Research/Analysis Rubric Name:_____________________ Circle essay choice: IS1 IS2 Sparks Achieving 7 - Appropriate tone is used throughout to show awareness of audience and purpose. There is no use of slang, contractions, or personal pronouns. Developing 4 - Appropriate tone is generally used, though there may be a lapse or two. Effort is made to maintain formal tone. Thesis 10 - A clear, complete thesis statement exists stating a relevant, arguable analytical point. If writing about literature, the author’s name(s) and text(s) are identified in the introduction. 7 - One element is missing. Beginning 1 - Overall, the tone of the piece is inappropriate. There may have been personal references, the use of conversational language, or slang and/or contractions. 4- Two or more elements are missing. Analysis 15 - Every point connects directly to the thesis. Each point is clearly, thoroughly explained. Evidence 8 - All student ideas are supported with EXTENSIVE textual evidence throughout the body of the writing. Citation 10 - Each quote/paraphrase is properly cited with the author’s last name and/or page number/act.scene.line for drama (if available) in parentheses AND matches a source in Works Cited. 10 - All cited quotes are smoothly, logically embedded in the author’s sentences. 10 - There is an attempt at explaining the thesis, but the explanation is unclear, limited, or inaccurate in places. 4 - Textual evidence are not good choices as support or too few to provide enough support. 7 - Quotes/paraphrasing is improperly cited, though an effort is made to assign credit to the author. 5 – The student ideas do not clearly support the stated thesis, the student explanation is weak, or the student’s analysis is a misread of the text. 1 - The explanation veers into summary of the text (too much text) or it is missing textual evidence for support. 4 - Little to no evidence of avoiding plagiarism. Quotes are uncited, perhaps even undocumented as borrowed text at all. 7 - Quotes are embedded, but it may be done awkwardly or redundantly. 4 - Quotes float alone entirely or function as their own sentences. 7 - One element is missing. 4 - Two or more elements are missing. 7 - Only a few or non-distracting errors exist. 4 - Multiple and/or distracting errors exist. 14 - An attempt at MLA formatting is made, but several errors exist. 7 - A list of sources is provided but not in MLA format, the format has multiple errors, or sources are missing. 0 – no sources listed = plagiarism Formal Tone Integration Organization Conventions Works Cited 10 - A clear organizational strategy creates a logical flow of ideas, including the following: - engaging, strategic introduction - specific and relevant transition words/phrases between and within paragraphs - strategic, relevant conclusion 10 - Standard American English conventions reasonable for this level are followed throughout, including MLA format. 20 - Works Cited for all sources used in text is correct in format, spacing, and punctuation according to current MLA guidelines; no evidence of plagiarism. Extra Credit for STYLE: creative, original language; fluency (flow) of sentences, especially engaging but still formal tone, etc. No credit = element entirely missing; writing is off topic, illegible, plagiarized, or not enough writing to assess