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Name: Cristiano Masioli Guimaraes

Topic: The view of Niteroi

General Purpose: To inform

Specific Purpose: To educate my classmates on how Niteroi's view from Rio is beautiful.

1.

If you are from Niteroi, the chances are that you say you are from Rio when asked.

2.

People from Rio must of the time making fun of people from Niteroi saying that the best thing we have is the view of Rio.

3.

People from Rio are right; the best thing about Niteroi is the view, more specifically the view from my street.

Introduction: (Grabber) (fill in later)

(Thesis Statement) One of the essential things about Niteroi is its view of Rio, and Cariocas often use this fact to mock people from Niteroi.

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Main Point I: Niteroi is located only 6 miles from Rio de Janeiro. So in an attempt to facilitate communication, Niteroienses often time say that they are from Rio.

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There are higher chances for people to know about Rio de Janeiro than Niteroi.

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Niteroi is in the state of Rio, so people from Niteroi are still from "Rio."

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Main Point II: People from Niteroi often make fun or are mocked by people from Rio. But the only thing people from Rio can come up with is "The only good thing about Niteroi is its view from Rio." The Cariocas lack of creativity comes from the fact that Niteroi is one of the best cities in the world, and there is not much to mock on.

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Niteroi is the wealthiest city in Brazil and the highest human index in the state.

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Main Point III: Even though Niteroi is a fantastic city, the people from Rio are right. The view from Niteroi is one of the most beautiful views in the world.

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The city of Rio is known as one of the most beautiful cities in the world, but just like a painting, you need to take some steps back or go across the bay to appreciate Rio's beauty as a whole.

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Conclusion: It hurts to admit, but the people from Rio are right.

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