CHC 2D1 RESEARCH ESSAY ASSIGNMENT A compulsory component of this course is to conduct organized research. You will research a topic to determine whether it provides an accurate picture of a historical event, experience or character. During the course of this assignment, you will be taught how to write a formal essay and learn how to properly cite your work using Chicago style. You will use primary and secondary sources. The process work you submit and the essay final product will be evaluated as part of your term mark. Criteria Purpose ESSAY The research essay will give you the opportunity to examine an important theme/topic in Canadian History. You will develop and improve your research and writing skills that are essential in the study of history. Requirements 1. The Research Process You will be asked to submit: ▪ A thesis statement/ and skeletal outline plan ▪ A thesis statement and body paragraph outline of the essay, including quotations from different sources ▪ ▪ A rough draft (written in class and initialed by the teacher) A typed final copy with proper documentation (footnotes and works cited list) 2. Your essay must fulfill all of the following requirements: ▪ Title page: clean and undecorated with the title of the essay, your name, your teacher’s name, the course code and the date submitted ▪ Length: 750-1,000 words (3-4 pages) ▪ Typed: double-spaced and typed in black ink with a Times New Roman 12 point font on standard white letter sized paper ▪ 5+ paragraphs: an introduction with a thesis statement, three or more body paragraphs and a conclusion ▪ Footnotes: include proper documentation of at least 3 direct or information footnotes ▪ Works Cited: a minimum of three sources properly cited with relevant links to Internet sources included in the bibliography of the final copy. All sources must be used in your essay. 1 CHC 2D1 ASSESSMENT AND EVALUATION RESEARCH ESSAY Student: ________________________________ Requirements Due Date TOPIC OVERVIEW: Topic overview will be submitted (handout provided) with your printed sources Learning Skills Assessment End of Class ▪ OCTOBER 30 ▪ Electronic Sources: Website print outs of sources are included in folder Print Sources: Bibliographic information for books, journals, articles are included in folder Total = DETAILED OUTLINE: A detailed outline of the essay; quotations from the novel and additional sources are included (handout provided). End of class NOVEMBER 3 /10 Communication Marks ▪ Introduction and thesis statement Total: 4 marks ▪ 3 or more body paragraphs with supporting arguments and examples of supporting evidence from the novel Total: 10 marks ▪ Quotations (at least 3 included; sources indicated) Total: 4 marks ▪ Conclusion Total: 2 marks Grand Total: 20 Application Marks A rough draft End of class NOVEMBER 10 ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ Introduction and thesis statement = 1 mark 3 or more body paragraphs = 1 mark Documentation = 1 mark Sources incorporated = 1 mark Conclusion = 1 mark Total = A typed final copy with proper documentation End of Class NOVEMBER 16 /5 Communication Marks RESEARCH ESSAY RUBRIC /100 marks (final evaluation) 2 GRADE 10 CHC2D1 RESEARCH ESSAY TOPICS 1) North Atlantic Treaty Organization 2) Quiet Revolution 3) The October Crisis 4) Avro Arrow 5) Quebec Referendums 6) The Oka Crisis 7) The Syrian Migrant Crisis 8) Canada in Afghanistan 9) Mulroney, Quebec and the Constitution 10) The Fight For Aboriginal Rights 11) The Cuban Missile Crisis 12) The Baby Boom Generation 13) Crisis in Somalia 14) The Missing and Murdered Aboriginal Women 15) The Air India Tragedy 16) One of the three questions from the course 17) Identify and explain some of the ways in which WWII affected Canada and Canadians and how the war changed the lives of various groups in the country. 18) Identify how specific individuals, groups, organizations and symbols contributed to Canadian society and politics during this period (1929-45) and to the development of identity, citizenship, and heritage in Canada. 19) Analyze the impact of the Holocaust on Canadian society and Canadians’ attitudes towards Human Rights. 20) Identify the most significant developments in science/technology and assess their significance for different groups in Canada. 21) 22) Your own selection, just approve it with the teacher first 3 CHC2D1 TOPIC CHOICE/OVERVIEW Student: _______________________ Topic/Issue/Event: _______________ Topic Overview: Answer the following questions in point form. Who was involved? __________________________________________________/1 Mark________ What happened? __________________________________________________/1 Mark________ When did it happen? __________________________________________________/1 Mark________ Where did it happen? _________________________________________________/1 Mark_________ How did this event affect people? __________________________________________________/2 Marks_______ Why is this event important to history? Additional Sources Submitted: □ Electronic Sources – Print-outs of websites included □ Print Sources – Book/Article/Journal bibliographic information included /2 Marks /10 Communication Marks 4 CHC 2D1 Detailed Outline Student: ____________________ Application = Introductory Paragraph and Thesis Statement: /20 Marks /4 Write at least 2-3 sentences to introduce your topic and then state your thesis in 1-2 complete sentences: ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Body Paragraphs: /10 and Quotations: /4 Complete the following f or each body paragraph: ▪ Write the main argument/idea in a complete sentence ▪ Record supporting historical evidence/examples in point form ▪ Provide at least two quotations for each paragraph to illustrate a point; identify the source for each Note: If you have additional paragraphs, attach a sheet with your outline to this handout. Body Paragraph 1 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Quotation # 1 from one website ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 5 Quotation # 2 from an additional source: ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Body Paragraph 2 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Quotation # 3 from one website ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Quotation # 4 from an additional source ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Body Paragraph 3 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 6 Quotation # 5 from one website ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Quotation # 6 from an additional source ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Conclusion: /2 Record the details you will provide in this final paragraph in point form ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 7 ESSAY WRITING: TAKING NOTES The Purpose of Note Taking: The notes you gather in preparation for writing will normally provide detailed evidence to back up any arguments you wish to make. They might also be used as illustrative material. They might include such things as the quotations and page references you plan to use in an essay. ▪ Always read with a pen and paper. Think about what you're reading and write down your thoughts. When a thought occurs under these circumstances it will be in reaction to a piece of the text at hand: a quotation. Copy out the quotation, and a page/source reference so you can find it again to check it if necessary, and then put your idea underneath it. ▪ Always write one idea and one idea only per page. You put headings on each page of notes so that you can tie it to a potential argument or point in your essay. Not only will that keep your note taking focused, but it will also allow for grouping and synthesizing of ideas later. If you take notes efficiently, you can read with more understanding and also save time and frustration when you come to write your paper. Method 1. Copy out exact words only when the ideas are memorably phrased or surprisingly expressed--when you might use them as actual quotations in your essay. 2. Otherwise, compress ideas in your own words. Paraphrasing word by word is a waste of time. Choose the most important ideas and write them down as labels or headings. Then fill in with a few sub points that explain or exemplify. 3. Don't depend on underlining and highlighting. Find your own words to summarize ideas and evidence. 4. Save time later by developing the habit of recording bibliographic information in a master list when you begin looking at each source. Then you can quickly identify each note by the author's name and page number; when you refer to sources in the essay you can fill in details of publication easily from your master list. Note: Be prepared for the fact that you might take many more notes than you will ever use. This is perfectly normal. At the note-taking stage you might not be sure exactly what evidence you will need. In addition, the information-gathering stage should also be one of digesting and refining your ideas. Record the bibliographic details of the books you read. You should always note the author's name, the title of the book, the date of publication and the publisher. When you make notes from the book you should note the page numbers. 8 RESEARCH NOTES TEMPLATE Title of Source Author Name(s) City Publisher Date of Publication Other IDEA # _______ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ PAGE NUMBER NOTES 9 Transitions and Connective Phrases Conjunctions To introduce a topic To Summarize To Show Purpose and but or for nor neither so yet as for concerning with regard to with respect to in all in a word in brief briefly in other words in short in summary that is in order that in order to so that To Show Cause and Effect To Compare To Contrast To Explain, Give Reasons accordingly as a consequence as a result consequently for this reason hence it follows that so/so that then therefore thus by comparison here again in the same way in a similar manner likewise similarly so too as also equally actually admittedly because certainly for example in fact indeed really of course since that is To Add Information and Reasons To Show Various Conditions conversely however instead in spite of that anyhow on the contrary on the other hand otherwise rather than still yet To Show Conviction To Show Concession and also in addition furthermore as well moreover add to this in this event in these circumstances under such circumstances this (that) being so provided that in spite of none/nevertheless after all at least at the same time apparently even so evidently certainly admittedly after all all the same at any rate granted however in any case 10 To Add Information and Reasons again also besides equally further furthermore in addition moreover once more then too too yet again yet another To Show Various Conditions To Show Conviction To Show Concession at the same time even if if unless otherwise although even though though despite conceivably conclusively doubtless no doubt perhaps possibly presumably probably surely undoubtedly in spite of it is true that nevertheless obviously of course still to be sure But however conversely although whereas To Show Chronological Order after that afterwards later shortly subsequently concurrently in the meantime in the meanwhile now simultaneously when/while/was of initial importance of greater significance first, second, etc. formerly earlier previously before that then already at last at length by that time finally the most crucial If you are stuck: first, next, last To List or Show Logical Order for example for instance in particular to illustrate the one ... the other this ... that these ... those here ... there either ... or neither ... nor whether ... or though ... yet wherever ... there since ... then the more ... the more not only ... but also 11 What is an introduction? An introduction is the first paragraph (or paragraphs) of any written work. What is the function of an introduction? An introduction ● ● ● ● captures your audience's attention. gives background on your topic. develops interest in your topic. guides your reader to your thesis How can I write an introduction? There are three basic ways to write an introduction: 1. You can write the introduction after you write the body of your essay. 2. You can write the introduction before you write the body of your essay. 3. You can rough out the introduction first and then focus and revise it once you have written your essay. Note: Many people write a rough draft and from that find out what their purpose really is and what they really believe. Then they revise the focus, language, or order of their introduction. This sequence -- of drafting an introduction and then revising and refining it once the body of the paper is sketched out -- is very common What goes on in an introduction? There is no single right form for an introduction to take, but one common form that many writers use is the following: The introduction begins with a broad statement about the main idea. This statement might provide relevant background information on the topic. ● The next sentences are more specific, moving closer to the actual thesis of the essay. ● The final sentence of an introduction is the thesis statement ● 12 Documentation in Essays: How to FOOTNOTE In academic research papers and in any other writing that borrows information from sources, the borrowed information (such as quotations, summaries, paraphrases, statistics or any facts of ideas that are not common knowledge), must be clearly documented. An excellent website you may use to assist you with footnotes is www.noodletools.com. WHAT ARE FOOTNOTES? Footnotes are used to give credit to sources of any material borrowed, summarized or paraphrased. Notes (footnotes or endnotes) cite the specific sources from which ideas or facts came. They are intended to refer readers to the exact pages of the works listed in the Bibliography section of the essay. WHEN ARE FOOTNOTES REQUIRED? Notes are used to indicate the source from which facts are drawn or to give credit for ideas borrowed from other writers. There are three main occasions when one must use notes: 1. When citing specific facts - not common knowledge. 2. When borrowing ideas from another writer. 3. When explaining or expanding on a term or a concept outside the body of the text. This is called an explanatory note. WHERE DO FOOTNOTES GO? There are TWO parts to a footnote: 1) immediately after a citation(s) (quote, statistic, etc.) a small number is inserted (each citation is given a number in chronological order) 2) at the bottom (foot) of the very same page where the direct citation(s) were made, a footnote is placed that consists of the same small number as the citation and all the publishing information. HOW DO I FOOTNOTE USING MY COMPUTER? Step 1: Click on insert Step 2: click on reference Step 3: choose footnote o r endnote Step 4: click insert Step 5: type in publication information as follows: Author’s First and Last Name, Title of Source. (Place of Publishing: Publisher, copyright date), page number. (Examples provided in this package) 13 HOW DO I INCORPORATE QUOTATIONS IN MY ESSAY? 1) If the citation (quote, summary etc.) is 3 lines or LESS, then it is placed within the essay itself with quotations marks. EXAMPLE: In World War I, soldiers also used make-shift gas masks if they were caught in the open without a gas mask during a gas attack - cloth soaked in their own urine and placed over the mouth was said to give protection against a chlorine attack. In The Wars, when Robert Ross discovers his men were not issued gas masks he orders them to “Get out your handkerchiefs”.1 Those soldiers who followed the orders ended up surviving the gas attack. 2) If the citation is more than three lines, then it must be set off by indenting the citation five spaces on left margin and five spaces on right margin without quotation marks. The quotation is single-spaced. EXAMPLE: Poison gas was probably the most feared of all weapons in World War I. This is clearly demonstrated in the novel when the soldiers first realize that they are being attacked by chlorine gas: Robert might as well have yelled at God, for all the good it would do. He looked at the weaving strands of gas. They were spreading further out – like a spider’s web above the crater – reaching out for the other side. Some of it was spilling down towards them. Robert didn’t even think. He just yelled: “Jump!” and leapt into the air.2 Several of the soldiers became hysterical and fled in terror. Typically, this understandable reaction created an opportunity for the Germans to advance. IF I CITE A SOURCE MORE THAN ONCE, DO I HAVE TO CITE IT IN FULL EVERY TIME I USE IT? 1 2 Timothy Findley, The Wars. (Toronto: Penguin Books Canada Ltd., 1996), 139. Timothy Findley, 137-138. 14 No, it is acceptable to cite simply the author and page number for subsequent entries. If you have used more than one source by the same author, cite the author, short title, and page number. (see footnote #2) DOCUMENTATION IN ESSAYS A works cited page lists all sources used in your research, even those from which you do not have footnotes. This is the last page of your essay; it is given a title, but is not part of your page number count. Note: A Works Cited Page is a list of sources that reflect all the citations documented in your essay. Format Like endnotes/footnotes, the format of a works cited page is very particular: 1. Create two subtitles: Print Sources and Websites 2. List all Print Sources alphabetically according to the last name of the author. 3. List all Websites alphabetically according to author, title, or sponsor of the webpage. 4. Single-space each source. Double space between sources. 5. Type the first line from the left margin. Indent the second line by one tab. 6. Do not number sources. SAMPLES FOR FOOTNOTES Type of Source Footnote Book—One author Bruce Trigger, A History of the Huron People to 1660, (Montreal: McGill University Press, 1976), 29. Book—Two authors Helen Howe and Robert. T. Howe, The Medieval World, (New York: Longman Inc., 1987), 229. Book—Three or more authors Angelo Bolotta, et. al., Canada: Face of a Nation, (Toronto: Gage Educational Publishing, 2000),145. Magazine—Signed article Barry Canne, “Colliding Cultures: The Claims of Quebec Natives Clash with Provincial Needs.” Maclean’s 12 August 1997, 10-12 15 Newspaper—Signed article Ian Urquhart, “First Past the Post is Still the Best System,” The Toronto Star, 14 February 2001, A18 Radio or Television Broadcast “Sovereignty and its Cost”, produced by Mark Starowicz, CBC, 25 September 1991. Website Steven Landsburg “Who Shall Inherit the Earth?” State Archives (1May1997) (4April2006) <http://www.econstate.edu.ca/asp> SAMPLES FOR WORKS CITED DOCUMENTATION Type of Source Works Cited Book—One author Trigger, Bruce. A History of the Huron People to 1660. Montreal:McGill University Press, 1976. Book—Two authors Howe, Helen and Robert T. Howe. The Medieval World. New York: Longman Inc., 1987. Book—Three or more authors Bolotta, Angelo, et.al. Canada: Face of a Nation. Toronto: Gage Educational Publishing Company, 2000. Magazine—Signed article Canne, Barry.“Colliding Cultures: The Claims of Quebec Natives Clash with Provincial Needs.” Maclean’s. 12 August 1997: 10-12. Newspaper—Signed article Urquhart, Ian. “First Past the Post is Still the Best System,” The Toronto Star. 14 February 2001: A18. Radio or Television Broadcast “Sovereignty and its Cost”. Mark Starowicz, Producer. CBC. 25 September 1991. Website Archives. Landsburg, Steven. “Who Shall Inherit the Earth?” State (1 May 1997) (4 April 2006) <http:www.edconstate.edu.ca/asp> 16 RUBRIC K n o w l e d g e = 1 0 T h i n k i n g & I n q u i r y = 2 0 C o m m u n i c a t i o n = 4 0 Criteria Using historically accurate information Below 1 Little evidence of historical information 0 Historical Analysis; Use of Historical Content 4 Insufficient analysis; historical significance not considered Level 2 Relevant for the most part; some inaccurate information Limited recognition of historical significance Adequate recognition of historical significance 6 6.5 Level 3 Most information is relevant and historically accurate 7 7.5 Level 4 Information is historically accurate and relevant Very good recognition of historical significance Thorough and perceptive recognition of historical significance 8 9 Total ___ 10 10 ___ 10 0 Evidence to support thesis statement 0 Introduction contains clear thesis statement Effective use of language and mechanics of writing 4 2 4 2 4 Conclusion not evident 2 4 Improper use of language conventions 0 Documentation (Use of Footnotes or Endnotes) 2 Topic is undeveloped and is disorganized 0 Concluding statement used to summarize research 4 Ineffective introduction; no thesis statement 0 Organization and paragraph structure 2 Evidence is incomplete; arguments do not support thesis 0 A p p l i 2 Level 1 Limited use of accurate and relevant historical information 5 5.5 2 4 Sources are not credited; citation method not followed/absent 5 5.5 6 6.5 7 7.5 Little evidence; arguments are unclear and not logically related to thesis 5 5.5 Satisfactory evidence; arguments are somewhat unclear 6 6.5 Good evidence; arguments are usually clear and logical Simple opening statement; thesis is of limited clarity; Satisfactory opening remarks; fairly clear thesis statement; Good introductory remarks; thesis stated with clarity; 5 5.5 Paragraph structure used with limited effectiveness 5 5.5 6 6.5 Topic is developed in a somewhat organized way 6 6.5 7 7 7.5 7.5 Topic is developed in a logical and organized way 7 7.5 8 9 10 Excellent support; clear and logical arguments 8 9 10 Topic is effectively introduced and thesis is precisely stated; 8 9 Adequate conclusion; thesis not entirely clear 6 6.5 Good conclusion; thesis is summarized 7 7.5 Excellent conclusion; thesis clearly summarized 8 9 10 Grammar and spelling used with limited accuracy and effectiveness Grammar and spelling used with some accuracy and effectiveness Grammar and spelling used with considerable accuracy and effectiveness 7 7.5 Correct grammar and spelling used with accuracy and effectiveness almost all of the time 8 9 10 All sources credited; minor errors in citation method All sources well credited; precise use of citation method; excellent 5 5.5 6 6.5 Some footnotes or endnotes used; errors in citation method ___ 10 10 Topic is developed in a coherent manner; excellent paragraph structure 8 9 10 Few concluding remarks; little or no reference to thesis 5 5.5 Sources are not properly credited; significant ___ 10 ___ 10 ___ 10 ___ 10 ___ 17 c a t i o n = 3 0 0 Format and presentation 4 Adequate title page; limited neatness in essay layout 6 6.5 Good title page; neat essay layout 4 Limited title page; format errors in essay layout 5 5.5 Satisfactory use source; some errors in format 4 Inadequate Works Cited page; significant errors in format 5 5.5 Good use of l and 2 sources; only minor format errors 7 7.5 No title page; poor format in essay layout 0 Works Cited Page 2 errors in citation method 5 5.5 2 Works Cited Page not included 0 2 6 6 6.5 6.5 7 7 7.5 7.5 integration of quotations 8 9 10 Title page and essay layout both excellent 8 9 10 ___ 10 10 Excellent use of 2 or more sources; proper format used 8 9 10 ___ 10 100 Culminating Activity: Rubric 18