November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 WG11 Comments on 802-19 PAR submission Nov 2009 Date: 2009-11-17 Authors: Name Affiliations Address Phone email Jon Rosdahl CSR Highland, UT +1-801-492-4023 jrosdahl@ieee.org Submission Slide 1 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Abstract These Comments for 802.19 on the proposed PAR under consideration by the 802 EC for Nov 2009 Plenary represent the official set from 802.11 WG. In some cases a straw poll was conducted and the results are indicated where a question on the level of support for the comment was made. The Official motion to submit this set of comments/issues was passed 7 yes, 0 no, 6 abstain. Submission Slide 2 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 802.19 new standard for TV white space coexistence mechanisms, PAR and 5 C • Questions – Issues to 802.19 • 2.1 Title: Standard for Information Technology Telecommunications and Information Exchange Between Systems - Local and Metropolitan Area Networks Specific Requirements - Part 19: TV White Space Coexistence Mechanisms – Situation #1: Title includes “Coexistence Mechanism”, – Problem: The PAR and 5C does not define what “Coexistence Mechanism” is. – Suggested Fix: In the PAR and 5C define what “Coexistence Mechanism” really is. • Straw Poll: Submit to .19: 14 yes, 2 no, 11 abstain Submission Slide 3 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 IEEE 802.19 Response (1) • Response – We agree that a definition of “Coexistence Mechanism” is lacking in the PAR. We will add such a definition in the Explanatory Notes section. Additional detail is provided in response to the Technical Feasibility comment. We have changed the term “coexistence mechanisms” to “coexistence methods” • Changes – In 8.1 Explanatory Notes we added a definition of coexistence methods. Submission Slide 4 Steve Shellhammer, Jon Rosdahl Qualcomm (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (2) • 2.1 Title – Situation #2: The title specifies that this a Standard. – Problem: We do not believe it should be Standard. The level of evidence provided for Feasibility in the 5C does not justify a Standard • The 5C does not identify any existing proven similar “coexistence mechanisms” in any unlicensed bands. – Suggested Fix. Make this PAR for a Recommended Practice to provide 802.19 group an opportunity to demonstrate the feasibility • A Recommended Practice has a trial use aspect that should be addressed. • Typically the technical rigor that is employed in creating documents increases as you go from Guides -> Recommended Practices -> Standards. • Strawpoll: submit to .19 – 9 yes 6 no 13 abstain Submission Slide 5 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 802.19 Response (2) • Response – We disagree that this should be Recommended Practice. We believe that a Recommended Practice will do little to promote coexistence in the TV band. An 802 Standard for coexistence will provide the market a toolset for enabling coexistence among their systems. – We agree that additional material could be added to the Technical Feasibility section of the 5C – In the 802.11 TVWS PAR it states in the Explanatory Notes that 802.11 will coexist with other networks and hence it seems that 802.11 believes that coexistence is feasible • Changes – In the Technical Feasibility section of the 5C additional detail has been added Submission Slide 6 Steve Shellhammer, Jon Rosdahl Qualcomm (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (3) • 3. The PAR and 5C subject matter do not match. – The content of the 5C do not relate to the PAR • 4. 5C - Technical Feasibility – The responses to the 3 points are non responsive. The technical details are not given, or shown by example. • 11-09/1107r0 (https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/09/11-09-1107-00-tvwssome-802-11-comments-on-802-19-par-and-5c.pdf) • 5. 5C – Economic Feasibility – The response does not address what the cost factors are nor if there is economic feasibility that has been demonstrated. • 6. 8.1 – 5.5 need explanation – The Claim is made in the PAR that Quality of Service is improved for all participants. In unlicensed bands, that is not technically feasible. There is not enough bandwidth to provide independent control of QoS. Submission Slide 7 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (3) • 3. The PAR and 5C subject matter do not match. – The content of the 5C do not relate to the PAR Submission Slide 8 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 802.19 Response (3) • Response – 802.19 disagrees that the 5C does not match the PAR – 802.19 acknowledges that the 5C needs additional text on technical feasibility • Change – Will add additional material on technical feasibility in the 5C Submission Slide 9 Steve Shellhammer, Jon Rosdahl Qualcomm (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (3) • 4. 5C - Technical Feasibility – The responses to the 3 points are non responsive. The technical details are not given, or shown by example. • 11-09/1107r0 (https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/09/11-09-1107-00tvws-some-802-11-comments-on-802-19-par-and-5c.pdf) Submission Slide 10 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 802.19 Response (3a) • Response – 802.19 acknowledges that the 5C needs additional text on technical feasibility • Change – Will add additional material on technical feasibility in the 5C Submission Slide 11 Steve Shellhammer, Jon Rosdahl Qualcomm (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (3) • 5. 5C – Economic Feasibility – The response does not address what the cost factors are nor if there is economic feasibility that has been demonstrated. Submission Slide 12 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 802.19 Response (3b) • Response – 802.19 acknowledges that additional text needs to be added to the economic feasibility section of the 5C • Change – Added text to economic feasibility section of 5C Submission Slide 13 Steve Shellhammer, Jon Rosdahl Qualcomm (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (3) • 6. 8.1 – 5.5 need explanation – The Claim is made in the PAR that Quality of Service is improved for all participants. In unlicensed bands, that is not technically feasible. There is not enough bandwidth to provide independent control of QoS. Submission Slide 14 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 802.19 Response (3c) • Response – We acknowledge that QoS may not be improved for all participants, though QoS for most participants may be improved – We believe that the coexistence mechanisms will improve QoS for the majority of participants • Change – Will change “all” to “most” Submission Slide 15 Steve Shellhammer, Jon Rosdahl Qualcomm (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (4) • 7. The PAR does not justify the need for a Standard. – Suggesting a Messaging system rather than a physical system. – Power consumption considerations. – Data plane system that does not change the MAC/PHYs, so the relative rates that are needed to match for communication between the disparate systems is not shown. • 8.Confusion on what the proposed PAR will actually change? – It is not clear if 802.19 is going to propose another MAC/PHY or just provide a layer-3 and above specification. • 9. Title is very ambiguous as to what the “Coexistence Mechanism” really are? – Is this requiring a new MAC/PHY or changes to existing 802 WGs. Submission Slide 16 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (4) • 7. The PAR does not justify the need for a Standard. – Suggesting a Messaging system rather than a physical system. – Power consumption considerations. – Data plane system that does not change the MAC/PHYs, so the relative rates that are needed to match for communication between the disparate systems is not shown. Submission Slide 17 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 802.19 Response (4) • Response – We disagree that the PAR does not justify the need for the standard, even if it is only a messaging system. A messaging system requires standardization so that all devices can interoperate – The toolset provided by the standard to the market will allow device manufacturers and network operators to select the right tradeoffs (e.g. power consumption) for their systems • Change – No changes to PAR required Submission Slide 18 Steve Shellhammer, Jon Rosdahl Qualcomm (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (4) • 8.Confusion on what the proposed PAR will actually change? – It is not clear if 802.19 is going to propose another MAC/PHY or just provide a layer-3 and above specification. Submission Slide 19 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 802.19 Response (4a) • Response – A messaging system above the MAC layer will be provided in the standard – To support sensing only devices, which do not have backhaul connectivity, coexistence methods may be included in the standard – Some specific MAC/PHY capabilities (e.g. DFS) may be required in the individual MAC/PHY standard in order for the devices to adapt so as to reduce interference between systems – The standard is not a new MAC/PHY standard • Change – Change the phase in the title “coexistence mechanisms” to “coexistence methods” – Added language to Explanatory Notes expanding on the scope Submission Slide 20 Steve Shellhammer, Jon Rosdahl Qualcomm (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (4) • 9. Title is very ambiguous as to what the “Coexistence Mechanism” really are? – Is this requiring a new MAC/PHY or changes to existing 802 WGs. Submission Slide 21 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 802.19 Response (4b) • Response – We acknowledge that the term is not precise enough and additional material is needed • Change – In the title the term “coexistence mechanisms” has been replaced by “coexistence methods” – Additional detail on the coexistence methods is provided in the explanatory notes section Submission Slide 22 Steve Shellhammer, Jon Rosdahl Qualcomm (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (5) • 10. From the 5C the following statement needs to be clarified as to what changes to the 802 WGs are going to be targeted. – This standard will not require changes to any existing 802 MAC SAP definitions, ensuring that all LLC and MAC interfaces are compatible to and in conformance with the IEEE 802.1 architecture, management and internetworking standards. • 11 – It is implied that a Standard will be imposed on all the 802 WG after ratification, and what changes may be required is unknown. – Provide more detail on what the expectation is that justifies this being a Standard rather than a Recommended Practice. Submission Slide 23 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (5) • 10. From the 5C the following statement needs to be clarified as to what changes to the 802 WGs are going to be targeted. – This standard will not require changes to any existing 802 MAC SAP definitions, ensuring that all LLC and MAC interfaces are compatible to and in conformance with the IEEE 802.1 architecture, management and internetworking standards. Submission Slide 24 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 802.19 Response (5) • Response – This section of the 5C is on compatibility with higher layers – We plan to be compatible with higher layers – The standard will provide a toolset that will leverage MAC/PHY capabilities at defined in the respective MAC/PHY standards • Change – No change required Submission Slide 25 Steve Shellhammer, Jon Rosdahl Qualcomm (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Questions – Issues to 802.19 (5) • 11 – It is implied that a Standard will be imposed on all the 802 WG after ratification, and what changes may be required is unknown. – Provide more detail on what the expectation is that justifies this being a Standard rather than a Recommended Practice. Submission Slide 26 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 802.19 Response (5a) • Response – There is nothing in the PAR/5C that implies this standard would be mandated on any of the 802 working groups – 802 produces standards, standards are not mandated on any group or individual • Change – No change required Submission Slide 27 Steve Shellhammer, Jon Rosdahl Qualcomm (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Rebuttal 1 – From your response, we are confused, in one place you say it is not mandated, but in another you claim that it would be required. Please Clarify how this would be implemented at the standards setting process. Slide 26 (19-09/96r0) – There is nothing in the PAR/5C that implies this standard would be mandated on any of the 802 working groups – 802 produces standards, standards are not mandated on any group or individual Slide 20 (19-09/96r0) – Some specific MAC/PHY capabilities (e.g. DFS) may be required in the individual MAC/PHY standard in order for the devices to adapt so as to reduce interference between systems Submission Slide 28 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Rebuttal - 2 • 1900.4a is an existing project in SCC41 on Coexistence methods . Why is 802.19 necessary then? – As noted in PAR section 7.1, 1900.4a is of similar scope. – 1900.4a provides coexistence facilities that can be used by wireless devices in the TVWS. – What is the benefit that will be achieved from the 802.19 effort above what is provided in 1900.4a? – If the IEEE 802 Wireless groups were compliant with 1900.4a would that be sufficient? • The presentations listed in the Technical Feasibility are not either demonstrated system feasibility nor proven technology nor confidence of reliability. – Are there any other documents that do address this topic. Submission Slide 29 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 Rebuttal - 3 • 802.11 WG Suggestion for improvement to the Purpose statement in order to address the concern of forced compliance: • The current 802.19 PAR states: • 5.4 Purpose: The purpose of the standard is to enable the family of IEEE 802 Wireless Standards to effectively use TV White Space by providing standard coexistence methods among dissimilar or independently operated TVBD networks and dissimilar TVBDs. This standard addresses coexistence for IEEE 802 networks and devices and will also be useful for non IEEE 802 networks and TVBDs • Recommend that the scope change to: • 5.4 Purpose: The purpose of the standard is to provide standard coexistence methods among dissimilar or independently operated TVBD networks and dissimilar TVBDs to effectively use TV White Space, some or all of which may be adopted by any of the family of IEEE 802 Wireless Standards. Submission Slide 30 Jon Rosdahl (CSR) November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/1219r1 References • https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/09/11-09-1197-000000-review-802-pars-underconsideration-for-novplenary.ppt Submission Slide 31 Jon Rosdahl (CSR)