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Model Answer
Writing Task 1
The first bar chart provides information about the major reasons of study in different age
groups from under 26 to over 49. Overall, the students who study for career shows downward
trend and those who study for interest shows upward trend. 80% students under the age of 26
study for career but as they grow in age, this reason loses its impact and falls to the lowest
almost 20% for the people over 49. On the other hand, the students under 26 don’t have
interest for study but as they grow in age, this reason gets strong in them and reaches to
approximately 70% for people over 49.
The second bar chart depicts the information about employer’s financial support for the
students. Overall, employer gives maximum support under the age of 26 and minimum support
between the ages of 30-39 years old. The support in fees between the ages of 26-29 is more
than the ages between 40-49 and above.
Writing Task 2
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have leisure time from
studying after finishing high school. Either they are motivated to work or travel and enjoy sightseeing. The forthcoming lucid arguments will attempt to indelibly identify the merits and
demerits of the given thesis.
First of all, if young people do some job, it will give them a good experience. It will improve
their efficiency to perform day to day activities. It will also improve their knowledge as well as
confidence. But it may happen that they will fall to some bad company such as smoking and
drug addiction.
Second of all, if young people travel around to see historical places and hill stations, it will give
them recreation. They will also feel excited and get exclusive information about the sight.
However, it will cost them a lot of money and suffer from homesickness.
To sum up afore said points and instances are pretty enough to make things clear that every
young man decides according to interests and desires. My all commentary could never be
ultimate to this specific thesis that they are encouraged to work or travel. It might have more
other dimensions and definitions in its narration.
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