Researched Literary Analysis Rubric *Final Draft Rubric: The base score range is 70-84 and represents the proficient completion of all standards for this assignment. Scoring Criteria Exemplary The essay exceeds expectations - awesome! Organization ➢ Thesis is complex and sophisticated. ➢ Thesis and Topic Sentences 5% ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ Text Evidence 25% ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ Analysis 30% ➢ ➢ Introduction ➢ 5% ➢ Conclusion 5% Grammar ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ Thesis addresses all aspects of the prompt and seeks to further the topic of research. Organization enhances the argument. Paragraphs include topic sentences that directs back to the thesis and embody the focus of the paragraph in full. Topic sentences are complex and beyond typical transitions. Transitions are fluid and do not take away from the flow of ideas. 5 points Well-chosen quotes and paraphrases which are effective evidence and help move the argument. Integration of varied sources is seamless. 2-3 more source than required by paper instructions. No block or extensively long quotes. At least 3 pieces of evidence per paragraph. 21-25 points Proficient The essay did everything it was supposed to do and has met minimum standards. ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ Contains a central claim of the argument that is sophisticated and apparent. Narrows to specific focus and a unique voice. 5 points ➢ ➢ 10% ➢ Clear in its claims and assertions. Clear, effective topic sentences that provide a ➢ specific focus for each body paragraph. ➢ Sustain coherence and voice with use of ➢ transition and word choice. Sequences ideas and uses effective transitions to create coherence. Thesis contains unclear or no purpose or organization. Thesis does not answer all portions of the prompt or address the so what argument. Argument does not follow a linear path. Sometimes or never contains assertions that announce the main point of the paragraph; Sustains minimal transition and/or voice or lacks transitions and/or voice at all. 0-3 points Clear, purposeful organization. Re-emphasizes the thesis. Moves the argument to a wider context. Makes intelligent recommendations. 5 points ➢ Wide variety in sentence structures. Close to flawless and without grammatical errors. Academic language and tone is flawless. ➢ Well-chosen quotes and paraphrases that effectively supports the writer’s thesis. Introduced and embedded varied sources effectively (i.e. context is provided). Exact number of sources instructions require. No block or excessively long quotes. 2-3 pieces of evidence per paragraph. 17-20 points ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ Analysis draws meaningful connections between the textual evidence and the thesis. There is 2x-3x more analysis than text evidence. 20-24 points ➢ Clear and focused introduction with voice. Contains central claim. ➢ ➢ Contains just the thesis or has no thesis. Presents general subject without focus or lacks voice. 0-3 points ➢ ➢ Lacks thesis or simply restates thesis. Does not move argument to wider context. ➢ ➢ 4 points ➢ ➢ 9-10 points MLA ➢ 4 points Clarifies the argument through meaningful ➢ connections with the research. Sophisticated in depth interpretation of the ➢ evidence (at least 2-3x more analysis than evid.). 25-30 points 10% One sentence thesis which fully answers the prompt and addresses the so what argument.. Undeveloped The essay fell short of my expectations - it requires more editing. There are no “exceeds expectations” points for MLA ➢ formatting and in text citations as these are minimum expectations for a college literature class ➢ and failure to comply with MLA standards could result in plagiarism charges. ➢ ➢ Conclusion effectively ends the essay without unnecessary information or presenting new information. 4 points Provides weak or no interpretation of the evidence (less than 2x analysis to evid.). Lack of discussion of literary work and/or research. 0-19 points 0-3 points Uses appropriate diction and a variety of ➢ sentence structures. Demonstrates a general command of written conventions (spelling, grammar, punctuation, ➢ usage, capitalization, etc.). Utilizes academic language and tone ➢ throughout. 7-8 points Parenthetical citations are formatted correctly. 12pt, Times New Roman, Double Spaced, Remove additional spacing before and after. MLA Heading and Title on page 1. Last name and page number in header. 7-10 points Few or no quotes. Provides weak or no evidence. Little or no integration of quotes. Sources not varied. Less than 2 pieces of evidence per paragraph at times. Includes excessively long or block quotes. 0-16 points ➢ ➢ ➢ No sentence variety; many fragments or run-ons, many errors in punctuation, grammar, and spelling. So many errors that meaning is obscured, or the paper is plagiarized Includes any contractions or uses pronouns you, your, me, my, I, we, our, etc. 0-6 points Any errors in the heading, header, double spacing, font, or title. Consistent and regular errors in the in text citations. The paper is plagiarized. 0-6 points Researched Literary Analysis Rubric Works Cited 10% There are no “exceeds expectations” points for the ➢ Works Cited page as these are minimum ➢ expectations for a college literature class and failure to comply with MLA requirements could result in ➢ plagiarism charges. ➢ Last page of essay. Citations are double spaced with hanging indention. If more than one, sources are in alphabetical order by the first word in the citation. Citations comply with MLA 8th ed. standards. 7-10 points ➢ ➢ ➢ ➢ Works Cited page is missing or has significant and consistent errors in formatting. Citations are not in alphabetical order. Citations do not comply with MLA 8th ed. Standards. The paper is plagiarized. 0-6 points