Golden Link – Romanticism: What can you remember? • What is Romanticism? • What are some features of Romantic literature? • Which other poem/s have we read from the Romantic period? • You can also recap here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c57PdX85c Do Image taken from original publication of ‘Songs of Innocence and Experience.’ Week 26– The Tyger (p.68) Follow Lesson 1 Learning Outcomes • Understand ‘The Tyger’ and its context. . • Annotate the poem, looking closely at language. Who is William Blake? • Romantic poet/artist (1757 -1827) • From childhood he believed in the power of the supernatural. • He thought that there was evidence of God in the works of nature and that if you looked hard nature would show it to you. • Blake was an engraver by trade and made and illustrated all of his own works by hand. • He was politically revolutionary and got into trouble in his republican views. Watch & Listen https://www.youtube.com/ watch?v=fXsiW7A--dY The Tyger Published in a collection of poems called Songs of Experience in 1794, Blake wrote "The Tyger" during his more radical period. He wrote most of his major works during this time, often railing against oppressive institutions like the church or the monarchy, or any and all cultural traditions – sexist, racist, or classist – which stifled imagination or passion "The Tyger" is a poem made of questions. There are no less than thirteen question marks and only one full sentence that ends with a period instead of a question mark. Addressing "The Tyger," the speaker questions it as to its creation – essentially: "Who made you Mr. Tyger?" "How were you made? Where? Why? What was the person or thing like that made you?" How to approach the poem. The poem is tricky because it looks simple, and like there isn’t much to say about it. However it a poem that is full of deeper meanings. We will look at both meanings. The simple stuff On the surface the poem is pretty simple – it describes a Tiger. You can see that all the questions and lines build up a picture of the animal. What words in the poem describe the animal? Unpicking the deeper meanings… • Blake believed that God was a kind of Blacksmith that had fashioned the world like smiths fashion horseshoes. • He also believed that God was a kind of artist who had made the world incredibly beautifully and artistically. • Just like some people question the existence of God – Blake tries to show it through a series of Rhetorical Questions. *Grab some highlighters LETS ANNOTATE THE POEM: LOOK FOR POETIC DEVICES - METAPHOR, ALLITERATION, RHYME SCHEME, REPETITION, PUNCTUATION ETC.. Stanza 1 • 1-4: Many have considered this tiger representing the dark shadow of the human soul. This is the beastly part of ourselves that we would prefer to keep only in our dreams at night. Night in Blake's poetry often seems to suggest this sort of dream time. The forests might represent the wild landscape of our imagination under the influence of this beast. • The "immortal hand or eye," symbols of sight and creation, immediately conjure references to a creative God. • "Fearful" references the scariness of a tiger. ‘Symmetry’ is a classical quality of the divine, as well as the defining factor of artistic beauty. Stanza 2 • 5-8: Blake uses the metaphor of fire to describe the way the tiger sees and is seen. This is not the vision of the lamb. The tiger has fury and grounds to believe in its own strength. The tiger could be understood as similar to our psychological view of the ego. Our ego is the part of us that believes in its own power, in its own vision. It could be debated that Blake argues here that the Fallen Archangel Lucifer is the creator of the tiger, or the beastly part of our own nature. Stanza 3 9-12: The first 2 lines speak to the very power and strength of the tiger, and of its creator. Shoulders and art both carry responsibilities and burdens. Blake seems to be suggesting that the creator of this powerful creature is awesome in its own right. The heart represents not only the biological engine of the tiger, but perhaps its passion for living. Line 11 means the tiger now has a life of its own. Line 12 is an attempt to reconcile the wild beast with a sense of order about the universe and its workings. Can God have created a dreadful creature, and if so does this task make God's hands dreadful? Stanza 3 Stanza 4 Stanza 5 Stanza 5 Stanza 5 Stanza 6 The poem ends with the same question with which it began, suggesting there has not been an answer found which adequately explains God’s actions in making the tiger. Moreover, the replacement of the word ‘could’ with ‘Dare’ leaves the reader dwelling upon the reckless nature of a god who created the ultimate killing machine to prey upon mankind. Structure and form • The Tyger is a lyric poem (Poetry that presents the deep feelings and emotions of the poet) • The poem is comprised of six quatrains (4 lined stanzas) in rhymed couplets (aabb rhyme scheme). • The meter is regular and rhythmic, its hammering beat suggestive of the smithy that is the poem’s central image. • The simplicity and neat proportions of the poems form perfectly suit its regular structure, in which a string of questions all contribute to the articulation of a single, central idea. • The speaker of the poem is ambiguous Structure and Form • Rhythmic pattern: Trochaic tetrameter -it refers to a line of four trochaic feet. The word "tetrameter" simply means that the poem has four trochees. A trochee is a stressed syllable, followed by a short, or unstressed, one (reverse of iambic tetrameter). • The rhythm and rhyme scheme of the poem have a clear structure. Each line of the poem has seven syllables. This means the lines have a strong rhythm, like the beating of a hammer or the padding of stealthy paws. Because the last syllable of the trochaic tetrameter seems to be omitted there is a sense of something left unfinished. This reflects the way the poem fails to answer the speaker’s question, communicating instead how difficult it is to understand God. The rhyme scheme of the poem is AABB. This uniformity again provides a strong impression of the pounding of the tiger’s feet. To finish… What is the tiger, or what does it represent? The TygerAdditional Resources/Revision Tasks . Religion Working class background William Blake was an artist and an engraver. Blake’s later poetry attempts to re-write the story of creation and the entire history of humanity Blake wrote at the start of the industrial revolution Blake had radical , eccentric ideas. He pointed out what was wrong with the world as he saw it; he was considered by some to be mad. Summary The poem begins with the speaker asking a fearsome tiger what kind of divine being could have created it: “What immortal hand or eye/ Could frame they fearful symmetry?” Each subsequent stanza contains further questions, all of which refine this first one. From what part of the cosmos could the tiger’s fiery eyes have come, and who would have dared to handle that fire? What sort of physical presence, and what kind of dark craftsmanship, would have been required to “twist the sinews” of the tiger’s heart? The speaker wonders how, once that horrible heart “began to beat,” its creator would have had the courage to continue the job. Comparing the creator to a blacksmith, he ponders about the anvil and the furnace that the project would have required and the smith who could have wielded them. And when the job was done, the speaker wonders, how would the creator have felt? “Did he smile his work to see?” Could this possibly be the same being who made the lamb? Structure and Form How many stanzas? (verses- like a poem’s paragraphs) Does it rhyme? Yes? How? Note the pattern. No?- Free verse or blank verse? How many lines per stanza? Does it have a rhythm? Where is the punctuation? Any enjambment? Caesura? Is it a form I should recognise? i.e. sonnet (square poems- 14 lines) 1. In your own words, write out the question that the first verse asks the reader. 2. Why do you think the poet uses the words ‘distant deeps or skies’? 3. Pick out the words and phrases from the first four verses that make the tiger sound fierce and write them down. 4. Write down the words from verse four that suggest industry. 5. Look at the last two line of verse five. Who is ‘he’ that the poet refers to? 6. Although verse one and verse six appear the same, what word changes? 7. Why has the poet changed this word? What does he want us the reader to think? 8. Why has the poet set the poem out as a series of questions? What does he want us to think about? • What does the Tyger represent? Evil? Violence? Predation? Suffering? • What about the idea that God made the world in his own image – what does the Tyger suggest about God? Find references to a blacksmith in ‘The Tyger’ Why does Blake use the image of a blacksmith as the tiger’s creator? The Tyger: a metaphor for the Industrial revolution? • One complex aspect of Blake’s metaphor is that, unlike the lamb, who is ‘made’ by God, the tiger owes its existence to a combination of human labour and industrial process. Stanza three focuses on human effort, the shoulder and the art which ‘twist the sinews of thy heart’. Stanza four conceives of the tiger’s creation in terms of industry, using a series of word associations for the blacksmith’s forge: ‘hammer’, ‘chain’, ‘furnace’, ‘anvil’. • While, like all the Romantics, Blake was repelled by the Industrial Revolution and its representation of human beings, stanza three has undeniable energy and a fascination with what industry can produce: ‘what dread grasp | Dare its deadly terrors clasp?’ It’s interesting that both the worker and the tiger are represented by a strange combination of body parts (‘shoulder’, ‘heart’, ‘sinews’, ‘hand’, ‘feet’, ‘brain’). A parallel can perhaps be drawn with the creature constructed in a ‘workshop of filthy creation’ in Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein Allusion to Greek and Roman mythology and to Milton https://crossref-it.info/textguide/songs-ofinnocence-and-experience/13/1583 Icarus ‘on what wings dare he aspire?’ Icarus flew too close to the sunhumankind reaching beyond its limits. Paradise Lost- Milton ‘the stars threw down their spears’ Prometheus ‘what the hand dare seize the fire’ Stole fire from the gods and gave it to humans. Punishment was to have his liver eaten each day. May refer to fallen angels when Satan rebelled against God These allusions make us feel that the creator of the tiger has gone too far in creating something beautiful yet so terrible. What is the link to rebellion? Think of the historical context- what was happening when Blake was writing? The Tyger’ gives no visible answers except offering more questions. • Blake is building on the conventional idea that nature, like a work of art, must in some way contain a reflection of its creator. The tiger is strikingly beautiful yet also horrific in its capacity for violence. What kind of a God, then, could or would design such a terrifying beast as the tiger? • In more general terms, what does the undeniable existence of evil and violence in the world tell us about the nature of God, and what does it mean to live in a world where a being can at once contain both beauty and horror? The Lamb: from the book ‘Songs of Innocence’ The Lamb • Little Lamb, who made thee? Dost thou know who made thee? Gave thee life, and bid thee feed, By the stream and o'er the mead; Gave thee clothing of delight, Softest clothing, woolly, bright; Gave thee such a tender voice, Making all the vales rejoice? Little Lamb, who made thee? Dost thou know who made thee? • Little Lamb, I'll tell thee, Little Lamb, I'll tell thee. He is called by thy name, For He calls Himself a Lamb. He is meek, and He is mild; He became a little child. I a child, and thou a lamb, We are called by His name. Little Lamb, God bless thee! Little Lamb, God bless thee! Explode a quotation (P.E.E.-Explain) Looking back at the anthology poems we covered in Term 1‘Half-past Two’ (p.60) And She said he’d done Something Very Wrong, and must Stay in the school-room till half-past two. Week 26 – War Photographer (p.67) Follow Lesson 2 Learning Outcomes • Analyse language, structure and form in . ‘War Photographer.’ • Establish the meaning/message behind the poem. WHAT IS THE MESSAGE OF THE ARTIST? The artist’s message is that media is biased: society does not necessarily have access to the truth. CAN YOU LINK THIS IMAGE WITH THE TITLE OF THE POEM? ‘War Photographers’ work for the media and therefore will have first hand experience of the media’s selective approach to content. LOOK OUT FOR SIMILAR MESSAGES AS WE READ THE POEM, ‘WAR PHOTOGRAPHER’ Let’s watch and listen • This student won a film-making competition in Asia with this version of the poem. If we have any budding videographers who would like to . based on an anthology poem, we create a video would be very happy to share them in our Literature course! https://www.youtube.com /watch?v=B_trzujXt8k In his dark room he is finally alone with spools of suffering set out in ordered rows. The only light is red and softly glows, as though this were a church and he a priest preparing to intone a Mass. Belfast. Beirut. Phnom Penh. All flesh is grass. ‘War Photographer’ by Carol Anne Duffy Something is happening. A stranger’s features faintly start to twist before his eyes, a half-formed ghost. He remembers the cries of this man’s wife, how he sought approval without words to do what someone must and how the blood stained into foreign dust He has a job to do. Solutions slop in trays A hundred agonies in black and white beneath his hands, which did not tremble from which his editor will pick out five or six then though seem to now. Rural England. for Sunday’s supplement. The reader’s Home again to ordinary pain which simple eyeballs prick with tears between the bath weather can dispel, to fields which don’t and pre-lunch beers. From the aeroplane he explode beneath the feet stares impassively at where he earns his WRITE A SUMMARY your understanding of the and meaning, message and living andpoet they dopoem’s not care. of running children intoashow nightmare heat. purpose. The poem is written about a war photographer who has returned home and is developing his photos. The poem is looking at the contrast between the war zones and safety of being back home and the way people just do not understand the truth, after all a single photo cannot show everything. War photographers do a very dangerous job, many are killed and injured as they must get in harms way to get the photos they are after. 49 50 WAR PHOTOGRAPHER, PART 1 Personifies the photographs, ‘suffering’ Finally implies he is constantly haunted by his experiences Image of uniformity implies he In his dark room he is finally alone try to bring order to the chaos with spools of suffering set out in orderedis of his subject, war. Atmospheric use of colour, rows. The only light is red and softly ‘red’ – connotation of glows, Juxtaposition of concepts of ‘church’ danger, death, blood as though this were a church and with he warzones amplifies the horror he has Contextual reference to method seen a priest preparing to intone a Mass. Metaphor emphasises the scale of developing photographs Belfast. Beirut. Phnom Penh. All flesh is of death and fragility of life, Semantics – implies if the world grass. suggests that this life is as could see what he could, war would cease STRUCTURE MEANING IMAGERY LANGUAGE EMOTION meaningless to people at home as mowing the lawn. He has a job to do. Solutions slop in trays beneath his hands, which did not tremble Contrasts chaos of war with then though seem to now. Rural England. the calm of ‘Rural England’ Home again to ordinary pain which simple exaggerating the absurdity and barbarity of war. weather can dispel, to fields which don’t Contrast supported familiar ‘weather stereotypes explode beneath thebyfeet of running children in a nightmare heat. All Flesh is Grass This is a biblical quotation from Isaiah 40:6-8 The full quotation reads: “All flesh is grass, and all its beauty is the flower of the field. The grass withers, the flower fades when the breath of the Lord blows on it; surely the people are grass. The grass withers, the flower fades, but the word of our God will stand forever.” The point being made is that compared to the eternal and everlasting word of God, human life is fleeting and transient. It is a reminder that we are all mortal. 52 • In the poem this reference adds to the images of death which abound: “mass...explode beneath the feet of running children...halfformed ghost...blood stained into foreign dust...agonies...” The photographer’s job means he is constantly faced with death. He of all people must know that “all flesh is grass”. • Positioning the biblical reference after a list of war-torn countries also emphasises the shortness of life experienced by people caught up in those conflicts. Indeed, the lives of the people the photographer captures are likely to be even shorter than any other human elsewhere on the planet. • The word ‘grass’ forms a rhyming couplet with the word ‘mass' before it. Taken alongside ‘Phnom Penh’, the reader is perhaps reminded of a mass grave – biodegrade into the soil. This is enhanced by the word ‘flesh’ which dehumanises the bodies of the dead: they are simply meat. 53 WAR PHOTOGRAPHER, PART 2 Double meaning the photo itself is taking form, however the subjects themselves may have been in pain, twisting. Caesura changes tone and builds tension. Something is happening. A stranger’s features faintly start to twist before his eyes, a half-formed ghost. He remembers the Metaphor shows the still faint cries of this man’s wife, how he sought origins of the photo but also implies that the subject may well approval without words to do what someone must now be dead. and how the blood stained into foreign dust Pun / dark humour, bitter. Black and white in the newspapers but also emphasis on morality, war is black and white STRUCTUR E MEANING IMAGERY LANGUAGE EMOTION Personal Pronoun ‘he’ emphasises a namelessness, that he is one of many, but also a sense of detachment and guilt in the tone. Adjective emphasis on the fact it is far away, not at home. It makes the noun ‘dust’ a possession. A hundred agonies in black and white from which his editor will pick out five or six for Sunday’s supplement. The reader’s eyeballs prick with tears between the bath and pre-lunch beers. From the aeroplane he impassively at where he earns his emotion, he feels numb/helpless collective pronounstares creates accusation-like ‘Impassive’ without tone. Final lines emphasise his they resentment. living and do not care. Structure • 4 stanzas • 6 lines per stanza • Regular rhyme scheme – ABBCDD, etc. WHY? • Imposes order in the chaos of war • Like the photographer – order with the photos, making sense of the chaos War Photographer In his darkroom he is finally alone with spools of suffering set out in ordered rows. The only light is red and softly glows, as though this were a church and he a priest preparing to intone a Mass. Belfast. Beirut. Phnom Penh. All flesh is grass. He has a job to do. Solutions slop in trays beneath his hands which did not tremble then though seem to now. Rural England. Home again to ordinary pain which simple weather can dispel, to fields which don't explode beneath the feet of running children in a nightmare heat. A A B B C C D D 56 War Photographer: is there rhythm? In his darkroom he is finally alone with spools of suffering set out in ordered rows. The only light is red and softly glows, as though this were a church and he a priest preparing to intone a Mass. Belfast. Beirut. Phnom Penh. All flesh is grass. He has a job to do. Solutions slop in trays beneath his hands which did not tremble then though seem to now. Rural England. Home again to ordinary pain which simple weather can dispel, to fields which don't explode beneath the feet of running children in a nightmare heat. 57 War Photographer: the meter revealed 11In his darkroom he is finally alone 11/12with spools of suffering set out in ordered rows. 10The only light is red and softly glows, 8as though this were a church and he 10a priest preparing to intone a Mass. 10Belfast. Beirut. Phnom Penh. All flesh is grass. 12He has a job to do. Solutions slop in trays 10beneath his hands which did not tremble then 11though seem to now. Rural England. Home again 12to ordinary pain which simple weather can dispel, 10to fields which don't explode beneath the feet 10of running children in a nightmare heat. 58 Checkpoint Write three sentences about the poem, War Photographer. • Language sentence • Structure sentence • Form sentence Week 26 Literature Homework- War Photographer Quiz 1. Ensure you have responded to feedback on your OMAM essay. 2. Complete the War Photographer quiz. 3. Look through the extra resources and complete your annotations on both ‘The Tyger’ and ‘War Photographer.’ 60 Golden Link: Respond to feedback (OMAM Essay) If you submitted this work, please go to the assignment now and respond to my feedback using the system below. If you did not submit this homework, please look again at the questions on the next slide and begin a plan for one of them. Your teacher may also have example essays to share (one on Lennie can be found in the Literature course- Week 24 1. Click ‘View feedback.’ Look for ticks on your work. Choose three ticks. Click to reveal a box and type in the reason you think you received each tick. 2. Find and correct any SPAG errors in the same way. 3. Read your target and use the Golden Link target sheet to work out how to achieve your target. Redraft any sections suggested in my marking. Last term’s OMAM Essay Task • • • • Take time to plan your essay. There is a planning template in the learning platform (W25). Aim to write it fully in 45 minutes. You might want to consider handwriting this as practice for the eventual examinations. Proof read and submit your response. Make sure you indicate which question you have chosen. War PhotographerAdditional Resources/Revision Tasks . Let’s recap some of the annotations we made last lesson, zooming in on key lines to check our understanding Stanza One 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. What person is the poem written in? Is the person narrating the poem the poet? Is it about the poet herself? “he is finally alone” – Why is he only now alone? What does this imply about before the poem? “spools of suffering” – Discuss the techniques in this line. Why is it used? “ordered rows” – What else comes in ordered rows? Why might he set them out so orderly? “light is red” – Why is this? Where else do you have red light? What does this make you think of? Connotations? 8. What does the concept of the “priest preparing to intone a Mass” add to the idea of the photographer and how serious he takes his job? 9. Why is the quote from Isaiah included in the poem? And why with the list of places? 64 Stanza Two 1. In the first two lines of Stanza two – what is the contrast? (Hint: think about the photographer…) 2. “Solutions slop in trays” – What is the literal and metaphorical meanings of this phrase “solutions” in terms of the poem? 3. How does Duffy give the impression of the British as whiny and complacent? 4. “nightmare heat” – is an example of which technique? What does it refer to, do you think? 65 1. “Something is happening”. What does this sentence do to the stanza, as a start? Why does he “seek approval/ without words”? 2. What moral predicament is the photographer in, in stanza three? 3. “the blood stained into foreign dust” – what effect does “stained” have as a verb? Analyse the idea of the atrocity staining… 4. Why does the photographer feel he must do “what someone must”? 66 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. Another contrast! – The sensitivity of the photographer contrasts with what in this stanza? “hundred agonies in black-and-white” – Firstly what technique is this? What purpose does this technique serve, in terms of this image? “his editor will pick out five or six” – Evaluate this phrase – how do you feel about what the editor is doing? What criteria do you think he’ll use? “The reader’s eyeballs prick/ with tears between bath and pre-lunch beers” – How long does the reader’s supposed sympathy last for? Why do you think Duffy writes about the reader? How should we react to terrible suffering in other countries? 67 Onwards, ever onwards… Contrast: In the poem, what is the contrast? How does the contrast make you feel? - Aware of the gulf between our lives and those of the people in the photographs? - Appreciative of and thankful for what we have? - Guilty? - Like it’s hard to relate to those in the photos? Don’t just give an opinion – how can you prove this from the poem? Think Evaluation! On the next slide is a table, copy and complete with lines from the poem that you believe show effective contrast in the poem. 68 Contrast continued… War Zones: “Fields… explode beneath the feet/ of running children in a nightmare heat England: “Ordinary pain which simple weather can dispel” 69 “People travel to faraway places to watch, in fascination, the kind of people they ignore at home.” - Dagobert D. Runes Attitude: Duffy’s and the photographer. Having read the entire poem by now, and analysed more than half… can you prove your opinions? - What do you think Duffy’s attitude is to war, and how the public deal with what happens in other countries? - How do you think the photographer feels about his job? 70 The Whole Poem. Imagery: Duffy creates some powerful and disturbing images in the poem. Four in particular stand out: “fields which don’t explode beneath the feet/ of running children in a nightmare heat” “how the blood stained into foreign dust” “a hundred agonies in black-and-white” “The reader’s eyeballs prick/ with tears between the bath and pre-lunch beers” 71 P.E.E Example It can be difficult for us to relate to suffering in faraway countries, and so to make us feel anger, guilt and inevitably despair about it, Duffy has to use disturbing and powerful images These are images we would rather not think about, or really see. She says we, in the Western world, live by “fields which don’t explode beneath the feet/ Of running children in a nightmare heat.” This image is effective because we would normally associate images of children with freedom, innocence and fun. The idea of the children running in ‘fields’ has connotations of innocent fun and play. We also associate children with guiltless lives, and this brings out our protective instincts when we imagine them being hurt. Duffy does not tell us what these children are running from; some kind of “nightmare heat”. The idea of a nightmare as our very worst fears instigates our imaginings of horror and immeasurable pain. This image in itself is horrific to the reader, as we cannot begin to imagine the pain and suffering. It shames us to be so well off in comparison to these children. 72