Plan Your Paragraph
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Use the writing frame to write a first draft of your paragraph.
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Rate your paragraph.
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details that tell
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By the next
day,
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the time older they
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Does the ending sum up
the event and tell the
writer's feelings about it?
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Do linking words connect
the details?
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Now revise your
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