November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Responses to Comments on 802.22 PAR Modification IEEE P802.22 Wireless RANs Authors: Name Company Wendong Hu STMicroelectronics Victor Tawil MSTV Address 1060 East Brokaw Road, San Jose, CA 95131 Washington, DC Date: 2009-11-17 Phone 1-408-467-8410 email Wendong.hu@st.com vtawil@mstv.org Notice: This document has been prepared to assist IEEE 802.22. It is offered as a basis for discussion and is not binding on the contributing individual(s) or organization(s). The material in this document is subject to change in form and content after further study. The contributor(s) reserve(s) the right to add, amend or withdraw material contained herein. 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Submission Slide 1 Wendong Hu, STM November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Outline • Comments from and responses to 802.11 • Comments from and responses to 802.16 Submission Slide 2 Wendong Hu, STM Month Year doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Abstract • This document provides responses to comments received on the 802.22 PAR and 5C modification to clarify scope Submission Slide 3 Wendong Hu, STM Month Year doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Comments from 802.11 Submission Slide 4 Wendong Hu, STM Month Year doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Questions and Responses to 802.11 • Question 1: Doc. 11-09/1106 discusses possible issues with the PAR and 5C submitted by Peter E • Response: Accept document • Proposed Resolution – See document IEEE 802.22. 09-235 addressing the questions and comments in doc.11-09-1106 Submission Slide 5 Wendong Hu, STM November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Questions and Responses to 802.11 • Question: Problem- Dates for completion are not realistic. The dates need to be corrected (we suggest that the dates of Start Sponsor 12-2012 and RevCom 12-2013 would be more realistic/acceptable.) Response: Reject comment Explanation No significant effort is anticipated for addressing the requirements in the modified PAR. The date of initial sponsor ballot is expected to be 072010 and Revcom is 07-2011. • Question - The form presented was not the correct PAR form. The PAR modification form should be used. Response: Accept comment Proposed Resolution Will use the right form: Submission Slide 6 Wendong Hu, STM November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Questions and Responses to 802.11 • Question: Scope 5.1 This standard specifies the air interface, including the cognitive medium access control layer (MAC) and physical layer (PHY), of point-tomultipoint wireless regional area networks comprised of a professional fixed base station with fixed and portable user terminals operating in the VHF/UHF TV broadcast bands between 54 MHz and 862 MHz. – Issue 4: “professional fixed base station” should be “professionally installed fixed base station” – (insert the word “installed”) Response: Accept comment Proposed Resolution Modified document Submission Slide 7 Wendong Hu, STM November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Questions and Responses to 802.11 • Question: 8.1 other comments– Issue 5: Remove the following text as it is no longer necessary/needed from the end of the first paragraph: • “The IEEE 802.18 Study Group chartered to develop this PAR does not believe that any existing IEEE 802 PHY/MAC combination can meet these requirements without extensive modifications. The Study Group has therefore concluded that placing the project in a new Working Group is the most efficient approach..” Response: Accept comment Proposed Resolution Modified document • Question: 5c: Distinct Identity A – Issue 6: This text fails to distinguish among 802.16h, which will be an approved amendment in early 2010, and 802.22 and the efforts proposed in the 802.22.3 PAR. Add distinctions between each of the three. Be aware that 802.16h clause 6.3.2.3.86 does report DTV, wireless microphones and other licensed users. Response: Accept comment Proposed Resolution Modified document..See changes in the revised PAR/5C document Submission Slide 8 Wendong Hu, STM November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Questions and Responses to 802.11 • Question: 5C Technical Feasibility – – Issue 7: There is no experience of WLAN devices operating under the control of fixed outdoor devices reliably, and indeed the question of reliable operation without common control is an issue in every unlicensed band. Response: Accept comment Proposed Resolution: Modified text to clarify this statement • Question: 5C Economic Feasibility – – Issue 8: Not all devices are autonomous, indeed the FCC ruling requires that Master Devices contact the TV bands database before any transmission is allowed. Change this text to include operation with a TV bands database. Response: Accept comment Proposed Resolution: Modified text to clarify this statement Submission Slide 9 Wendong Hu, STM November 2009 doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Questions and Responses to 802.11 • Question:2.1 Title: – Issue 9: The Title is in properly formed. Prior to the “Part 22” it is should be the consistent boilerplate that all 802 Standards have. Then after the “Part 22” it should have what designates this to the 22WG and then the specific title part for the covered technology Response: Accept comment Proposed Resolution: Modified title to conform with 802.Standards Submission Slide 10 Wendong Hu, STM Month Year doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Comments from 802.16 Submission Slide 11 Wendong Hu, STM Month Year doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Questions and Responses to 802.16 • Question: scope to be clarified as follows - (text in Blue) – “This standard specifies the air interface, including the medium access control layer (MAC) and physical layer (PHY), of fixed point-to-multipoint wireless regional area networks comprised of a fixed base station with for fixed and portable user terminals operating in the unlicensed VHF/UHF TV broadcast bands between 54 MHz and 862 MHz (TV Whitespace).” Response: Accept in part and reject in part Proposed explanation/Resolution – 802.22 WG disagrees with the reinsertion of the word “fixed”. By supporting portable user terminals in 802.22, the wireless regional area networks can not be considered as fixed from the regulatory point of view. 802.22 WG agrees with the rest of the suggested changes. Submission Slide 12 Wendong Hu, STM Month Year doc.: IEEE 802.22-09/0236r0 Questions and Responses to 802.16 • Question: Section 19. Additional Explanatory Notes-The following statement is not clear – “Item 4: “Wireless Regional Area Network” (“WRAN”) - a point-tomultipoint network for operation over large, potentially sparsely populated areas (e.g. rural areas) for fixed user terminals, taking advantage of the favorable propagation characteristics in the VHF and low UHF TV bands as well as for portable user terminals operating over a likely smaller area with sufficient margin to the fixed base station.” What does “sufficient margin to the fixed base station” imply? Shouldn’t Item 4 also address interference requirements for portable devices as well? Response: Accept comment Proposed Resolution – Modified text to make it clear Submission Slide 13 Wendong Hu, STM