0DWK 'LVWDQFH/HDUQLQJ %RRN 0\1DPH 'RDOORIWKHVH EXWVNLSSDJHV SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH SDJH )LQGDKHOSHU +HVKHKHOSHGE\FKHFNLQJP\ZRUN ,GLGSDJH edHelper Name: 3OD\0DWKRQ\RXU&RPSXWHURU3KRQH 2Q\RXUFRPSXWHUHG+HOSHUFRPPDWKJDPHVKWP 2QDQL3KRQHL3DG*HWWKHHG+HOSHUDSS 3OD\WLPHVDQGZULWH\RXUVFRUH 6WDUWWKHPDWKJDPHE\SLFNLQJ 3OD\7KLUG*UDGH0DWK QRVNLOOVHOHFWLRQ 'D\<RX3OD\HG <RXUFODVVFRGH 3RLQWVDW(QG ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name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edHelper Name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ame: ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper ,GLGSDJH Name: ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper ,GLGSDJH edHelper Name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edHelper Name: 'LG\RXNQRZWKDWRXUWHDFKHUKDVDEURWKHUQDPHG-RKQ"DVNHG6DOO\+H VRQHRIWKHILIWK JUDGHWHDFKHUV ,KRSHKH VP\ILIWKJUDGHWHDFKHULQWZR\HDUVUHSOLHG$QQD 0HWRRVPLOHG6DOO\ %LOO\JDYHXVDORRN:HOO,KHDUGRXUWHDFKHULVQRW-RKQ VEURWKHU /LDUOLDUSDQWVRQILUH\HOOHG$QQDDQG6DOO\ $FWXDOO\LQWHUUXSWHGRXUWHDFKHUDIWHUKHDULQJWKHQRLVHQRRQHLVO\LQJ +RZFDQWKDWEHWKHFDVH" 6KRZ\RXUZRUN ,W VWUXH1HLWKHU0UV-HQQLQJVQRU6DOO\DUHO\LQJ ,GLGSDJH Name: ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name: (PLO\+DQQDK6DUDK-HVVLFDDQG0HJDQDUHDSDUWRIWKHFODVVFKRUXV7KH\DUHZRUNLQJ WRJHWKHUIRUWKHXSFRPLQJVFKRROVKRZDQGDUHWU\LQJWRILQGDVRQJZKHUHHDFKRIWKHPFDQ VLQJVRORIRUVHFRQGVDQGWKH\FDQDOOVLQJWRJHWKHUIRUPLQXWHV ,WKLQN,IRXQGDVRQJEXWLWLVDERXWDPLQXWHWRRORQJ&DQZHILQGWKUHHER\VWRVLQJZLWKXV" DVNHG6DUDK <HDK0D\EH-DFRE'DYLGDQG+DUU\"VXJJHVWHG(PLO\ *RRGQHZV\HOOHG(PLO\7KH\ZLOOGRLW +RZORQJLVWKHVRQJWKDW6DUDKIRXQG" 6KRZ\RXUZRUN ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name: +RZPDQ\WLPHV GR\RXQHHGWRVSLQ" ,QHHGHGWRVSLQ WLPH V WRILQLVKWKHSDJH ,WZDV&KHHVH3L]]D'D\ 0U0DUWLQŝVFODVV RUGHUHGFKHHVHSL]]DV 0UV+RUDQŝVFODVV RUGHUHGFKHHVHSL]]DV +RZPDQ\PRUHFKHHVH SL]]DVGLG0U0DUWLQŝV FODVVRUGHUWKDQ0UV +RUDQŝVFODVV" 'DQPDGH0HHWWKH 7HDFKHUVLJQVWRKDQJXS LQVFKRRO7KHQH[W PRUQLQJRIWKHPKDG IDOOHQGRZQ+RZPDQ\ VLJQVZHUHVWLOOKDQJLQJ WKHQH[WPRUQLQJ" &RQQRUSRXUHGFXSV RIDSSOHFLGHU$ODQ SRXUHGFXSVRIDSSOH FLGHU+RZPDQ\PRUH FXSVRIDSSOHFLGHUGLG &RQQRUSRXUWKDQ$ODQ" 7KHUHZHUHER\VLQ 0LVV6LPSVRQŝVFODVVDQG JLUOVLQ0LVV6LPSVRQŝV FODVV+RZPDQ\ FKLOGUHQZHUHLQ0LVV 6LPSVRQŝVFODVVLQDOO" -DFNVRQKDVQHZSDQWV IRUWKHVWDUWRIVFKRRO DQGQHZVKLUWVIRUWKH VWDUWRIVFKRRO+RZ PDQ\PRUHVKLUWVGRHV KHKDYHWKDQSDQWV" 0UV&ROOLQVŝVFODVVPDGH *UDQGSDUHQWV'D\ FDUGV0U*HUDOGŝVFODVV PDGH*UDQGSDUHQWV 'D\FDUGV+RZPDQ\ *UDQGSDUHQWV'D\FDUGV ZHUHPDGHLQDOO" )RUWKH/DERU'D\ EDUEHFXH0RPPDGH KDPEXUJHUVDQGKRW GRJV+RZPDQ\PRUH KDPEXUJHUVWKDQKRW GRJVGLG0RPPDNH" ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name: $QHZFDUWRRQFDPHRXWFDOOHG7KH$PD]LQJ:RUOGRI=DQWHHQV:KDWDUH=DQWHHQV\RXDVN" :HOOWKH\DUHQRWUHDO$IWHUDOOLWLVMXVWDFDUWRRQ 7KHJLUO=DQWHHQVKDYHKHDUWVDQGEUDLQV 7KHER\=DQWHHQVKDYHKHDUWVDQGEUDLQV:K\GRER\=DQWHHQVQHHGVRPDQ\KHDUWV":H DUHQ WUHDOO\VXUH0D\EHWKH\DUHVPDOO 7KHUHDUHDWRWDORI=DQWHHQVLQWKHFDUWRRQKHDUWVDQGEUDLQV +RZPDQ\ER\=DQWHHQVDUHLQWKHFDUWRRQ" 6KRZ\RXUZRUN ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name: 'U3URJUDPPHUORYHVWRW\SHRQKLVFRPSXWHU%XWKLVGDUQPRQLWRULV VRPHWLPHVEURNHQ)LOOLQZKDWWKHFRPSXWHUVKRXOGSULQW 'U3URJUDPPHUW\SHG 7KHFRPSXWHUUHSOLHG WHQV RQHV SULQW 0\QXPEHULVWHQVRQHV 0 \ Q X PE H U WHQV RQHV SULQW 0\QXPEHULVWHQVRQHV WHQV RQHV SULQW 0\QXPEHULVWHQVRQHV WHQV RQHV SULQW 0\QXPEHULVWHQVRQHV RQHV WHQV KXQGUHGV SULQW 0\QXPEHULVKXQGUHGVWHQVRQHV L V ,GLGSDJH Name: RQHV WHQV KXQGUHGV SULQW 0\QXPEHULVKXQGUHGVWHQVRQHV RQHV WHQV KXQGUHGV SULQW 0\QXPEHULVKXQGUHGVWHQVRQHV WHQV SULQW WHQVWHQVLVWHQV W HQ V L V WHQV SULQW WHQVWHQVLVWHQV WHQV SULQW WHQVWHQVLVWHQV WHQV SULQW WHQVWHQVLVWHQV WHQV SULQW WHQVWHQVLVWHQV W HQ V L V ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name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ame: :RZ\RXFDQFRGHDSSV"DVNHG5RQDOG /LNH\HDKUHSOLHG6DOO\%XWWKHQ6DOO\UHPHPEHUHGVKHVWLOOKDG VRPHZRUNWRGRRQKHUDSS6KHMXVWOHDUQHGWRXVH?QWRJRIURP RQHOLQHWRWKHQH[W 6DOO\ZDQWVKHUSURJUDPWRSULQWWKLV :RZ :ULWHWKHFRGH SULQW ?Q 5RQDOGLVJRLQJWRDGGWR6DOO\ VSURJUDP+HZDQWVLWWRQRZSULQWWKLVLQVWHDG :RZ /RRNDWWKDWGRJ :ULWHWKHFRGH SULQW ?Q 6DOO\LVPDNLQJVRPHWKLQJIRU$SULO +L$SULO :DQWWRULGHELNHV" :ULWHWKHFRGH +L$SULO?Q U E $SULOZDQWVWRUHSO\ZLWK <HV :ULWHWKHFRGH " ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name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edHelper Name: Did you know that you don't always have to use the word part in your writing? Try to use different words for an overused word like part. It will make your work more fun for others to read. &LUFOHZRUGVWRWKH5,*+7RU'2:1(YHU\OHWWHULVXVHGH[DFWO\21&( 6 ( & 7 , 2 1 3 , ( & 6 / , & ( & 2 0 3 2 1 ( 1 ) ) ) 6 4 ' ( 7 $ , 3 8 5 ) 5 ( 8 & + 8 1 . 2 1 $ ( $ 3 $ $ 5 & * $ & $ 1 6 6 7 7 0 7 7 5 7 3 3 , , ( 8 , $ , / ( 2 2 1 5 2 7 7 , & 1 1 7 ( 1 ( < 7 7 :ULWHWKHZRUGVIRXQG 6(*0(17 ( 7 / 6 ( * 0 ( 1 7 '(7$,/ Write something using the word part at least two times. Now rewrite your boring writing without using the word part. I can't wait to read it! +RZPDQ\ZRUGVGR\RXWKLQNLWWDNHVWRLPSURYH\RXUZULWLQJ" )LIW\7KDW V7KHUHDUHDERXWRYHUXVHGZRUGVZHRIWHQXVHLQZULWLQJDQGFRQYHUVDWLRQV :KHQ\RXILQG\RXUVHOIUHSHDWLQJWU\VRPHWKLQJGLIIHUHQW,WGRHVQ WWDNHPXFKZRUNWRVRXQGDPD]LQJ Math Break ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name: $QQHPDGHHJJVDODGVDQGZLFKHV(DFKVDQGZLFKZHLJKHGIRXURXQFHV+RZPDQ\ SRXQGVRIVDQGZLFKHVGLG$QQHPDNH" 0UV5RGULJXH]PDGHWZHOYHVHUYLQJVRIRDWPHDO$GDPDWHWKUHHVHUYLQJV+LVVLVWHUDWH RQHVHUYLQJ0U5RGULJXH]DWHWZRVHUYLQJV:KDWIUDFWLRQWHOOVKRZPXFKRIWKH RDWPHDOLVOHIW" $ILUHWUXFNKDVIRXUZKHHOV+RZPDQ\ZKHHOVDUHWKHUHRQIRXUILUHWUXFNV" ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name: 7KHKXQGUHGVSODFHLVWKHYDOXHRIDQLFNHODQGWZRSHQQLHV :ULWHWKHVXPRIDQGLQWKHRQHVSODFH 7KHWHQVSODFHLV 7KHWKRXVDQGVSODFHLVWKHPLVVLQJQXPEHUIURPWKLVSDWWHUQ BBB +HOS<RXUSKRQHLVORFNHG8VHWKHFOXHVDERYHWRXQORFNLW*RRGOXFN LVWKHFRGHWRXQORFN 'RXEOH&KHFN 7KHVXPRIWKHQXPEHUVLQ\RXUXQORFNNH\VKRXOGEH ,VLW"6KRZ\RXUZRUNWRGRXEOHFKHFNWKDW\RXUXQORFN NH\LVFRUUHFW :ULWHDZRUGSUREOHPIRU [ JUDQG JUHQG JUDQ JUDDQG ([SDQGWKHQXPEHU ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name: $&5266 '2:1 WKHRQHVLQ$FURVVWKHWHQVLQ'RZQWKH WKRXVDQGVLQ$FURVV WKHWHQVLQ'RZQWKHWKRXVDQGVLQ$FURVV WKHRQHVLQ$FURVV WKHRQHVLQ$FURVVWKHWHQVLQ$FURVVWKH WKRXVDQGVLQ$FURVV WKHWKRXVDQGVLQ$FURVVWKHWHQVLQ$FURVV WKHRQHVLQ$FURVV WKHWKRXVDQGVLQ$FURVVWKHWHQVLQ'RZQ WKHRQHVLQ$FURVV VL[WKRXVDQGVHYHQW\WKUHH WKHWKRXVDQGVLQ$FURVVWKHWHQVLQ$FURVV WKHRQHVLQ$FURVV WKHWKRXVDQGVLQ$FURVVWKHRQHVLQ$FURVV WKHWHQVLQ'RZQ WKHRQHVLQ'RZQWKHWKRXVDQGVLQ$FURVV WKHWHQVLQ'RZQ :ULWHWKLVQXPEHUXVLQJZRUGV ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name: )LQGHTXDWLRQVKLGGHQLQHDFKER[*RRGOXFN :ULWHHTXDWLRQV :ULWHHTXDWLRQV :ULWHHTXDWLRQV ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name: +RZPDQ\WLPHV GR\RXQHHGWRVSLQ" ,QHHGHGWRVSLQ WLPH V WRILQLVKWKHSDJH 6SLQILGJHWVSLQQHU4XLFN ,QHHGHGWRVSLQ WZRWHQV WHQV HLJKWWKRXVDQGVDQGIRXU IRXUWKRXVDQGVDQGWKUHH WHQV KXQGUHGV WHQV VL[KXQGUHGVDQGHLJKWWHQV RQHV ILYHKXQGUHGVDQGVHYHQ WLPH V WRILQLVK VHYHQWHQV RQHV RQHV RQHV RQHV RQHV WKUHHWHQV WHQV ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name: +ROO\LVLQFKHVWDOO0DU\LVH[DFWO\IHHWWDOO:KRLVWDOOHU"%\KRZPXFK" (ULFGUHZDYHU\ODUJHVTXDUHZLWKDEOXHSLHFHRIFKDONDWWKHSOD\JURXQG2QHVLGHLV IHHOORQJ(ULFZDQWVWRZDONDORQJWKHVTXDUHDQGFDQRQO\ZDONRQWKHOLQH,IKHZDQWV WRZDONWKHVTXDUHWLPHVE\RQO\VWHSSLQJRQWKHOLQHKRZPDQ\IHHWZLOOKHHQGXS ZDONLQJ" ,WLVZKHQ3DPOHDYHV KHUKRXVH6KHDUULYHVDW VFKRRODW+RZPXFK WLPHKDVSDVVHG" OHVVWKDQ ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name: $GGRQHVHWRISDUHQWKHVLVWRHDFKHTXDWLRQVRWKDWWKHHTXDWLRQLVWUXH ,GLGSDJH ,GHFLGHGWRVNLSWKLVSDJH edHelper Name: 8VHDQ\RIWKHVHGLJLWV&URVVRIIDGLJLWDIWHU\RXXVHLW :ULWHWKHVPDOOHVWGLJLWQXPEHUWKDW\RXFDQZLWKLQWKHWHQVSODFH 8VHDQ\RIWKHVHGLJLWV&URVVRIIDGLJLWDIWHU\RXXVHLW :KDWLVWKHVPDOOHVWQXPEHUJUHDWHUWKDQWKDW\RXFDQPDNHIURPWKHVHGLJLWV" ,DPWKHODUJHVWZKROHQXPEHUWKDWURXQGVWRZKHQURXQGLQJWRWKHQHDUHVWWHQ