padlet.com/pavithrah_thirumoothy/bl6hkowp7r31m5xd My writing hook Made with passion for words PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 11, 2020 10:31AM PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 12, 2020 10:39AM I won't continue it because the start doesn't seem to interest me Jack ― ANONYMOUS 1. What about the hook that you like/dislike? 2. Would you continue reading? Why? The story didn't sound that interesting, so I most likely won't continue - Kean Hong ― ANONYMOUS hook 3 is my favorite- Amin ― AMIN Too plain-wayen . ― JING XUAN PANG . ― ANONYMOUS ― ANONYMOUS I will continue reading this book because i want to know why is it the worst day of the narrator life. ― CHUNG CHEOK CHANG Amin- Yes I sounds interesting. I would like to read more. PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 12, 2020 09:48AM ― AMIN Hook 5 I woke up and went to school by bus like I alway do. But today was't like always. It was the worst day of my life. i don't like it Hook 4 "Hurry up or you will be late?" Echoed mum from the bottom of ― KIT HOU TEOH Ethan - Very relatable(me) it has great choice of word. ― ANONYMOUS no, i felt boring to read the hook-----dejun ― DE JUN WONG Sin Yi - It doesn't sounds interesting PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 12, 2020 09:47AM ― ANONYMOUS No - The sentence and structure is too simple- isaac noel ― ANONYMOUS Yfeng - The hook is less seemingly attractive, it doesn't describe the setting clearly. ― ANONYMOUS Jayden - not really because it is not that interesting and quite boring ― ANONYMOUS i nd it very plain, and boring, almost like a grandfather story, like the start sounds boring but the plot might be good. -pouya ― ANONYMOUS I don’t think I will continue reading, because the sentences are simple and not attractive -yihan ― ANONYMOUS I think it is not as descriptive as the others, but I still want to know what happens ― XIN YAN LOW ZeYou- I would not be interested because the passage was not speci c enough. ― ANONYMOUS alyna- I wouldn't want to continue reading it because it is not as interesting as the others ― ANONYMOUS max- yes i will continue reading it because i am curious on why he had one of his worst day of his life ― ANONYMOUS the stairs. "Today, of all the days you want to be on time" If she knew what the day would bring, she wouldn't mind asking me to stay in bed. Ethan - It is not quite interesting as the dialog could include descriptive words. ― ANONYMOUS Yfeng - The dialogs added into the sentence made it boring as if they were chatting with each other, it doesn't give me the vibes of reading through the whole passage. ― ANONYMOUS Jayden - I would want to continue reading because I want to know why this speci c day he need to be on time. ― ANONYMOUS no, i cant understand what the hook mean-----dejun ― DE JUN WONG SIn Yi - its not very interesting and It 's just very normal ― ANONYMOUS max- i might continue reading it because i can't understand much from this sentence and i want to read more of it to understand the text better ― ANONYMOUS ZeYou- although it’s quite confusing, I would wanna see why they were in a hurry. ― ANONYMOUS It's kinda confusing ― ZHEN HAO LIM I won't continue reading it as it is confusing - Jack ― ANONYMOUS I like the way dialogs are added, the sentences felt relatable, I would read this, I wanna know what would happen. ― XIN YAN LOW I will continue reading it cuz I'm interested to know why the mother is so worried and won't let the narrater sleep - Kean Hong ― ANONYMOUS I would not continue reading the story because It doesn't sound interesting and is quite confusing ― CHUNG CHEOK CHANG Amin- I don't know what to say. I don't understand anything. I may/may not continue reading this story. ― AMIN The sun was warm on my back, I raced to the yellow bus waiting for me. Resting my butt on the familiar worn leather. My face light up like a spotlight as I greeted my friends. Laughing and giggling as the bus rumble down the street and I was on my way to the worst day of my life. This seems a little blunt but I would consider reading it PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 12, 2020 09:44AM ― LAVENASRI KUMAR Hook 3 I wanna know what happen so I will continue and seems interesting and it's detailed -Jack ― ANONYMOUS Have you had a day where you wished it would never exist? They day had the perfect weather, little did I know of the terrible things that awaits me in the school Amin- I don't feel interested inthis because I don't really get what the whole thing is about ― AMIN Yfeng - The hook sound quite familiar and relatable to my daily life, it makes me want to read more of it. ― ANONYMOUS Maybe, it’s quite detail on describing and what is the worst things are going to happen -yihan ― ANONYMOUS Ethan - This hook ask question that makes people feel that they would want to answer it. ― ANONYMOUS i would like to see what happens next ― KIT HOU TEOH Yes I will continue reading, because it makes me wonder what are the terrible things. -yihan ― ANONYMOUS max- yes because the writer is trying to make this relatable Jayden - Yes, i would continue reading because I want to know how can one thing makes his day miserable ― ANONYMOUS I like how the hook has describe the surrounding, but it didn't focus on the worst day part too much - kean hong ― ANONYMOUS ― ANONYMOUS Yes,I will continue reading because I want to know what are the terrible things that happens to the narrator ― CHUNG CHEOK CHANG alyna- I like how it interacts with the reader by asking a question Ethan - This hook description is quite accurate on the scenery. ― ANONYMOUS I think this is pretty descriptive, it tells the tiny details, I would continue reading it, I wanna what makes it the worst day ― XIN YAN LOW ― ANONYMOUS ZeYou- This doesn’t sound as interesting as the others and is a bit too plain. ― ANONYMOUS yes, some terrible things coming towards Yes, i would continue reading this story because I would like to know what happen on that day ― CHUNG CHEOK CHANG The transition to the worst day of his life wasn’t interesting ― DE JUN WONG ― ANONYMOUS I like the way rhetorical questions are added, I would continue reading, I wanna know the "terrible thing" ― XIN YAN LOW i would continues reading to know how was the worst day of his or her life-----dejun ― DE JUN WONG The student seemed to have a great day but was unprepared for what school ought to bring him - very relatable. ― JING XUAN PANG Yes I would continue reading - The way the writer put it out made it seem like everything went wrong all of a sudden. ― JING XUAN PANG I will continue to read it as it is interesting and I wanna know what's gonna happen -Jack ― ANONYMOUS ZeYou- I would continue reading this book to see how the bad things quickly took over the cheerful day for the narrator . interactive ― ZHEN HAO LIM ― ANONYMOUS Sin Yi - this sounds like what a student would face and its very relatable and i would continue reading it ― ANONYMOUS Amin- No I don't feel interested in this. ― AMIN Jayden - yes, i would like to continue reading because i want to know what made the narrator said that ― ANONYMOUS Very relatable-wayen ― ANONYMOUS It's like interacting witht he reader ― ANONYMOUS Amin- Yes this sounds nice. I would like to continue. ― AMIN PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 12, 2020 09:34AM Hook 1 "Buzzzz!" the sound of my alarm clock droned in my ears as I struggled to come awake. Glimpse of memory hit me, I sprung straight on my bed. Today is my big day. I can't be late. Yes I would continue reading to see why it's such a big day ― LAVENASRI KUMAR PAVITHRAH THIRUMOOTHY JUN 12, 2020 09:41AM Hook 2 seems interesting so I will continue -Jack ― ANONYMOUS Ethan - The hook is how the buzz makes a scene and makes people curious. ― ANONYMOUS I like this hook cuz I'm curious of what did he just remember. Kean Hong ― ANONYMOUS amin- I would like to read this because I really want to know what is his big day about. ― AMIN Yes, the uses of onomatopoeia really caught my attention - Isaac noel ― ANONYMOUS yes,i would like to read because writer mention' today is my big day' that made curiosity----dejun ― DE JUN WONG alyna- I would continue to read this book because I am curious about his big day ― ANONYMOUS this hook is very intresting, and a good eye cather, makes wanna know why its a big day-Pouya ― ANONYMOUS Yfeng - The way how the hook was structured, it described a mysterious setting which arouses my curiosity. ― ANONYMOUS Yes, I would Like to know what happens to that day- yihan yes,I will continue reading because it makes me feel curious why the narrator cannot be late ― CHUNG CHEOK CHANG I liked the way a sound effect is added, I would continue reading this, I want to know what is it about the big day ― XIN YAN LOW Very curious about his big day-wayen ― ANONYMOUS Sin Yi - I will want to continue because i'm interested in nding out what his big day is ― ANONYMOUS ZeYou- I would want to see why the narrator can’t be late for this day that seemed so important for him ― ANONYMOUS ※※※※※※ ― ANONYMOUS Jayden - I will continue reading because I want to know why it is his big day ― ANONYMOUS