GCSE Poetry ‘War Photographer’ by Carole Satyamurti Photo courtesy of (@flickr.com) - granted under creative commons licence - attribution Learning Objective • To analyse ‘War Photographer’ by Carole Satyamurti in detail. Success Criteria • To understand the social and historical context of the poem. • To analyse the language, context, structure and form of the poem, in order to develop a deeper understanding of its meaning. • To consider ways the poem could be compared and contrasted with others in the anthology. Icons This lesson, we will be studying a poem called ‘War Photographer’ by Carole Satyamurti. What is a war photographer? A war photographer is a type of photojournalist: they take photographs of people and events during wars. What do you think ‘I want to show the best andare worst challenges and face ofthe humankind.’ (‘The Shot That experienced Nearly Killed Me’, dilemmas by The Guardian: war photographers? https://www.theguardian.com/media/ 2011/jun/18/war-photographersspecial-report) Carole Satyamurti Take Notes Carole Satyamurti is an award-winning poet who is interested in the links between psychology and writing, and how and why we tell stories about ourselves. Born in 1939, she has written many collections of poetry and has won prestigious competitions including the National Poetry Competition, the Arts Council Writers’ Awards and the Cholmondeley Award. Her poems often take everyday events or moments and use them as a basis for deeper thought and ideas. She recently translated the ancient Indian narrative ‘The Mahabharata’, an epic poem of over 200,000 lines which tells the story of a great war but also offers philosophical insights. Satyamurti has lived in North America, Singapore, Uganda and the UK. First Reading: Glossary Read the poem. Do you know the meaning of these words found within the poem? Absurd: Ridiculous; unreasonable. Ascot: (Royal Ascot) a lavish horse-racing event held in Berkshire. Prevailing: being the most powerful; over-riding everything else. Gilded: covered in gold. Arbitrary: Random; without reason. First Reading: Ideas What is the main message or idea of the poem? Imagery Satyamurti gives two very different examples of photographs in this poem. Super What are the two different photographs? Stretching What are the different connotations of the photographs? Stellar What is the irony of the caption accompanying the second image? The Big Question: What is the significance of the final image of a blood stain on a wall? Language, Form and Structure Read the poem out loud, then annotate using these questions as a guide: Form and Structure Language • The poet talks about heaven and hell in her poem. Can you identify words or phrases which sit in either category? What do they tell you? • Look at the punctuation in the poem – how is it used and to what effect? • Which words or phrases conjure up the horrors of war for the reader? • Can you identify any specific language techniques and explain their effect? • • • What two ideas are juxtaposed within the poem and how does the poet use structure to achieve this? Is there a specific rhyme or rhythm to the poem? Why/why not? How does the end of the poem link back to the beginning? Pause for Thought Why do you think the poet leaves it until the last few lines to reveal her relationship with the couple? Comparisons What are the central ideas or themes in Satyamurti’s poem? Could these be compared with other poems from the ‘Conflict’ cluster in your poetry anthology? The horrors of war. Rich versus poor. The frailty of humanity. Retelling or reporting on war. Emotional and physical conflict. Consolidating Notes Now, use your At a Glance sheet to record your findings from this lesson. Ensure you fill in all four sections of the sheet with as much detail as possible – this will be a useful revision resource! Photo courtesy of (@flickr.com) - granted under creative commons licence - attribution