ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 1 CONTENTS Introduction 3 Teaching Highlights 4 Overview for Scheme of Work 5 Plot Summary 6–9 Lesson Plans 10–21 Student Resources 22–32 Self-assessment 33 Further Reading 34 Teaching materials written by Ken Haworth Acknowledgements The author and publishers are grateful for permission to include the following copyright material in this resource: Text: Treasure Island by Robert Louis Stevenson first published 1833. Extracts are taken from ‘Rollercoasters’ educational edition published 2016 (Oxford University Press). Images: p1: Andrey_Kuzmin/Shutterstock (background), Unholy Vault Designs/Shutterstock (foreground); p31 tl: OUP / James Fraser; p31 tr: Reproduced from Treasure Island by permission of Usborne Publishing, 83-85 Saffron Hill, London EC1N 8RT, UK. www.usborne.com. Copyright © 2014 Usborne Publishing Ltd; p31 bl: OUP; p31 br: Andrey_Kuzmin/Shutterstock (background), Unholy Vault Designs/Shutterstock (foreground). We have tried to trace and contact all copyright holders before publication. If notified, the publishers will be pleased to rectify any errors or omissions at the earliest opportunity. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 2 Treasure Island INTRODUCTION Summary Level of Challenge Treasure Island is the archetypal pirate story. This swashbuckling tale has all the elements we associate with pirates: the treasure map where ‘X marks the spot’, bloodthirsty men who think nothing of murder and pillage, adventure on the high seas and a remarkable rogue called Long John Silver whose language defines what it is to speak like a buccaneer. Due to this novel, expressions such as ‘pieces of eight!’, ‘Jim lad’ and ‘shiver me timbers’ have become embedded in our language. Read simply as an adventure story, the novel is suitable for all ability levels in Years 7 and 8. For the more able, there is an opportunity to explore the language and structure of the 19th-century novel, the presentation of seafaring and the differing speech patterns of groups of characters. Key Themes Courage Cross-curricular Links Trade in maritime England, and the conditions aboard and actions on ships on the high seas are often part of the History curriculum. In terms of media, there are several recent examples of big budget films that use the same basic ideas and schema as the novel. The actions of Jim Hawkins, the young lad who is caught up in an epic adventure, are frequently courageous (and sometimes foolhardy). Several times he faces death; other characters in the novel (particularly Long John Silver) are impressed by his bravery and fortitude. But are his actions always motivated by courage, or is he simply doing what he chooses in a world he doesn’t understand? Honour At many points in the novel, different characters behave honourably. There is clearly a pirate code of conduct which even the most vicious characters seem to respect (as an example, see their behaviour when attempting a mutiny against Silver in Chapters 28 and 29). Jim has a chance to escape death in the stockade in Chapter 30 by running away, but he has given his word not to and stays. It could be argued that even Silver behaves with some honour towards Jim, although this is clearly motivated by self-interest. Trust To what extent can we trust some of the characters in this novel? Jim, the narrator, seems to admire Silver and to find him helpful and trustworthy in the early chapters, but he is clearly deceived, as he discovers to his cost. Dr Livesey and Captain Smollett have doubts about Jim’s trustworthiness when he abandons them in the stockade. Is Ben Gunn to be trusted in what he agrees to do for the honest men, or does his isolation and madness mean that he is totally unreliable? ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 3 Treasure Island Teaching Highlights This Resource Pack contains 12 customizable Lesson Plans and 12 Student Resources to help you build a scheme of work. Teaching ideas include: Hot seating – Explore character motivation (Lesson Plan 4) Captain’s Log: Stardate 17 – Write extracts from Captain Smollett’s journal (Lesson Plan 5) Talk like a pirate – Investigate and use pirate language (Lesson Plan 7) ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack Shifting perspectives – Work with narrative viewpoint (Lesson Plan 9) Selling the book – Write blurbs and create cover designs (Lesson Plan 10) The world of audio – Write and produce a radio play (Lesson Plan 11) www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 4 Treasure Island Overview for Scheme of Work Lesson and focus Skills and outcomes Related resources Lesson 1: Initial engagement Close reading through interrogating a text Resource 1 Lesson 2: The narrator Deducing and inferring Summarizing from evidence assembled Resources 2a, 2b Lesson 3: Plot prediction Using clues from careful reading to predict developments in the plot Lesson 4: Character motivation Speaking in role Lesson 5: Empathizing with a character Writing journal entries (and optionally emulating a given style) Resource 5 Lesson 6: Cliff-hanger chapter endings Analysing the structure of chapter endings Reworking a chapter ending for increased dramatic effect Resource 6 Lesson 7: The spoken language of pirates Grammar and vocabulary: analysis of ‘pirate speak’ Writing a short pirate dialogue Resource 7 Lesson 8: Tracking an idea Taking an overview of how an idea runs through a text Resources 8a, 8b Lesson 9: Narrative viewpoint Exploring narration in the novel Writing as a different narrator recounting an event in the plot Resource 9 Lesson 10: Selling the book Taking an overview of the whole text for the purpose of marketing Creating a blurb or cover design for a new edition (with annotation) Resource 10 Lesson 11: Changing the form of the text Rewriting and acting out a scene as an audio production Resource 11 Lesson 12: Oral presentation Skimming and scanning Self-assessment sheet ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 5 Treasure Island Plot Summary Chapter Plot outline Part One: The Old Buccaneer Chapter 1 The narrator (we later learn he is Jim Hawkins) tells us that he has been asked to write the whole story, ‘keeping nothing back but the bearings of the island’. An old sailor comes to stay at the Admiral Benbow inn (run by Jim’s parents). He keeps a keen lookout for ships or sailors and pays the narrator a silver fourpenny every month to watch particularly for ‘a seafaring man with one leg’. In the evenings, he drinks quantities of rum in the inn. Chapter 2 A January morning. A ruffian called Black Dog turns up at the inn and confronts Bill, the old sailor. There is a furious row: cutlasses are drawn and Black Dog runs away, wounded. Bill collapses. Dr Livesey is called for. He diagnoses a stroke, bleeds Bill and puts him to bed. Chapter 3 Bill reveals that he was first mate to Captain Flint – the most feared pirate on the high seas. As he lay dying, Flint gave Bill a small chest and this is what his enemies are after. Jim’s father dies suddenly. After the funeral, a horrific blind beggar appears at the inn and forces Jim to help him confront Bill. He presses a black spot into Bill’s hand and leaves. Bill falls dead of apoplexy. Chapter 4 Jim and his mother seek help from local villagers, but all are too terrified to assist. Jim finds the key to the chest around Bill’s neck and he and his mother decide to open it. Inside they find a bundle of papers and a bag of gold. The blind beggar returns to the inn. Jim and his mother take the bundle of papers, escape and hide under a bridge. Chapter 5 A group of seven or eight pirates pass over the bridge, go into the inn and find Bill’s body. They realize the papers are missing. The revenue officers ride in and the ruffians scatter, but the blind one (Blind Pew) is trampled under a horse. The pirates scramble aboard their boat in the cove and escape. Jim hitches a ride on a horse to put the papers into Dr Livesey’s safe keeping. Chapter 6 Dr Livesey is with Squire Trelawney. They open the bundle of papers and find an account book and a treasure map, with points marked by red crosses. The squire says that he will charter a ship, with Dr Livesey as ship’s doctor and Jim as cabin-boy. Livesey reminds the squire of the need for absolute secrecy in the matter. Part Two: The Sea Cook Chapter 7 The squire writes from Bristol to say he’s fitted out a ship – the Hispaniola – but he has also given away the reason for its intended voyage. He has engaged a one-legged ship’s cook called John Silver, who has been most helpful in recruiting a full crew. Jim stays a last night with his mother at the refurbished Admiral Benbow, then travels to Bristol by coach. The squire tells him, ‘We sail tomorrow!’ Chapter 8 Jim takes a note to Silver at the Spy-glass inn. He sees Black Dog scampering out of the door, but Silver convinces him that he does not know him and would have nothing to do with scoundrels. Jim describes Long John Silver (as others call him) as ‘one of the best of possible shipmates’. Chapter 9 They embark on the Hispaniola. The captain, Smollett, has grave concerns about the purpose of the voyage and particularly about the crew who all seem to know more about finding the treasure than he does. The captain has the powder and arms moved to the stern and sends Jim below to assist Silver, the cook. Chapter 10 Fair winds sail them to Treasure Island. The men respect Silver with his astonishing ability to move around quickly on his crutch with his parrot, named Cap’n Flint, on his shoulder screeching ‘Pieces of eight!’ On the last night of the voyage Jim falls into a barrel while trying to retrieve an apple from the bottom. He hears Silver talking and ‘from these dozen words I understood that the lives of all the honest men aboard depended upon me alone’. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 6 Treasure Island Chapter Plot outline Chapter 11 From Silver’s overheard talk, Jim understands that nearly all the crew are pirates. Their plan is to wait for the honest men to find the treasure and bring it aboard, then to kill them all and sail away. While still in the barrel, Jim hears the cry ‘Land ho!’ Chapter 12 Jim convenes a meeting of Captain Smollett, the squire and the doctor. Having heard the plot, they resolve to continue as normal, to make sure of the services of three crew who have not joined the pirates, and when the time is right, ‘come to blows’. Jim reflects that at that point there will be six men and a boy against 19 pirates. Part Three: My Shore Adventure Chapter 13 Treasure Island seems threatening and swampy, likely to induce fever. The men are mutinous, desperate to get ashore – presumably to look for treasure. The captain gives the men an afternoon off to go ashore. Jim gets unnoticed into one of the boats, then slips out on shore and makes his way through the marshlands, giving Long John Silver the slip. Chapter 14 Jim explores a little, then hears Silver trying to ‘turn’ Tom, an honest crewman. There’s a shot and a scream. Silver says Alan (another of the honest crew) has been killed and, when Tom makes a run for it, fells him with the crutch hurled into his back then stabs him. Jim runs away, in fear of his life if caught. Chapter 15 In an open space, Jim sees some sort of animal or cannibal, fleet of foot and bent nearly double. They confront each other. It is Ben Gunn, marooned for three years. Gunn reveals that he has found Flint’s treasure and requires a share of it and passage home. They hear a cannon shot and small arms fire. Running to a nearby hillock, they see the Union Jack flying above a wood. Part Four: The Stockade Chapter 16 The narrative is taken up by Dr Livesey. He tells how they thought of taking the ship away, leaving the mutinous crew on the island, but there was no wind to sail away, and besides, Jim was on the island. He rows to the island and they find a stockade. They force the six men aboard to let them make trips in the boat to provision the stockade. Gray, the carpenter’s mate, remains loyal and joins them. Chapter 17 The honest men make one last trip to the stockade, but the boat is overladen (five men and provisions). They see the pirates on the Hispaniola readying the big gun to fire at them and the pirates on shore manning a boat to cut them off. The big gun fires and misses, but in turning the boat away from the shot, it sinks. They can wade ashore, but hear other pirates running through the woods to intercept them. Chapter 18 Firing as they go, the group reaches the stockade. Redruth, Trelawney’s servant, is killed by pirate fire. Captain Smollett raises the British flag over the stockade, which is then peppered by shots from the Hispaniola’s big gun. They have enough food for short rations for 10 days. Suddenly Jim appears and scrambles over the stockade wall to join them. Chapter 19 The narrative is resumed by Jim. He gives the others a garbled message from Ben Gunn about ‘a precious sight’. He also notes that Gunn would do anything for cheese, and by chance the doctor has a piece of Parmesan in his snuff-box. The pirates raise the skull and crossbones pirate flag on the Hispaniola. Jim and his company plan to let rum and the feverish climate do their worst to the pirates until they leave in the Hispaniola. A flag of truce appears, followed by Silver himself. Chapter 20 Silver offers terms: in return for the treasure map, the honest men can have safe passage to a safe haven, or stay where they are, be given provisions and hold out, with Silver giving a message about their whereabouts to the first ship he meets at sea. Captain Smollett refuses vigorously. Silver leaves, making terrible threats. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 7 Treasure Island Chapter Plot outline Chapter 21 The pirates launch a full scale attack on the stockade and nearly succeed in taking it. The captain and Hunter are wounded; Joyce is killed. Five mutineers are killed and one dies later of his wounds. The attack is finally seen off, leaving four fit men in the stockade against eight pirates. Part Five: My Sea Adventure Chapter 22 Jim decides to sneak out of the stockade and find the boat that Ben Gunn told him he had made. He finds a coracle-like patchwork boat, then decides to row out to the moored Hispaniola and cut it adrift. Chapter 23 Rowing the coracle with difficulty alongside the Hispaniola, Jim manages to cut the anchor rope. As the ship starts to turn in the current he climbs a rope and sees two pirates fighting in a cabin. He regains the coracle, but is being pulled along by the movement of the Hispaniola. He lies in the bottom of his boat all night, expecting to die when the ship hits the breakers (huge sea waves breaking on the shore). Chapter 24 The coracle is pulled and pushed by wind and tide until Jim awakes and sees the Hispaniola half a mile away. He cannot control the coracle but finds himself nearing the ship, which seems to be floating without direction. As the ship turns in the current, Jim clambers up the bowsprit just before the coracle is crushed. Chapter 25 Aboard the Hispaniola, Jim finds two pirates dead by the wheel. Israel Hands is still alive, though badly wounded, and agrees to help Jim sail for the calm North Inlet. Jim hauls down the Jolly Roger and the ship makes good speed around the island. Hands watches Jim with treachery in his sly expression. Chapter 26 Hands asks Jim to go below for wine, but Jim sees him extract a knife hidden in a rope. They sail into the North Inlet, whereupon Hands attacks Jim, but the boat lurches and beaches, allowing Jim to escape by climbing up the mast. Hands comes after him, throws his knife and pins Jim by the shoulder to the mast. Jim discharges the two pistols he is carrying. Hands is killed, and falls from the mast into the sea. Chapter 27 Jim unpins himself from the mast then pulls in the smaller sails and cuts the mainsail away from the mast so that the wind cannot carry the ship away. He wades ashore, makes his way by moonlight to the stockade and walks in. He is startled to hear a screech of ‘Pieces of eight!’ The pirates have taken the stockade and Jim becomes their prisoner. Part Six: Captain Silver Chapter 28 It transpires that the honest men left the stockade by agreement. Silver gives Jim the choice of joining the pirates or death. Jim tells Silver everything he has done to thwart the pirates since the ship set out. Silver is impressed but his pirate crew are mutinous, wanting to kill Jim. They demand the right to go out for a council. Silver tells Jim that the doctor has given him the treasure map. Chapter 29 The pirates re-enter from their council and give Silver the black spot. They level accusations of incompetence at him, but he answers point by point. We learn that Dr Livesey is making regular visits to treat the wounded pirates. Finally Silver throws the treasure map at their feet. They are ecstatic and reinstate Silver as captain. Chapter 30 Dr Livesey arrives to treat the men and asks to speak to Jim alone. Silver agrees. The doctor urges Jim to jump over the stockade and run away but Jim says that he has given his word he will not. He tells the doctor everything he’s done. As he leaves, Dr Livesey drops a large hint to Silver that something is amiss with the treasure. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 8 Treasure Island Chapter Plot outline Chapter 31 The pirates set off to find the treasure. Silver pulls Jim along by a rope. They find the skeleton of a sailor arranged like a pointer towards the destination shown on the map and it reminds them of the menace of Captain Flint. Chapter 32 They continue to follow the treasure map. An eerie voice starts to sing ‘Fifteen men on the dead man’s chest …’ The pirates are rattled, but Silver rallies them. The voice comes again, intoning Flint’s last words, but they recognize it as belonging to Ben Gunn and continue. They reach the treasure spot to find that it has long ago been excavated. Chapter 33 Silver and Jim make a last stand. As the pirates charge them, a volley of shots cuts them down and those left alive scatter. The volley has come from Dr Livesey, Gray and Ben Gunn. The doctor tells Jim how Ben Gunn moved the treasure to a cave. His voice in the woods delayed the pirates long enough for the ambush to get in position. They reboard the Hispaniola then go out to the cave to see the treasure. Chapter 34 Over several days, the remaining crew transport the vast treasure to the Hispaniola. They leave some supplies for the remaining pirates who will now be marooned, then sail away. They make port in Spanish America, where Silver disappears with a bag of coins. Finally they reach England and divide the spoils between them. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 9 Treasure Island: Lesson 1 Lesson 1 Follow-up Focus: Initial engagement with the world of the text; close reading of Chapter 1 Objective: To form an impression of the novel’s setting and to ask questions of the text Engage Write the word ‘pirate’ on the board. Allow students three minutes to write down as many words and phrases as they can, suggested by this word. Take feedback to establish a master list. Discuss how we know so many rather strange expressions and characters. Explore Read Chapter 1 with the class. It is best to read straight through without stopping to ask or take questions. Ask students, working individually, to complete the first two columns of the table in Resource 1. This is a KWL chart (what I know, what I want to know, what I have learned). The table should encourage students to understand that they know a good deal about the text just from the first chapter (the setting, the characters of Bill and Dr Livesey), and to ask questions of the text. The third column should be filled in by students as they progress through the novel. It should eventually contain the answers to the questions posed in column 2. Look closely at the opening paragraph with the class. Pose questions that will focus attention on the writer’s skill in making the story sound both true and intriguing: o o What is meant by ‘the whole particulars’? o o Why is the exact year not given? o In what ways does the opening make us want to read on? What are the ‘bearings of the island’, and why should they be kept back? What is the effect of mentioning the ‘sabre cut’ on the old seaman? Split the class into two groups and ask each group, working in pairs, to complete one of the following investigations: o (for less able students) make a list of the words in the opening chapter that are specifically to do with the sea or seafaring o (for more able students) what aspects of the writing in Chapter 1 suggest that this book was written in the 19th century rather than the 21st? Working in groups of three or four, ask students to compare notes and to feed back the most common questions. Take feedback from each group with the aim of compiling a ‘best questions’ list that can be displayed/returned to as the reading progresses. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 10 Treasure Island: Lesson 2 Lesson 2 Follow-up Focus: Inference and deduction – who is the narrator? This lesson should come after the reading of Part One (up to page 55) Objective: To sum up the character and personality of the narrator based on deduction and inference from the text Engage Give students two minutes to come up with five single adjectives each that describe the narrator. Take feedback. Point out that most of these adjectives are not given literally in the text (i.e. the author does not have the narrator say, ‘I am very brave for my age’). Resource 2b is designed to help students sum up what they have inferred and deduced about the narrator and also to practise supporting assertions with evidence from the text. It might be necessary to work with some students or indeed with the whole class on the idea of ‘quoting’; examples are given on Resource 2b of the main ways in which quotations are used and formatted. The task is to produce a summary of the character of Jim Hawkins based on evidence from Part One of the text. Ask students to carry out Internet research on real pirates for homework. You may wish to specify particular periods in time (for example, Elizabethan times or the present day) to limit the amount of material to be covered. Explore Through a quick question and answer session, elicit from students the fact that as readers we have ‘worked out’ many aspects of the narrator’s character. Remind them of the terms inference and deduction. Working in small groups, students should use Resource 2a. This worksheet is for notes pinpointing evidence for ‘facts’ about the narrator (for example, we learn his first name on page 18 and his surname on page 45; we know that his parents kept the Admiral Benbow inn), for examples of what he says, what he does and any other aspects of his personality. Point out that by using evidence of what he says and does we can infer what he is like as a person. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 11 Treasure Island: Lesson 3 Lesson 3 Focus: Prediction – using clues in the text to suggest how the plot might develop. This lesson should take place when reading has reached at least the end of Chapter 8 (page 74). Objective: To predict the development of the plot Working individually, students should write one paragraph suggesting the main events or developments in the plot until the end of the novel. Point out that suggestions must be based on what is already known about the characters and the settings. Invite some students to share their summaries with the rest of the class. Follow-up Engage In pairs, ask students to tell each other the plot of a film or TV programme they have recently seen. Select a few students to give their plot outline to the whole class. Explore It is likely that many students will bring existing knowledge of pirate stories to the activities above. Ask the class to produce a list of the best-known elements in pirate tales under the heading ‘All pirate stories have …’ Then compare their plot predictions with this list. Is anything missing? Ask students to draft a sales pitch (blurb) for the book, based on their predictions of the storyline. Through discussion, either in small groups or the whole class, establish at what point the outcome of the plots recalled in the activity above became clear (or not, if the ending was a surprise). Encourage students to use phrases such as ‘It was obvious it’d end happily because …’ and ‘I knew who’d done it when …’ Point out that any plot usually has pointers along the way, even if these might deliberately mislead us sometimes. Ask groups of students to make a list of pointers in the first 70 pages of the novel. (They should recall among other things that a vicious pirate crew is desperate for a treasure map, that the map is in the hands of Dr Livesey, that a ship has been chartered, that Long John Silver has chosen most of the crew and that everyone has a high opinion of him.) You may wish to point out other possible clues, such as the opening paragraph, the fact that Black Dog turns up twice in different locations or the references from the beginning to ‘a seafaring man with one leg’. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 12 Treasure Island: Lesson 4 Lesson 4 Focus: Character motivation – hot-seating characters in the novel. Best undertaken when reading has reached the end of Part Two (page 107). Objective: To understand the thoughts, feelings and motivation of some characters Engage What is meant by ‘character motivation’? (Draw out expressions such as ‘what makes a character tick’ or ‘what goal this character is trying to reach’.) Then give students five minutes to think of three fictional characters they know well from books or the media and to write one sentence for each stating their motivation. Take feedback. Organize the class into groups of four. Allocate each group one of the characters from Jim, Captain Smollett or Long John Silver. (If there are groups of less able students, they should be given Jim.) Ask each group to agree what their character’s motivation is, and to find or remember parts of the novel that give readers this information. They should make notes of the main points made. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack Choose one student in each group to be the interrogator and another (from a group allocated a different character) to be the questioned character. Hot-seat the character, with the interrogator using his or her prepared questions. Repeat as time allows, cycling through different characters and different interrogators to give several students turns in role while the rest of the class listen in order to enhance their understanding of character motivation. Follow-up Explore Allocate the remaining two characters to each group. These are the characters that the group may have to ‘interrogate’. Ask the group to come up with a list of questions they would ask these characters to find out their motivations. Encourage most questions to be open, along the lines of ‘Why did you …?’ or ‘What did you think you would achieve by …?’ Tell students to avoid questions that have simple yes/no answers. Ask students to note down who they think is the most complex character so far, and to be prepared to explain to the class why they think this. Take feedback from selected students. For homework, ask students to research the life and works of Robert Louis Stevenson. www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 13 Treasure Island: Lesson 5 Lesson 5 Focus: Empathizing with a character. Best undertaken when the reading has reached at least the end of Chapter 18 (page 159), but it can be done as early as reaching page 103. Objective: To look at and record events from a different point of view Use Resource 5 to help students write three diary entries for Captain Smollett at different points in the novel. The entries should give insight into his character as well as recording what he sees. As an extra challenge for the more able, there is an extract from the captain’s log on page 158. The style of this entry could be emulated in the diary extracts. Follow-up Engage From whose point of view is this novel narrated? Establish that this is a first-person (‘I’) narrative. If the class has reached page 159, they will have come across another point of view (Dr Livesey’s). Ask the class to suggest why the narrator changes but the writing remains in the first person. Discuss the advantages of making this novel a third-person (‘he/they’) narrative and why Stevenson might have chosen not to do so. Choose a paragraph or two from the narrative are good for this purpose). Ask students to rewrite these paragraphs in the third person. Discuss what the difficulties are in doing this and what is lost or gained in the end result. Tell the students that a Year 6 teacher is of the opinion that the novel is ‘too violent’ to use with her class. What changes could be made to make it more suitable for younger readers without losing its excitement and sense of adventure? Explore The previous lesson will have established Captain Smollett’s motivation. Explain to the class that they will be looking at events from his point of view, which will be very different from the two narrators that Stevenson used. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 14 Treasure Island: Lesson 6 Lesson 6 Focus: Writer’s craft – using ‘cliff-hanger’ chapter endings Objective: To understand how the writer creates and uses chapter endings to maintain the reader’s interest Engage Introduce or revise the ellipsis (…). One way to do this is to tell students that the three dots can be sounded out (like the soundtrack of a film): dn, dn, der … Establish what this musical cue means. (A conventional way of indicating that something very dramatic has happened or is about to happen.) Note that ellipses can also be used to represent an omission of text. Ask students to jot down three examples of cliffhanger or highly dramatic stopping points to programmes they have recently seen. (Often these will be immediately before a commercial break or at the end of an episode of a serial.) Take feedback. Carry out an investigation of the chapter endings in the novel. You will wish to limit this to chapters already read, and the class can work in groups, each group being allocated a small number of chapters to consider. The aim of the investigation is to answer the question What is the writer doing to create a chapter ending that makes us want to read on? Resource 6 can be used to record results. Ask groups to explain their findings to the rest of the class. What patterns emerge? Follow-up Students will discover that not every chapter ends with a cliff-hanger. Ask them to suggest why this is. (For example, on page 46 an exciting series of events comes to a conclusion. The story can pause for a moment to take a breath.) Further work on this topic can be in the form of choosing chapters where the cliff-hanger is not used and rewriting the chapter ending to make it more dramatic. More able students may wish to consider why this is not always particularly successful in terms of the experience of reading the novel as a whole. Explore Point out that writers cannot use an ellipsis at the end of all chapters, so they must find other ways of signalling something highly dramatic and making the reader want to read on. With the class, consider the ending of Chapter 10 (page 90). Through question and answer, elicit the idea that the writer is deliberately withholding from the reader information that the narrator now has. In order to find out what this dramatic twist is, we must read the next chapter. This is one way of producing a cliff-hanger, but there are others. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 15 Treasure Island: Lesson 7 Lesson 7 Focus: Grammar and vocabulary – the spoken language of the pirates. This lesson is best taught after reading to or beyond the end of Chapter 28, although there are examples of ‘pirate speak’ much earlier that can be used. Objective: To analyse the grammar and vocabulary of ‘pirate speak’ as imagined by Stevenson in the novel Engage What is slang? Who uses it, when and why? Also, who uses specialist vocabulary when talking to others? (Doctors are a good example.) Why do they do this? Give students five minutes to produce two lists: the the 9-5first of slang expressions they know of or use; the second of occupations that might use particular forms of language (known as jargon) that those not in the job or profession would find difficult to understand. With the class, apply this analysis to Silver’s speech on page 254. Start at ‘I was about desperate …’ and finish at the end of the paragraph (‘… and he’ll save your neck!’) Use Resource 7 so that students can continue to analyse vocabulary and grammar, either individually or in pairs. Ask students to comment on what is lost when the expressions are rewritten in Standard English. You may wish to draw students’ attention to international ‘Talk Like a Pirate Day’, which takes place on 19 September every year. Follow-up Lower attaining students can find examples of pirate vocabulary (pages 21–24 are good for this purpose) and to suggest Standard English replacements for the slang words used by pirates. Higher attaining students can be asked to write a short conversation between two pirates on board the Hispaniola about finding and sharing out treasure. They should try to use both the vocabulary and the grammar of Stevenson’s ‘pirate speak’. Explore Help students to identify two different aspects of slang or occupational jargon: vocabulary (word choice) and grammar (the arrangement and agreement of words in a sentence). As examples you might look at the use of the word ‘wicked’ in different contexts and at sentences such as ‘That was well good’ (where ‘well’ is used as an adverb or intensifier instead of an adjective). You might also want to look more closely at the examples students found in the ‘Engage’ activity. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 16 Treasure Island: Lesson 8 Lesson 8 Focus: Tracking an idea across the text; exploring notions of honour; writing a short essay entitled ‘Honour and Duty in Treasure Island’ Objective: To look at how an idea is presented across a whole novel Engage It is not very often these days that we hear the expression ‘honour among thieves’. What does it mean? Ask students to make up two or three modern scenarios where this concept might be shown. If a prompt is needed, look at the notion of ‘not grassing’ in the criminal world. Take feedback to establish the meaning of ‘honour’. Ask students to note down examples from the novel where characters ‘do their duty’ (sometimes ‘dooty’ in ‘pirate speak’). Remind them, if necessary, that the notion of duty can encompass simply following orders, whether you are a pirate or a captain. Using their evidence, ask pairs or groups to give an example to the class of where a pirate or pirates act according to their sense of duty or their sense of honour. Through discussion, establish whether this is a surprise to the reader and/or is simply a convenient way to advance the plot. Follow-up Explore Use Resource 8a to range across the novel finding examples of when characters do their duty or act honourably. It will only be necessary to refer to events or conversations, not to quote them in this instance. Ask students to work in pairs or small groups for this activity. Lower attaining students could be directed to Chapters 28–30, where both the pirates and Jim stick to an honourable code of conduct. Ask students to write three or four paragraphs under the title ‘Honour and Duty in Treasure Island’. Challenge more able students to find examples of both honour and duty in the honest men and the pirates. Resource 8b is a writing frame to support students through the writing process. Through discussion, establish how the concepts of duty and honour are slightly different. (One is normally a contractual obligation; the other is usually a moral obligation.) ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 17 Treasure Island: Lesson 9 Lesson 9 Focus: Exploring narrative viewpoint; writing a recount of events from a different perspective. This lesson is best taught once the whole novel has been read. Objective: To understand why there are changes of narrator in the novel; to write a version of events from a different narrative viewpoint Engage Remind students, if necessary, of the meaning of the term ‘narrator’. We established in Lesson 2 that this story is mainly told in the first person by Jim Hawkins. Ask students to look at the opening paragraph and to rewrite it in the third person (‘he’ – as if the author was the narrator). Discuss what changes have been made in the text. You may wish to focus on the pronouns. Also ask the class to consider what the effect of this rewrite is. It should be possible to establish that there is a loss of immediacy with the third-person version. Since the author is free to vary the narrator for the purpose of telling the story more effectively, who else might pick up the narration? Resource 9 is an extract from the text (pages 172–174). Here, Silver is clearly referring to events that the group in the stockade know nothing of. Students can annotate the source text to indicate how we know this, and what must have happened in the pirate camp. Ask students to write the events of the attack on the pirate camp from Silver’s point of view. They should include the heavy drinking, the surprise attack and Silver’s excuse that he was asleep, not drunk. Follow-up If the whole novel were narrated by Silver, where and how would it begin? Take suggestions from the class. For homework, ask students to write the opening two or three paragraphs of a version of the novel with Silver as narrator. Higher attaining students can be challenged to use Silver’s style of speech for the narration. Explore Direct attention to the title of Chapter 16 (page 139): ‘Narrative Continued by the Doctor: How the Ship was Abandoned’. Point out that although the writing is still in the first person (‘I’), the narrator has changed. Elicit why Stevenson does this. (Jim is on the island, so cannot know what is happening aboard ship.) Ask at what point the narrator shifts again (Chapter 19), and again ensure that students understand why this is. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 18 Treasure Island: Lesson 10 Lesson 10 Focus: Considering the language, plot and structure of the novel as a whole; summarizing the best qualities of the book Objective: To understand how to promote a book through words and design Engage Ask students to think of a recent book, TV programme or film that has impressed them. They should come up with a single sentence that sums up why someone else should read/watch it. (It may be helpful to allow a one-paragraph summary in the first instance, then to pare it down to absolute essentials.) Take feedback so that selected students can read out their ‘pitch’. Also ask them to explain how they decided what to include and what to leave out. Explain that a book jacket is very carefully designed. Often there will be an intriguing or descriptive front cover and also a blurb on the back to give a little information about the plot and to entice readers to buy the book. The blurb is written by a specialist, not usually by the author. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack Resource 10 contains different cover designs for Treasure Island. Allocate one design to each group of three or four students and ask them to discuss and feed back on how it also helps to sell the book. Students can also explain which is their favourite (i.e. most effective) design and why. Follow-up Explore If available, distribute a selection of novels (from the class or school library) and ask students, working in small groups, to consider how blurb writers attempt to ‘sell’ a novel. Try to ensure that students cover the ideas of a brief plot summary (although never spoiling any twist or ending); usually some indication of the setting; making the novel sound exciting, intriguing, action-packed or frightening as appropriate; and often finishing with a question so that the reader must read the book in order to answer it. Students can be given a choice of either writing a new blurb for Treasure Island or coming up with a new cover design. The writing or design should be annotated to show why particular aspects or elements were selected and how they help to promote the book. For further work on this topic, ask students to imagine there is to be a new three-part adaptation of Treasure Island for TV. What would they include in the trailer, and why? www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 19 Treasure Island: Lesson 11 Lesson 11 Focus: Changing the form of the text Objective: To write a radio play script for a section of the text There is also an audio version of Treasure Island for younger children with rudimentary video: http://www.bbc.co.uk/learning/schoolradio/subjects/ english/treasure_island A 1951 American radio version of the story is here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=12iQFF48suo Engage Working in pairs, ask students to write a brief script of a conversation they have recently had together, or (if they do not usually work together) a conversation they have made up. Pairs can perform their script to the class. Higher attaining students can be encouraged to work out why the conversation does not sound natural. What features of everyday informal speech do scripts generally not use? (Fillers, repetition, speech overlap.) Explore If possible, play a short selection of extracts from radio plays. (An excellent source is BBC iPlayer radio: Introduce students to the layout and specialist language of the radio script. Use Resource 11 as an example of how to script a scene. Ask students to choose a short section of the text, preferably one with dialogue as well as action, to turn into a radio script. Follow-up Support students in writing a short radio script. They will usually need reminding that the action cannot be seen by the listener, so they must find a way to describe it. As an extra challenge, invite students to perform their scripts, with other members of the class as the cast. Those with computer skills can record their efforts, complete with soundtrack and effects. http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio/programmes/genres/ drama/player) ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 20 Treasure Island: Lesson 12 Lesson 12 Focus: Skimming and scanning to locate relevant information; an oral presentation considering a favourite part of the novel Objective: To practise the skills of skimming and scanning; to give a descriptive and explanatory talk Engage Tell the students that they are only allowed to choose one of the 34 chapters as their favourite part of the novel. Ask them to jot down a few notes as to what makes a highlight of the story (action? suspense? character description? intriguing dialogue?), then to note the chapter number that best meets their criteria. Encourage students to simply read the chapter titles as a reminder of what happens. Point out to students that they have just practised the skill of scanning (moving quickly through a text searching out key headings or images). ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack Students should now work on an oral presentation entitled ‘A highlight of our reading of Treasure Island’. Where several students have chosen the same chapter, they can be grouped together at the teacher’s discretion to work on a group presentation. Follow-up A class vote might identify a small list of candidate chapters and an overall favourite. Explore Now they can practise skimming (moving fairly quickly through a selected portion of a text in order to ‘get the gist’). They should skim read the chapter they chose as their personal highlight and make a list of the key events or qualities in the writing that made it a favourite. Allow time for students to prepare their presentation. This can use PowerPoint, or other visual aids, as well as readings from the text and careful explanations of why the particular chapter was chosen. Students should present their work, individually or in pairs or groups, to an audience. Usually this will be the rest of the class, but other audiences such as parents or peers from other classes are good motivators for an excellent finished product. Distribute the Self-assessment sheet. Ask students to reflect on the skills that they have practised, and to assess their levels of confidence in using these skills. Ensure areas of uncertainty are highlighted and targets for improvement are incorporated into future planning. www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 21 Treasure Island: Lesson 1 Resource 1 KWL chart 1 Think about what you have read in Chapter 1. In the first column, write what you already know about the characters and the setting. In the second column, write what else you want to know and how they might figure in the story. After you have read further, write what you have learned in the third column. What I Know ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack What I Want to Know www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources What I Have Learned © Oxford University Press 2016 22 Treasure Island: Lesson 2 Resource 2a The narrator Use this sheet to note down evidence that builds up a picture of the narrator. For each aspect that you cover, copy down a phrase or a sentence from the text that supports your point and note the page number. The narrator Evidence ‘Facts’ about him (for example, his name, where he lives) Things he says that give clues about his character Things he does that give clues about his character Aspects of his personality that you can deduce from what others say about him or to him ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 23 Treasure Island: Lesson 2 Resource 2b Summarizing and using quotations Using the evidence you gathered on Resource 2a, write a short summary of the character of the narrator. Remember to use quotations to support the points you make. Tips for quotations Quotations can be set out separately, like this: Or you can use embedded quotations, where you incorporate words from the text into your own sentence, like this: Use the space below to write your summary. Continue over the page. The character of the narrator ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 24 Treasure Island: Lesson 5 Resource 5 Captain Smollett’s diary Make notes in the grid below for three diary entries written by Captain Smollett. Each entry should be written at a different point in the story. Think carefully about how Captain Smollett would have seen the people and events, and how he might record them in his personal diary or captain’s log. Write up the three diary entries in full, separately. In Bristol (Chapter 7) The Voyage of the Hispaniola to the Island (Chapter 10) The Council of War (Chapter 12) ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 25 Treasure Island: Lesson 6 Resource 6 Investigating chapter endings Take a close look at the chapter endings, focusing on how the writer makes us want to read on. Record your findings in the grid below. The first one has been completed as an example. Chapter Explanation The writer arranges events in the story (putting Jim in the apple barrel) so that Jim knows something we don’t – and this information might save the lives 10 (page 90) of the honest men on the ship. We need to read on to find out what the ‘dozen words’ were that Jim overheard. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 26 Treasure Island: Lesson 7 Resource 7 The language of pirates Annotate each of the pirate expressions on this sheet to show: examples of vocabulary that is not Standard English places where the word order or grammar does not follow the ‘rules’ of Standard English. Then, rewrite the sentences in Standard English. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 27 Treasure Island: Lesson 8 Resource 8 Honour and Duty in Treasure Island (1) Find examples from different parts of the novel to fill in all four panels in the table below. You need only note down what happens in a particular event or conversation and do not need to quote it (although a page or chapter number will help you to find it again). Honour Duty Honest men Pirates ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 28 Treasure Island: Lesson 8 Resource 8b Honour and Duty in Treasure Island (2) Use the ideas you gathered in Resource 8a to write a short essay exploring the ideas of honour and duty in the novel. You may wish to use these sentence starters for some of your paragraphs. Honour and duty are similar ideas but they are not the same. Duty is … Honour is … The pirates do their duty when … Surprisingly, they behave honourably when they … As we might expect, the narrator and the honest men do their duty and behave with honour. This is shown when … ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 29 Treasure Island: Lesson 9 Resource 9 Extract from Chapter 20 In this extract, Silver is describing events that the men in the stockade know nothing about. Make notes around the text to show: how we know this how the writer ensures that we see how Captain Smollett does not give away the fact that he has no knowledge of the events Silver describes. ‘If you have anything to say, my man, better say it,’ said the captain. ‘Right you were, Cap’n Smollett,’ replied Silver. ‘Dooty is dooty, to be sure. Well, now, you look here, that was a good lay of yours last night. I don’t deny it was a good lay. Some of you pretty handy with a handspikeend. And I’ll not deny neither but what some of my people was shook – maybe all was shook; maybe I was shook myself; maybe that’s why I’m here for terms. But you mark me, cap’n, it won’t do twice, by thunder! We’ll have to do sentry-go and ease off a point or so on the rum. Maybe you think we were all a sheet in the wind’s eye. But I’ll tell you I was sober; I was on’y dog tired; and if I’d awoke a second sooner, I’d a’ caught you at the act, I would. He wasn’t dead when I got round to him, not he.’ ‘Well?’ says Captain Smollett as cool as can be. All that Silver said was a riddle to him, but you would never have guessed it from his tone. As for me, I began to have an inkling. Ben Gunn’s last words came back to my mind. I began to suppose that he had paid the buccaneers a visit while they all lay drunk together round their fire, and I reckoned up with glee that we had only fourteen enemies to deal with. ‘Well, here it is,’ said Silver. ‘We want that treasure, and we’ll have it – that’s our point! You would just as soon save your lives, I reckon; and that’s yours. You have a chart, haven’t you?’ ‘That’s as may be,’ replied the captain. ‘Oh, well, you have, I know that,’ returned Long John. ‘You needn’t be so husky with a man; there ain’t a particle of service in that, and you may lay to it. What I mean is, we want your chart. Now, I never meant you no harm, myself.’ ‘That won’t do with me, my man,’ interrupted the captain. ‘We know exactly what you meant to do, and we don’t care, for now, you see, you can’t do it.’ And the captain looked at him calmly, and proceeded to fill a pipe. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 30 Treasure Island: Lesson 10 Resource 10 Covers for Treasure Island ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 31 Treasure Island: Lesson 11 Resource 11 Radio script The production team need to know whether the scene takes place inside (INT) or outside (EXT) so that they can produce the right type of sound. Here is a short extract from a radio script of part of Treasure Island. The annotations show how to indicate what is required to the actors and production team. FADE UP is to gradually increase the sound. FADE DOWN is the opposite. SFX means ‘Sound effect’. This is a specific sound that goes with the action, rather than a soundtrack. The speaker is given in capitals with a colon after the name. Speech marks are not used. EXT. ON BOARD THE HISPANIOLA FADE UP GRAMS: Theme from Spartacus. GRAMS refers to a soundtrack that introduces or ends a play or scene. Often it is a piece of music. SFX: Waves striking the hull of a wooden ship. This should play under the whole scene. FADE DOWN GRAMS SILVER: Dick! You just jump up and get me an apple, to wet my pipe like. NARRATOR: Jim was filled with a sudden terror. He was certain that he would be discovered hiding in the apple barrel! He knew that the game was up. The pirates would kill him. HANDS: (Angrily) Oh, stow that! Let’s have a go of the rum. SILVER: Very well, boys. Come with me. The writer can indicate to the actor how a line should be said. This instruction is placed in brackets before the actual words spoken. SFX: Silver’s wooden leg across the deck, fading as it goes. LOOK-OUT: Land ho! NARRATOR: The crew rushed on deck to catch a sight of land. In the excitement Jim slipped out of the barrel and dived behind the foresail. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 32 Treasure Island: Lesson 12 Self-assessment Skill You practised this when: I can do this very well I can do this quite well I need to practise this Reading: close reading and asking questions of the text Reading: deduction and inference Reading: prediction Reading: looking at the way a text is put together to keep the reader interested Reading: following an idea running through a whole story Reading: looking carefully at who tells us the story Reading: skimming and scanning Writing: summarizing Writing: copying a given style Writing: rewriting to increase drama and excitement Writing: turning a section of the novel into a script Spoken English: speaking in role Spoken English: giving a presentation to an audience Grammar and vocabulary: looking at the features of a particular way of talking ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 33 Treasure Island Further Reading Robert Louis Stevenson did not write any further pirate stories. He enjoyed great success with Kidnapped, another ‘rollicking yarn’, although not this time about pirates. He is perhaps best known for Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde, but this is a challenging read for younger students. It is often used as a set text for GCSE English Literature. Students who have enjoyed Treasure Island may also be interested in these novels and plays featuring pirates: The Cassaforte Chronicles, Volume 2: The Buccaneer’s Apprentice by V Briceland. On a sea voyage away from the magical city of Cassaforte, 17-year-old Nic Dattore is taken by surprise when his ship is overrun by marauding pirates and everyone else on board is kidnapped or killed. Published in 2010, this is a real ‘ripping yarn’. On Stranger Tides by Tim Powers (published in 2006) is a swashbuckling story featuring a puppeteer, John Chandagnac, who is captured by pirates and offered the choice of joining the crew or death. He assumes the name John Shandy and begins a new life as a buccaneer. Silver: Return to Treasure Island by Andrew Motion. Jim Hawkins’s son and Long John Silver’s daughter set off on an adventure to Treasure Island, but the island is no longer uninhabited. In this novel, Motion replicates many of the features of the language in the original text. Swallows and Amazons by Arthur Ransome. This is a charmingly old-fashioned novel set in the Lake District in 1929. The children of two families, the Walkers and the Blacketts, join forces to outwit the Blacketts’ unfriendly uncle, James Turner, whom they call Captain Flint (one of several references to Treasure Island in the novel). The children sail two dinghies, the Swallow and the Amazon, and after a series of competitions and adventures, including night crossings of the lake and encounters with burglars, conduct a mock battle with Turner. The children win the battle and force Turner to ‘walk the plank’ on his houseboat before all ends happily. Classic pirate films include the Pirates of the Caribbean trilogy, Hook (derived from Peter Pan) and, for light relief, Muppet Treasure Island. Pirates! by Celia Rees (for more mature readers). Two young women are thrown together by chance in the West Indies and run away to escape the oppression in their lives. As pirates, they roam the seas, fight pitched battles against their foes and become embroiled in many adventures. ROLLERCOASTERS: Resource Pack www.oxfordsecondary.co.uk/rollercoasters-resources © Oxford University Press 2016 34