Keans_Benjamin_9601589_EDU30011_Ass2 _5eLearningFolios by Benjamin Keans Submission date: 30-Sep-2016 04:23PM (UT C+1000) Submission ID: 713344557 File name: 01589_Keans_Benjamin_9601589_EDU30011_Ass2_5eLearningFolios.docx (322.38K) Word count: 4162 Character count: 27179 science concept s 1 2 3 Supp. Lit 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 science concept s 14 15 16 17 18 19 Keans_Benjamin_9601589_EDU30011_Ass2_5eLearningFolios ORIGINALITY REPORT 34 % SIMILARIT Y INDEX 20% 0% 32% INT ERNET SOURCES PUBLICAT IONS ST UDENT PAPERS PRIMARY SOURCES 1 2 3 4 5 6 Submitted to Swinburne University of Technology St udent Paper Submitted to Grand Canyon University St udent Paper Submitted to The University of Notre Dame St udent Paper Submitted to Curtin University of Technology St udent Paper Submitted to Laureate Higher Education Group St udent Paper Submitted to 97324 St udent Paper 29% 1% 1% 1% <1% <1% 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 Submitted to Western Governors University St udent Paper eclectic-homeschool.com Int ernet Source www.reptileencounters.com.au Int ernet Source www.ais-indonesia.com Int ernet Source www.australiancurriculum.edu.au Int ernet Source epress.lib.uts.edu.au Int ernet Source www.earthed.vic.edu.au Int ernet Source acara.edu.au Int ernet Source www.scienceweek.net.au Int ernet Source <1% <1% <1% <1% <1% <1% <1% <1% 15 16 Int ernet Source <1% boardofstudies.nsw.edu.au <1% Int ernet Source Exclude quotes Of f Exclude bibliography Of f Exclude matches Of f Keans_Benjamin_9601589_EDU30011_Ass2_5eLearningFolios GRADEMARK REPORT FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS 82 Instructor Hi Ben, Congratulations and well done, f or completing your f inal assessment f or this unit. I have identif ied some of the most positive aspects of your work, as well as a f ew areas f or you to work on in f uture. /100 Criterion 1 T he rationales clearly identif y the link between the science concepts and the requirements of the curriculum. 25/30 Criterion 2 You have demonstrated a clear understanding of the 5E's, with most of your activities. One or two activities could could be extended f urther. 24/30 Criterion 3 You have provided a broad justif ication f or your activity choices and made good use of the curriculum documents. You have also ref erenced the academic literature. 25/30 Criterion 4 Your writing and ref erencing is ef f ective and mostly f ree f rom errors. 8/10 Regards Simon T otal 82% High Distinction PAGE 1 PAGE 2 QM science concepts Good, you have identif ied the link between the science concepts and curriculum requirements. PAGE 3 Comment 1 T his is a nice simple introduction to the main concepts. Comment 2 Good use of the curriculum documents. PAGE 4 Comment 3 I like that you are providing students with a def initive explanation of the concept here. QM Supp. Lit Good use of the supporting literature. PAGE 5 PAGE 6 Comment 4 Well done you have clearly identif ied the relevant 'Key Ideas'. PAGE 7 Comment 5 I like that these activities provide students with usef ul experiences of mixtures, in f amiliar contexts. Comment 6 T his is a clear justif ication. PAGE 8 Comment 7 T his is a usef ul evaluation tool, well done. PAGE 9 PAGE 10 Comment 8 T his is the primary 'Ke Idea'. PAGE 11 Comment 9 It's important that this discussion clearly makes the link with a changing earth. Comment 10 Be clear about the purpose of this activity, how does it extend learning in relation to the scientif ic concept we are examining? Comment 11 T his activity is the important one here. PAGE 12 Comment 12 Good, this provides a def initive explanation of erosion. Comment 13 T his is a f un activity, and allows students to demonstrate their learning. PAGE 13 PAGE 14 QM science concepts Good, you have identif ied the link between the science concepts and curriculum requirements. PAGE 15 Comment 14 Good, this uses a f amiliar object to introduce the concept. PAGE 16 Comment 15 Excellent, this is an engaging activity and extends the students knowledge . Comment 16 I like that you provide a clear explanation. T his should def ine a closed/open circuit clearly. PAGE 17 Comment 17 I like you use of supporting literature here. Comment 18 You could get students to make their own switches here. Comment 19 Good use of the descriptors. PAGE 18 PAGE 19 PAGE 20 PAGE 21 PAGE 22 RUBRIC: EDU30 0 11_ASS_2 CRIT ERION 1 Knowledge of science concepts and curriculum requirements (30%) NO PASS Did not meet criterion. PASS 50- 59% T he rationale broadly identif ies the scientif ic concepts and year level f ocus to be addressed within the learning plan. T here is a limited understanding of how the key ideas/overarching ideas of the Australian Curriculum: Science are addressed within the plan. CREDIT 60- 69% T he rationale clearly explains the scientif ic concepts, year level f ocus, and the key ideas/overarching ideas of Australian Curriculum: Science are addressed within the learning plan. DISTINCTION 70- 79% T he rationale demonstrates a comprehensive understanding of the scientif ic concepts, year level f ocus, and the key ideas/overarching ideas of Australian Curriculum: Science and how these are addressed within the learning plan. HIGH DISTINCTION 80- 100% T he rationale demonstrates sophisticated and insightf ul connections between the understanding of the scientif ic concepts, year level f ocus and the key ideas/overarching ideas of Australian Curriculum: Science and how these are addressed within the learning plan. CRIT ERION 2 Application of 5E Pedagogy within planning (30%) NO PASS Did not meet criterion. PASS 50- 59% Chosen activities, experiences and resources demonstrate a limited understanding of phases of the 5E learning plan. CREDIT 60- 69% Chosen activities, experiences and resources are mostly consistent with each phase of the 5E learning plan. DISTINCTION 70- 79% Chosen activities, experiences and resources have been selected caref ully and demonstrate a clear understanding of each phase of the 5E learning plan. HIGH DISTINCTION 80- 100% Chosen activities, experiences and resources demonstrate a thoughtf ul and discerning understanding of each phase of the 5E learning plan. CRIT ERION 3 Evaluation and justif ication of lesson elements in relation to curriculum, context and pedagogy (30%) NO PASS Did not meet criterion. PASS 50- 59% Identif ies how some of the activities, experiences and resources chosen would support the teaching of the particular Australian Curriculum content description(s), and how they relate to the particular phase of the 5E learning plan. CREDIT 60- 69% Broadly explains and justif ies how the activities, experiences and resources chosen would support the teaching of the particular Australian Curriculum content description(s), and how they relate to the particular phase of the 5E learning plan. DISTINCTION 70- 79% Clearly and succinctly explains and justif ies how the activities, experiences and resources chosen would support the teaching of the particular Australian Curriculum content description(s), and how they relate to the particular phase of the 5E learning plan. HIGH DISTINCTION 80- 100% Provides a comprehensive and succinct justif ication as to how the activities, experiences and resources chosen would support the teaching of the particular Australian Curriculum content description(s), and how they relate to the particular phase of the 5E learning plan. CRIT ERION 4 Academic expression (10%) NO PASS Did not meet criterion. PASS 50- 59% T here are some spelling errors or problems with grammar. An author/date system of ref erencing has been attempted. However, closer adherence to APA style is required. CREDIT 60- 69% T he writing is mostly f ree of spelling errors or problems with grammar. External sources have been ref erenced using APA style. However, closer attention to APA style is required. DISTINCTION 70- 79% T he work is f ree f rom any spelling errors or problems with grammar. External sources are generally ref erenced correctly but there are minor errors in APA style. HIGH DISTINCTION 80- 100% T he work is f ree f rom any spelling errors or problems with grammar. All external sources are ref erenced correctly in APA style.