HOLT McDOUGAL Assessment File PREVIEW • GRADE 7 TABLE OF CONTENTS Book 1: Diagnostic and Selection Tests . . . . . . . . 43 Teacher’s Guide to Managing Assessment . . . 44 Diagnostic Assessment . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 47 Sample Selection Tests Seventh Grade . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 61 Book 2: Unit and Benchmark Tests . . . . . . . . . . . 65 Unit 1 Test . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 67 Benchmark Test 1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 92 40 Assessment File Grade 7 ASSESSMENT FILE Ongoing formative and summative assessment • Assess mastery • Inform future instruction Assessment File Grade 7 41 The Assessment File includes— .AME $ATE Student Self-Assessment: Reading Directions: Use this form to describe your attitude and thougths toward reading at this time. You may circle more than one answer on any item. 1. These are my thoughts and attitude about reading: I like to read, both at home and at school. I like to read for fun, but not for school. I really don’t like to read and would rather do other things. I would read more if I were a better reader. e. I would like to read if I had more time. a. b. c. d. 2. These are my thoughts and attitude about reading at home: It’s a waste of time. It helps me escape and relax. I only read when I have to for an assignment. I read mostly for entertainment. e. I read mostly for information. f. I love to read and wish I had more time for it. a. b. c. d. 3. I consider myself to be 4. In order to read and understand material for school, a. b. a very good reader a good reader c. d. an average reader a poor reader a. I read best when I’m alone in a quiet place. I read best with things going on around me. I read best with another student or in a small group. I read best when the teacher tells us what to look for first. e. I understand more when I have a long period of time to read. f. I understand more when I read in short little spurts. g. I read the material twice. b. c. d. 5. These problems bother me when I am reading: a. There are too many words that I don’t know. I read too slowly. I read too fast and forget things. d. I get bored quickly and stop paying attention. e. My eyes get tired easily. f. Other things distract me. b. c. BOOK 1 Diagnostic and Selection Tests provide leveled tests for all selections and diagnostic tools to match the right assessment plan to students’ needs. SAMPLE INSIDE BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED Reading Comprehension 1 The author uses a point of view that helps the reader understand — A the mother and Phyllis’s thoughts and feelings B what Lisa thinks and feels els about Phyllis and her mother C what all of the characters rs think and feel D what Charlie thinks and feels 2 The reader can infer that Lisa sa lets Phyllis use Lisa — give her a permanent because F trusts Phyllis’s sense of fashion G enjoys changing her hairstyle rstyle H hopes to look more like Phyllis J wants to please her mother her 3 In paragraph 2, the author characterizes Lisa’s mother by providing — A a description of her appearance earance B direct comments about her o her C the narrator’s reaction to D Phyllis’s comments about ut her 4 At the beginning of paragraph aph 4, the author uses a flashback to help the reader understand why Lisa — F is so impressed by Phyllis lis G likes to talk about clothes es H enjoys visiting her mother her at work ith her friends J wants to go shopping with 5 In paragraph 4, Lisa reveals an internal conflict between her desire to — A accept her mother as she is and her wish that her mother were more like Phyllis B improve her relationship with Phyllis and her hopes of spending time with her mother C get along well with her friends and her BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED feelings of embarrassment about her mother Read the following selections. Then answer the questions that follow D teach her mother to sew well and her them. need to protect her mother’s feelings from How Hot Air Balloons Work 6 In paragraph 15, the author characterizes Tom Harris Lisa’s mother by having Lisa — Hot air her balloons are based a very basic scientific principle: warmer air present mother’s privateonthoughts rises in cooleronair. hot air is lighter than cool air, because it has less G comment herEssentially, mother’s speech mass per unit of volume. A cubic foot of air weights roughly 28 grams (about H reveal how others react to her mother an ounce). If you heat that air by 100 degrees F, it weighs about 7 grams less. J describe her mother’s behavior toward Therefore, others each cubic foot of air contained in a hot air balloon can lift about 7 grams. That’s not much, and this is why hot air balloons are so huge-to lift 1,000 pounds,7,you need can about 65,000 7 In paragraph Phyllis best be cubic feet of hot air! as the a character who is you — need a way to reheat the air. Hot air To keep balloon rising, 2 described balloons doinconsiderate this with a burner positioned under an open balloon envelope. As A fun but the air in the balloon cools, the pilot can reheat it by firing the burner. B dedicated but immature 1 F C friendly but shy D wise but self-important 8 In paragraph 12, Lisa escapes to her room because she feels — F tired G ill H overwhelmed J jealous 3 4 BOOK Modern hot air balloons heat the air by burning propane, the same substance commonly used in outdoor cooking grills. The propane is stored in compressed liquid form, in lightweight cylinders positioned in the balloon basket. The intake hose runs down to the bottom of the cylinder, so it can draw the liquid out. Because the propane is highly compressed in the cylinders, it flows quickly through the hoses to the heating coil. The heating coil is simply a length of steel tubing arranged in a coil around the burner. When the balloonist starts up the 2 Unit and Benchmark Tests track student progress as they master Common Core Standards. SAMPLE INSIDE 42 Assessment File Grade 7 Diagnostic and Selection Test Sample Pages Assessment File Grade 7 43 Teacher’s Guide to Managing Assessment Assessment has historically followed after instruction, informing teachers after-thefact about what has been accomplished in the classroom. Today, however, assessment is at the very heart of the learning process, a part of every stage of instruction. Begin at the End. Most teachers know that for instruction to be effective, planning must begin with the end in mind. In other words, it is critical to identify up front those skills and standards you want students to have mastered by the end of the lesson so that the rest of the lesson, as well as an assessment, can be structured to lead to student understanding and success. In Holt McDougal Literature, every unit is designed around a set of related Common Core Standards, which are listed on the Unit Goals page at the beginning of each unit. These concepts are then taught and reinforced through material in the Student Edition and Teacher’s Edition. Students are evaluated on key skills and standards through ongoing assessment as well as at the end of the unit in a formal assessment. Know Your Purpose. Assessment can occur at different stages of a lesson and for different purposes. Remember these two very important functions of assessment. Assessment informs instruction. s 5SE DIAGNOSTIC ASSESSMENT TO SEE IF STUDENTS ARE PREPARED TO READ GRADE LEVEL MATERIALS s 5SE ONGOING OR FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT TO GAUGE HOW WELL STUDENTS HAVE GRASPED IDEAS and skills during a lesson. s 5SE SUMMATIVE ASSESSMENT TO SEE HOW WELL YOUR STUDENTS ARE PROGRESSING OVER time in mastering standards. Differentiate as Needed. With Holt McDougal Literature all students are tested on the same skills and standards, but teachers have the option of using different assessment components to find out how well students are doing. For example, both Selection Tests and Unit Tests are available in A and B/C formats and use the same passages to assess student understanding. The A assessment format is for students who struggle with reading and literature. The questions are written at a lower readability, yet are rigorous enough for teachers to tell whether students have understood the concepts. The B/C format is for students who are working at or above grade level. Give the C writing prompts to students you wish to challenge. The Assessment File contains two books, which are described below. Diagnostic and Selection Tests This book provides the following diagnostic and ongoing assessments. s Diagnostic Assessment. The diagnostic assessment shows what a student knows about a topic or concept before instruction has taken place. Holt McDougal Literature provides diagnostic assessment for use at the beginning of each year. These assessments give teachers information about how well their students perform with grade-level reading and writing materials. Each diagnostic assessment includes a student reading inventory and writing inventory for selfassessment, an Independent Reading Inventory, a cloze test, and a writing prompt with rubric. The student self-assessments will provide valuable insights into how students perceive their interests, strengths, and weaknesses. 44 44 Diagnostic and SelectionTests Grade 7 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Assessment measures student progress. Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 TEACHER’S GUIDE TO MANAGING ASSESSMENT, CONTINUED Use this diagnostic information to determine the kind of support students might need as they read materials in the book as well as a means for motivating them. s Selections Test A and B/C. Selection Tests are provided for each selection or group of selections in the Student Edition. Each Selection Test includes multiplechoice items and written-response questions to assess students’ reading and vocabulary skills as well as literary concepts. Tests A and B/C assess the same skills using the same test passages. The A test is written in a simplified style. To prepare students for the Selection Tests, give them the Reading Check, which is provided for most selections and is available in the Resource Manager. Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Unit and Benchmark Tests This book provides summative assessments that take place at the end of a period of instruction and cover important skills and standards that have been taught up to that point. s Unit Tests A and B/C. Unit Tests are provided at the end of each unit and assess students’ understanding and mastery of the most commonly assessed skills taught in the unit. Each Unit Test includes new reading passages and assesses students in reading and literary concepts, vocabulary strategies, writing, and grammar. Unit Tests A and B/C assess the same skills with the A test written in a simplified style. The B/C test includes Challenge writing prompts for the advanced student. You can help students prepare for the Unit Tests by having them take the Assessment Practice at the end of each unit in the Student Edition. This test will show them and you how well they understand key skills and standards taught in the unit before they take the Unit Test. The Teacher’s Edition contains answers to questions as well as suggestions for walking students through the questions and answer choices. s Benchmark Tests. Benchmark Tests occur four times a year and are designed to assess students’ understanding of the concepts and skills that were taught in the preceding units. The tests are cumulative in that skills taught early in the year are carried over into subsequent tests. Each test includes new reading passages followed by multiple-choice and short-answer, open-ended questions as well as an essay prompt. These tests will also show how students have grown over time in their understanding of key skills and standards. Technology Support Assessments in the Assessment File are available through ExamView on Teacher One Stop DVD-ROM and Think Central Online Assessment. Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 Diagnostic and SelectionTests Grade 7 45 45 TEACHER’S GUIDE TO MANAGING ASSESSMENT, CONTINUED To the Teacher Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt This diagnostic assessment will give you information about how well your students perform with grade-level materials in reading and writing at the beginning of the school year. Student self-assessments will provide valuable insights into how well students think they are doing. s Self-Assessment: Reading. Students describe their attitudes and thoughts toward reading. s Informal Reading Inventory. This assessment contains a passage from a book selection and 10 comprehension questions. You can administer this test to individual students or have students administer it to each other. s Cloze Test. This assessment is based on students “filling in” blanks created in a passage of text unfamiliar to students. s Self-Assessment: Writing. Students describe their attitudes and thoughts toward writing. s Writing Prompt with Rubric. Students respond to a writing prompt requiring narrative or expository writing. A rubric on the following page provides a quick way to evaluate student writing. s Student Record Sheet. You can record the results of the various inventories and use the information to help you determine how much support the student may need to be successful with classroom materials. 46 Diagnostic and SelectionTests Grade 7 46 Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 .AME $ATE Student Self-Assessment: Reading Directions: Use this form to describe your attitude and thoughts toward reading at this time. You may circle more than one answer on any item. 1. These are my thoughts and attitude about reading: a. I like to read, both at home and at school. b. I like to read for fun, but not for school. c. I really don’t like to read and would rather do other things. d. I would read more if I were a better reader. e. I would like to read if I had more time. 2. These are my thoughts and attitude about reading at home: a. It’s a waste of time. helps me escape and relax. c. I only read when I have to for an assignment. d. I read mostly for entertainment. e. I read mostly for information. f. I love to read and wish I had more time for it. b. It 3. I consider myself to be very good reader c. an average reader Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt a. a a good reader d. a poor reader b. 4. In order to read and understand material for school, a. I read best when I’m alone in a quiet place. b. I read best with things going on around me. c. I read best with another student or in a small group. d. I read best when the teacher tells us what to look for first. e. I understand more when I have a long period of time to read. f. I understand more when I read in short little spurts. g. I read the material twice. 5. These problems bother me when I am reading: a. There are too many words that I don’t know. b. I read too s lowly. c. I read too fast and forget things. d. I get bored quickly and stop paying attention. e. My eyes get tired easily. f. Other things distract me. Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 47 47 .AME $ATE STUDENT SELF - ASSESSMENT: READING, CONTINUED 6. How often do you read each of the following? Circle your answer. a. newspapers never never never never never b. magazines c. novels d. comic books e. books of information 7. sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes often often often often often usually usually usually usually usually How much time do you spend at home reading for enjoyment? a. never b. up to 30 minutes a week c. between 30 and 60 minutes a week d. more than an hour a week e. an hour a day or more Circle the topics or types of literature you like to read. a. young adult novels b. adventure/survival c. science fiction d. mysteries e. sports f. stories about animals g. humorous stories h. historical fiction 9. i. j. k. l. m. n. o. p. What is the best book you have ever read? 10. What is the best book you have read lately? 11. Look at the scale below and put an X where you think you belong. I am not good at reading. 1 48 fantasy myths and legends science poetry biographies history travel/other places news articles 2 3 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 48 I am OK at reading. 4 5 6 I am good at reading. 7 8 9 10 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 8. Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 Informal Reading Inventory Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt This informal inventory can give an initial idea of a student’s reading level. Teachers often use an Informal Reading Inventory (IRI) to place students in the appropriate textbook or to help them find books or articles for independent reading. To conduct an IRI, you need at least one 100-word passage from the material in question, and 10 comprehension questions about the material. Have the student read the same passage twice, the first time orally to assess oral reading skills. The student should read the passage a second time silently, after which he or she answers questions for assessement of reading comprehension. Use these suggestions to administer this IRI. 1. Tell the student he or she will read the passage out loud, and then again silently, and then you will ask some questions. 2. Give the students a copy of the passage and keep one for yourself. Have the student read the passage. As students read aloud, note on your copy the number of errors he or she makes. s Mispronunciations: Words that are mispronounced, with the exception of proper nouns. s Omissions: Words left out that are crucial to understanding a sentence or a concept. s Additions: Words inserted in a sentence that change the meaning of the text. s Substitutions: Words substituted for actual words in the text that change the meaning of a sentence. (An acceptable substitution might be the word hard for the word difficult.) 3. 4. 5. 6. Use these criteria for assessing reading levels after oral reading: s Fewer than 3 errors: The student is unlikely to have difficulty decoding text. s Between 4 and 9 errors: The student is likely to have some difficulty and may need special attention. s More than 10 errors: The student is likely to have great difficulty and may need placement in a less demanding reading program. Have the student read the passage again, silently. When the student finishes, ask the comprehension questions on the next page. Tell the student that he or she can look back at the passage before answering the questions. Note the number of correct responses. Use these criteria for assessing reading level after silent reading. s Eight or more: The student should be able to interpret the selections effectively. s Five to seven: The student is likely to have difficulty. s Fewer than five: The student needs individual help or alternate placement. Evaluate results from oral and silent reading to decide how good a match the material is for a student. Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 49 49 .AME $ATE Informal Reading Inventory from “Thank You, M’am” by Langston Hughes Read this passage aloud. She was a large woman with a large purse that had everything in it but hammer and nails. It had a long strap, and she carried it slung across her shoulder. It was about eleven o’clock at night, and she was walking alone, when a boy ran up behind her and tried to snatch her purse. The strap broke with the single tug the boy gave it from behind. But the boy’s weight and the weight of the purse combined caused him to lose his balance so, instead of taking off full blast as he had hoped, the boy fell on his back on the sidewalk, and his legs flew up. The large woman simply turned around and kicked him right square in his blue-jeaned sitter. Then she reached down, picked the boy up by his shirt front, and shook him until his teeth rattled. 50 50 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt number of mispronunciations: __________ number of omissions: __________ number of additions: __________ number of substitutions: __________ Total: __________ Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 .AME $ATE Comprehension Questions form “Thank You, M’am” Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt by Langston Hughes 1. How would you describe the woman’s purse? 2. How does the woman carry her purse? 3. What time of day does the boy try to snatch the woman’s purse? 4. Why might the boy have targeted this woman to steal from? 5. What is the boy’s strategy for stealing the purse? 6. What causes the boy to lose his balance? 7. Where does the boy fall? 8. How does the woman react to the boy’s actions? 9. Does the woman seem scared? Explain why or why not. 10. What causes the boy’s teeth to rattle? Number of correct answers: __________ Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 51 51 Administering a Cloze Test Another test that has proven successful in determining reading skill levels is the cloze test. Cloze is a psychological term which refers to the human tendency to “bring to closure” a familiar but incomplete pattern. The test is based on “filling in” blanks created in a passage of text unfamiliar to students. The cloze procedure is often used to place students in informational texts, but it can also be used in other reading situations where you want to match a student’s reading level with materials. A cloze test is created in the following way: s 3ELECT A PASSAGE OF n WORDS THAT CONTAINS A COMPLETE THOUGHT UNIT OR several paragraphs, preferably from the beginning of the article or book. s $ELETE EVERY TH WORD IN THE PASSAGE EXCLUDING THE OPENING SENTENCE s ,EAVE A BLANK FOR EACH WORD DELETED 9OU SHOULD HAVE APPROXIMATELY BLANKS s &OR EACH BLANK HAVE STUDENTS GENERATE THE EXACT WORD THAT HAS BEEN DELETED Use these suggestions to administer this cloze test. 1. Give the students a copy of the passage. 2. Tell them to read the passage and to fill in the blanks with the words that have been deleted from the passage. 3. Use the following to determine reading level. This particular passage has 48 blanks. 3OME RESEARCHERS HAVE MODIFIED THE CLOZE PROCEDURE AS DEVELOPED BY *OHN "ORMUTH &OR example, some have suggested replacing significant words or every 10th word, and accepting synonyms; however, the scoring system above applies only when the process described above is used. &OR THE COMPLETE PASSAGE SEE THE NEXT PAGE 52 52 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt s INDEPENDENT LEVEL CORRECT ANSWERS OR MORE OR OF s INSTRUCTIONAL LEVEL n CORRECT ANSWERS OR n OF s FRUSTRATION LEVEL CORRECT ANSWERS OR LESS OR FEWER THAN OF Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 Cloze Test: Answer from “Exploring the Titanic” Robert D. Balland Bride picked up the iceberg message and stepped out onto the boat deck. It was a sunny but cold Sunday morning, the fourth day of the Titanic’s maiden voyage. The ship was steaming at full speed across a calm sea. Harold Bride was quite pleased with himself at having landed a job on such a magnificent new ship. After all, he was only twenty-two years old and had just nine months’ experience at operating a “wireless set,” as a ship’s radio was then called. As he entered the bridge area, he could see one of the crewmen standing behind the ship’s wheel steering her course toward New York. Captain Smith was on duty on the bridge, so Bride handed the message to him. “It’s from the Caronia, sir. She’s reporting icebergs and pack ice ahead.” The captain thanked him, read the message, and then posted it on the bulletin board for other officers on watch to read. On his way back to the radio room, Bride thought the captain had seemed quite unconcerned by the message. But then again, he had been told that it was not unusual to have ice floating in the sea lanes during an April crossing. Besides, what danger could a few pieces of ice present to an unsinkable ship? Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Elsewhere on board, passengers relaxed on deck chairs, reading or taking naps. Some played cards, some wrote letters, while others chatted with friends. As it was Sunday, church services had been held in the morning, the first-class service led by Captain Smith. Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 53 53 .AME $ATE Cloze Test from Exploring the Titanic by Robert D. Ballard Bride picked up the iceberg message and stepped out onto the boat deck. It was a sunny [ 1 ] zcold Sunday morning, the ; = day of the Titanic’s [ 3 ] voyage. The ship was [ 4 ] at full speed across ; = calm sea. Harold Bride [ 6 ] quite pleased with himself ; = having landed a job [ 8 ] such a magnificent new [ 9 ]. After all, he was [ 10 ] twenty-two years old and [ 11 ] just nine months’ experience ; = operating a “wireless set,” -- [13 ] a ship’s radio was [ 14 ] called. As he entered ; = bridge area, he could [ 16 ] one of the crewmen ; = behind the ship’s wheel [ 18 ] her course toward New [ 19 ]. Captain Smith was on ; = in the bridge, so ; = handed the message to ; =. “It’s from the Caronia, ; =. She’s reporting icebergs and ; = ice ahead.” The captain ; = him, read the message,; =then posted it on ; = bulletin board for other ; = on watch to read. ; = his way back to [ 30 ] radio room, Bride thought [ 31 ] captain had seemed quite ; = by the message. But [ 33 ] again, he had been [ 34 ] that it was not ; = to have ice floating [ 36 ] the sea lanes during ; = April crossing. Besides, what [ 38 ] could a few pieces [ 39 ] ice present to an [ 40 ] ship? Elsewhere on board, [ 41 ] relaxed on deck chairs, ; = or taking naps. Some [ 43 ] cards, some wrote letters, [ 44 ] others chatted with friends. ; = it was Sunday, church [ 46 ] had been held in ; = morning, the first-class service [ 48 ] by Captain Smith. Number of blanks: 48 Number of correct insertions: __________ CORRECT ?????????? 54 54 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Read the passage below. On a separate sheet of paper, fill in the blanks with the words that have been deleted from the passage. Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 .AME $ATE Student Self-Assessment: Writing Directions: Use this form to describe your thoughts and attitudes toward writing at this time. You may circle more than one answer on any item. 1. These are my thoughts and attitude toward writing: a. b. c. d. e. f. 2. I like to write, both at home and at school. I like to write for fun, but not for school. I really don’t like to write and would rather do other things. I don’t think writing is a very useful tool for everyday living. I would write more if I were a better writer. I would like to write more if I had more time. I spend this amount of time at home writing for enjoyment: no time b. up to 30 minutes a week c. 30-60 minutes a week a. 3. more than a week e. an hour a day or more d. I consider myself to be a very good writer a good writer c. an average writer d. a poor writer a. Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt b. 4. This is how I would describe my improvement as a writer: I feel as though I am improving as a writer. b. I know what I need to work on as a writer. c. I am not improving as a writer. d. I don’t know what to work on to improve my writing. a. 5. These problems bother me when I am writing: a. b. c. d. e. f. 6. I have trouble thinking of topics to write about. I have trouble expressing my ideas. I have trouble thinking of just the right words. I have trouble organizing my ideas. I have trouble getting started. Other things distract me. When I am working on a writing project I would rather work alone than with a group. b. I would rather work with one other person. c. I would rather work with a group. d. I don’t care whether I work alone or with a group. a. Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 55 55 .AME $ATE STUDENT SELF - ASSESSMENT: WRITING, CONTINUED 7. I prefer to have my writing reviewed by a peer reader b. a small group of peer readers c. a peer reader and my teacher my teacher only e. no one a. I most like to write a. b. c. d. e. f. 9. in a diary or journal letters to friends stories or mysteries poems about my opinions directions that tell others how to do something g. h. i. j. k. In my free time I like to write cartoons b. song lyrics c. notes to friends d. a diary or a journal plays f. computer notes g. letters h. jokes and puzzles a. 10. about my life about other people about inventions and ideas about the news at school ____________________ e. The best piece of writing I have done is I like this about it. 11. Look at the scale below and put an X where you belong. I am not good at writing. 1 56 2 3 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 56 I am OK at writing. 4 5 6 I am good at writing. 7 8 9 10 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 8. d. Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 .AME $ATE Writing Prompt Writing Prompt Think of a person whom you admire. It can be someone close to you—a parent, friend, or teacher—or someone you don’t know whose life has inspired you. Write a well-organized character sketch of this person. Include details about the person’s appearance, actions, speech, and personality. Be sure to explain why you look up to him or her. Planning Your Essay #HOOSE A SPECIFIC PERSON YOU WOULD LIKE TO DISCUSS %XPLAIN WHY THE PERSON IS IMPORTANT TO YOU 0ROVIDE CLEAR DETAILS THAT BRING THE PERSON TO LIFE 7RITE A CLEAR INTRODUCTION A BODY THAT DEVELOPS YOUR IDEAS AND A STRONG conclusion that summarizes your impression of the person. s 5SE DIFFERENT SENTENCE BEGINNINGS AND LENGTHS s 5SE CORRECT SPELLING PUNCTUATION AND GRAMMAR Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt s s s s Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 57 57 Scoring Rubric 58 58 #/--/.ß#/2%ß42!)43 ß $ ß EVELOPMENTß 3KILLFULLYßCONVEYSßAßSTRONGßIMPRESSIONßOFßAßSPECIFICß SUBJECT ßDEVELOPEDßWITHßWELL CHOSENßDETAILSßEFFECTIVELYßUSESßDIALOGUEß ANDßDESCRIPTION ß ß/RGANIZATIONß #HOOSESßAßLOGICALßORGANIZATIONßUSESßTRANSITIONSßEFFECTIVELY ß ß,ANGUAGEß #REATESßAßVIVIDßPICTUREßWITHßPRECISEßWORDSßANDßPHRASESßANDß SENSORYßLANGUAGEßSHOWSßAßSTRONGßCOMMANDßOFßCONVENTIONS ß $ ß EVELOPMENTß %FFECTIVELYßCONVEYSßAßSTRONGßIMPRESSIONßDETAILSßAREßMAINLYß WELL CHOSENßUSESßDIALOGUEßANDßDESCRIPTION ß ß/RGANIZATIONß (ASßAßGENERALLYßORGANIZEDßAPPROACHßUSESßTRANSITIONS ß ß,ANGUAGEß )NCLUDESßSUFFICIENTßPRECISEßWORDSßANDßPHRASES ßTELLINGßDETAILS ß SENSORYßLANGUAGEßHASßAßFEWßERRORSßINßCONVENTIONS ß $ ß EVELOPMENTß #ONVEYSßANßIMPRESSIONßUSESßSOMEßWELL CHOSENßDETAILSßCOULDß USEßMOREßDIALOGUE ßDESCRIPTION ßORßREFLECTION ß ß/RGANIZATIONß /CCASIONALLYßSTRAYSßFROMßLOGICALßORDERßUSESßFEWßTRANSITIONS ß ß,ANGUAGEß )NCLUDESßSOMEßVIVIDßLANGUAGEßHASßAßFEWßDISTRACTINGßERRORSßINß CONVENTIONS ß $ ß EVELOPMENTß #ONVEYSßANßIMPRESSION ßBUTßNEEDSßMOREßDEVELOPMENTß INCLUDESßDIALOGUE ßDESCRIPTION ßANDßREFLECTIONßINTERMITTENTLY ß ß/RGANIZATIONß (ASßAßCONFUSINGßLOGICßANDßINCLUDESßEXTRANEOUSßDETAILSßUSESß TRANSITIONSßRARELY ß ß,ANGUAGEß )NCLUDESßSOMEßIMPRECISEßLANGUAGEßANDßDOESN´TßCONVEYßAßVIVIDß PICTUREßHASßSOMEßSIGNIFICANTßERRORSßINßCONVENTIONS ß $ ß EVELOPMENTß #ONVEYSßANßIMPRESSIONßBUTßLACKSßDEVELOPMENTßANDßREFLECTION ß ß/RGANIZATIONß ,OSESßFOCUSßANDßMAKESßSLOPPYßORßINCORRECTßTRANSITIONS ß ß,ANGUAGEß ,ACKSßPRECISIONßANDßSENSORYßLANGUAGEßHASßMANYßDISTRACTINGß ERRORSßINßCONVENTIONS ß $ ß EVELOPMENTß ,EAVESßNOßIMPRESSIONßANDßLACKSßDEVELOPMENT ß ß/RGANIZATIONß (ASßNOßAPPARENTßORGANIZATION ß ß,ANGUAGEß ,ACKSßVIVIDßLANGUAGEßHASßMAJORßPROBLEMSßWITHßCONVENTIONS Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 3CORE Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 .AME $ATE Student Record 1. Informal Reading Inventory Oral reading Total number of errors: __________ ____ The student is unlikely to have problems decoding text. (2 or fewer errors) ____ The student is likely to have some difficulty decoding text and may need help. (4–9 errors) ____ The student is likely to have great difficulty decoding the text. (more than 10 errors) Silent reading Total number of answers correct: __________ ____ The student should be able to interpret selections effectively. (8 or more answers correct) ____ The student is likely to have difficulty. (5 to 7 answers correct) ____ The student may need individual help or alternate placement. (fewer than 5 answers correct) 2. Cloze Test Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Number of blanks: 48 Number of correct responses: __________ ____ independent level (Student is likely to read the material without teacher involvement.) (58% correct answers or more, or 28 of 4) ____ instructional level (Student is likely to read the material with teacher involvement.) (44–57% correct answers, or 21–27 of 48) ____ frustration level (Student will probably get little out of reading the material.) (43% correct answers or less, or fewer than 21 of 48) 3. Writing prompt Student writing sample is strong average weak Comments: Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 59 59 60 Assessment File Grade 7 .AME $ATE SEVENTH GRADE Selection Test A Comprehension Read each of the following questions. Then choose the letter of the best answer. (6 points each) 1. At which point in the story do you learn that Victor is beginning a new year at school? 4. A. impress Teresa A. climax action C. exposition D. resolution B. prove Mr. Bueller is wrong C. beat Michael at something D. have fun at school B. falling One of Victor’s goals for this school year is to A. learn how to speak Spanish fluently B. build a close friendship with Teresa C. convince Mr. Bueller to tell a lie D. become Michael’s best friend Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 3. How does Victor feel about his first answer when Teresa said hi to him after homeroom? 5. Which of the following happens in the resolution of the story? SEVENTH GRADE 2. Victor pretends that he can speak French in order to A. Michael and Victor become best friends. B. Mr. Belton speaks over the loudspeaker. C. Teresa and Victor become closer friends. D. Victor admits that he told a lie in French class. A. embarrassed B. proud C. happy D. confused Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 61 61 .AME $ATE SELECTION TEST A, CONTINUED Vocabulary Choose the answer that best explains the meaning of each underlined word. (6 points each) 6. What does quiver mean? 9. A. roll 7. A. intensity B. slide B. frequency C. shake C. friendliness D. jump D. ability Portly means 10. A. beautiful SEVENTH GRADE B. harmful C. overweight D. important 8. What does ferocity mean? Linger means to A. start over B. repeat again C. delay leaving D. stop moving What does unison mean? A. hatred B. harm C. happiness Written Response Short Constructed Response Answer the following questions based on your knowledge of the story. Write a sentence or two on a separate sheet of paper. (10 points each) 11. What do we learn in the exposition of the story? 12. How does the relationship between Victor and Teresa change during this story? Answer the following question based on your knowledge of the story. Write one or two paragraphs on a separate sheet of paper. (20 points) Extended Constructed Response 13. 62 Which character in the story is most like you? Explain how you and this character are similar. Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 62 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt D. agreement Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 .AME $ATE SEVENTH GRADE Selection Test B/C Comprehension Read each of the following questions. Then choose the letter of the best answer. (6 points each) 1. Which of the following events happens in the exposition of the story? A. Victor 2. One of Victor’s goals for this school year is to how to speak Spanish fluently B. build a close friendship with Teresa C. convince Mr. Bueller to tell a lie D. become Michael’s best friend Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt A. learn 3. Victor claims to be able to speak French in order to A. prove that Mr. Bueller is wrong B. persuade Michael to take French C. make a good impression on Teresa D. prove to himself that he can do it 5. In the resolution of this story, Victor SEVENTH GRADE pretends that he can speak French fluently. B. Mr. Bueller welcomes students to French class. C. Teresa asks Victor to help her in French class. D. Victor waits in line on the first day of school. 4. A. feels optimistic about the upcoming school year B. is embarrassed by his own bad behavior C. admits to Teresa that he was lying about speaking French D. gets good advice from his best friend, Michael Torres Which of the following best describes Victor’s first meeting with Teresa after homeroom on the first day of school? A. He brags about taking a trip through France. B. Victor pretends that he does not recognize Teresa. C. He answers Teresa with a short and rude response. D. Victor tries to show off his knowledge of French. Assessment File Assessment File Grade 7 Diagnostic and Selection Tests Grade 7 63 63 64 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit Test Sample Pages Assessment File Grade 7 65 66 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit 1 TEST A Reading Comprehension Directions Read the following selections. Then answer the questions that follow. from Banner in the Sky James Ramsey Ullman Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 10 20 30 There was the sky. There was rock and ice. There was a mountain thrusting upward into blue emptiness—and at the foot of the mountain a tiny speck. This speck was the only thing that lived or moved in all that world of silent majesty. Rudi climbed the white slope of the upper glacier. He did not hurry. He looked neither up at the peak nor down at the valley, but only at the ice flowing slowly past beneath his feet. In the ice were the marks of their boot nails from the previous day, and it was easy to follow the route. When the slope steepened, there were the steps cut by Winter and Saxo with their axes. He had only to step up, balance briefly, step up again—and again. With the step-cutting, it had required two hours to reach the bergschrund. Today it took him perhaps a third of that time. Coming out on the rim of the great crevasse, he approached the snow-bridge, tested it, and crossed without mishap. Then, still following the trail of the day before, he threaded his way through the steep maze of the icefall. The seracs rose around him in frozen stillness. And Rudi’s mind seemed frozen too. What he was doing was not a result of conscious choice or decision; it was simply what he had to do. He had not lost his senses. He knew that alone, and without food or a tent, there was no chance on earth of his reaching the top of the Citadel. And it was not hope for the top that pushed him on. It was simply—well, he wasn’t sure—perhaps simply the hope to set foot on the mountain. Or more than the hope. The need. The need of his body, his mind, his heart, to come at last to the place of which he had dreamed so long; to stand on the southeast ridge; to follow where his father had led; to climb, perhaps, even as high as the Fortress, which was as high as any man had gone. That was what he wanted; what he had to have. That much. Before it all ended. Before descending to the village; to his uncle’s anger, his mother’s tears, Klaus Wesselhoft’s laughter; to the soap and mops and dishpans of the Beau Site Hotel. He climbed on. The seracs slid past like tall hooded ghosts. And then they dropped away behind him and he came out at the base of the snowslope. Above him he could see a trail of zigzagging footprints, extending perhaps halfway to the ridge and disappearing into smooth drifts where the avalanche had erased them. The drifts were huge, billowing, dazzling in the sunlight; but he knew that they had frozen overnight and that the sun was not yet strong Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test A 67 67 40 50 60 enough to dislodge them. He shuffled his boots in the snow, and it was firm and dry. As Winter had said, the slope was safe in the morning. Even so, he was cautious as he climbed upward, testing every step before trusting his weight to it. And when he came to the avalanche area he detoured to the left and kept as close as possible to the bordering rock-wall, so that he would have something to cling to, just in case. . . . But nothing happened. The snow stayed as motionless as the rock. In all that spreading wilderness there was no movement except that of his own two legs plodding slowly on through the drifts. And then—he stopped—then there was a movement. He felt it rather than saw it: the merest flicker or shadow, not on the slope, but on the cliff high above. He tensed, peering upward. . . . A stonefall? . . . No. There was no sound. And then again there was the flicker: a moving speck of reddish brown against the tall grayness of the rock. Suddenly it leapt into focus. It was a chamois. For an instant it stood outlined on a crag, motionless, staring down at him; and Rudi, motionless too, stared back. Then the animal moved again—wheeled—vanished. It was as if the cliff had opened and swallowed it. And the stillness closed in again, even more absolute than before. Rudi moved on. Through the stillness. Up the white slope. Kick—step, he went. Kick—step. Kick—step. And though the going through the deep drifts was slow, it was neither steep nor slippery, and his progress was steady. He looked back—and the icefall was far below; ahead—and the ridge loomed nearer. . . . Nearer. . . . And then at last the great moment came, and the slope was beneath him. There was no longer snow under his feet, but solid rock. He took a step up—a second—a third . . . and stood on the southeast ridge of the Citadel. From Banner in the Sky by James Ramsey Ullman. Copyright © 1954 by James Ramsey Ullman. Used by permission of HarperCollins Publishers. 68 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test A 68 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt UNIT 1, TEST A CONTINUED Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 UNIT 1, TEST A CONTINUED from To the Top of Everest Laurie Skreslet with Elizabeth MacLeod 10 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 20 30 When I arrived back at Base Camp from Kunde, I was told the Icefall had been closed. I couldn’t go through? Well, maybe—maybe not. I radioed Bill. “Laurie, it’s too dangerous. Stay in Base Camp!” Bill barked. “Do NOT—” I flicked off the radio. That wasn’t what I wanted to hear. After a year and a half of working on this expedition, I had too much energy invested to sit at the bottom of Everest. I’d gained a lot of experience in my years of climbing. I knew I could make an important contribution to the climbers struggling high on the mountain. It would all be wasted if I waited in Base Camp. So I took the risk. Next morning I shouldered my pack and set off. Base Camp had radioed Bill, and he did the only thing he could—he ordered that no one come with me. Bill also insisted that I radio Base Camp every time I crossed a crevasse. If I fell, I was still on my own—the radio call would just let them know where to find my body. At first, the climb wasn’t too bad—I’d done it many times before, and with a heavier pack. The route was in much worse shape than my last time there, three weeks before, but most ladders were usable. The Icefall was quiet and the wind light. Then I came to a crevasse about 3.5 m (12 ft.) wide. There was a ladder across it, but the ice had shifted since it had been put in place. Now the bridge ended 1.5 m (5 ft.) from the far wall. On my side, the end of the ladder was frozen into the ice, but the other end hung 30 m (100 ft.) above the bottom of the crevasse. No problem, I thought, I’ll just find another place to cross. For more than an hour, I searched desperately, but there was no other place. I had to admit defeat. Slowly, I started down to Base Camp. Then I stopped. Did you give that your best? I asked myself. Yes, I thought. But then I asked, Did you give it more than your best? No, I had to answer. More than my best was to go back and jump from the ladder to the far side. I knew the impossible is often the untried. I couldn’t leave without trying, so back I went. I decided to use the handrail ropes that were still there, adding new anchors and Petzl ascenders pointing both forward and back. I figured I had a fifty-fifty chance of making it across. The ladder bobbed up and down as I edged my way out. At the end of the ladder, I focused all my concentration—and jumped. Thwack! My ice pick bit into the ice on the lip of the crevasse. It held. I Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test A 69 69 UNIT 1, TEST A CONTINUED 40 50 dug my crampons into the icy wall and used all my strength to pull myself up. As I lay gasping on the far side, I realized that something powerful had happened. I seemed to be seeing things differently—everything was clearer and colors more vivid. It was like a different world. In making that leap, I’d let go not only of the ladder, but of some of my fears, too. I knew then that things would work out for me as long as I kept giving more than my best. As I climbed to Camp One and on toward Camp Two, I thought about Bill. What would happen when I had to explain face-to-face why I’d disobeyed his order to stay in Base Camp? Would he allow me to keep climbing? He was right there when I arrived. “Laurie!” Bill shouted. Then he smiled and said, “It’s great you’re here!” “Huh?” I said, stunned by his good humor. “Look,” said Bill, “four people have died. If I’d asked you to come up and something had happened to you, I couldn’t bear to have another death on my conscience. I had to tell you to stay put.” Bill paused. “But I knew you’d come up no matter what. So, welcome. I need you here.” Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Material from To the Top of Everest written by Laurie Skreslet is used with permission by Kids Can Press Ltd., Toronto. Text © 2001 by Laurie Skreslet. 70 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test A 70 Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 UNIT 1, TEST A CONTINUED COMPREHENSION Directions Answer the following questions about the excerpt from Banner in the Sky. 1. 2. 3. The setting is a 6. A. cave C. river A. snowslope C. rock-wall B. desert D. mountain B. crevasse D. ridge Based on lines 1–4, you can make the inference that the speck is a 7. C. chamois A. a B. person D. snow B. something snow drift moving C. an avalanche D. the mountain top drift Which of the following words in lines 11–15 is a sequence clue? 8. Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt The last event in lines 45–61 is that Rudi B. Coming A. reaches C. without B. looks the Citadel back at the icefall C. takes a step up D. sees the chamois D. Then 5. Rudi stops climbing in lines 45–48 because he feels A. rock A. required 4. The setting in lines 30–37 is a Rudi’s conflict described in lines 16–29 is A. rising C. external B. internal D. falling Based on lines 27–29, you can make the inference that Rudi works as a A. repairman C. bellhop B. hiking D. cleaner Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 guide 9. When Rudi reaches the Citadel, it is the story’s A. falling action B. conflict C. exposition D. climax Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test A 71 71 UNIT 1, TEST A CONTINUED COMPREHENSION Directions Answer the following questions about the excerpt from To the Top of Everest. 10. Which of the following phrases in lines 1–5 tells you Laurie reached Base Camp? couldn’t go through?” B. “When I arrived” C. “I was told” D. “had been closed” 14. A. “I 11. 15. In lines 16–24, which event happened first? B. Base D. ridge Camp Because he cannot cross the ladder bridge, Laurie 16. The details in lines 46–49 are part of the story’s A. exposition C. climax B. rising action D. falling action A. The 13. According to the chronological order of events, Laurie had been on the same route the morning before B. three weeks earlier C. last month D. two years ago A. 72 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test A 72 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt icefall made little or no sound. B. The wind was light. C. The ice shifted. D. Laurie made the climb with a lighter pack. C. ledge Base Camp B. sets up camp C. looks for another crossing D. makes a new bridge A. tells 12. A. crevasse A. contacts The effect of the events in lines 1–2 is that Bill Laurie to stay in Base Camp B. offers advice for climbing C. learns that Laurie is upset D. reveals problems at Base Camp The setting described in lines 20–24 is a Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 UNIT 1, TEST A CONTINUED COMPREHENSION Directions Answer these questions about both selections. 17. 18. Based on the details in both selections, you can make the inference that Rudi and Laurie both feel that mountain climbing is A. rewarding C. relaxing B. easy D. graceful How are the events of both selections organized? 19. Which of the following describes the conflict in both selections? A. animal vs. predator B. human vs. nature C. honesty vs. hard work D. human vs. human and contrast B. chronological order C. cause and effect D. main idea and details Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt A. compare Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test A 73 73 UNIT 1, TEST A CONTINUED Written Response SHORT CONSTRUCTED RESPONSE Directions Write two or three sentences to answer each question on a separate sheet of paper. 20. Identify the setting of To the Top of Everest. Provide two details from the text to support your answer. 21. Based on the information in both selections, you can make the inference that mountain climbers are determined. Provide one detail from each excerpt to support this inference. EXTENDED CONSTRUCTED RESPONSE Directions Answer the following question. Write two or more paragraphs on a separate sheet of paper. Define the following plot stages: exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, and resolution. Then provide an example of each plot stage from To the Top of Everest. Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 22. 74 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test A 74 Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 UNIT 1, TEST A CONTINUED Vocabulary Directions 1. 2. Use your knowledge of Latin word roots to answer the following questions. The Latin word appropiare means “near.” Which word in Banner in the Sky most likely comes from the word appropiare? A. axes C. anger B. approach D. avalanche 3. The Latin word decidere means “to decide.” Which word in Banner in the Sky most likely comes from the word decidere? A. descend C. decision B. drifts D. dropped The Latin word experientia means “act of trying.” Which word in To the Top of Everest most likely comes from the word experientia? A. experience C. Everest B. energy D. edged Use your knowledge of prefixes and suffixes to answer the following questions. The line numbers will help you find the words in the excerpts. Directions 4. The word still means “not moving.” What is the most likely meaning of the suffix -ness, which is used to form stillness in line 16 of Banner in the Sky? Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt A. skilled in B. without 5. of B. the opposite of Directions 8. The word tried means “attempted.” What is the most likely meaning of the prefix un-, which is used to form untried in line 31 of To the Top of Everest? C. result A. with C. not D. state B. again D. apart of The word danger means “exposure to harm or pain.” What is the most likely meaning of the suffix -ous, which is used to form dangerous in line 3 of To the Top of Everest? A. full 7. 6. C. result in D. skilled in Use your knowledge of analogies to complete each item. Chicago is to Illinois as Los Angeles is to 9. Minute is to hour as year is to A. South America C. Europe A. decade C. month B. California D. capital B. evening D. day Lead is to pencil as ink is to A. pen C. school B. writing D. permanent Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test A 75 75 UNIT 1, TEST A CONTINUED Revising and Editing Read the descriptive essay and answer the questions that follow. (1) Located just 20 miles south of my hometown of Jamesville, Calton Canyon is one of the area’s most beautiful features. (2) It is also my favorite place to go to escape from city life. (3) The canyon is not a desolate wilderness, though in fact, it is the most popular picnic spot around. (4) This is one of the reasons I love the canyon I like to see people enjoying nature as much as I enjoy it. (5) It is very relaxing to sit on the warm sandstone boulders and watch families and friends eat and play. (6) Children play tag and explore the canyon for interesting bugs or creatures. (7) Parents and grandparents place plastic silverware and cloth napkins on old, red picnic tables. (8) They take out juicy red apples, crisp carrot sticks, and crunchy potato chips for people to snack on. (9) After the picnickers finish its fun, they often take walks. (10) Several scenic hiking trails snake through the canyons walls. (11) My favorite trail leads up onto a narrow ridge of the canyon. (12) On this trail, large boulders tower over hikers heads. (13) The trail loops through a wide, sweeping plain full of wildflowers. (14) They are the most colorful flowers I have ever seen. (15) I am sure that each hiker on the trail wants to fill their pockets with the beautiful blooms! (16) However, I am just happy to look at the flowers and smell them. (17) I lie down on the plain and take a nap. (18) The sweet smell of the flowers and the sound of the wind always relax me. (19) After a great day of people-watching, hiking, and napping, I head home. (20) I tell my family about my adventures. (21) They always listen with interest. (22) My family agrees that no other place near Jamesville offers the same beauty and peace as Calton Canyon. 76 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test A 76 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Directions Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 UNIT 1, TEST A CONTINUED 1. 2. Sentence 1 identifies the essay’s A. conclusion C. subject B. author D. organization What is the best way to correct sentence 3 so that it is no longer a run-on sentence? A. The canyon is not a desolate wilderness, though. In fact, it is the most popular picnic spot in the area. B. The canyon is not a desolate wilderness though in fact it is the most popular picnic spot in the area. C. The canyon is not. A desolate wilderness. Though, in fact, it is the most popular picnic spot in the area. D. The canyon, is not a desolate wilderness, though, in fact, it is the most popular, picnic spot in the area. 3. 4. What is the best way to correct sentence 4 so that it is no longer a run-on sentence? 5. 6. The words “warm sandstone boulders” in sentence 5 appeal to which of the following senses? A. smell C. touch B. hearing D. taste To maintain pronoun-antecedent agreement in sentence 9, change “its” to A. his C. their B. ours D. her Choose the correct way to write the possessive form of canyons in sentence 10. A. canyons’ B. canyon’s 7. C. canyon is D. canyons’s The words “narrow ridge” in sentence 11 appeal to which of the following senses? A. hearing C. smell B. taste D. sight Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt A. This, is one of the reasons, I love the canyon I like to see people, enjoying nature as much as I enjoy it. B. This is one of the reasons I love the canyon. I like to see people enjoying nature as much as I enjoy it. C. This is one of the reasons. I love the canyon I like to see people enjoying nature as much as I enjoy it. D. This is one of the reasons, I love the canyon I like to see people. Enjoying nature as much as I enjoy it. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test A 77 77 UNIT 1, TEST A CONTINUED 8. 9. Choose the correct way to write the possessive form of hikers in sentence 12. Which would be an appropriate transition to add to the beginning of sentence 17? A. hiker’s C. hiker’s’ A. Then C. So B. hikers’ D. hiker B. Which D. But is To maintain pronoun-antecedent agreement in sentence 15, change “their” to A. us C. his or her D. thems B. my’s 10. 11. 12. Which transition word could you use to combine sentences 20 and 21? A. if C. and B. but D. then Which sentence includes a transition word? A. sentence B. sentence 15 16 C. sentence D. sentence 17 18 Writing Read the following quotation. Then read the prompt that follows and complete the writing activity. Directions Flannery O’Connor Write a descriptive essay about a room in your home that is important to you. First, think about all of the things that make the room special. What sights, sounds, smells, tastes, and feelings do you experience in this room? Then, as the author of the quotation suggests, use specific sensory details to bring the room to life. Now write your essay. Use the reminders that follow to help you write. Prompt: Reminders s s s s s 78 "E SURE YOUR WRITING DOES WHAT THE PROMPT ASKS 'IVE A CLEAR OVERALL IMPRESSION OF THE ROOM 5SE TRANSITIONS TO CONNECT IDEAS 5SE SPECIFIC SENSORY DETAILS TO BRING THE ROOM TO LIFE #HECK FOR CORRECT GRAMMAR SPELLING AND PUNCTUATION Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test A 78 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt “[The writer] appeals through the senses, and you cannot appeal to the senses with abstractions.” Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit 1 TEST B/C Reading Comprehension Directions Readg the following selections. Then answer the questions that follow. from Banner in the Sky James Ramsey Ullman Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 10 20 30 There was the sky. There was rock and ice. There was a mountain thrusting upward into blue emptiness—and at the foot of the mountain a tiny speck. This speck was the only thing that lived or moved in all that world of silent majesty. Rudi climbed the white slope of the upper glacier. He did not hurry. He looked neither up at the peak nor down at the valley, but only at the ice flowing slowly past beneath his feet. In the ice were the marks of their boot nails from the previous day, and it was easy to follow the route. When the slope steepened, there were the steps cut by Winter and Saxo with their axes. He had only to step up, balance briefly, step up again—and again. With the step-cutting, it had required two hours to reach the bergschrund. Today it took him perhaps a third of that time. Coming out on the rim of the great crevasse, he approached the snow-bridge, tested it, and crossed without mishap. Then, still following the trail of the day before, he threaded his way through the steep maze of the icefall. The seracs rose around him in frozen stillness. And Rudi’s mind seemed frozen too. What he was doing was not a result of conscious choice or decision; it was simply what he had to do. He had not lost his senses. He knew that alone, and without food or a tent, there was no chance on earth of his reaching the top of the Citadel. And it was not hope for the top that pushed him on. It was simply—well, he wasn’t sure—perhaps simply the hope to set foot on the mountain. Or more than the hope. The need. The need of his body, his mind, his heart, to come at last to the place of which he had dreamed so long; to stand on the southeast ridge; to follow where his father had led; to climb, perhaps, even as high as the Fortress, which was as high as any man had gone. That was what he wanted; what he had to have. That much. Before it all ended. Before descending to the village; to his uncle’s anger, his mother’s tears, Klaus Wesselhoft’s laughter; to the soap and mops and dishpans of the Beau Site Hotel. He climbed on. The seracs slid past like tall hooded ghosts. And then they dropped away behind him and he came out at the base of the snowslope. Above him he could see a trail of zigzagging footprints, extending perhaps halfway to the ridge and disappearing into smooth drifts where the avalanche had erased them. The drifts were huge, billowing, dazzling in the sunlight; but he knew that they had frozen overnight and that the sun was not yet strong Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test B/C 79 79 40 50 60 enough to dislodge them. He shuffled his boots in the snow, and it was firm and dry. As Winter had said, the slope was safe in the morning. Even so, he was cautious as he climbed upward, testing every step before trusting his weight to it. And when he came to the avalanche area he detoured to the left and kept as close as possible to the bordering rock-wall, so that he would have something to cling to, just in case. . . . But nothing happened. The snow stayed as motionless as the rock. In all that spreading wilderness there was no movement except that of his own two legs plodding slowly on through the drifts. And then—he stopped—then there was a movement. He felt it rather than saw it: the merest flicker or shadow, not on the slope, but on the cliff high above. He tensed, peering upward. . . . A stonefall? . . . No. There was no sound. And then again there was the flicker: a moving speck of reddish brown against the tall grayness of the rock. Suddenly it leapt into focus. It was a chamois. For an instant it stood outlined on a crag, motionless, staring down at him; and Rudi, motionless too, stared back. Then the animal moved again—wheeled—vanished. It was as if the cliff had opened and swallowed it. And the stillness closed in again, even more absolute than before. Rudi moved on. Through the stillness. Up the white slope. Kick—step, he went. Kick—step. Kick—step. And though the going through the deep drifts was slow, it was neither steep nor slippery, and his progress was steady. He looked back—and the icefall was far below; ahead—and the ridge loomed nearer. . . . Nearer. . . . And then at last the great moment came, and the slope was beneath him. There was no longer snow under his feet, but solid rock. He took a step up—a second—a third . . . and stood on the southeast ridge of the Citadel. From Banner in the Sky by James Ramsey Ullman. Copyright © 1954 by James Ramsey Ullman. Used by permission of HarperCollins Publishers. 80 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test B/C 80 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt UNIT 1, TEST B/C CONTINUED Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 UNIT 1, TEST B/C CONTINUED from To the Top of Everest Laurie Skreslet with Elizabeth MacLeod 10 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 20 30 When I arrived back at Base Camp from Kunde, I was told the Icefall had been closed. I couldn’t go through? Well, maybe—maybe not. I radioed Bill. “Laurie, it’s too dangerous. Stay in Base Camp!” Bill barked. “Do NOT—” I flicked off the radio. That wasn’t what I wanted to hear. After a year and a half of working on this expedition, I had too much energy invested to sit at the bottom of Everest. I’d gained a lot of experience in my years of climbing. I knew I could make an important contribution to the climbers struggling high on the mountain. It would all be wasted if I waited in Base Camp. So I took the risk. Next morning I shouldered my pack and set off. Base Camp had radioed Bill, and he did the only thing he could—he ordered that no one come with me. Bill also insisted that I radio Base Camp every time I crossed a crevasse. If I fell, I was still on my own—the radio call would just let them know where to find my body. At first, the climb wasn’t too bad—I’d done it many times before, and with a heavier pack. The route was in much worse shape than my last time there, three weeks before, but most ladders were usable. The Icefall was quiet and the wind light. Then I came to a crevasse about 3.5 m (12 ft.) wide. There was a ladder across it, but the ice had shifted since it had been put in place. Now the bridge ended 1.5 m (5 ft.) from the far wall. On my side, the end of the ladder was frozen into the ice, but the other end hung 30 m (100 ft.) above the bottom of the crevasse. No problem, I thought, I’ll just find another place to cross. For more than an hour, I searched desperately, but there was no other place. I had to admit defeat. Slowly, I started down to Base Camp. Then I stopped. Did you give that your best? I asked myself. Yes, I thought. But then I asked, Did you give it more than your best? No, I had to answer. More than my best was to go back and jump from the ladder to the far side. I knew the impossible is often the untried. I couldn’t leave without trying, so back I went. I decided to use the handrail ropes that were still there, adding new anchors and Petzl ascenders pointing both forward and back. I figured I had a fifty-fifty chance of making it across. The ladder bobbed up and down as I edged my way out. At the end of the ladder, I focused all my concentration—and jumped. Thwack! My ice pick bit into the ice on the lip of the crevasse. It held. I Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test B/C 81 81 UNIT 1, TEST B/C CONTINUED 40 50 dug my crampons into the icy wall and used all my strength to pull myself up. As I lay gasping on the far side, I realized that something powerful had happened. I seemed to be seeing things differently—everything was clearer and colors more vivid. It was like a different world. In making that leap, I’d let go not only of the ladder, but of some of my fears, too. I knew then that things would work out for me as long as I kept giving more than my best. As I climbed to Camp One and on toward Camp Two, I thought about Bill. What would happen when I had to explain face-to-face why I’d disobeyed his order to stay in Base Camp? Would he allow me to keep climbing? He was right there when I arrived. “Laurie!” Bill shouted. Then he smiled and said, “It’s great you’re here!” “Huh?” I said, stunned by his good humor. “Look,” said Bill, “four people have died. If I’d asked you to come up and something had happened to you, I couldn’t bear to have another death on my conscience. I had to tell you to stay put.” Bill paused. “But I knew you’d come up no matter what. So, welcome. I need you here.” Material from To the Top of Everest written by Laurie Skreslet is used with permission by Kids Can Press Ltd., Toronto. Text © 2001 by Laurie Skreslet. 1. The main setting of the excerpt is a 3. A. windy seaside cliff B. warm grassy meadow C. peaceful river valley D. rugged mountain slope 2. and Saxo were with him B. is a patient mountain climber C. climbs with great speed and strength D. is extremely tired and wants to rest 82 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test B/C 82 A. two hours B. third C. Then D. the day before Based on lines 5–14, you can make the inference that Rudi A. wishes Winter Which sequence word or words in lines 11–15 tell you that Rudi made it past the snow-bridge? 4. Rudi experiences an external conflict with A. the mountain B. himself C. Winter D. the seracs Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt COMPREHENSION Directions Answer the following questions about the excerpt from Banner in the Sky. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 UNIT 1, TEST B/C CONTINUED 5. Based on lines 22–29, you can make the inference that Rudi 8. A. wishes that he had friends B. misses his mother and his uncle C. wants to leave his village D. dislikes his job at the Beau Site Hotel 6. Rudi stays close to the rock-wall as he climbs because he is afraid of A. tenses with fear B. stares at the chamois C. peers upward D. stops climbing 9. The climax occurs when Rudi A. crosses the snow-bridge B. clings to the rock-wall C. sees the chamois D. reaches the Citadel A. sliding down a snow drift B. being swept away by an avalanche C. slipping on the rocks D. being hit by falling rocks 7. In lines 45–53, the first event that takes place is that Rudi What happens after Rudi spots the chamois? chamois disappears. B. Winter says the slope is safe. C. Rudi thinks of the hotel. D. Rudi climbs the upper glacier. Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt A. The COMPREHENSION Directions Answer the following questions about the excerpt from To the Top of Everest. 10. Laurie turns off the radio at the beginning of the excerpt because he 12. A. dislikes Bill’s message B. wishes Bill was in Base Camp C. wants to talk to Bill in person D. thinks that Bill is done speaking 11. What happens after Laurie leaves Base Camp? comes to a crevasse. tells Bill not to join him. C. The wind becomes stronger. D. Laurie goes to Kunde. According to the chronological order of events, Base Camp radios Bill A. one day before Laurie fills his pack B. before Laurie sets off C. two hours after Laurie leaves D. after Laurie reaches the first crevasse 13. The descriptions of setting in lines 16–19 are part of the story’s A. Laurie A. rising B. He B. climax Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 action C. falling action D. resolution Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test B/C 83 83 UNIT 1, TEST B/C CONTINUED 14. Which event causes Laurie to look for another place to cross the crevasse? 16. A. Bill tells him to find a new bridge. crevasse is too wide. C. Laurie thinks the ice is too soft. D. The ladder bridge is too short. A. realizes that good things will happen if he gives more than his best B. learns to take chances because sometimes you get lucky C. decides that he wants to teach others how to climb Mt. Everest D. wishes Bill were there to share the moment with him B. The 15. The effect of Laurie’s leap across the crevasse is that he According to lines 46–49, what two things happen simultaneously? A. Laurie climbs to Camp One and Camp Two. B. Laurie climbs on and thinks about Bill. C. Laurie thinks about Bill and jumps the crevasse. D. He climbs to Camp One and talks with Bill. 17. The exposition in both selections hints at a conflict between a person and A. an authority figure B. a mountain C. his family members D. himself 18. The setting of both selections is a A. snow drift B. crevasse C. mountain D. ridge 84 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test B/C 84 19. You can make the inference that Rudi from Banner in the Sky and Laurie from To the Top of Everest both A. think that mountain climbing is a rewarding experience B. think that Mt. Everest is the hardest mountain to climb C. wish they had company while mountain climbing D. respect the wishes of family members and friends Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt COMPREHENSION Directions Answer these questions about both selections. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 UNIT 1, TEST B/C CONTINUED Written Response SHORT CONSTRUCTED RESPONSE Directions Write two or three sentences to answer each question on a separate sheet of paper. 20. What internal conflict is shared by Rudi in Banner in the Sky and Laurie in To the Top of Everest? Provide a detail from each selection to support your answer. 21. Identify the falling action and the resolution of To the Top of Everest. Support each answer with one example from the selection. EXTENDED CONSTRUCTED RESPONSE Directions Answer one of the following questions. Write two or more paragraphs on a separate sheet of paper. 22. How does the setting contribute to the plot in Banner in the Sky and To the Top of Everest? Use details from the selections to support your answer. To the Top of Everest contains an external conflict and an internal conflict. Which conflict is more important to the plot? Use details from the selection to support your answer. Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 23. Challenge Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test B/C 85 85 UNIT 1, TEST B/C CONTINUED Vocabulary Directions 1. 2. Use your knowledge of Latin word roots to answer the following questions. The Latin word prae means “in front of ” or “before.” Which word in Banner in the Sky most likely comes from the word prae? A. speck C. upper B. mountain D. previous 3. The Latin word scire means “to know.” Which word in Banner in the Sky most likely comes from the word scire? A. conscious C. detoured B. mind D. simply The Latin word insistere means “to persist.” Which word in To the Top of Everest most likely comes from the word insistere? A. heavier C. insisted B. crevasse D. arrived Use your knowledge of prefixes and suffixes to answer the following questions. The line numbers will help you find the words in the excerpts. Directions The word brief means “short.” What is the most likely meaning of the suffix -ly, which is used to form briefly in line 10 of Banner in the Sky? A. capable of B. in a certain way 5. 8. C. concrete result D. skilled in Which suffix can be added to the noun humor in line 52 of To the Top of Everest to form an adjective that means “not having humor”? A. -less C. -ness B. -ly D. -able The word obeyed means “followed commands.” What is the most likely meaning of the prefix dis-, which is used to form disobeyed in line 48 of To the Top of Everest? A. under C. not B. again D. without Directions 7. 6. Use your knowledge of analogies to complete each item. Eye is to face as tooth is to 9. Brick is to wall as room is to A. face C. tongue A. door B. mouth D. toothache B. town Singer is to choir as piano is to A. symphony C. violin orchestra B. tune D. musical C. window D. house Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 4. instrument 86 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test B/C 86 Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 UNIT 1, TEST B/C CONTINUED Revising and Editing Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Directions Read the descriptive essay and answer the questions that follow. (1) Located just 20 miles south of my hometown of Jamesville, Calton Canyon is one of the area’s most beautiful features. (2) It is also my favorite place to go to escape from city life. (3) The canyon is not a desolate wilderness, though in fact, it is the most popular picnic spot around. (4) This is one of the reasons I love the canyon I like to see people enjoying nature as much as I enjoy it. (5) It is very relaxing to sit on the warm sandstone boulders and watch families and friends eat and play. (6) Children play tag and explore the canyon for interesting bugs or creatures. (7) Parents and grandparents place plastic silverware and cloth napkins on old, red picnic tables. (8) They take out juicy red apples, crisp carrot sticks, and crunchy potato chips for people to snack on. (9) After the picnickers finish its fun, they often take walks. (10) Several scenic hiking trails snake through the canyons walls. (11) My favorite trail leads up onto a narrow ridge of the canyon. (12) On this trail, large boulders tower over hikers heads. (13) The trail loops through a wide, sweeping plain full of wildflowers. (14) They are the most colorful flowers I have ever seen. (15) I am sure that each hiker on the trail wants to fill their pockets with the beautiful blooms! (16) However, I am just happy to look at the flowers and smell them. (17) I lie down on the plain and take a nap. (18) The sweet smell of the flowers and the sound of the wind always relax me. (19) After a great day of people-watching, hiking, and napping, I head home. (20) I tell my family about my adventures. (21) They always listen with interest. (22) My family agrees that no other place near Jamesville offers the same beauty and peace as Calton Canyon. 1. In sentence 1, the author identifies the subject as A. Calton Canyon B. beauty in nature C. Jamesville D. hometown cities Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test B/C 87 87 UNIT 1, TEST B/C CONTINUED Choose the correct way to rewrite sentence 3 so that it is no longer a run-on sentence. 5. A. The canyon is not a desolate wilderness, though in fact: It is the most popular picnic spot in the area. B. The canyon is not a desolate wilderness; though, in fact, it is the most popular picnic spot in the area. C. The canyon is not a desolate wilderness, though. In fact, it is the most popular picnic spot in the area. D. The canyon is not a desolate wilderness, though, in fact it is the most popular picnic spot in the area. 3. A. After the picnickers finish our fun, they often take walks. B. After the picnickers finish its fun, them often take walks. C. After the picnickers finish their fun, they often take walks. D. After the picnickers finish its fun, us often take walks. 6. B. canyon’s C. canyon’s’ A. This 4. Which of the following sentences contains the most sensory details? A. sentence 2 B. sentence 8 88 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test B/C 88 C. sentence 16 D. sentence 19 Choose the correct way to write the possessive form of canyons in sentence 10. A. canyons’ Choose the correct way to rewrite sentence 4 so that it is no longer a run-on sentence. is one of the reasons I love the canyon. I like to see people enjoying nature as much as I enjoy it. B. This is one of the reasons I love the canyon, I like to see people enjoying nature as much as I enjoy it. C. This is one of the reasons. I love the canyon I like to see people enjoying nature as much as I enjoy it. D. This is one of the reasons, I love the canyon I like to see people enjoying nature as much as I enjoy it. Choose the correct way to maintain pronoun-antecedent agreement in sentence 9. D. canyons’s 7. Which words in sentence 11 contain a sensory detail? A. favorite trail B. onto a C. narrow ridge D. the canyon Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 2. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 UNIT 1, TEST B/C CONTINUED 8. 9. Choose the correct way to write the possessive form of hikers in sentence 12. 11. Which would be an appropriate transition to add to the beginning of sentence 17? A. hiker’s A. After B. hikers’ B. But C. hiker’s’ C. And D. hikers’s D. Therefore To maintain pronoun-antecedent agreement in sentence 15, change “their” to 12. Which transition word could you use to combine sentences 20 and 21? A. generally A. us C. them B. or B. my D. his C. and or her that D. specifically 10. In sentences 14–16, which is a transition word or phrase? A. “have ever seen” am sure” C. “However” D. “happy” Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt B. “I Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test B/C 89 89 UNIT 1, TEST B/C CONTINUED Writing Read the following quotation. Then read the prompts that follow and complete one of the writing activities. Directions “[The writer] appeals through the senses, and you cannot appeal to the senses with abstractions.” Flannery O’Connor Write a descriptive essay about a place in your home that is important to you. Bring the place to life, as O’Connor suggests, by appealing to the reader with sensory details. What sights, sounds, smells, tastes, and feelings do you experience in this special place? Why are these details significant? Now write your essay. Use the reminders that follow to help you write. Prompt: Challenge Prompt: Write a descriptive essay that explores the ways in which our senses help determine our favorite places. Begin by choosing a place in your home of which you are especially fond. As suggested in O’Connor’s quotation, use vivid sensory details to engage your readers. Analyze why the appeal to your senses makes the place more important to you than other places are. Now write your essay. Use the reminders that follow to help you write. s s s s s 90 "E SURE YOUR WRITING DOES WHAT THE PROMPT ASKS 'IVE A CLEAR OVERALL IMPRESSION OF THE ROOM 5SE TRANSITIONS TO CONNECT IDEAS 5SE SPECIFIC SENSORY DETAILS TO BRING THE ROOM TO LIFE #HECK FOR CORRECT GRAMMAR SPELLING AND PUNCTUATION Unit and Benchmark Tests Unit 1, Test B/C 90 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Reminders Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Benchmark Test Sample Pages Assessment File Grade 7 91 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED Reading Comprehension In the first paragraph, the narrator uses foreshadowing to suggest that Clyde will — A. graduate soon B. have a bad report card C. be late for school D. play with his friends 2. At the beginning of the story’s plot, the first thing Clyde’s friends do is — A. look at the grades on his report card B. offer to help Clyde improve his grades C. enjoy a story about Clyde’s father D. sit around in Clyde’s room talking 3. The author probably used the kitchen as the setting to make it natural for — A. Clyde and his friends to cook B. Clyde’s mother to feed Clyde’s friends C. Clyde to do his homework D. all the characters to talk together casually 4. Which of the following characters is a minor character? A. Kitty B. Mrs. Jones C. Clyde D. Sam Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 1. 92 Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 92 Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED 5. In what way is Clyde’s adviser’s attitude different from his father’s? A. His adviser wants to give up B. Clyde’s father always kept trying C. His adviser thinks math is important D. Clyde’s father prefers to study instruments 8. Paragraph 2 shows a conflict between Clyde and his — A. friends B. mother C. math class D. conscience 6. The beginning of paragraph 2 helps the reader understand that the narrator is — A. eager to brag about his own success B. concerned about hurting Clyde’s feelings C. shy about talking with Kitty D. anxious to get away from Clyde’s house 9. According to the sequence of events, Mrs. Jones enters the room before — A. Clyde talks to his grade adviser B. she shops for groceries C. the narrator gets his report card D. Clyde starts crying The point of view from which the story is told helps the reader — A. follow the plot of the story B. identify with the narrator C. understand the main character’s motives D. see all the characters’ problems Clyde’s actions in paragraph 9 indicate that he feels — A. disappointed B. irritated C. confused D. sick Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 7. 10. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 93 93 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED 11. When the children move to another room, the plot — A. gets more tense B. winds down C. ends D. becomes more complicated 12. The story about his father affects Clyde by — A. encouraging him to do well in school B. making him feel sad about not having a father C. suggesting that he drop the academic program D. telling him how to study 13. You can predict that Clyde will work hard in math because — A. Mrs. Jones contacts his teacher B. he is afraid of changing programs C. the narrator offers to help him study D. he wants to be like his father SHORT CONSTRUCTED RESPONSES 14. Describe an internal conflict that the narrator faces in the excerpt from Fast Sam, Cool Clyde, and Stuff. 15. Explain how the conflict in the story is resolved. Write a paragraph to answer this question. 16. 94 How is Clyde’s experience in school similar to his father’s experience playing the trombone? Explain how their experiences reveal a common character trait, and support your answer with examples from the story. Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 94 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Write two or three sentences to answer each question. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED Read this selection. Then answer the questions that follow it. from Sons from Afar Cynthia Voigt 1 2 3 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 4 5 6 He lay back and looked at the sky. The stars were coming out, little pale pinpricks of light. He knew they weren’t really coming out, that they’d been burning away out in the darkness of space all day long; but it looked like they were coming out, like flowers coming into bloom. Sammy had his head against the stiff splintery boards of the dock, and he was looking out into space so deep it might as well be endless. He thought it would be great to explore space: sailing out among the stars, discovering . . . you couldn’t even begin to imagine what you might discover. If there were huge winds that blew across the vast empty reaches, and your ship had a big metal sail . . . but he didn’t think there were space winds. He could ask James, but he didn’t want to. “I’m good at math and science. I could be an astronaut,” he said to the stars. “I thought you were going to play tennis,” James answered. “I’ll do both,” Sammy said. The sky turned darker, and darker still. The stars burned white, making the sky look crowded. You could put a tennis court in a spaceship; the ship would have to be large, anyway, and people would have to have something to do, to fill in the vast stretches of time, and to keep in shape. “Why shouldn’t I do both?” “Because they’re both careers for young men—too short-lived,” James’s voice informed him. “Be practical.” That was pretty funny, coming from James. Sammy thought. Now James was getting going on being a lawyer, and Sammy was letting his brother’s words blow away on the wind. He’d heard it all before, about a 4.0 average so you could get a scholarship to a good college; about the right major, something to do with history or political science, to prepare you for the three-year course in law school; about the best schools and the scholarships they offered to the best students. After that, the voice went on—Sammy had heard it all before—you just chose how you wanted to make your money. Government work was secure but paid the least. If you did corporate law, working for a big corporation, you earned big bucks but the job wasn’t that secure. Or you could work for a law firm, criminal law or property law, or handling wills and estates. You could do whatever you wanted, whatever you were good at, in a law firm, as you worked your way up to being a partner and taking a percentage of the firm’s earnings. With a law degree you could even go Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 95 95 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 96 into politics—although Sammy couldn’t see anybody voting for James. He didn’t think he would. “International law, international banking law,” James’s voice said. “I think I’d be good at that.” “I wouldn’t,” Sammy said. “I wouldn’t like something where you didn’t do anything.” James sputtered and Sammy was afraid he’d start explaining how important banking was, but he didn’t. James had heard the boredom in Sammy’s voice and reminded himself that Sammy was still young, still just a kid, only twelve. “What about your homework?” he asked. “What I don’t get done tonight I can finish on the bus.” James shrugged: Sammy just didn’t care about grades. He just didn’t know how important they were; he didn’t care about knowing things either. “You know,” Sammy’s voice said, “it always looks like the stars are coming out, even if they aren’t.” “They’re really suns,” James told him. He looked up at the sky then. It was black, silky black, with no moon yet so the suns burned clear out there. James picked out the constellations he knew: Orion, by his belt, he could always, always find Orion; the big dipper, like a geometric figure, like a rhomboid; the little dipper, a smaller rhomboid, his eyes searched it out. Then the North Star, Polaris. The Pleiades, the sisters, crowded together, the seventh sister burning faintly. “Every one of them is a sun, a mass of burning gases. Do you know how hot the sun burns?” “So what,” Sammy’s uninterested voice said. “Neither do I,” James admitted. He used to know, but he’d forgotten. Sammy’s laugh sounded friendly. “Tell you a story,” James offered. “You want to hear a story?” Sammy always liked being told stories. “Good-o.” James identified the story’s source, first. “This is from Greek mythology. There was an inventor, named Daedalus, a famous inventor. Everybody knew about him. So when King Minos of Crete wanted a labyrinth built—a maze—where he’d keep his son, the Minotaur, in the middle—” “I remember the Minotaur,” Sammy interrupted. “It was in my book of monsters. It was half man, half bull.” “Yeah. So Minos hired Daedalus to design and build this labyrinth. Daedalus took his son Icarus with him to Crete. But when the job was finished, Minos kept them prisoners in a high tower.” “Why?” Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 96 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED 22 23 “Because they knew how to get out of the maze and Minos wanted that to be a secret. In the tower, they had to haul their food up in baskets, and they had candles for light. The only things that could get into the tower were birds. They were prisoners there for a long time. There was no way to escape, but Daedalus figured out a way. See, when the birds flew in they’d shed their feathers. So he and Icarus collected the feathers. They stuck them together with wax, to make huge wings. When they had enough - it must have taken years—they were ready to fly out, away, to fly free. Before they left, Daedalus warned Icarus that he shouldn’t fly too close to the sun, because the heat of it would melt the wax that was holding the wings together. But Icarus didn’t pay attention. Or he forgot, maybe. Because when they were out and flying, he went up, and up, until the heat was too great. His wings fell apart and he fell—he fell out of the sky into the ocean. He drowned.” James never could tell a story the way it should be told; when he told it, he could hear it sound like a series of facts, like a history book, not like a story. “I can see why he did that,” Sammy said. “If you could really fly, you’d always want to go higher, once you started flying. Wouldn’t you?” Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Reprinted with the permission of Antheneum Books for Young Readers, an imprint of Simon and Schuster Children’s Publishing Division from Sons from Afar by Cynthia Voigt. Copyright © 1987 Cynthia Voigt. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 97 97 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED 98 At the beginning of the story, the conversation starts because — A. the stars are just starting to show B. James tells the story of Daedelus C. the king locks Daedelus in a tower D. Icarus flies too close to the sun 21. In paragraph 1, the author helps the reader learn about Sammy through — A. Sammy’s thoughts B. the narrator’s comments C. James’s thoughts D. Sammy’s actions 18. By limiting the setting of the story to James and his brother watching the stars together, the author helps the reader — A. learn about the stars B. relax and listen to the story C. understand how stars come out D. focus only on the two brothers 22. Information in the first paragraph leads the reader to understand that Sammy — A. has a powerful imagination B. is good at making friends C. does well in school D. follows directions well 23. In paragraph 10, the point of view shifts from — A. James’s thoughts to the narrator’s voice B. James’s thoughts to Sammy’s thoughts C. the narrator’s voice to Sammy’s thoughts D. Sammy’s thoughts to James’s thoughts 19. The excerpt begins at — A. sunrise B. midday C. twilight D. midnight 20. The first paragraph’s point of view helps the reader understand — A. how stars are formed B. the depth of space C. Sammy’s ideas D. James’s feelings Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 98 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 17. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED 24. Sammy’s approach to the stars is poetic, while James’s approach is — A. scientific B. curious C. disapproving D. disbelieving 26. According to the sequence of events, James offers to tell a story — A. before he tells Sammy about the stars B. after he talks to Sammy about law C. before he asks about Sammy’s homework D. after he tells Sammy about Icarus 25. Paragraph 16 states Sammy always liked being told stories. This statement describes Sammy by — A. showing the narrator’s actions B. Sammy’s speech C. giving the narrator’s comments D. expressing James’s thoughts 27. According to the sequence of events in James’s story, Icarus’ wings fall apart — A. after he flies too close to the sun B. before Daedalus designs the maze C. after he falls into the ocean D. before Daedalus escapes from the tower SHORT CONSTRUCTED RESPONSES Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Write two or three sentences to answer each question. 28. Explain one of the conflicts in the story that James tells. Then identify it as an internal or an external conflict. 29. Predict how James would respond to Sammy’s question at the end of the excerpt. Explain your response. Write a paragraph to answer this question. 30. Discuss how the author uses characterization to develop James’s character in Sons from Afar. Support your response with two examples from the excerpt. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 99 99 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED Read the following selections. Then answer the questions that follow them. Lifesaver John DiConsiglio 2 3 4 5 6 7 100 Having grown up in San Diego, California, Mack Lothian knows a lot about the beach—in particular, Newport Beach. He is aware that the best place to avoid crowds is three miles north of the jetty. The area is so deserted that lifeguards are stationed there only during the peak summer months. “It’s so peaceful out there,” Mack, 15, tells Choices. “You look around and all you see are miles of sand and water.” But on an April afternoon in 2004, Mack saw more than waves. He saw a little boy being swept out to sea, and Mack sprang into action to save him. Mack never expected to be a lifesaver. He had gone to the beach that day with other family members to relax. While his relatives were lying on the sand, Mack waded out into the water to bodysurf. He noticed two boys playing just a few yards from the shore. They seemed to be about 8 or 9 years old. As Mack floated nearby, he noticed a troubling sign in the water. On either side of the boys, steady waves lapped the shore. But the boys were standing in oddly calm water. Mack knew what that meant: rip current. Deadly Waters A rip current is a powerful flow of water away from the shore. It is caused by waves traveling from deep to shallow water. Sometimes those waves break in different ways. Some break strongly, others weakly. That makes the water move in narrow, fast-moving belts. The ground under the current can drop from 3 feet to more than 20 in one step. And the current can sweep you out to sea in as fast as 8 feet per second. Rip currents are deadly. More people die every year from rip currents than from shark attacks, tornadoes, lightning, or hurricanes. According to the United States Lifesaving Association, 80 percent of beach rescues are due to rip currents—and more than 100 people drown each year when they can’t escape the current. As Mack watched, the head of one of the boys bobbed under the water. Within seconds, the current started dragging him out to sea. Mack yelled out to the boy. When he didn’t answer, Mack swam toward him—right into the current. Mack grabbed the panicky boy’s arm and tried to calm him. They were about 15 yards from the beach, but Mack knew that the current could sweep them out 100 yards - the length of a football field—in minutes. Mack also Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 100 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 1 Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED knew the beach led to the mouth of the Santa Ana River. If the current pulled them into the powerful river, they might never make it back. He began to tread water and told the boy to grab his legs. They were going to swim to shore. 8 9 10 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 11 12 13 14 Treading Water Mack, who learned how to swim at age 4, knows how to swim in a rip current. “It’s useless to fight it and swim headlong to shore,” he says. “You won’t make any progress. The current will push you backward.” The boy kicked and flailed. Mack told him to hold on. But the current was too strong. Mack was getting tired and a little worried. They were moving out to sea fast. The boy jumped on Mack’s shoulders, pushing him into the water. Mack knew that swimming wasn’t the answer. The best thing to do, he realized, was to wait. Mack held the boy and assured him that everything would be OK. He kept treading forward in the current, allowing the water to slowly move him backward. “We were out there for maybe 10 minutes, but it seemed like 10 days,” Mack says. In the spring, few lifeguards patrol the beach. The current had already pulled them far away from Mack’s family. He began to wonder if anyone would ever find them. Finally, Mack saw a lifeguard Jeep along the shore. He called out and waved his right arm. “We’re going to be all right,” he told the boy. Within moments, a team of lifeguards with buoys made their way to Mack and the boy. The lifeguards took the boy to shore as Mack swam beside them. When the boy was safe, a lifeguard turned to Mack, but he was already gone. Worn Out Mack slowly walked along the beach toward his family’s camp. He dropped down on a towel, exhausted. “My arms and legs felt like lead,” he says. “I felt like I’d just run a mile” None of his family knew what had happened and Mack didn’t tell them. “That’s just Mack,” says his father, who’s also named Mack. “He never wants to take credit.” Soon, the lifeguard Jeep came by. The lifeguard told Mack that he had probably saved the boy’s life. “If you hadn’t gone out to get him, no one would have reached him in time,” the lifeguard said. Mack still doesn’t think of himself as a hero even after he won the U.S Lifeguard Association’s Heroic Acts Award. And he never saw the boy’s family again. “Lifeguards are the real heroes,” he says. “They do this stuff every day. I was just in the right place at the right time.” Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Reprinted with the permission of Antheneum Books for Young Readers, an imprint of Simon and Schuster Children’s Publishing Division from Sons from Afar by Cynthia Voigt. Copyright © 1987 Cynthia Voigt. Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 101 101 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED Rip Current Safety National Weather Service 2 3 4 5 6 102 Why Rip Currents Are Dangerous Rip currents are the leading surf hazard for all beachgoers. They are particularly dangerous for weak or non-swimmers. Rip current speeds are typically 1-2 feet per second. However, speeds as high as 8 feet per second have been measured— this is faster than an Olympic swimmer can sprint! Thus, rip currents can sweep even the strongest swimmer out to sea. Over 100 drownings due to rip currents occur every year in the United States. More than 80% of water rescues on surf beaches are due to rip currents. Rip currents can occur at any surf beach with breaking waves, including the Great Lakes. When Rip Currents Form Rip currents can be found on many surf beaches every day. Under most tide and sea conditions the speeds are relatively slow. However, under certain wave, tide, and beach profile conditions the speeds can quickly increase to become dangerous to anyone entering the surf. The strength and speed of a rip current will likely increase as wave height and wave period increase. They are most likely to be dangerous during high surf conditions as the wave height and wave period increase. Where Rip Currents Form Rip currents most typically form at low spots or breaks in sandbars, and also near structures such as jetties and piers. Rip currents can be very narrow or extend in widths to hundreds of yards. The seaward pull of rip currents varies: sometimes the rip current ends just beyond the line of breaking waves, but sometimes rip currents continue to push hundreds of yards offshore. Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 102 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 1 Why Rip Currents Form As waves travel from deep to shallow water, they will break near the shoreline. When waves break strongly in some locations and weakly in others, this can cause circulation cells which are seen as rip currents: narrow, fast-moving belts of water traveling offshore. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED How to Identify Rip Currents 7 Look for any of these clues: s A CHANNEL OF CHURNING CHOPPY WATER s AN AREA HAVING A NOTABLE DIFFERENCE IN WATER COLOR s A LINE OF FOAM SEAWEED OR DEBRIS MOVING STEADILY SEAWARD s A BREAK IN THE INCOMING WAVE PATTERN None, one, or more of the above clues may indicate the presence of rip currents. Rip currents are often not readily or easily identifiable to the average beachgoer. For your safety, be aware of this major surf zone hazard. Polarized sunglasses make it easier to see the rip current clues provided above. Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt How to Avoid and Survive Rip Currents 8 Learn how to swim! s .EVER SWIM ALONE s "E CAUTIOUS AT ALL TIMES ESPECIALLY WHEN SWIMMING AT UNGUARDED BEACHES If in doubt, don’t go out! s 7HENEVER POSSIBLE SWIM AT A LIFEGUARD PROTECTED BEACH s /BEY ALL INSTRUCTIONS AND ORDERS FROM LIFEGUARDS s )F CAUGHT IN A RIP CURRENT REMAIN CALM TO CONSERVE ENERGY AND THINK CLEARLY s $ONT FIGHT THE CURRENT 3WIM OUT OF THE CURRENT IN A DIRECTION FOLLOWING THE shoreline. When out of the current, swim towards shore. s )F YOU ARE UNABLE TO SWIM OUT OF THE RIP CURRENT FLOAT OR CALMLY TREAD WATER When out of the current, swim towards shore. s )F YOU ARE STILL UNABLE TO REACH SHORE DRAW ATTENTION TO YOURSELF FACE THE shore, wave your arms, and yell for help. If you see someone in trouble, get help from a lifeguard. If a lifeguard is not available, have someone call 9-1-1. Throw the rip current victim something that floats and yell instructions on how to escape. Remember, many people drown while trying to save someone else from a rip current. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 103 103 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED Use “Lifesaver” (pp. 232–233) to answer questions 31–40. Information in paragraph 8 lets the reader know that Mack — A. enjoys helping other people swim B. knows a lot about swimming in the ocean C. has studied all aspects of the ocean D. fears the strong waves in the ocean 32. According to the article, what is the reason water sometimes moves in narrow, fast-moving belts? A. Changes in water temperature B. Differences in the way waves break C. Patches of oddly calm water D. Waves traveling along the coastline 33. 34. 104 According to paragraph 10, the current resulted in — A. sweeping Mack and the boy farther away from shore B. attracting the attention of several lifeguards with buoys C. encouraging Mack to start swimming against it D. making the waves become choppy and white Which words in paragraphs 10 and 11 show that the two paragraphs are written in chronological order? A. 10 minutes, 10 days B. In the spring, slowly C. Kept treading, already gone D. Finally, within moments Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 104 35. Which statement is the best summary of paragraph 11? A. A lifeguard turned to Mack B. Mack hollered and waved C. A lifeguard Jeep was on the shore D. Lifeguards rescued Mack and the boy 36. According to the chronological order of events, the lifeguards talked to Mack — A. minutes before he swam back to shore B. soon after he found his family’s camp C. months after he received the award D. seconds before he met the boy’s family 37. What does the following line from the story tell the reader about the author? Mack Lothian knows a lot about the beach He thinks experience is important Swimming is his favorite leisure activity C. The beach is the most important place to be D. He wishes he were at the beach A. B. 38. The next time Mack sees someone caught in a rip current, he will probably — A. tell the person to swim toward shore B. look to see whether the water is calm C. swim with the current to save the person D. find the nearest lifeguard on duty Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 31. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED 39. Although he never sees the boy again after rescuing him, Mack will probably — A. remember the rescue for years to come B. become an Olympic swimmer C. try to contact the boy’s family later in life D. write a best-selling book about the incident 40. The lifeguards probably take the boy to shore first because — A. the boy is crying B. they know Mack is a good swimmer C. the boy’s mother asked them to D. they didn’t see Mack in the water Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Use “Rip Current Safety” (pp. 234–235) to answer questions 41–45. 41. Rip currents are likely to be most dangerous as a result of increased — A. wave height and period B. water temperature C. sandbar and beach depth D. tides and surf 44. After failing to swim out of a rip current, what should a swimmer do next? A. Call 911 B. Tread water C. Fight the current D. Call a lifeguard 42. Which statement is the best summary of paragraph 2? A. Olympic swimmers can swim fast B. Rip currents are dangerous when they move at high speeds C. Non-swimmers should always stay out of the water D. Scientists have measured the speeds of rip currents 45. Swimmers often drown in rip currents because — A. they don’t know how to swim well enough B. the water pulls them away from the shore C. the water is cold and choppy D. lifeguards cannot see the swimmers 43. Which sentence best describes the author’s opinion? A. Rip currents are safe only if you know how to handle them B. Surfing in rip currents is allowable if a lifeguard is nearby C. Rip currents are dangerous and should be avoided by everyone D. Slow or weak swimmers should use caution near rip currents Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 105 105 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED Use “Lifesaver” and “Rip Current Safety” to answer question 46. Which information do the two articles have in common? A. The story of a rescue in a rip current B. A list of tips for surviving a rip current C. How to recognize a rip current D. The name of a real-life hero Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 46. 106 Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 106 Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED SHORT CONSTRUCTED RESPONSES Write two or three sentences to answer this question. 47. Analyze the writer’s position about rip currents in “Lifesaver.” Support your analysis with one detail from the text. Write a paragraph to answer this question. Summarize the events in Mack’s rescue of the little boy in “Lifesaver.” Evaluate your summary by stating whether it includes all the important events. Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 48. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 107 107 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED Vocabulary Use context clues and your knowledge of prefixes and suffixes to answer the following questions about words in Fast Sam, Cool Clyde, and Stuff. 49. Which prefix can be added to the adjective satisfactory in paragraph 2 to form an adjective meaning “not suitable”? A. unB. disC. inD. re- 50. Which suffix can be added to the adjective academic in paragraph 2 to form an adverb that means “in a scholarly way”? A. -eous B. -ally C. -ness D. -ial 51. Adding the suffix -er to the word advise produces a word that means — A. quality of needing advice B. action or process of giving advice C. relating to advice D. one who gives or offers advice 52. Adding the prefix un- to the word wrap produces a word that means to — A. wrap again B. do the opposite of wrap C. wrap before D. almost wrap something 108 53. Which is the most likely meaning of corporation in paragraph 6? A. Government B. Criminal C. Company D. Factory 55. Which is the most likely meaning of constellations in paragraph 14? A. Geometric figures B. Groups of stars C. Visible planets D. Clusters of moons 54. Which is the most likely meaning of percentage in paragraph 6? A. Small fraction B. Free education C. Varying degree D. Honest attempt 56. Which is the most likely meaning of labyrinth in paragraph 18? A. Wing B. Monster C. Tower D. Maze Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 108 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Use context clues to answer the following questions about words in Sons from Afar. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED Use context clues and your knowledge of multiple-meaning words to answer the following questions about words in “Rip Current Safety.” 57. Which meaning of break is used in paragraph 1? A. Exceed a record B. Interrupt an activity C. Emerge above a surface D. Shatter into small pieces 59. Which meaning of wave is used in paragraph 5? A. Surge or rush B. Curved pattern C. Rising trend D. Ridge of water 58. Which meaning of sweep is used in paragraph 2? A. Carry away forcibly B. Destroy completely C. Brush lightly D. Pass over quickly 60. Which meaning of period is used in paragraph 5? A. Division of time in a sport or game B. Point at which something is ended C. Time between repeating events D. Punctuation mark indicating a full stop Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Use your knowledge of antonyms to answer the following questions. 61. Which word is an antonym for deserted in paragraph 1 of “Lifesaver”? A. Protected B. Busy C. Convenient D. Humid 62. Which word is an antonym for powerful in paragraph 4 of “Lifesaver”? A. Constant B. Deep C. Weak D. Hazy Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 63. Which word is an antonym for required in paragraph 5 of Fast Sam, Cool Clyde, and Stuff ? A. Difficult B. Commercial C. Creative D. Optional 64. Which word is an antonym for nonchalant in paragraph 19 of Fast Sam, Cool Clyde, and Stuff ? A. Concerned B. Willing C. Late D. Suspicious Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 109 109 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED Revising and Editing (1) Nature has always played an important role in my life. (2) Some of my fondest memories are of my parents’ farm, where I grew up. (3) I loved exploring the quiet ponds and peaceful woods, and I learn much about the natural world. (4) That farm will always have a special place in my heart. (5) Most days after school I would walk down a long dirt path that snaked through the grounds. (6) I would enter the big gate, I would cross a bridge to the far side of the pond. (7) On some days a blue heron would greet me. (8) Flapping noisily as she circled above. (9) The pond was always a calming place. (10) Closing my eyes, I would concentrate on the frogs’s croaking. (11) When I opened my eyes, I would take in the scenery. (12) There were bright yellow flowers perched atop clusters of large green lily pads. (13) Large, iridescent dragonflies flew through the air while other bugs flew around my head. (14) A falling leaf made concentric circles in the water. (15) Concentric circles are ripples. (16) Usually, I would stay on the path while asking myself am I lost? (17) Eventually, though, I would reach a large oak tree. (18) The old trees trunk formed a perfect seat where they split into three branches. (19) The seat was atop a large protuberance in the trunk. (20) A protuberance is a lump. (21) Bushy-tailed squirrels darted from tree to tree as fuzzy-capped acorns fall from the trees. (22) I would often take a pen and notebook from my schoolbag and carry it into the tree to write or sketch. (23) Around me I’d hear an owl say Hoo! Hoo! (24) Below me I’d smell fresh sap wafting. (25) I still have all of the stories and drawings I made while sitting in that tree. (26) I don’t live on that farm anymore. (27) My parents sold them and we moved to a big city. (28) Now I have a whole new set of sights and sounds to explore. (29) I’ll always remember the farm and what it taught me. (30) Those walks down the dirt path taught me to appreciate nature and brought out my creative side. 110 Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 110 Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Directions Read the descriptive essay and answer the questions that follow. Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED 65. The introduction is effective because it — A. describes an important event B. explains things that will be compared C. identifies the place being described D. establishes a serious tone 66. To correct the verb tense in sentence 3, change learn to — A. learned B. will learn C. learning D. had learned 67. Which words in sentence 5 are sensory details? A. Most days B. Dirt path C. After school D. Would walk Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt 68. What is the BEST way to rewrite sentence 6 so that it is no longer a run-on sentence? A. I would enter the big gate I would cross a bridge to the far side of the pond B. I would enter the big gate; so I would cross a bridge to the far side of the pond C. I would enter the big gate, I would, cross a bridge to the far side of the pond D. I would enter the big gate, and I would cross a bridge to the far side of the pond Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 69. What is the BEST way to revise sentences 7 and 8 to avoid having a sentence fragment? A. On some days a blue heron would greet me flapping noisily as she circled above B. On some days a blue heron would greet me; flapping noisily as she circled above C. On some days a blue heron would greet me, flapping noisily as she circled above D. On some days a blue heron would greet me flapping, noisily as she circled above 70. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 10? A. Change frogs’s to frogs’ B. Change frogs’s to frogs C. Change frogs’s to frog’s D. Make no change 71. Which transition word could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 11? A. However B. Then C. Therefore D. Although 72. Which words in sentences 11–12 demonstrate sensory details? A. opened my eyes B. take in the scenery C. atop clusters of D. bright yellow flowers Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 111 111 73. Which words in sentence 13 demonstrate sensory details? A. Large, iridescent dragonflies B. flew through the air C. while other bugs D. flew around my head 74. What is the BEST way to combine sentences 14 and 15? A. A falling leaf made ripples and concentric circles in the water B. Falling concentric circles made ripples in the water C. Concentric ripples fell into the water D. A falling leaf made concentric circles, or ripples, in the water 75. 112 What is the CORRECT way to punctuate sentence 16? A. Usually, I would stay on the path while asking myself, “Am I lost?” B. Usually, I would stay on the path, “While asking myself, Am I lost?” C. Usually, I would stay on the path while asking, “Myself, am I lost”? D “Usually, I would stay on the path while asking myself, Am I lost?” 76. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 18? A. Change trees to tree’s B. Change trees to trees’s C. Change trees to trees’ D. Make no change 77. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 18? A. Change they to he B. Change they to it C. Change they to you D. Make no change Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 112 78. What is the BEST way to combine sentences 19 and 20? A. The seat was atop a large protuberance and lump in the trunk B. The seat was atop a large protuberance in the trunk, a protuberance is a lump C. The seat was atop a large protuberance, or lump, in the trunk D. The seat was atop a large trunk, a protuberance in a lump 79. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 21? A. Change fall to fell B. Change fall to will fall C. Change fall to had fallen D. Make no change 80. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 22? A. Change it to its B. Change it to him C. Change it to them D. Make no change 81. What is the CORRECT way to punctuate sentence 23? A. Around me I’d hear an owl, “Say Hoo! Hoo!” B. Around me I’d hear an owl say “Hoo! Hoo!” C. Around me I’d hear an owl say, “Hoo! Hoo! D. Around me I’d hear an owl say, “Hoo! Hoo!” 82. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 27? A. Change them to her B. Change them to me C. Change them to it D. Make no change Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 BENCHMARK TEST 1 CONTINUED 83. Which transition word could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 29? A. Therefore B. However C. Instead D. Furthermore 84. The conclusion is effective because it — A. explains why the farm is important to the writer B. provides additional details about how the farm looked C. introduces a new idea about the writer’s argument D. describes what the farm is like many years later Writing Directions Read the following quotation. Then read the prompt that follows and complete the writing activity. “The two most engaging powers of an author are to make new thingsfamiliar, familiar things new.” Copyright © Holt McDougal, a division of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt William Makepeace Thackeray Prompt: Write an essay that compares and contrasts two familiar people or things. As Thackeray suggests, you have the power to consider your subjects in a new or different way. Explore alternative ways of viewing your subjects as you compare and contrast them. Now write your essay. Use the reminders that follow to help you write. Reminders s s s s s s "E SURE YOUR WRITING DOES WHAT THE PROMPT ASKS #LEARLY STATE THE PEOPLE OR THINGS BEING COMPARED AND CONTRASTED )NCLUDE A FOCUSED THESIS STATEMENT $ISCUSS SIMILARITIES AND DIFFERENCES BETWEEN THE SUBJECTS 3UPPORT KEY IDEAS WITH EVIDENCE #HECK FOR CORRECT GRAMMAR SPELLING AND PUNCTUATION Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 Unit and Benchmark Tests Benchmark Test 1, Units 1–2 113 113 114 Assessment File Grade 7 Assessment File Grade 7 115 116 Assessment File Grade 7 800.462.6595 holtmcdougal.com +RXJKWRQ0LIIOLQ+DUFRXUW3XEOLVKLQJ&RPSDQ\$OOULJKWVUHVHUYHG3ULQWHGLQWKH86$06= +ROW0F'RXJDOLVDWUDGHPDUNRI+0+3XEOLVKHUV//& 3RZHU1RWHV DQG7HDFKHU2QH6WRSDUHWUDGHPDUNVRUUHJLVWHUHGWUDGHPDUNVRI+0+3XEOLVKHUV//&