Grade 9 – online class Class 1: objective: Improve on their formal tone Compare informal and formal letter samples, and discuss what makes the formal letter’s tone ‘formal’ Show them some vocabulary that they can use to make the letter sound more formal e.g instead of ‘ask’ use ‘enquire’ Change a few informal sentences into formal sentences Class 2: Individual work: Show a sample of a formal letter in informal tone that needs to be edited (give them 15/20 minutes to do so.. google docs?) Feedback and discussion of students work Assignment, group work (a letter to be written) – Appendix A Class 3: Comprehension Reading and discussion of answers Class 4: Comma splice – presentation Practice APPENDIX A