Suspense Story Checklist Short, simple sentences to build the suspense? (E.g. He turned around. She was gone.) Empty words? (E.g. someone/something/somewhere) Character(s) in a lonely, dark place? (E.g. a cemetery at midnight) Literary devices? (E.g. similes, metaphors, rhetorical questions) Powerful verbs/adjectives? (E.g. sprinted, horrifying) How can this piece of work be improved? Self