Name: ___________________________________________ Topic: _____________________________________________________________________ Exemplary (10 pts.) Introduction Speech Purpose Speech Suitable to Special Occasion Genre Organization Support Language Competent (8 pts.) Intermediate (6 pts.) Developing (4 pts.) Inexperienced/Weak (0-2 pts.) Speech opens powerfully and commands the audience’s attention. The topic is skillfully and creatively introduced. Opening comments fulfill the functions of an introduction and do so smoothly and comfortably. Opening comments fulfill the functions of an introduction (getting audience’s attention, introducing the topic, and giving audience reason to list), however introduction sounds “choppy” and lacks polish. Opening comments fail to meet one or more of the functions of an introduction (getting the audience’s attention, introducing the topic, and giving audience reasons to listen). Introduction is missing (i.e., speech opens with the thesis). Speech incorporates elements of praise and/or blame creatively. Thesis is smoothly but clearly integrated into the speech. Speech contains some elements of praise and/or blame. Thesis establishes purpose of speech. Thesis sentence is present, but is not worded clearly. Speech lacks praise and/or blame or seems to lose focus/purpose at times. Main idea of speech is mentioned but is unclear and confusing. Speech lacks praise and/or blame. Overall, speech lacks focus. Speech topic is unsuitable for special occasion or ceremonial speech assignment. Thesis is missing. Speaker meets the expectations of the speech genre (i.e., the audience’s expectations) in an exceptionally creative, unique manner. Speaker meets the expectations of the audience genre (i.e., the audience’s expectations). Speech reflects creativity and uniqueness. Speaker has made an effort to identify audience’s expectations. Parts of the speech reflect creativity and uniqueness. Speaker has made an effort to identify audience’s expectations, but speech sounds cliché and unoriginal. Speech does not reflect speaker’s understanding of the genre. Speech is more informative or persuasive than suitable for a ceremonial speech. Speech is clear, logical, and organized. Ideas are grouped into appropriate main points; transitions are smooth but clear. Speech has distinct introduction, body, & conclusion. Overall, speech is clear and well-organized, although there are occasional lapses. Speech is generally wellorganized, although preview and/or summary may be missing; transitions may be too smooth or missing, or organization may wander occasionally. Listener can follow speech only with effort. Material is not grouped into main points or can only be identified with effort. Speech organization is nonexistent. Speaker rambles. Speaker uses a variety of relevant and memorable supporting materials (quotations, examples, narrative, statistics, descriptions, etc.) to strengthen speech purpose and to lengthen speech to appropriate time limit (3-5 minutes). Speaker uses a variety of supporting materials (quotations, examples, narrative, statistics, descriptions, etc.) to strengthen speech purpose. Supporting materials are adequate, though not particularly memorable. Supporting materials lengthen speech to appropriate time limit (3-5 minutes). One of the following: (1) Speaker relies on limited variety (i.e., one or two) kinds of supporting materials (quotations, examples, narratives, statistics, descriptions, etc.) to strengthen speech purpose; (2) some supporting materials are not relevant to speech purpose; (3) additional supporting materials are needed to lengthen speech to appropriate time limit (3-5 minutes). Two of the following: (1) Speaker relies on limited variety (i.e., one or two) kinds of supporting materials (quotations, examples, narratives, statistics, descriptions, etc.) to strengthen speech purpose; (2) some supporting materials are not relevant to speech purpose; (3) additional supporting materials are needed to lengthen speech to appropriate time limit (3-5 minutes). Three of the following: (1) Speaker relies on limited variety (i.e., one or two) kinds of supporting materials (quotations, examples, narratives, statistics, descriptions, etc.) to strengthen speech purpose; (2) some supporting materials are not relevant to speech purpose; (3) additional supporting materials are needed to lengthen speech to appropriate time limit (3-5 minutes). Word choice is appropriate for the audience and speech setting. Language is descriptive, creative, and memorable. Word choice is appropriate for the audience and speech setting, though not particularly memorable or creative. Overall, word choice is appropriate for the audience & speech setting, with minor exceptions (when language may be too informal or overly technical). Speaker relies on Word choice is repeatedly inappropriate for the audience or speech setting (too informal or overly technical). Much of the speech relies on “inside humor” that the audience doesn’t understand. Speaker uses language that is extremely inappropriate or offensive to the audience/speech setting. “inside humor” that audience doesn’t understand. Audience Adaptation Physical Delivery Vocal Delivery Overall Effectiveness Comments: Speaker connects to the audience using creative, wellplanned verbal & nonverbal identification strategies. Speaker helps audience members connect to the speech subject through skillful use of magnification and other creative strategies. Speaker connects to audience using verbal & nonverbal identification strategies, and uses magnification & other strategies to encourage audience members to connect to the speech subject. Speaker makes effort to connect to audience using verbal & nonverbal identification strategies, although efforts are not consistently successful throughout the speech. Speaker makes effort to use magnification and other strategies to help audience connect to the speech subject, although efforts are not consistently successful throughout the speech. Speaker provides little evidence of audience adaption or audience analysis. Speaker provides no evidence of audience adaption or audience analysis. The speaker appears confident and comfortable throughout the speech. Posture, movement, gestures, and eye contact all enhance the message. Speaker exhibits an appropriate energy level and is engaged with the audience. Speaker presents the speech using effective physical delivery overall, but demonstrates very rare weaknesses in one of the following areas: poor eye contact, no gestures or distracting gestures, distracting pacing/swaying, poor posture, and sloppy or distracting appearance. As a whole, speaker appears confident and interacts easily with the audience. Speaker presents the speech using effective physical delivery overall, but demonstrates occasional weaknesses in one or more of the following areas: poor eye contact, no gestures or distracting gestures, distracting pacing/swaying, poor posture, lack of confidence, and sloppy or distracting appearance, etc. Speaker is clearly aware of physical delivery and is making an effort to present the speech as effectively as possible. Speaker struggles with one or more of the following physical delivery issues for the majority of the speech: poor eye contact, no gestures or distracting gestures, distracting pacing/swaying, poor posture, lack of confidence, and sloppy or distracting appearance, etc. Speaker demonstrates no awareness of physical delivery. He/she exhibits multiple problems with physical delivery throughout the speech such as poor eye contact, no gestures or distracting gestures, distracting pacing/swaying, poor posture, lack of confidence, and sloppy or distracting appearance. Speaker uses conversational style to connect with the audience. Speaker is fluent and uses appropriate word choice. Rate, pitch, and volume do not detract from the presentation. Speaker uses conversational style to connect with the audience. Speaker presents the speech using effective vocal delivery overall, but demonstrates very rare weaknesses in one of the following areas: rate, pitch, volume, dysfluencies, or word choice. Speaker presents the speech using effective vocal delivery overall, but demonstrates occasional weaknesses in one or more of the following areas: rate, pitch, volume, dysfluencies, a stilted or memorized style of speaking. Speaker struggles with one or more of the following vocal delivery areas throughout the majority of the speech: rate, pitch, volume, dysfluencies, a stilted or memorized style of speaking. Speaker exhibits multiple problems with vocal delivery throughout the speech such as rate, pitch, volume, dysfluencies, and a stilted or memorized style of speaking. Speaker engages the audience in the topic. Speech content is memorable for a long period of time. The praise/blame elements of the speech are exceptionally strong. Speaker engages the audience in the topic. Speech content is memorable for several days. The speech emphasizes elements of praise/blame. Speaker connects to audience for majority of speech. Some speech content is memorable. Speech meets the expectations of a ceremonial speech. Speaker connects to audience some of the time. Moments in the speech are memorable and meet the expectations of a ceremonial speech. Speaker fails to connect to audience and/or does not meet the expectations of a ceremonial speech. Total: _____________