Revision Plan
Which of the feedback that you received from peer editing was the most useful?
Why was this feedback helpful?
The most useful feedback is that i should use more sources or evidence
Because i also think that i need to interview more students who is one of members
in CUSA or students who benefits from CUSA
How will you use this feedback to help you make revisions to the paper?
Interview more students
What was the most useful thing that you learned from reading and commenting on
your peers’ essays? How can you use this new knowledge to help you revise your
own work?
Two of my classmates gave me a specific revision plan ideas that i have never
received before. Actually, as for me, i am not good at commenting on others’ essay,
so i did not give such detailed comments that they gave me.
And i am going to use more sources and evidence, and pay attention to my format
Is there something that you wish you’d gotten feedback on, but didn’t?
No
What area of your paper do you think is the strongest at this point? Why?
I use my personal experience to show CUSA’s function that makes it easier for
audience know what CUSA is.
What area of your paper is the weakest? Why? What can you do to strengthen this
part of your paper?
To make my paper criticized.
What resource from D2L will help you most with your revisions? How will it help
you?
Evidence and Analysis
MLA and APA format
Help me work on my format effectively and make my paper criticized