Poem: Ancestral Photograph Poet: Seamus Heaney Title & Biography(s) Plot Title analysis pre-reading What does the title mean or evoke without your knowledge of the rest of the poem’s content? Is it positive or negative? Is it straightforward and clear cut or cryptic and confusing? Is there only one way to interpret the title or more than one (homophones, etc.)? Title post-reading After analyzing the poem thoroughly, re-analyze the title and add new insights/details you might have. Poem Biography At what juncture of the poet’s life was this poem written? Where & when was the volume published? Is there a specific history to the poem (For instance, dedication, influenced by or in memoriam of)? How was the poem received? Any other relevant biographical information that allows you to get a new perspective of the poem? What is happening, literally, in the poem? What is the literal story being told? If you had to describe the poem as specifically as possible, in general terms, in 1 – 3 sentences, how would you do it? e.g. Carol Ann Duffy’s poem “Little Red Cap” is an allusion to the fairy tale “Little Red Riding Hood,” and it recreates the tale in modern terms from the perspective of a young woman who is romantically involved with a “wolf.” Title PrR: ‘Docker’ suggests that the poem is about a person who works at a shipyard (dock). Keeping in mind the poems that come before Docker, I believe that it will describe a time or a scenario in Heaney’s life through the metaphor of the ‘Docker’. The poem is almost a sketch of the dock worker sitting in a corner of a pub. Title PoR: ‘Docker’ was published before ‘The Troubles’ began in Northern Ireland. (‘The Troubles’ was a time of unrest and violence in Northern Ireland between 1969 and 1988). It talks about the conflict between the Catholics and the Protestants in Northern Ireland at that time. Being a Catholic, Heaney belonged to the minority and has written about the conflict from his perspective. He is aware of the fact that the Belfast shipyards favored Protestants in their recruitment policies and so, the subject of the poem is a dockworker. This poem talks about the prejudice that supported the Protestant dock worker in twentieth century Belfast. Poem bios: Seamus Heaney was born in 1939 in County Londonderry, Northern Ireland. Heaney was brought up a Catholic, but he attended a small rural primary school where both Catholics and Protestants were educated together. This poem was published in his first poetry collection - Death of a Naturalist - in 1969. It reflected the growing conflict between Catholics and Protestants in 1960s Northern Ireland. Style and Language *A listing of all the stylistic choices you see – do not try to make meaning of it yet. Just notice it and write it down – don’t interpret. **Color marking may be quite useful here Imagery: What kind of imagery is used and repeated (motif)? If there are metaphors and similes, list what is being compared in each one. Tone: What is the tone? Cite three or more specific words or lines to support your answer. Is the tone consistent, or does it shift? If it shifts, how and when? Diction: What kind of vocabulary is used? Is there repetition of it? If so note it. Sound Devices: What consonance, assonance, rhyme, onomatopoeia, enjambment, etc. is used? Note patterns. Structure and Organization: Is there a discernible structure? Rhyme scheme? Grouping of stanzas? Enjambment may also play a part here, too. If so, note it. *Now you can interpret all you have noted from above. What patterns are important? Focus on those ones only. First, group the patterns. Is there a lot of nature imagery or color symbolism, etc.? What are they all doing there in the poem? What conclusions might you draw from their use? Can you run a needle and thread through the style and language choices and connect items that may not seem connected at first? How might imagery connect to tone? Diction to sound devices? See how many “threads” you have and how many style and language items you can pierce with the same “thread.” Imagery: Heaney has used ship-yard imagery throughout the poem. Heaney has used a lot ship-yard imagery in the poem. Using this, he associates the dock worker’s job to his features and personality. The visual imagery aids the poet to describe the dock worker, while auditory and tactile imagery help him to give emphasis on certain characteristics of the dock worker. I the first stanza, Heaney is describing the appearance of this person. His description uses a lot of imagery, but in the language of ship-building. In the second stanza, Heaney is highlighting the prejudice this man holds against the Catholics, “Line 5”. Heaney compares the white froth of the person’s beer to the collar of a priest as ‘The only Roman collar he tolerates’. In the third stanza, Heaney describes the person’s inflexible religious views such as his firm belief in God as a controlling figure. The factory horn signifies the end of his work shift to start his next shift of leisure as ordered by God. In the fourth stanza, Heaney comes back to the description of the docker sitting in the corner. Heaney has also signaled that even the docker’s family is intimidated by him. Date of Publication: 1966 Effect of Style and Language Choices First Stanza: The cap juts like a gantry’s crossbeam (V); Cowling plated forehead (V); Sledge head jaw (V); Speech is clamped (A/T); Second stanza: Violent imagery Fist would drop a hammer (K/V); Sleek pint of porter (V/G) Third Stanza: Bang home like Rivets (A/V/K); Factory horn will blare (A) Fourth Stanza: Blunt as a Celtic Cross (V); Slammed Door and smoker’s cough in the hall (A) Tone: The poet has used a straightforward and descriptive tone in the first and the last stanzas. In the second and the third stanzas, the poet has used more of a complaining tone. Diction: Throughout the poem, the vocabulary used is of a ship-yard language. Words such as gantry/crossbeam/cowling plated/sledgehead/rivets all relate to a shipyard. Vocabulary of intolerance and violence In the first stanza, the imagery is used to describe the physical features (appearance) of the dock worker. Identity of the person is highlighted in this stanza. ‘The cap… crossbeam’, ‘cowling… forehead’, ‘sledge head jaw’ create in our mind an image of a face with sharp features and a rugged look. Line 1 tells us that the dock worker is not a very social person. He is non-communicative and stays alone. The way Heaney has described this, also signifies that the Protestants considered themselves very exclusive and did not communicate much with others, especially the Catholics. This has left the Protestants unaware of the problems of the Catholics. They do not want to listen to any other point-of-views than their own. Line 4 tells us that the person does not speak much. This is indicative of the fact that that he will speak only when HE has something to say. He will neither change his beliefs, nor will he tolerate anyone else challenging them. The straightforward and descriptive tone used in the first stanza tells us that Heaney is simply describing the worker. There is no element of any complaint up till now. Lines 1, 2 and 3 contain a lot of alliteration and plosive words. These sound devices help the poet create a rugged, explosive and chiseled personality of the worker. It helps emphasize the rigid character of the worker. Volume: Death Of A Naturalist Shift/s Overall Message/ Reflection Do you notice any major (or minor) shifts throughout the poem (subject matter, tone, structure, etc.)? Where are they? What is their effect? Cite line numbers. Given your analysis in the last two boxes, what does the poet seem to be suggesting overall with this poem? Cite a few words or lines to support that suggestion. Now go back to the title and reanalyze it. How does it fit into the bigger picture now, post-analysis? Reflection- What impact does the poem have on you post-analysis? How do you view the central issue(s) highlighted? How does your understanding of the poem allow you to re-assess a similar issue of global reality? Is there a shift of opinion pre and post analysis? In the poem, there is a shift between every stanza. There is a shift from the description of physical appearance of the docker in the first stanza to his hatred of Catholics in the second stanza. There is a shift to talking about his religious views in the third stanza. There is a shift from the third stanza to talking about his family life in the fourth stanza. In the fourth stanza, we are also brought back to the person sitting in a corner of a pub. The main issue being addressed in the Poem is of ‘Conflicting Identities’. The poem exposes the prejudice behind the uncompromising attitude of the Protestant workers in the 1960s (Twentieth Century). He is aware of the employment policies of The Belfast Shipyards that discriminated against the minority of Catholics. DEB, IB SC 5 2017, MODIFICATION OF TP_SESO Sound Devices: 1, 2, 3 – Alliteration and Plosive 4 – Restricted range of sound Collar/tolerates; imperative/rivets; life in shifts; tonight/quiet – Assonance Plated/speech/clamped; pint of porter; sits/strong; Celtic/cross/clearly – Alliteration Figures of Speech: 2, 4, 9, 13 – Simile 3, 5, 7, 10, 12 – Metaphor 4 - Synecdoche Structure and organization: Four Quatrains First Stanza: Talks about the docker’s physical appearance Second Stanza: Tells us about his hatred of Catholics Third Stanza: Tells us about his strict religious views Fourth Stanza: Talks about his family life. In the fourth stanza, we are brought back to the image of a man sitting in a corner of a pub. Cyclical. There is no uniform rhyme scheme in the poem. Although, almost all the sentences have around 10 syllables in them while the 4th sentence ‘Speech is clamped in the lip’s vice’ has only 7 syllables. Similes used in Lines 2 and 4 again, help create a definite image of the worker. Lines 1-3, each have 10 syllables in them, while Line 4 is the only line in the poem that has 7 syllables. This ‘restriction’ describes the quiet, repressed anger of the worker, Second Stanza Lines 5-8 describe the dock worker’s hatred towards the Catholics. Conflict is highlighted in this stanza. K/V imagery emphasizes the fact that the Protestants could get violent with the Catholics. It shows that the Protestants are intolerable towards the others (Catholics). Heaney also identifies an irony that the pint of porter’s froth on top, despite resembling a Roman priest’s collar is tolerated by the worker. Metaphors used in Lines 5 and 7 reinforce the bigotry of the dock worker. Collar/tolerates – assonance – used to create melancholy. The melancholy present here shows that the thinking of the dock worker is not unique to him, rather, it is the same as all protestants and the fact that violence could take place is considered normal. Pint of porter – alliteration – The poet has talked about an irony he identified, and the use of alliteration helps emphasize that irony. Lines 5-7 have a dominance of rolling sounds (easy to speak) and then in line 8, the alliteration attracts focus to the irony. Heaney has used a complaining tone in this stanza. He talks about the prejudice protestants hold against Catholics like him. ‘Oh yes… start again’ – This line deliberately portrays the violence as something puny. The readers are made to realize that violence between the Protestants and Catholics was considered normal and obvious. This stanza might also be considered as a warning from the poet. Third Stanza Lines 9-12 tell us about the worker’s religious beliefs. Heaney describes the person’s inflexible religious views such as his firm belief in God as a controlling figure. The factory horn signifies the end of his work shift to start his next shift of leisure as ordered by God. God is compared to a foreman. God is portrayed like a boss at the ship yard. DEB, IB SC 5 2017, MODIFICATION OF TP_SESO ‘Mosaic…. Rivets’ – This simile tells us about the uncompromised beliefs. It means that his beliefs are permanently set like rivets. Lines 10 and 12 use metaphors. God is compared to a boss at the ship yard who directs everything. The factory horn signals the end of work shift and the start of the leisure shift – It is pre-set – Staunch beliefs. Imperative/rivets; Life in shifts – Assonance. ‘Bang’ – Plosive word in the middle. The imagery of ‘bang home like rivets’ and ‘factory horn will blare’ are used to relate the beliefs of the docker to the ship-yard. The auditory imagery present here indulges the reader into the portrayed scenario. The complaining tone of this stanza is used to show the flaws of the Protestants. Heaney is trying to bring out the hypocrisy. Fourth Stanza This stanza talks about the worker’s life and family. We are brought back to the image of a dock worker sitting in a corner of a pub. Cyclical Structure. This stanza shows that the workers uncompromisable spiritual views (‘strong and blunt as a Celtic Cross’) affect his family life as well. The stanza talks about the stereotypical masculinity that was common in Northern Ireland in the 1960s. ‘Wife children… slammed door… cough’ – This line shows that he intimidates his own family at home. This intimidation also applies to other religions. The worker is portrayed as a bully and an alcoholic. This alcoholism fuels his intimidating presence. ‘The silence and an armchair’ are shown as his unchallenged rights. ‘Slammed door… hall… wife and children….quiet’ – Being alerted by the sound of a slammed door and a cough in the hall, the wife and children have learnt to be quiet – they don’t have an option (whether they like it or not). DEB, IB SC 5 2017, MODIFICATION OF TP_SESO