
3. Add a describing word or
(2) because
_______________________________________
I had to finish few sets of maths exercises before the school started.
phrase.
__________________________________________
Example: active/younger
My two ____________________________________
active little brothers were in their bedroom. They were
having fun as I heard them giggling and laughing
4. Where were the brothers
(3)________________________________________
from the room.
playing?
__________________________________________
video games since they could not
My brothers were playing (4) ____________________
5. When did the rain become
go out playing football. I could tell they were frustrated with the day's
heavier?
__________________________________________
adverse weather.
and the wind
The rain became heavier and heavier (5) ________
started
to
blow
strongly.
_________________________________________.
Body 1
I could sense it was going to be a heavy downpour and quickly prayed
for the rain to stop.
1. Add a describing word
or phrase.
Example: looking worried
2. Add a describing word or
phrase.
Example: very quickly/ rapidly
3. Add a describing word
or phrase.
Example: dirty/murky/ muddy
4. Where were your
parents?
Just as I had finished my homework, my
anxiously
brothers ran to the living room and (1) __________
________________ told me that there was water
everywhere. I went outside and noticed that the
rapidly
water in the drain had overflowed (2) _________
and had covered the whole area The (3) __________
murky and muddy
_________________________!
________________________________ water was
flowing into the parking space. I quickly called my
who were having a tea time at the kitchen.
parents (4) ________________________________
They were in total shock looking at what had happened.
__________________________________________
Within ten minutes, the water had already risen
to our doorstep. My parents quickly took some
important things.I also helped them to pack few essential belongings
like clothes and medications. We packed lightly because this was
an emergency situation and what matter the most was our dear life.
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Parts
Body 2
Body 3
Conclusion
Column 1
Column 2
Questions/Notes
for Expansion
Practice
1. How did you move to the
rooftop?
Example: quickly
2. What kind of possession?
Example: such as documents
and valuables/that will be
useful
3. How did you feel?
Example: frightened/ anxious
The water level rose swiftly. Soon, we had to
by climbing up the ladder.
move to the rooftop (1) _________________
We helped one another to reach the top as it was the safest place
__________________________________________
to avoid from the strong current.
Some of my neighbours were already on the roof
Like us, they brought few bags packed
with their possessions. (2) ____________________
with documents and valuables. My mom warned us to sit still while
__________________________________________
my dad looked for rescuers. I was scared looking at a few houses that
(3) _______________________________________
were covered in water and mud. There were also some goods
and overturning car that had been washed away by the heavy rain.
After a while, I saw most of my neighbours were on the roof.
1. Add describing words/
Phrases.
Example: valuable, important
2. Add words/phrases.
Example: from the Fire and
Rescue Department/
from the authorities
Most of them were using umbrellas as it was
still raining. It had turned dark and we hoped for
or else we had
the best. We prayed for some assistance (1) _____
to spend our night out in the cold. Dad calmed us down by telling us
_________________________________________.
that the rescuers from Fire and Rescue Department would come
(2) _______________________________________
any time soon. He reasoned out that it took a while for the authorities to reach
_________________________________________.
1. Add a word/phrase.
Example: from a distance/
coming towards us.
2. How do did you feel about
the rescue?
Example: relieved/happy
A few hours later, we saw flashes of light
coming towards us.
(1) _______________________________________
__________________________________________
To our delight, we discovered that it was the
rescue squad. We were overjoyed to see them
coming to our rescue in boats. Our family and all
the other victims were brought to a relief centre
which was located in a school not affected by the
I felt so relieved because my family and I were no longer in
flood.(2)___________________________________
danger.
We hoped and prayed that the flood would be over so that
__________________________________________
we
could
start
our life back again.
_________________________________________.
us as there were many victims that need to be rescued.
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Now you are ready to write an essay. Do your best!
Instructions: Write a composition of about 350 words on the following topic. You are advised
to spend about one hour to complete this task.
You experienced a landslide that occurred in your housing area. Write a story ending
with, “… I was glad the day had come to an end.”
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UPPER SECONDARY SCHOOL SUPPORT MATERIAL FOR CONTINUOUS WRITING SECTION OF
SPM ENGLISH LANGUAGE 1119
ESSAY TYPE
THEME:
Instructions:
1. This module is divided into 6 sections: Let’s Recall, Let’s Discover, Let’s Learn, Let’s Replace,
Let’s Expand and Let’s Create.
2. You MUST attempt each section in sequence. DO NOT skip any section.
3. READ and understand all the instructions given.
English Language Teaching Centre (ELTC)
Ministry of Education Malaysia
2018
QUESTION: Describe how to maintain a healthy body.
Look at this picture. Think of any words or phrases that are related to it.
Write your words or phrases in the Circle Map below.
Image source: https://www.vectorstock.com/royalty-free-vector/color-poster-elements-sport-healthy-lifestyle-vector-14995230
Example: exercise, food
kick off the bad habit
you're what you eat
balanced diet
avoid negative
avoid junk food/fast food
thinking
mix with positive
drink enough
exercise
people
plain water
de-stress
Healthy
Lifestyle
join sports
listen to your
doctor
sufficient sleep
be grateful
food
no smoking or drinking
regular medical check-up
enjoy life to the fullest
listen/watch to health programmes
health is wealth
healthy body, healthy mind
2
Read the sample essay below.
how means 'ways'
QUESTION: Describe how to maintain a healthy body.
introduction
Maintaining a healthy body is neither easy nor difficult. There is a need to be
healthy. Here, we will give some tips on how to have a healthy life.
Use sequence connector for a better flow
1st Main idea/topic sentence
One of the most important tips for a healthy body is to have a healthy diet. Avoid
In this para,
junk
food.
Your diet should contain food which has nutrients. Try to include leafy
you should only
elaborate on
vegetables, fresh vegetables, fruits, milk, and fish in your daily diet. Make sure you have
your topic sentence
which is
your breakfast every day. Skipping your breakfast regularly will definitely affect your
having a
health. You need to drink enough water so that you will not get dehydrated. Therefore,
healthy diet.
make sure you drink eight glasses of water daily.
You should
only write
or elaborate
on exercise
in this para.
2nd topic sentence
Conclusion.
It is better
for you not
to add any
new point/topic
sentence in
conclusion.
Try to justify/
explain
how exercise
can maintain
a healthy
body.
Exercise also plays a vital role in keeping your body healthy. Regular exercise will
keep you fit. You can jog or cycle daily. Find some free time to exercise. It is nice to
have a medical check-up to get an idea about your health.
Sequence connector
only elaborate
how managing
stress
can help
to maintain
a healthy body
The topic
sentence is
having a
healthy diet.It
is followed
by sentences
on how/what/
when/
related to
healthy diet.
3rd topic sentence.
Apart from these, you should always try to manage your stress. Most people have
health problems due to stress. By managing your stress, you can maintain a healthy body.
Bad habits like smoking and staying up late at night should be avoided. These habits have
side effects on your health. Your body should get sufficient rest. Make sure you sleep at
least 8 hours daily. A good sleep is very important to maintain a healthy body.
The tips above can help you to have a fit and healthy body. You must be
determined to practise a healthy lifestyle to get a healthy body.
(258 words)
You only
need to
summarise
what you have
mentioned
and give
words
of encouragement.
Adapted from Essays, UK. (November 2013). How to Keep Yourself Healthy Essay. Retrieved from https://www.ukessays.com/essays/physical-education/how-to-keepyourself-healthy-physical-education-essay.php?vref=1
If you write like a sample above, your essay will be more organised.
It is easier for your examiner to understand and follow you ideas.
Besides, it prevents you from 'beating around the bush' or repeat the same
ideas.
In real SPM, expand/elaborate more as you have to write not less than 350 words.
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Table I:
Read the information in the table below. The information in the table is from the
sample essay in Let’s Discover.
A
B
C
Words
Meaning in
context
Synonyms
No.
D
E
Phrases/
Idiomatic
Expressions
Examples of use
1.
tips
a piece of
advice
• suggestions
• advice
• a free bit of
advice
I would like to share
with you a free bit
of advice on how to
be healthy.
2.
diet
• selection of
food and
drink
• on a diet
I didn't eat any cake
because I'm on a
diet.
3.
nutrients
food and
drink
frequently
eaten
vitamins that
are obtained
from the
food we eat
• supplements • an apple a
day keeps
• vitamins
the doctor
• mineral
away
You must have heard
that an apple a day
keeps the doctor
away; so, take some
fruits with you and
follow a healthy
diet.
4.
skipping
to miss out
doing
something
• ignoring
• missing out
• leaving out
• skip out on
I should not skip out
on having breakfast.
• skip over
She always skips
over lunch to lose
weight.
5.
dehydrated
losing water
from the
body
• dried out
• drained
When you are
drained, you should
drink water
immediately.
6.
daily
every day
• everyday
• each day
Raha eats breakfast
at seven o’clock in
the morning every
day.
4
A
B
C
D
E
Words
Meaning in
context
Synonyms
Phrases/
Idiomatic
Expressions
Examples of use
7.
vital
necessary
8.
manage
to be in
charge of
9.
sufficient
enough
10.
determined to make up
your mind
to do
something
No.
•
•
•
•
•
important
essential
necessary
handle
control
Losing 20 kg is vital
to be healthy.
•
•
•
•
enough
ample
adequate
plenty of
Drinking eight
glasses of water
every day is
adequate to keep
you going.
• persistent
• perseverant
If you think you
cannot handle
stress, you should
see the counsellor
before it gets worse.
• determination
is the key to
success
She worked hard to
lose weight to win
the contest;
determination is
the key to success.
Her determination
was the key to her
success in losing
weight.
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Fill in the blanks with suitable words or phrases from Column C in Table I of Let’s Learn.
QUESTION: Describe how to maintain a healthy body.
Maintaining a healthy body is neither easy nor difficult. There is a need to be
useful tips
healthy. Here we will give some ______________
on how to have a healthy life.
One of the most important tips for a healthy body is to have a healthy
chips and salted snack
junk food.like
Your
diet should contain food which has
______________. Try to include leafy vegetables, fresh vegetables, fruits, milk,
and fish in your daily diet. Make sure you have your breakfast every day.
Intentionaly
skipping
______________
your breakfast regularly will definitely affect your health. You
dehydrated which can cause headaches, lethargy and
need to drink enough water so that you will not get ______________.
Therefore,
constipation.
or
more
daily
make sure you drink eight glasses of water ______________.
and balanced diet
______________.
Avoid
good and essential nutrients
vital
Exercise also plays a ______________ role in keeping your body healthy.
and reduce your risk of getting heart attack.
Regular exercise will keep you fit. You can jog or cycle daily. Find some free time
Even if it is only takes 10 minutes, you are doing your body a huge favour.
to exercise. It is nice to have a medical check-up to get an idea about your health.
Your doctor will let you know of your current health condition and advise you further on how to keep
dangerous disease at bay.
manage
Apart from these, you should always try to ______________ your stress. Most
people have health problems due to stress. By managing your stress, you can
maintain a healthy body. Bad habits like smoking and staying up late at night
It will take a huge toll of your body as it can weaken your immune system.
should be avoided. These habits have side effects on your health. Your body should
enough
get ______________
rest. Make sure you sleep at least 8 hours daily. A good sleep
is very important to maintain a healthy body.and should not be taken lightly
The tips above can help you to have a fit and healthy body. You must be
determined
______________
to practise a healthy lifestyle to get a healthy body.
As an old and famous adage states 'Health is wealth'.
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Parts
Read the essay you have completed in Let’s Replace. Expand the essay in Column 2 by
answering the questions in Column 1.
Column 1
Column 2
Questions/Notes
for Expansion
Practice
Introduction
1. Replace with another describing
word/phrase.
Example: simple
2. Replace with another describing
word/phrase.
Example: complicated/hard/
complex
Maintaining a healthy body is neither
simple
complex
(1) ______________
nor (2) __________________
We need to accomplish
There is a need to be healthy. (3) ___________
many things in life and it requests a sound body and mind. When our
_________________________________________
health is being compromised so do our quality of life.
Here we will give some advice to have a happy
and healthy life.
3. Add a sentence.
Why is it important to be
healthy?
Body 1
1. Add two sentences.
a. Give examples of junk food.
b. Why is junk food unhealthy?
One of the most important tips for a
healthy body is to eat a healthy selection of
You inevitably indulge in
food and drinks. Avoid junk food. (1a) ________
deep fried chicken, salty snacks and sugary drinks as they taste delicious.
________________________________________
Most of you are aware that too much consumption of those junk food
(1b) ____________________________________
can
be
detrimental but take no heed. As a result you are putting ourselves
________________________________________
at risk of getting obesity and even a premature death! Starting from now,
pay attention on your diet. Your diet should contain food which has
supplements and vitamins. Try to include leafy
vegetables, fresh vegetables, fruits, milk, and
fish in your daily diet. Make sure you have your
breakfast every day. Ignoring your breakfast
regularly will definitely affect your health. You
need to drink ample water so that you will not
get dehydrated. Therefore, make sure you drink
eight glasses of water every day.
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Parts
Questions/Notes for
Expansion
1. Add four sentences.
a. List another two exercises.
b. How frequently should you
exercise?
c. How long should each
session be?
d. How many times a year
should you go for a medical
check-up?
Conclusion
Column 2
Practice
Exercise also plays an important role in
keeping your body healthy. Regular exercise
will keep you fit. You can jog or cycle daily.
If you are looking for more intense exercise, you can consider kick boxing
(1a) ___________________________________
or aerobic dancing. Just enrol yourself at any fitness centre because they
________________________________________
usually offer such classes for their members.
You should exercise frequently and consistently at least 3 times a week for 30 minutes.
(1b) ____________________________________
Set an exercise reminder if you are afraid of forgetting. 30 minutes might be ardous
________________________________________
to some especially the beginners.
Find some free time for you to exercise. (1c) __
Thus you can start with 10 or 15 mins and build your stamina from there.
________________________________________
Just remember that small steps do count.
________________________________________
It is advisable to have a medical check-up to
Depending on your health condition,
get an idea about your health. (1d) __________
you
should
be
seeing
your
doctor
for
general
check-up
annually. One prominent
________________________________________
benefit of doing this is they can detect if there is any life-threatening disease such
as cancer earlier. Some unfortunate people had lost their lives just because
they only knew about their cancer at later stage. By taking a proactive measure like
seeing your doctor regularly may help to increase your lifespan and quality of life.
1. Add three sentences.
a. What causes stress?
b. Suggest two ways to
manage stress.
c. Suggest two other
unhealthy habits.
Apart from these, you should always try
to reduce your stress. Most people have health
Never-ending workload or achieving
problems because of stress. (1a) ____________
one's
dreams
can
be
the
main
cause
of
stress
and it is inevitable since we are living
________________________________________
in a highly competitive world where everyone wants to be the best.
By managing your stress, you can maintain a
One of the ways is to stop comparing yourself with others
healthy body. (1b) ________________________
especially those who are greater than you. Give yourself time to develop according
________________________________________
to your own pace. Besides, take some time off and go for a vacation. It helps your
body and mind to refresh and rejuvenate.
Bad habits such as smoking and staying up late
Binge watching your favourite netflix
at night should be avoided. (1c) _____________
or
playing
mobile
games
until
late
at
night
is
not good either.
________________________________________
These habits have side effects on your health.
Your body should get sufficient rest. Make sure
you sleep at least eight hours daily. A good
sleep is very essential to maintain a healthy
body.
1. Add one or two sentences to
conclude.
a. Add another advice to
conclude
b. Add an idiom to conclude.
The tips above can help you have a fit
and healthy body. You must be committed and
have perseverance to practise a healthy
Seek help or support from
lifestyle to get a healthy body. (1a) __________
family members or trusted friends once you are ready to change yourself
________________________________________
and embark in a journey for a better health. Remember the saying by
(1b) ____________________________________
Jim Rohn, " Take care of your body. It's the only place you have to live'
________________________________________
Body 3
Body 2
Column 1
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Now you are ready to write another essay. Do your best!
Instructions: Write a composition of about 350 words on the following topic. You are advised
to spend about one hour to complete this task.
Describe how healthy habits are important in our life. You should write about the healthy
habits and explain why they are important.
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UPPER SECONDARY SCHOOL SUPPORT MATERIAL FOR CONTINUOUS WRITING SECTION OF
SPM ENGLISH LANGUAGE 1119
ESSAY TYPE
THEME:
Instructions:
1. This module is divided into 6 sections: Let’s Recall, Let’s Discover, Let’s Learn, Let’s Replace,
Let’s Expand and Let’s Create.
2. You MUST attempt each section in sequence. DO NOT skip any section.
3. READ and understand all the instructions given.
English Language Teaching Centre (ELTC)
Ministry of Education Malaysia
2018
QUESTION: Describe a family member who has inspired you.
Look at this picture. Think of any words or phrases that are related to it.
Write your words or phrases in the Circle Map below.
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Example: loving, caring, dark hair, straight nose
supportive
caring
active
prioritise family
a good listener
a loyal
husband
responsible
My Father
funny
patient
loving
selfless
forgiving
dark hair
generous
always make
me laugh
2
Read the sample essay below.
mention only one family member of your choice
QUESTION: Describe a family member who has inspired you.
It is best if
you introduce
a family
member of
your choice in the
first para
rather than
writing a para
about yourself.
My name is Haziq Aiman bin Abdullah. I am 17 years old. I am staying in Bandar
Saujana Utama. I was born in Petaling Jaya. My date of birth is on 16th of September
2001. I study at SMK Saujana Utama. I have five siblings. I have two brothers and two
sisters. My father is a mechanic and my mother is a housewife. The family member who
inspires me is my father. important keywords
My father’s name is Abdullah bin Ahmad. He is 45 years old. He was born in
Malacca. My father is lanky and handsome. He has a straight nose and dark hair. He is
very kind. He likes to eat chicken fried rice. His hobby is fishing.
main idea/ topic sentence
My father inspires me because he works diligently for our family. My father is
How your
father inspire
working in Subang Jaya. He goes to work at 7 a.m. and comes back at 6.00 p.m. He
you.
works far from home, but he never complains. He is a very dedicated man. That is why
he inspires me a lot.
main idea/ topic sentence
This para
My
father
is a loving and kind man. He buys food and clothes for us. He also helps
is describing
how your my mother to wash the dishes and helps us with our homework. He is the reason why I
father
can complete my homework every day. He also buys presents for our birthdays although
being a loving
and kind he does not have a lot of money.
man.
This para
focuses on
describing
physical
attributes
this para is
describing
about how your
father works
diligently for
your family
In conclusion, a family member who inspires me is my father. I want to grow up
to be just like him.
In conclusion you may add your hope/wish for your father.
(250 words)
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Table I:
Read the information in the table below. The information in the table is from the sample
essay in Let’s Discover.
No.
1
A
B
C
Words
Meaning in
context
Synonyms
inspire
to make
someone feel
they want to
do something
and can do it.
• motivate
• persuade
• encourage
D
Phrases/
Idiomatic
Expressions
• inspire
someone with
something
• inspire
something in
someone
2
lanky
tall and thin
and move
rather
awkwardly
•
•
•
•
•
3
handsome
good-looking,
especially in
having
regular,
pleasing, and
well-defined
features
• fine-looking
• goodlooking
• attractive
• gorgeous
• stunning
• elegant
• personable
slender
slim
lean
skinny
bony
E
Examples of use
She motivated us
with heroic stories.
You inspire
patriotism in me.
• lanky kid
The lanky kid
transformed almost
overnight into a
handsome young
man.
• handsome is
as handsome
does
I know you don't
think he's very
good-looking, but
he's just the nicest
guy, and
handsome is as
handsome does.
•
high, wide,
and
handsome
Johnny is in a bit
of a bad mood, but
just give him a new
toy to play with
and he will be
high, wide, and
handsome again in
no time.
4
No.
A
B
C
Words
Meaning in
context
Synonyms
D
Phrases/
Idiomatic
Expressions
• kind-hearted
person
4
kind
having or
showing a
friendly,
generous,
sympathetic,
or warmhearted
nature.
• concerned
• considerate
• benevolent
5
hobby
An activity or
interest
pursued
outside one's
regular
occupation
and engaged
in primarily
for pleasure.
• pastime
• leisure
• pursuit
6
diligently
steady
attention and
effort that is
undertaken to
accomplish
something
• conscientious • in a diligent
manner
• hardworking
• tireless
7
complains
To express
• grumbles
feelings of
• whines
dissatisfaction
•
ride (one's)
hobby-horse
E
Examples of use
She is a kindhearted teacher as
she likes to help
poor students in
her school.
Once grandpa rides
his hobby-horse
about fishing,
there's no stopping
him!
He is a very
dedicated worker.
He does his job in
a diligent manner.
• complain
about
If you love your job
so much, quit
complaining about
it.
• complain of
The patient came
into the clinic
complaining of
stomach pain.
• complain to
If you complain to
the teacher, your
phone will be
taken away.
5
No.
8
A
B
C
Words
Meaning in
context
Synonyms
wholly
committed to
a cause
• purposeful
• committed
• devoted
dedicated
D
Phrases/
Idiomatic
Expressions
• dedicate to
someone
E
Examples of use
The song was
dedicated to me.
• dedicate to
something
He devoted
himself to writing
songs.
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loving
feeling,
showing, or
indicating love
and affection
• caring
• affectionate
• tender loving
care
Children just need
a little tender
loving care and
they'll be happy.
10
presents
things that are
bestowed
voluntarily and
without
compensation
• gifts
• make
someone a
present of
something
I'll make you a
present of your
class.
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Fill in the blanks with suitable words or phrases from Column C in Table I of Let’s Learn.
QUESTION: Describe a family member who has inspired you.
My name is Haziq Aiman bin Abdullah. I am 17 years old. I am staying in
Bandar Saujana Utama. I was born in Petaling Jaya. My date of birth is on 16th of
September 2001. I study at SMK Saujana Utama. I have five siblings. I have two
brothers and two sisters. My father is a mechanic and my mother is a housewife.
inspires me is my father.
The family member who ___________
My father’s name is Abdullah bin Ahmad. He is 45 years old. He was born in
lanky and ___________.
handsome He has a straight nose and
Malacca. My father is ___________
dark hair. He is very _______.
He likes to eat chicken fried rice. His _________
hobby is
kind
fishing.
hard
My father inspires me because he works _________for
our family. My father
is working in Subang Jaya. He goes to work at 7 a.m. and comes back at 6.00 p.m.
complains He is a very ___________man.
He works far from home but he never ___________.
dedicated
That is why he inspires me a lot.
My father is a ________
loving and kind man. He buys food and clothes for us. He
also helps my mother to wash the dishes and helps us with our homework. He is the
presents for
reason why I can complete my homework every day. He also buys ____________
our birthdays although he does not have a lot of money.
In conclusion, a family member who inspires me is my father. I want to grow
up to be just like him.
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Body 1
Introduction
Parts
Read the essay you have completed in Let’s Replace. Expand the essay in Column 2 by
answering the questions in Column 1.
Column 1
Column 2
Questions/Notes for
Expansion
Practice
Fill in the blanks with
information about
yourself.
Amirah
My name is ___________________________________.
I am ____________
years old. I am staying in
17
Selangor
Subang
Bestari
________________. I was born in ________________.
My
3rd
June
2013
date of birth is _____________. I study at
SMK Subang Bestari
4
___________________________.
I have ____________
2
siblings.
I
have
_____________brothers
and
malay
_____________ sisters. My father is a _______________
2
and my mother is a ____________________.
The family
half-chinese
member who inspires me is my father.
Rahman Bin Ali
My father’s name is _______________________.
He is
Alor
Setar
years old. He was born in ___________ My
tall
well-built
handsome too
father is _________,
____________
and _____________.
fair
complexion
black
He has a __________ and ___________ hair. He is
a
loving
father
to all of us He likes to eat ____________.
home-cooked mealHis hobby
Add details:
___________.
travelling around the globe while trying all sort of new activities.
a. When does he do his
is _____________________________________________
My father is an adventurous man and he always brings us
hobby?
(a) ____________________________________________
to many places whenever he has a chance. He told us once that it
b. Why does he like his
(b) ____________________________________________
was his childhood dream to explore the world and get to know other
hobby?
_______________________________________________
cultures and people. According to his travel journal, he has been to
20 countries up till now.I enjoyed looking at his old photos with my
_______________________________________________
mother when they were travelling together.
Fill in the blanks with
information about your
father.
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___________
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Parts
Body 2
Column 1
Column 2
Questions/Notes for
Expansion
Practice
Fill in the blanks with
information about your
father.
Conclusion
Body 3
Add details:
a. How does he go to
work?
b. Why does he never
complain?
My father inspires me because he works hard for our
the
one of established companies in the
family. My father is working in_____________________.
(a) country.
____________________________________________
of hisDue to his vast experience in the field, he is currently the
head department.
7 in the morning
He goes to work at _________________
and comes back
8
in
the
evening
at _______________. He works far from home, but he
It takes him almost an hour to go to his workplace
never complains. (b) ______________________________
from our home and he has been going back and forth for almost 25 years
_______________________________________________
now.
That is why he inspires me a lot.
Add details:
a. How does that make
you feel?
responsible father and kind man. He
My father is a _________________
buys food and clothes for us. He also helps my mother
to wash the dishes and helps us with our homework. He
is the reason why I can complete my homework every
and presents for our birthdays
day. He also buyscake
________________
Although
although he does not have a lot of money. (a) ________
he
is a very busy man, never he misses his family's important events
_______________________________________________
like birthdays, anniversary,wedding or graduation. For him, family is his
main priority.
What values have you
learnt from your father?
In conclusion, I have learnt a lot of from my father.
He teaches me to be compassionate towards others especially
_______________________________________________
among family members. He always reminds me to not forgetting
_______________________________________________
of my root wherever I go or who I would become in the future.
_______________________________________________
inherit
I_______________________________________________
believe most of my good traits I enherit from him and I am
proud
to be called as his son. I pray my father will be blessed
_______________________________________________
and stand by me until his last breath.
_______________________________________________
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Now you are ready to write another essay. Do your best!
Instructions: Write a composition of about 350 words on the following topic. You are advised
to spend about one hour to complete this task.
Describe someone you know who does well in life. Write about his/her achievements and
explain how he/she has overcome the challenges in life.
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UPPER SECONDARY SCHOOL SUPPORT MATERIAL FOR CONTINUOUS WRITING SECTION OF
SPM ENGLISH LANGUAGE 1119
ESSAY TYPE
THEME:
Instructions:
1. This module is divided into 6 sections: Let’s Recall, Let’s Discover, Let’s Learn, Let’s
Replace, Let’s Expand and Let’s Create.
2. You MUST attempt each section in sequence. DO NOT skip any section.
3. READ and understand all the instructions given.
English Language Teaching Centre (ELTC)
Ministry of Education Malaysia
2018
QUESTION: Kindness begins at home. How can kindness be nurtured by parents at home?
Look at this picture. Think of any words or phrases that are related to it.
Write your words or phrases in the Circle Map below.
Image source: https://www.google.com/search/parents+and+children+together
Example: share, empathy
togetherness
respect reward
teach
share
exemplary
cooperate
honest
praise
tolerance
selfless
thoughtful
cultivate
compliment
Kindness
at home
practice
look up
good habit
early years
family members
empathy
elderly
task
2
Read the sample essay below.
You need to write on the relevant ways parents can instill kindness at home
Quotation
QUESTION: Kindness begins at home. How can kindness be nurtured by parents at
home?
You can explain
the meaning
of the quotation in
your introduction.
Children’s education begins at home. Parents should teach their children to be
good members of society because parents are the models to their children and have
greater influences on them.
1st way is to
At home, children first start to learn, talk, and express their feelings. Parents
main idea/topic sentence
act or train them to follow such behaviour. Educating children about love, empathy,
kindness, and socially acceptable behaviour is a must at home. Children learn by
imitating the behaviour of their elders. Parents can teach their children to obey, be
honest, be loyal and respect others.
educate
children
about love,
emphaty, etc
main idea/topic sentence
2nd way is
In addition, children should be taught to help the needy members of our
community. Parents can teach their children about social responsibilities effectively
through their actions. For example, if a father helps a blind person cross the road, his
children will likely to do the same.
children be
taught to
help needy
members.
main idea/topic sentence
Parents should also provide their children with guidelines on how to behave and
have good manners. Therefore, children grow up to become confident with strong good
values. At the same time, children will learn to deal with day to day matters and
respond to difficult situations.
3rd way is
provide
guidelines
on how to
behave.
To conclude, it is undeniable that parents have a huge responsibility in
nurturing their children to be good and useful members of society. This will help their
children to lead a good life.
In conclusion, summarise role of parents. Do not add new point. You can include
the impact of kindness being nurtured at home to the society.
(228 words)
Adapted from: https://www.ukessays.com/essays/physical-education/how-to-keep-yourself-healthy-physical-education-essay.php
3
Table I:
Read the information in the table below. The information in the table is from the sample
essay in Let’s Discover.
No.
A
B
C
D
E
Words
Meaning in
Context
Synonyms
Phrases/
Idiomatic
Expressions
Examples of use
1.
influences
the capacity
to have an
effect on the
behaviour of
someone
• impacts
• under the
influence
The impact of social
media on children is
huge.
2.
behaviour
manner of
behaving or
acting
• demeanour
• manners
• best
behaviour
Ramlah was happy
with her son’s
manners when
speaking to guests.
3.
empathy
the ability to
share
someone’s
feelings,
thoughts, or
attitudes by
imagining
what it would
be like to be
in someone’s
situation.
• understanding
• sympathy
• empathize
with
A psychiatrist
should be an
understanding
person.
4.
acceptable
worthy of
being
accepted.
able to be
agreed on
• tolerable
• agreeable
• approvable
The weather was
• acceptable
performance hot but still
tolerable.
5.
elders
older people
• seniors
• your elders
and betters
You may not want
to go, but your
elders and betters
think you should.
4
No.
A
B
C
D
E
Words
Meaning in
Context
Synonyms
Phrases/
Idiomatic
Expressions
Examples of use
6.
obey
submit to the
authority of
(someone)
•
•
•
•
take
accept orders
comply
adhere to
• he who
cannot
obey,
cannot
command
Chuan cannot seem
to do anything I ask
him to. He will
never get
anywhere; he who
cannot obey,
cannot command.
7.
needy
very poor,
lacking in
basic
necessities
• underprivileged
• disadvantaged
• unable to
make
ends meet
The charity club is
targeting to help
the
underprivileged
children in Kuala
Lumpur.
8.
guidelines
general rules
• recommendations
• principles
• instructions
• rule of
thumb
The guidebook
comes with clear
recommendations
on how to use it.
9.
undeniable
unable to be
denied
certainly true
• unquestionable
• obvious
• indisputable
• beyond
doubt
It is
unquestionable
that Siti Nurhaliza
is the best singer in
the country.
•
•
•
•
• taking
care of
10.
nurturing
caring for
and
protecting
someone
while they
are growing
bringing up
attend to
look after
raise
• beyond a
shadow of
a doubt
Wani wants to stay
at home and bring
up her children.
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Table II:
Read the words and phrases in the table below. They will help you to organise your ideas
clearly.
First reason/
opinion
To emphasise
earlier
reason/
opinion
To introduce
examples
•
•
•
•
•
To start off
To begin with
The first reason
First and foremost
One important reason
• Thus
• As a result
• Due to this
• Therefore
• Consequently
• In view of this
• In other words
• To put it simply
•
•
•
•
•
•
For example
For instance
… mainly
… such as …
… in particular
An example of this is
Next reason/
opinion
•
•
•
•
•
•
Next
Besides
Another
Furthermore
In addition
It is also found that
To introduce
other possible
opinion
•
•
•
•
•
•
Yet
By contrast
In comparison
In other words
On the other hand
Another possibility is
•
•
•
•
•
•
•
•
Finally
To sum up
To conclude
In conclusion
On the whole
My final reason
Last but not least
It can therefore be
concluded
To conclude
6
Fill in the blanks with suitable words or phrases from Column C in Table I and from Table II
of Let’s Learn.
Children’s education begins at home. Parents should teach their children to be
good members of society because parents are the models to their children and have
impact
greater ______________on
them.
At home, children first start to learn, talk, and express their feelings and parents
behaviour
act or train them to follow such _____________.
Educating children about love,
empathy
acceptable
____________, kindness, and socially _______________behaviour
is a must at home.
elders
Children learn by imitating the behaviour of their _______________.
Parents can teach
obey
their children to _________, be honest, be loyal and respect others.
needy
In addition, children should be taught to help the ___________members
of our
community. Parents can teach their children about social responsibilities effectively
through their actions. For example, if a father helps a blind person to cross the road,
his children will likely do the same.
guidelines
Parents should also provide their children with ____________on
how to behave
and have good manners. Therefore, children grow up to become confident with strong
good values. At the same time, children will learn to deal with day to day matters and
respond to difficult situations.
undeniable that parents have a huge responsibility in
To conclude, it is ___________
nurturing their children to be good and useful members of society. This will help
___________
their children to lead a good life.
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Body 1
Introduction
Parts
Read the essay you have completed in Let’s Replace. Expand the essay in Column 2 by
answering the questions in Column 1.
Column 1
Column 2
Questions/Notes
for Expansion
Practice
1. What are some
other things that
parents can do to
teach their
children at home?
2. Why is it
important for
children to be
good members of
the society?
1. What are some
other examples of
behaviour that
parents can teach
their children?
Children’s education begins at home. Parents should
teach their children to be good members of society because
parents are the models to their children and have greater
influences on them. Parents can also (1) _______________
show their children examples
of kind acts done by good Samaritans around the globe and how it has affected people lives
__________________________________________________.
to be better.
It is important for children to be good members of society
they will shape the future of the world by behaving in civilized manner.
because (2) ________________________________________
World will be a peaceful place to live if everyone is playing their role and parts by being
__________________________________________________.
responsible, respectful and selfless. This can be achieved with the right upbringing
from home especially during the early years.
At home, children first start to learn, talk, and express
their feelings. Parents act or train them to follow such
behaviour. Educating children about love, empathy,
kindness, and socially acceptable behaviour is a must at
home. Children learn by imitating the behaviour of their
elders. Parents can teach their children to obey, be honest,
be loyal and respect others. Apart from that, parents can
also teach children to (1) _____________________________
be grateful and not to be greedy especially with
material
possessions.
Children
sometimes
are oblivious towards the unfortunate who
__________________________________________________.
live from hand to mouth. They waste money on the unnecessary items or overpriced brands
Body 2
just to appear glamorous and trendy among their friends.
1. What are some
examples of ‘help’
that the children
can give to the
needy people.
In addition, children should be taught to help the
needy members of our community. Parents can teach their
children about social responsibilities effectively through
their actions. For example, if a father helps a blind person
to cross a road, his children will likely do the same. Another
by helping them carrying
example that children can give needy people is (1) _______
their heavy stuffs or even holding the door for them to go out safely. It might seem
__________________________________________________.
a small act but it reflects one's attitude of being considerate. Children also can learn to be
mindful towards the needy by giving up their seat in the LRT or bus when they see
the elderly or pregnant lady is standing nearby them. They should be taught not to turn
a blind eye when encountering such situation.
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Parts
Column 1
Column 2
Questions/Notes for
Expansion
Practice
Body 3
1. What are other
benefits of being
kind to others?
Parents should also provide their children with
guidelines on how to behave and have good manners.
Therefore, children grow up to become confident with
strong good values. At the same time, children will learn to
deal with day to day matters and respond to difficult
situations. Additionally, being kind to others will teach
children to (1) ______________________________________
practice good habits taught by their parents.
When the children practice good habits towards others, it will eventually shape
__________________________________________________.
their personality to be a respectful person. Besides, children can experience joy and
Conclusion
utmost satisfaction especially when people's lives have changed due to their good deeds.
1. How does being
kind to others
impact the nation?
2. How does good
behaviour help us
in the future?
To conclude, it is undeniable that parents have a huge
responsibility in nurturing their children to be good and
useful members of the society. This will help their children
to lead a good life. More importantly, being kind will impact
not only individually but socially. The number of crimes
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have responsible and functional citizens
will ultimately help us to (2) _________________________
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Now you are ready to write an essay. Do your best!
Instructions: Write a composition of about 350 words on the following topic. You are
advised to spend about one hour to complete this task.
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UPPER SECONDARY SCHOOL SUPPORT MATERIAL FOR CONTINUOUS WRITING SECTION OF
SPM ENGLISH LANGUAGE 1119
ESSAY TYPE
THEME:
Instructions:
1. This module is divided into 6 sections: Let’s Recall, Let’s Discover, Let’s Learn, Let’s Replace,
Let’s Expand and Let’s Create.
2. You MUST attempt each section in sequence. DO NOT skip any section.
3. READ and understand all the instructions given.
English Language Teaching Centre (ELTC)
Ministry of Education Malaysia
2018
1
QUESTION:
Write about a girl who lost her parents but managed to achieve success
in life. Begin your story with: “Marina’s plans shattered into a million
pieces when…”
Look at this picture. Think of words or phrases that are related to it.
Write your words or phrases in the Circle Map below.
Image Source: Pexel.com
Example: sad, confused
light at the end of the tunnel
clueless
sad
identity
grief
struggling
suicidal thought
confused
freedom
lonely
finding support
lost
Teen
Problems
move on
pressure
losing hope
disatisfaction
immature
rebellious
disappointment
strong-willed
blaming others
reckless
2
Read the sample essay below.
Identify the storyline and the characters involved.
Your story must contain a female character who lost her
parents, and a story of her success in life despite losing her
parents. Success in life can be she had a good job/ she
managed to open her own company/ she became the
founder of product etc.
* The tense used in the sentence is in past tense.
QUESTION:
Write about a girl who lost her parents but managed to achieve
success in life. Begin your story with: “Marina’s plans shattered
into a million pieces when…”
Start by
introducing
main character
and her
struggles
Marina’s plans shattered into a million pieces when her mother and father
passed away. She was alone with only a rabbit to keep her company. Marina’s
rabbit was called Fluffy. Fluffy was very dear to Marina because her father had
bought it for her. It was a difficult time for her since she would soon be sitting for
her SPM. Luckily, she had her Aunt Amy who was willing to help take care of her
after her parent’s death.
Develop the
story by
showing
how main
character
found
source of
strength
One day, a tractor ran over her little rabbit. Now, she felt sadder than ever.
Aunt Amy saw her crying and walked over to console her. “Do not let sadness rule
you. Remember dear, you will be sitting for SPM soon. Be strong and you will
succeed.” A wise advice from Aunt Amy. Marina remembered those words and
recited them throughout the night. She hoped that it would be a better day
tomorrow.
Elaborate
on how
the main
character
finally
succeeded
despite
her painful
situation.
From that day onwards, Marina started to study hard. She stayed focused in
school with Aunt Amy giving her support and motivation. When the SPM results were
announced, Marina received the surprise of her life. She had passed her exam with
flying colours.
You must
use the sentence
given to
begin your story.
Do not
change the
words.
Include the
obsctacles she
had to overcome
Be clear on
how
she worked
her way through
(195 words)
Adapted from: yourstories: An unexpected death, https://www.theguardian.com
For SPM, you need to write longer, at least 350 words. Expand the
storyline above to meet the required number of words.
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Table I:
Read the information in the table below. The information in the table is from the sample
essay in Let’s Discover.
No.
1
A
B
C
Words
Meaning
in context
Synonyms
shattered
break or
cause to
break
suddenly
and
violently
into
pieces.
 smashed
 broke
 burst
D
E
Phrases/
idiomatic
expressions
Examples of use
 shattered
into a
million
pieces
My heart was
shattered into a
million pieces when I
heard the shocking
news.
 shatter one’s
hopes
I became a lawyer
after my parents
shattered my hopes of
becoming an artist.
2
dear
regarded
with deep
affection
 loved
 precious
 greatly
liked
3
bought
obtain
something
by
payment
 purchased
 obtained
 “money
can’t buy
happiness”
Although he is very
rich, he does not have
many friends. It shows
that “money can’t buy
happiness”.
move at a
regular
pace
 went over
 ambled
 walk out
She quickly walked out
of the house when she
heard the news.
 walk away
She slowly walked
away from scene of the
accident.
4
walked
over
Fluffy is very precious
to me.
4
No.
A
B
C
Words
Meaning in
context
Synonyms
D
E
Phrases/
idiomatic
expressions
Examples of use
5
console
comfort
(someone) at a
time of grief or
disappointment



comfort
calm
soothe
6
sadness
the condition or
quality of being
sad



despair
misery
sorrow

sadder
but
wiser
The old man became
sadder but wiser
after the accident.
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wise
having or
showing
experience,
knowledge and
good judgement


clever
brilliant

wise
up
It is time to wise up
and tell those
around you that
enough is enough.

as wise
as an
owl
The boy looked as
wise as an owl
when he wore the
spectacles
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recited
say aloud (a
series of names,
facts, etc)



narrated
uttered
repeated
9.
study
the devotion of
time and
attention to
gaining
knowledge of an
academic
subject



learn
work
revise
obtained good
results

10.
passed

achieved
good results
in
obtained
good results
in
Aunt Amy
comforted Marina
when her mother
passed away.
She recited the
poem in front of the
whole class.

quick
study
Jane, who is a quick
study, caught the
joke immediately.

slow
study
Fred who is a slow
study, never caught
on to the joke.

passed
with
flying
colours
Anita studied hard
and
passed
her
exam with flying
colours.
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Fill in the blanks with suitable words or phrases from Column C in Table I of Let’s Learn.
QUESTION:
Write about a girl who lost her parents but managed to achieve
success in life. Begin your story with: “Marina’s plans shattered into
a million pieces when…”
shattered
Marina’s plans ______________
into a million pieces when her mother and
father passed away. She was alone with only a rabbit to keep her company. Marina’s
special
rabbit was called Fluffy. Fluffy was very _________to
Marina because her father had
bought
_______________
it for her. It was a difficult time for her since she would soon be
sitting for her SPM. Luckily, she had her Aunt Amy who was willing to help take care
of her after her parent’s death.
One day, a tractor ran over her little rabbit. Now, she felt sadder than ever.
walked
over
Aunt Amy saw her crying and ______________
_______________
to
console
____________________ her. “Do not let _______________
rule you. Remember dear,
sadness
you will be sitting for SPM soon. Be strong and you will succeed.” A
wise
_________________
advice from Aunt Amy. Marina remembered those words and
recited
____________________ them throughout the night. She hoped that it would be a
better day tomorrow.
study
From that day onwards, Marina started to ______________________hard.
She
stayed focused in school with Aunt Amy giving her support and motivation. When the
SPM results were announced, Marina received the surprise of her life. She had
passed
__________________
her exam with flying colours.
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Introduction
Parts
Read the essay you have completed in Let’s Replace. Expand the essay in Column 2 by
answering the questions in Column 1.
Column 1
Column 2
Questions/Notes
for Expansion
Practice
1. Add a female name.
Example: Sheila/Milah
2. Add a male name.
Example: Ahmad/Amir
3. Add time and reason of death.
4. Add describing words or
Phrases.
Example: cute/little/white
5. When did her father buy the
rabbit?
6. Add describing words or
Phrases.
Example: dear/lovely/kind
Marina’s plans shattered into a million pieces
Mrs Amal
when her mother, (1)_________________________
Mr Rahmat
and father, (2)______________________________
last school holidays on a tragic accident
passed away (3) _____________________________
when their car collided with a truck from opposite direction.
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She
was
alone
with
only
a
cute
and
white
(4)____________________
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rabbit to keep her company. Marina’s rabbit was
called Fluffy. Fluffy was very dear to Marina
because her father had bought it for her (5)
after she became the top of her class in her final.
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Marina was suprised because she thought her father would not
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like an idea of having a rabbit at home.
It was a difficult time for her since she would soon
be sitting for SPM. Luckily, she had her (6)
caring and loving
_________
_______________ Aunt Amy who was
willing to help take care of her after her parent’s
death. Aunt Amy was her mother's little sister and they
were very close. Aunt Amy did not hesitate to look after
Marina and be her guardian as she always doted on her niece
since she was a baby.
her lucky strs.
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Body 1
Parts
Body 2
1. What was Marina doing in the
garden with Fluffy the
rabbit?
2. Think of an incident that
could cause the rabbit to
jump to the middle of the
road.
3. Add linkers.
Example: suddenly/after that
4. Add a describing word or
phrase.
Example: big/huge
5. Elaborate more on her
feelings.
6. Write an idiom or a proverb
related to hopes.
Column 1
Questions/Notes
for Expansion
1. Why did Marina start to study
hard? Give at least two reasons.
2. What was the activity that she
could do with her friends in
school?
3. How did she react when she got
her SPM results?
Marina was feeding Fluffy
One day, (1) _____________________________
with his favourite carrot.
____________________________________________.
He
hopped
happily
around and did not notice he was too near the roadside.
(2) _________________________________________.
Suddenly
big and huge
(3) _______________,
a (4) ____________________
tractor ran over her little rabbit. Now, she felt
She was not ready for another loss.
sadder than ever. (5) __________________________
Tears
rolled
down
her
cheeks
and she sobbed uncontrollably.
____________________________________________.
However, Aunt Amy walked over to console her.
“Do not let sadness rule you. Remember dear, you
will be sitting for SPM soon. Be strong and you will
succeed.” A wise advice from Aunt Amy. She
remembered these words and recited them all
throughout the night. She hoped that it would be a
better
day
tomorrow.
(6)
_______________________
She kept telling herself that her lives had not
____________________________________________.
yet ruined due to series of unfortunate events.
had
All she need to do was to pull herself together
and face the obstacles. She believed
when the going got tough,the tough got going.
Column 2
Practice
From that day onwards, Marina started to
She knew that was what her parents wanted her
study hard. (1) ____________________________
to do if they were still alive. Besides, she got nothing to lose by being
_________________________________________.
successful. She could make people around her happy and contented.
She stayed focused in school with Aunt Amy
giving her support and motivation. (2)
Most of her time was filled either with study group or doing extra exercises.
_______________
Marina's friends were kind and supportive as they always accompanied
_________________________________________.
her in the library or at the canteen. They hardly left her alone.
When the SPM result was announced, Marina
received the surprise in her life.
(3)
Marina looked at the transcript and saw string of As written on it.
___________
There was no other letter than A itself. Marina counted
__________________________________________
her lucky stars.
_________________________________________.
She had passed her exams with flying colours.
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Conclusion
1. What did Marina do after getting
her SPM results?
ran home – hugged – Aunt
Amy - thanked – support
2. What was Aunt Amy’s reaction
when she heard the good news?
happy – cried – thanked God –
wished - future
Marina eagerly ran back home to share the good news with
(1) _____________________________________
her beloved Aunt Amy. Aunt Amy had been waiting for Marina anxiously.
__________________________________________
She regretted not following Marina to take the result as Marina insisted her
__________________________________________
to stay home. She was startled when Marina hugged her once
(2) _______________________________________
she arrived home. Aunt Amy could not hold back her tears of
__________________________________________
happines. She thanked God for blessing them with good news and
__________________________________________
wished Marina a good and happy future life.
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Now you are ready to write an essay. Do your best!
Instructions: Write a composition of about 350 words on the following topic. You are
advised to spend about one hour to complete this task.
Write a story about a boy who had to face many challenges after his parents passed
away in an accident. End your story with, “…that was the reward for my patience and
hard work.”
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