18085991 Review

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Abstract (max 300 words)
A concise summary of the whole
report.
Introduction
Clearly introduce the topic to be
discussed and state aims and
objectives.
Description and analysis of the
subject
Demonstrate that appropriate and
varied (Books, Journals,
Conferences – not just the
Internet) sources of information
have been investigated.
Appropriate critical analysis of
source material
Conclusions
Clear summary and conclusions
drawn on the information
presented.
Presentation
1500-2000 words
Presented clearly and in a logical
manner.
Correct and concise use of English.
Correct use of citation guidelines.
Reference points in the text and a
full list of references at the end of
the document. Harvard (author
name/date) or IEEE (numbered)
system acceptable.
Correct use made of sections and
headings.
Appropriate diagrams and tables.
Total
General Comments
Marks Comments
18085991.pdf
3/5
The abstract sort of covers the relevant points of
the review. No need to mention from what sources
the information comes from as it should be clear
from the way it is referenced.
3/5
Clear introduction to the topic. I think that using AI
to deliver services and supply to remote areas is
only one aspect, and other applications should be
discussed.
10/20 Some points of the analysis contradict each other
first is said that patients are willing to use AI and
afterwards is said they don’t trust it. No other
applications of AI are discussed except its use in
remote communities. No varied opinions are given
from other researchers or critical analysis of the
literature from the author. Too much in text
citations. It will be better if the content of the
literature is summarised in the author’s own
words.
3/5
The conclusion is not delivered very clearly. No
need to mention other sectors as the topic is only
health.
8/15
Good structure of the report. Correct use of
referencing. When a website is used should say at
what date was accessed as the information tend to
change on the web. A lot of grammar mistakes.
May be English is a second language? The use of
shorter sentences will make it easier to understand
the author’s thoughts. No diagrams or tables used.
The saying is that “a picture is a thousand words”.
It might have been helpful.
27/50
Some work needs to be done on using concise and
correct English.
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