__ .......__ Schools Session Summaries: Units of Study Small Moments: Personal Narrative Writing (K-2) In this unit, children learn to take the everyday events of their lives and make them into focused, well-structured stories--doing their very best to communicate those stories through pictures and through more and more writing. Unit Targets Students will be able to: • stretch important moments and actions across several pages. • "zoom-in" on one small part of a story and stretch it across the page. • plan writing a story with a writing partner. • tell a story to a writing partner by touching each page. • say a word slowly, stretch it out, and write all the sounds heard. • sketch a story rather than draw it. • plan a detailed story by saying it aloud before writing it. • tell a story across 5 fingers to make sure it has a beginning, middle, and end. • tell a partner a story and use the actual words that they will write. Then they will listen to them tell their story. • write words they know in a "snap" and for words they don't know they will use the word wall for help. • zoom in on the most important part of a story just like a photographer. • write what they were feeling and thinking in the story. • write endings that stay close into the moment. • read partner's writing and help them fix it up. • celebrate. PREFACE: A committee of instructional coaches and teachers with deep understanding of and experience with Units of Study, have created one page summaries of each writing session with clear targets. They want to emphasize, however, that they are not a substitute for reading the lessons; they are a guide to help teachers when planning and teaching. And they are working documents-feel free to revise them and make them your own. In addition, the following support materials have been created for you: • • • • A grade to grade scope and sequence. State Standards student tracking sheets for each grade level. An alignment of State Standards to Units of Study Anchor papers for each grade: this is what a proficient writing sample is. Providing writing instruction for students is a collaborative effort of K-12 teachers. It is important that each teacher uses our core writing program. A core curriculum allows students to build on what they learned the year before. Consistency in language, formats, and models allows students to focus on deeper understanding of concepts and skills. What a student did last year connects to what he is doing this year. The second or third time a student experiences a unit of study, keener insights lead to a more thorough transfer of skills to their writing. Teachers also know what concepts were taught. Writing samples can be passed on from grade to grade. Ellen Chaimov, Jennifer Darlington, Dawn Relin, Kari Tunstill, Kalei Ostreim Jessica Orth, Jennifer Dove Kiltow, Bev Guttag, Rose O'Brien, Vicki Beraka Tara Black, Gary Peterson Units of Study and English Language Learners: Before the Mini-Lesson Teach brief pre-mini-lessons (5-7 min.) for English-Learners prior to the whole-class minilesson to introduce new vocabulary, sentence frames, language structures, organization or other information. To make this manageable, keep in mind: • Pre-mini-lessons are not needed before every mini-lesson (use them as needed to teach key vocabulary, specific writing/editing skills, introduction to new writing genres, etc.) • On days that you do teach a pre-mini-lesson, have the rest of the class rereading their writing with their partner during this time. This benefits the rest of the class by reminding students of the prior day's writing as well as providing students with a focus for continuing their writing during the current day's workshop. Mini-Lesson • Use examples of experiences you KNOW students have had (e.g. use the example of your class field trip on the bus rather than an airplane ride to Disneyland). • When modeling writing for students during your mini-lesson, add sketches whenever possible to aid comprehension. e.g. sketch/label new vocabulary, sketch your "small moment" story, use pictures and/or realia • If you are using a graphic organizer, model its use step-by-step. • Use a lot of wait time as EL students will need to process the spoken and written English of the mini-lesson prior to making personal connections for their writing. • In addition to verbal and written directions, it is critical for English-Learners that you provide a clear model of the directions. Keep in mind the multiple modalities of all learners, and use best practices to provide directions in the modality and frequency that meets each student's learning-style. After the Mini-Lesson • Provide students with sentence frames to start their writing, and post the sentence frames in a place where students can see them from their desks. Model for students how the sentence frames can be used to write about the content displayed on charts throughout the room. • Check-in daily with English-Learners as they head out to Writing Workshop to make sure that they have a focus for writing and that they understand the day's directions. • Give students a choice of topics, but provide support for students in making their choice so that they are picking topics that fit with the language they know. • Engage students with real world purposes. e.g. writing a letter to a family member, writing a story to read to a younger sibling, retelling stories they have heard or read, etc. Writing Workshop • Allow students to brainstorm/plan in their first language, rather than in English, as this may be the best way to get their ideas flowing. This could look like: o Peer conferencing with a buddy who speaks same native language o Brainstorming lists of topics in native language; use picture files and books in native language to help generate ideas o Completing a graphic organizer in native language • When the curriculum suggests assigning writing partners, pair English-Learners with someone they will feel comfortable sharing/speaking with, and also with someone who will provide a good model of spoken English; in this situation the best partner for an English-Learner is not necessarily another student of the same native language. • Personal Word Walls (Lucy Calkins Writing/or Readers: Teaching Skills and Strategies, K-2 Unit 3, pg. 57) can be effective tools for English-Learners when they are created for individuals rather than used with table groups. Individual students can add sketches or prompts to their word walls to aid their comprehension. • Set student-specific writing goals or develop a student-specific editing checklist. Select one to two editing goals to focus on at a time. • Allow beginning English-Learners to write in their native language, to represent ideas pictorially and with labels, and to dictate their writing to the teacher or other adult. Eventually they might be willing to share the dictation orally (during the After the Workshop Share), and then perhaps even write the simple story themselves. • Keep expectations high, but modify assignments and expected outcomes to accommodate for students' language proficiency levels. If the only way a student can complete an assignment is with significant 1: 1 support, then the assignment is neither appropriate nor meaningful. • Make use of other adults to provide multiple opportunities for feedback and student writing conferences, but ensure adults have been trained in conferring with writers. • Help advanced EL students to refine their writing, spot errors, and expand their vocabulary. After the Workshop Share • Celebrate students' writing, as well as the individual writing proficiency levels of each student. It is okay to publish and celebrate writing that is not perfect and/or writing-in-progress. • Allow sharing options: • Share in native language • Share in a small group or with a partner • Share with younger students • Choosing not to share or choosing to have the teacher share for them Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 1 Lesson Title: Understanding a Small Moment Target: I can stretch important moments and actions across several Dages. Connection Celebrate that your students have been writing stories from their lives!! Teaching Point Today we are starting a new unit of study. "Together we're going to learn how writers take Small Moments from their lives and stretch them out turning Small Moments into stories that cross several pages." Remind students of A Chair for My Mother. "Today let's notice the way Vera takes a Small Moment and stretches it across the pages." Tell students that Vera Active Engagement Link Mid Point Lesson could have written it quickly but instead stretched out the moment by telling us tiny details. Have student think of the tiny details the author added. Tell a friend the details and share out whole group. Encourage students to write Small Moments like the author from the exemplar text. Remind them to use the books so that they can try and stretch it out across three pages. None Materials Needed: • Pre-read A Chair for My Mother or another Small Moment book. Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 2 Lesson Title: Discovering One Small Moment Target: I can "zoom-in" on one small part of my story and stretch the story across the page. Connection Teaching Point Active Engagement Link Mid Point Lesson Remind students of the story you read yesterday and how that was an example of an author who took a Small Moment and turned it into a story. "Today, I'll show you how I write Small Moments in my life because all of you will be doing that, too." List for students what you could write about, being very general. Show students instead how you are going to zoom in on one small part. Tell students you can picture it like a movie in your head. List what came first, next and last. Tell the story across pages in a sample booklet. Have students notice what you did as a writer and generate a list of observations, which will then become an anchor chart you will use throughout the unit. Review the Writing Small Moments list and remind students that, "Today and everyday you'll be doing all these things." Before sending them off to write have students close their eyes and remember the moment they are writing about. Stop students and celebrate a student who is sticking with one piece, adding more to it, and stretching it out. Remind them that old lessons need to be relearned over and over. If students feel like they are stuck they can go back and review previous mini lessons or conferences so that they can finish one piece and/or start another one without helQ. Materials Needed: • A personal story that is unfocused and that you can zoom in on. Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 3 Lesson Title: Establishing Long-Term Partnerships Target: I can plan my writing with a writing partner. Connection Teaching Point Active Engagement Link Mid Point Lesson Have students sit next to their assigned partners and materials. Tell students that as well as markers, pens, paper, etc. they also need a writing partner to plan their writing. Model for students working with their partner, sitting knee to knee, eye to eye, and asking, what did you write about yesterday? etc. Are you done or will you add to your story today? Have student's practice turning and talking to their partner. Students will work alone for about 20 minutes before rejoining their partner. You might say, "Writers, all your life you are going to want to have conversations like this one in which you share and plan writing." Students take turns reading their writing to a partner and then talk about their writing. Have each partner ask, "Will you add on or are you done?" The writer should say the exact words they will write. Materials Needed: • Assigned spots • Assigned partnerships Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 4 Lesson Title: Stretching One Small Moment Target: I can tell my stOry to my writing partner by touching each page. Connection Teaching Point Active Engagement Link Mid Point Lesson Celebrate what students have done over the past few days of writing. Remind students about the story, The Kissing Hand by Audrey Penn. Tell students that they will see her moment cross several pages just as theirs will. Reread an excerpt from The Kissing Hand. Have students listen for how Audrey Penn stretched the moment out over several pages, telling it long. Model for students stretching out the story across pages in your booklet, reinforcing working with a partner. Have students notice and make observations about what you did. Remind students to plan their stories and tell them to their partner, touching each page as they do. Remind students of the chart they compiled of what writers do. (Reference the Writing Small Moments chart.) Read aloud the chart and ask students to raise their thumb if they've done it, or point to a place in their writing where the work is. Materials Needed: • Booklet • The Kissing Hand (Audrey Penn) • A Small Moment story to share with the class Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 5 Lesson Title: Stretching and Writing Words Target: I can say a word slowly, stretch it out, and write all the sounds I hear. Connection Teaching Point Tell students that writers say words they don't know, slowly stretching the word out and writing all the sounds they hear. Tell students the purpose of this is so others can read their writing. Tell students the story from your picture and demonstrate writing words, saying the word slowly, stretching it out and writing down the sounds. Active Engagement Pass out white boards to students. Have them help you with a word you are planning on writing in your story. Have them use the strategy of, Say/Stretch/Write. Link "Today and everyday, use the strategy of saying the word, stretching it out by saying it slowly, and then writing one sound. Reread what you've written so far and say the rest of the word slowly, listening for the next sound you hear. Use this strategy so that people can read your words." None Mid Point Lesson Materials Needed: • An oversize booklet with pictures drawn with a Small Moment from your life. Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 6 Lesson Title: Sketching Rather Than Drawing Target: I can sketch my story rather than draw it. Connection Teaching Point Active Engagement Link Mid Point Lesson Tell students that you have been reading their writing and have noticed that some of them have great pictures that tell a great story that has no words. "Today I'm going to teach you a special kind of drawing that writers use when we want to save time for writing words. We call it sketching." We sketch to have time to write our words and draw our story. Draw, using detail, a picture from the story that you are going to tell/write today. Emphasizing that you are drawing in contrast, tum to a clean page and sketch the same picture in 30 seconds or last. Say to students, "Writers sketch so they still have time to write." Add, "Writers sketch the story on their paper" to the Small Moments anchor chart from the first lesson. Get a fresh booklet, tell your story verbally, and quickly sketch your story to model for students. Have students think about what they are going to write about today. Have students pretend they have a booklet in front of them. Have them whisper what they are going to write and sketch on their pretend booklet. Remind students that they can picture in their minds what they will write, and then what they'll sketch, not draw. Have students check in with their partners about the amount of writing they have done so far. Students should check with their partners to see if they have written more words than the previous day. If not, then the response should be, "You gotta write!" and partners should help in getting started writing words down. Materials Needed: • Small Moments anchor chart • Small Moments story Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 7 Lesson Title: Planning Details Target: I can plan a detailed story by saying it aloud before I write it. Connection Remind students that writers plan stories with the details included. Teaching Point Remind students of a shared experience that they have had. Plan out loud how you would write about that experience. Be sure to touch each page as you say the story aloud. Have the students tell their partner one or two details that you could add to your story to make it better and have them share out with the class. Active Engagement Link Mid Point Lesson Remind students that when writing their Small Moments they want to think about something that has happened to them, picture it in their mind, and then, before writing, tell a partner the story with details. Plan together how the story will go and then sketch and write it across the pages. None Materials Needed: • An example of a shared class experience Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 8 Lesson Title: Internalizing Story Shapes Target: I can tell a story across my 5 fingers to make sure I have a beginning, middle, and end. Connection Tell students that they have been finding stories to write about everywhere in their everyday lives. Teaching Point Sometimes we get ideas for stories that we aren't necessarily writing about but that would make a really good story. "Writers find stories everywhere in our lives, and we hold onto them until we can write them down. Today I'm going to teach you how writers catch story ideas." Active Engagement Link Mid Point Lesson Materials Needed: Model for students how you can take a story out of your pocket and then tell that story across your fingers, one finger for each part of the story. "Later, you can always reach your hand into your pocket and take out a story. And you have a story-helper, too, because you pull your story out like this (model). Watch how I tell a story across my fingers." Have students think about the story they are writing or going to write and have them tell their story across their fingers to their partners. Listen in so that you can reinforce your teaching to the whole group. Suggest if students are ready to begin a new piece, it might help to tell the story across their fingers first to make sure there is a beginning, middle and end. None Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 9 Lesson Title: Storytelling With Partners Target: I will tell my partner my story and use the actual words that I will write. Then I will listen to them tell their story. Connection Review with students that yesterday they told stories to their partner by telling the story across their fingers Teaching Point . "Today, I'm going to teach you how to be great writing partners. There are two things you must learn. The first is how to do a good job when it is your turn to tell a story. The next is how to do a good job when it's your turn to listen." Active Engagement Link Mid Point Lesson Teach students that instead of summarizing the story they plan to write, they should say the actual words they will use in the story. Ask a student to join you to model what this looks like. Give them an example of a story where you summarize and then with your student partner, give an example of what this story sounds like using the words you will actually use when you write. Then model what it looks like to be a good listener. (You might choose to first model what it looks like to be a poor listener.) Examples should include, facing the storyteller, eyes planted on the storyteller, occasional nodding, smiling at funny parts. Have students practice the jobs of storytellers and listeners. Invite students to plan out stories. "It's time to resume your writing. I know some of you are in the middle of stories and some are starting new ones. If you are starting a new story, please plan it out with your partner. I'm going to admire ways partners talk and listen with each other." Stop students and point out examples of partners that are telling stories and listening well. Have students who are doing well model for the rest of the class what it is that they are saying to each other. Say to the students, "Would you be sure your partnership work goes just as well?" Materials Needed: • An example of a story you can share with kids across your fingers. Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 10 Lesson Title: Writing Some Words in a Snap Target: I will write words I know in a "snap" and words I don't know I will use the word wall for help. Connection Tell students that you are going to teach them a strategy that will make writing a long story a little easier. Teaching Point Tell students that when they are writing they will sometimes come to words they know right away, "words you know in a snap." They can write these quickly. Other times they will come to words with which they will struggle. Model for students in your own story 'writing words in a snap' and then come to a word of which you are not sure. Model for students listening for the sounds you hear in the word and then refer to the word wall to find that word. Repeat the process of writing a sight word and referencing the word wall. Have students use white boards to practice this skill. Active Engagement Link Mid Point Lesson "When you are writing and you write words you know, write them fast. Don't bother to stretch them out. Instead, 'snap and write it.' If it's a word you almost know, check the word wall, and then 'write it with a snap'." None Materials Needed: • A story you will share • White boards Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 11 Lesson Title: Focusing on the Most Important Part Target: I can zoom in on the most important part of my stOry just like a photographer. Connection Teaching Point Active Engagement Link Mid Point Lesson "Today I'm going to teach you that writers are like photographers." Make connections between taking pictures with a camera and zooming in and how writers can do the same thing. "I'm going to show you how writers like photographers zoom in on the most important parts of the story. When you zoom in you see things more closely." Tell a list-like unfocused story about a big thing in your life. Have students make observations about your story. Then using the same idea, tell them a zoomed in story using your hands as a model for zooming in. Have students open up their writing folders and look at the story they worked on the previous day. Have them ask, "Is this a big story or a zoomed in story? If it's big, would you tell your partner how you could zoom in?" When you write today and everyday, think about being a photographer and think about zooming in on the most important parts of your story. Remind students that when they come to a difficult word to use the strategy of saying it slowly, writing down the sounds, and rereading. Materials Needed: • An unfocused story to tell • The focused version Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 12 Lesson Title: Revealing Internal Stories Target: I can write what I was feeling and thinking in the story. Connection Remind students that they have been writing small moments and stretching them out to make them long. Teaching Point Tell students you are going to teach them a strategy so they can say more about their small moment. "I'm going to show you that you can write what happened. That's called the outside story. Your feelings and thoughts about what happened are called the inside story." Active Engagement Link Mid Point Lesson Read aloud the exemplar piece that tells not only what happened but the feelings as well. Ask students what they noticed. Have students tum and talk with a partner about what they noticed. Remind everyone in the classroom of a shared event. Have students tell the inside story and the outside story to that event to their partner. "When you write today, and from now on, you can tell what happened and also what you felt and thought." None Materials Needed: • Exemplar piece of writing either from a student or the attached piece. • Shared classroom event Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 13 Lesson Title: Writing Close-In Story Endings Target: I can write endings that stay close into the moment. Connection Teaching Point Compliment students on all their writing and suggest that as you're reading you're let down when it comes to an ending that's out of the moment. "Today we'll learn to write endings that are as wonderful as your stories." "What you do now is that you usually write endings that jump away from the small moment." Active Engagement Link Mid Point Lesson Give an example such as, then we had lunch or then we went home. Tell students that they will get a better ending if they stay close to the moment. Retell that story and have students brainstorm possible endings that stay close into the moment. Give the suggestion that it could be what they thought or felt. Tell the class that you need help writing the ending based on a shared experience. (The same shared story you've been working on in previous lessons) Retell the shared story and have students talk to their partner and plan a close-in ending. Have students share. Tell students that if it's time to end their story they can ask themselves, "How can I write a good ending?" Tell them from now on they are not allowed to end a story with, then I went to lunch, then I went home, or then I went to sleep. None Materials Needed: • Shared story the teacher will tell and end with then we had lunch or then we went home. Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 14 Lesson Title: Revising and Editing with Partners Target: I can read my partner's writing and help them fix it up. Connection Have students choose the piece they are going to publish and tell students they are going to work with their partner to fix it up. Teaching Point Tell students, " The job of their partner, (their editor), is to go through the piece before it is published and tell them how to fix it up." Show the poster titled, How to Fix Up a Piece. Invite students to be your editor and show a short, three-sentence story that students can relate to and ask them to be your editor. Read the story multiple times to have students think, Does this make sense? How can we fix it? Could we add to this? Tell students they can also help with spelling. Have another example of a short piece that needs editing Active Engagement with enough copies for every partner to have. Have partners read through the example and practice being editors. Link Send students off to edit their work with their partner. Mid Point Lesson None Materials Needed: • Poster titled How to Fix Up a Piece • Another example of a short piece that needs editing with enough copies for every partner to have. Unit: Small Moments Lesson # 15 Lesson Title: Reading Aloud for Visitors: An Author's Celebration Take time to celebrate your students' writing in a special way. One idea would be to have a comment sheet for older students to write their comments. Encourage students to give oral and written comments. The Hug and Kiss r OY' r on ~s s i+it\) L~r qnlZ wo,.s LYh \t\' ..,.~ y- Stl 0 Ir-, Htr Before bed my mom gave me a hug and a kiss. I was sitting on her lap and I was lying on her shoulders. So r f~ltt- I felt so comfy. 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I was sitting on her lap and I was lying on her shoulders. I felt so comfy. May be copied for single dassroom use. Q2003 by lUCY Calkins and Beth Neville. from Resources for Primary Writing. Units of Study for Primary Writing: A Yearlong Curriculum. lucy Calkins, Heinemann: Portsmouth. NH , S.cI .. "tL.l:x= !.l0Ke yp "if\{ M't '6 iLt fist 1" :r S'hou+id Very L•...,dly as I J,M<pt Dr! No.y MoM CaMe a.sct S~e ne My b gd lhM j0 My ROolVo, .rWM joit) ~ .n.. jd M¥ /i;¢ ,fl O (. ~iL-r . in t;K,V.ndo . Wfl.fs So C:~i~ j''''l? .r-\ V Bi L+ f,at My 'BOI..-t t;d, I It was Thursday morning. Suddenly I woke up. "It's my belt test!" I shouted very loudly as I jumped on my bed. Then my mom came into my room. She asked me what's so exciting? "My belt test! My belt test!" I was so proud of myself. I was going to get my high yellow belt in Tae Kwon Do! May be copied for single dassroom use. C2003 by Lucy Calkins and Beth Neville. from Resources for Primary Writing. 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