A/HRC/WG.13/2/CRP.1
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Human Rights Council
Open-ended intergovernmental working group
on a draft United Nations declaration on the right to peace
Second session
30 June – 4 July 2014
Compilation by the Chairperson-Rapporteur of proposals
made during the second session of the open-ended
intergovernmental working group on a draft United Nations
declaration on the right to peace on his new text presented in
accordance with Human Rights Council resolution 23/16
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Contents
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Compilation of proposals made by States ...............................................................
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Compilation of proposals made by non-governmental organizations and other
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I. Compilation of proposals made by States
Preamble
The General Assembly,
PP1. Guided by the purposes and principles of the Charter of the United Nations,
PP2. Guided also by the Universal Declaration of Human Rights [United States of
America: delete reference to Covenants here] [Republic of Korea: add after UDHR “other
international human rights instruments including ICCPR and ICESCR”] [Australia: add
after UDHR “as a common standard of achievement for all peoples and all nations as well
as international human rights law including as applicable the ICCPR and the ICESCR”]
and the International Covenants on Civil, Political, Economic, Social and Cultural
Rights as a common standard of achievement for all peoples and all nations, [United
States of America: add “and recalling ICCPR and ICESCR”] [Egypt/Russian
Federation: PP2 as it stands]
[Russian Federation: include a reference to the 1984 General Assembly Declaration;
supported by Uruguay, Pakistan, Costa Rica, Egypt, Venezuela (Bolivarian Republic
of); not supported by the United States of America: and the European Union]
[Egypt: include a reference to “the principles of international law on friendly relations and
cooperation among States”]
[Indonesia new PP2 bis: “Reaffirming the Declaration on Principles on International Law
concerning Friendly Relations and Cooperation among States in accordance with the
Charter of the United Nations”, supported by Venezuela (Bolivarian Republic of)]
[Costa Rica: include reference to res. 33/73 of 1978 - Declaration on the Preparation of
Societies for Life in Peace; supported by Cuba]
[Sri Lanka new PP2 ter: “Recalling the Declaration on Measures to Eliminate
International Terrorism annexed to General Assembly resolution 49/60 of 9 December
1994, in which, inter alia, the Member States of the United Nations solemnly reaffirm their
unequivocal condemnation of all acts, methods and practices of terrorism as criminal and
unjustifiable, wherever and by whomever committed, including those which jeopardize the
friendly relations among States and peoples and threaten the territorial integrity and
security of States”]
[Russian Federation: include reference to the right to development; supported by
Venezuela (Bolivarian Republic of); Algeria; Cuba]
[Russian Federation: group all PPs on political declarations; supported by Algeria; Costa
Rica; Cuba (but retain PP3); United States of America; European Union]
PP3. Recalling the determination of the peoples of the United Nations [United States of
America “to practice tolerance and”] live together in peace with one another as good
neighbors in order to save succeeding generations from the scourge of war,
[Indonesia: add “to reaffirm faith in fundamental human rights, and to promote social
progress and better standards of life in larger freedom” and delete the rest] and to take
appropriate measures to strengthen universal peace, [Tunisia: “maintain international
peace and security”] [United States of America delete “measures”] [Algeria: does not
support the merging of PP3 and PP4]
PP4. Recalling that the friendly relations among nations are based on respect for the
principle of [Sri Lanka: “sovereignty and territorial integrity of States and”] equal rights
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and self-determination of [Morocco: add “all”] peoples [Morocco: add “including
indigenous peoples”] [United States of America: add “and to take other appropriate
measures to strengthen universal peace and to achieve”] [Morocco: add “and the national
territorial integrity and political independent of States”], and [United States of America:
delete “and”] international cooperation to solve international problems of [Tunisia:
add “a political, territorial,” delete “an”] an economic, social, cultural or humanitarian
character and to promote and encourage [Tunisia: replace “encourage” by “facilitate”]
respect for human rights and fundamental freedoms for all, [European Union: keep
PP as is]
[Morocco new PP: “Recalling that the promotion and enjoyment of peace is endangered by
the lack of respect for the human rights of individuals and groups [reference to “human
rights of individuals and groups” not supported by United States of America] including
national, ethnic and cultural minorities, in particular their right to self-determination.”
[Russian Federation/United States of America: stick to existing language regarding
minorities] [Algeria: inclusion of a reference to indigenous people and minorities should be
made on the basis of the agreed and consensual existing languages.]
[Algeria: Acknowledging that the Charter of the United Nations, the International
Covenant on Economic, Social and Cultural Rights and the International Covenant on Civil
and Political Rights, as well as the Vienna Declaration and Programme of Action affirm
the fundamental importance of the right to self-determination of all peoples, by virtue of
which they freely determine their political status and freely pursue their economic, social
and cultural development,]
[Indonesia reformulate PP4: “Recalling also the determination of the peoples of the United
Nations to develop friendly relations among nations based on principles in the Declaration
on Principles on International Law concerning Friendly Relations and Cooperation among
States in accordance with the Charter of the United Nations, to maintain international
peace and security and to achieve international cooperation to solve international
problems of an economic, social, cultural or humanitarian character, and to promote and
encourage respect for human rights and fundamental freedoms for all”.]
[Egypt: new PP4 bis (based on article 2.4 Charter of the United Nations): “Reiterating that
all Members shall refrain in their international relations from the threat or use of force
against the territorial integrity or political independence of any state, or in any other
manner inconsistent with the Purposes of the United Nations”]
[Algeria: new PP4 bis: “Underlining that the subjection of peoples to alien subjugation,
domination and exploitation constitutes a denial of fundamental rights, is contrary to the
Charter and is an impediment to the promotion of peace and cooperation”]
[Algeria new PP4 ter: “Convinced of the aim of creating conditions of stability and wellbeing, which are necessary for peaceful and friendly relations among nations based on
respect for the principle of the equal rights and self-determination of people”]
[Algeria new PP (flexible placement): “Reaffirming the importance of ensuring respect
for the purposes and principles of the Charter and international law, including sovereignty,
territorial integrity and political independence of States”]
[Brazil new PP5: “Recognizing that peace is not only the absence of conflict, but also
requires a positive, dynamic participatory process where dialogue is encouraged and
conflicts are solved in a spirit of mutual understanding and cooperation”]
PP5. Recalling also that [United States of America “recognition of”, supported by
Russian Federation] the inherent dignity and of the equal and inalienable rights
[Republic of Korea “and freedoms”; not supported by Russian Federation] of all
members of the human family is the foundation of freedom, justice and peace in the
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world, [Tunisia: add “and that freedom, justice and peace are prerequisite for the
enjoyment of dignity and of inalienable rights by all members of the human family”]
PP6. Recalling that disregard and contempt for human rights [Republic of Korea:
“and freedoms”] have resulted in barbarous acts which have outraged the conscience
of mankind,
PP7. Recalling in particular that everyone is entitled to a social and international order
[Tunisia: “orders” or “social and international environments”] in which the rights and
freedoms set forth in the Universal Declaration of Human Rights can be fully realized,
[Uruguay: add “human rights and fundamental freedoms”]
PP8. Recalling that the Vienna Declaration and Programme of Action stated that all
human rights are universal, indivisible, interrelated, interdependent [United States of
America instead “interdependent and interrelated”] and mutually reinforcing [United
States of America delete “and mutually reinforcing”], and that [United States of
America add “the international community must treat” and delete “all”] all human rights
must be treated [United States of America delete “must be treated”] in a fair and equal
manner, on the same footing and with the same emphasis, [Russian Federation: move
reference to VDPA up and keep rest; change “recalling” to “reaffirm”]
PP9. Recalling that peace and security, development and human rights are the pillars
of the United Nations system and the foundations for collective security and wellbeing, and recognizing that development, peace and security and human rights are
interlinked and mutually reinforcing,
PP10. Recalling the world commitment to eradicate poverty and promote sustained
economic growth, sustainable development and global prosperity for all [Brazil: “add
and the need to reduce inequalities within and among countries”],
PP11. Recalling that the full and complete development of a country, the welfare of
the world and the cause of peace require the maximum [United States of America:
replace “maximum” by “full”] participation of women on equal terms with men in all
fields,
PP12. Recalling the importance of prevention of armed conflict in accordance with the
purposes and principles of the Charter and [United States of America: add “of”] the
commitment to promote a culture of prevention of armed conflict as a means of
effectively addressing the interconnected security and development challenges faced
by peoples throughout the world,
[Brazil: include a reference to the importance of multilateralism]
[Indonesia new PP12 bis: “Recalling the importance of the settlement of disputes or
conflicts through peaceful means”]
PP13. Recalling that the Human Rights Council shall contribute [United States of
America “contributes” instead of “shall contribute”], through dialogue and cooperation,
towards the prevention of human rights violations [Tunisia: add “abuses”] and [United
States of America “prompt responses” instead of “respond promptly”] respond promptly
to human rights emergencies, [Russian Federation/Uruguay: redraft PP to make it more
general and not focus on one subsidiary body of the General Assembly]
PP14. Recalling also [United States of America “the preamble of the constitution of
UNESCO which stated”] that the wide diffusion of culture, and the education of
humanity for justice and liberty and peace are indispensable to the dignity of man and
constitute a sacred duty which all the nations must fulfil in a spirit of mutual
assistance and concern,
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PP15. Recalling the United Nations Declaration on Human Rights Education and
Training, which proclaimed that everyone has the right to know, seek and receive
information about all human rights and fundamental freedoms and should have
access to human rights education and training,
PP16. Recalling the Declaration and Programme of Action on a Culture of Peace,
which recognized that [United States of America: add “a”] culture of peace is a set of
values, attitudes, traditions and modes of behaviour and ways of life based on, among
others, the full respect for and promotion of all human rights and fundamental
freedoms [Brazil: add “including the right to development”], [Russian Federation: move
PP15 and PP16 further up]
PP17. Inviting solemnly all stakeholders to guide themselves in their activities by
recognizing the supreme importance of practicing tolerance, dialogue, cooperation
and solidarity [Indonesia add “as well as peaceful settlement of disputes or conflicts”;
supported by Mexico] among all stakeholders as a means to promote world [Tunisia:
delete “world”] peace [United States of America add “and respect for” and delete
“through”] through [Tunisia: add “the realization of all”] human rights and to end,
reduce and prevent progressively [Tunisia: change position of progressively, “to
progressively end, reduce and prevent”] war [Colombia: include “armed conflict”,
supported by El Salvador] and armed violence [Colombia: add “in order to build
sustainable peace”; supported by El Salvador], in particular, by observing the
following: [Russian Federation: PP17 is action oriented, therefore redrafted or moved to
OP; Uruguay: could be a chapeau for everything that follows]
Article 1
[Indonesia: “the right to peace is an inalienable right by virtue of”; supported by
Venezuela (Bolivarian Republic of); not supported by United States of America;
Republic of Korea; European Union] Everyone [Indonesia: add “and peoples”] is
entitled to the promotion, protection and respect [European Union: rather “enjoyment”;
supported by Indonesia] for all [United States of America: replace “all” by “their”]
human rights and fundamental freedoms, in particular [United States of America:
replace “in particular” by “including”] the right to life [Pakistan: “for the realization of
which peace and freedom from fear or threat of aggression is fundamental”], in a context
[European Union: re-phrase, since it suggests that the rights are only enjoyed in this
context] in which all [United States of America delete “all”; not supported by Indonesia]
human rights [Australia: add “are fully implemented and”], peace and development
[Australia: “are promoted” and deleted the rest] are fully [United States of America:
“respected and promoted” rather than “implemented”] implemented. [European Union:
“achieved” rather than “implemented”]
[Tunisia alternative text: “Everyone has an inalienable right to live in peace and dignity
and is entitled to enjoy all human rights and fundamental freedoms, including right to life,
and to evolve in national and international environments where human rights are protected
and where justice, democracy and development are promoted”]
[Cuba addition to art.1: “Individuals, groups and peoples have the inalienable right to a
just, sustainable and lasting peace”, supported by Venezuela (Bolivarian Republic of);
not supported by United States of America; Republic of Korea; European Union]
[Sri Lanka: include spirit of art. 1 of 1984 General Assembly Declaration: “Solemnly
proclaims that the peoples of our planet have a sacred right to peace”]
[Costa Rica: Declaration on the preparation of societies for life in peace: “Everyone is
entitled to a social and international order in which human rights and fundamental
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freedoms, including the right to life in peace are respected, promoted and protected and
mutually reinforced with the full achievement of peace and development.”]
[European Union: “Everyone is entitled to the full enjoyment of their right to life that
should be attained in a context where human rights are fully respected and peace and
development promoted”; interesting proposal United States of America]
[United States of America: alternative text “States are responsible to respect, promote and
protect human rights and fundamental freedoms, [Mexico: “as well as the social and
international context in which all human rights, peace and development are fully
implemented [part supported by Uruguay] to which every individual is entitled” and delete
the rest; interesting proposal United States of America] including the right to life, as the
foundation of freedom, justice and peace in the world”]
[Russian Federation: update PP4 of 1984 General Assembly Declaration: “Life without
war serves as the primary international prerequisite for the material well-being,
development and progress of countries, and for the full implementation of the rights and
fundamental human freedoms proclaimed by the United Nations”]
Article 2
States should enhance [Indonesia replace “enhance” by “promote”] [Tunisia: rather
“guarantee enjoyment of”] the principles of freedom from fear and want, [Tunisia: add
“, dignity,”, supported by United States of America] equality and non-discrimination
and justice [Tunisia: add “, democracy”, supported by United States of America] and
rule of law [European Union add “participation, transparency and accountability”,
supported by United States of America] [Pakistan add “with a focus on development”,
supported by Venezuela (Bolivarian Republic of); Cuba] [Russian Federation: prefer
more general language, and reflection of all 3 pillars] as a means to build peace within
societies [Venezuela (Bolivarian Republic of): full stop after societies and add “In this
regard states should adopt measures to contribute to the right of peoples to live in peace.”]
[Tunisia: add “between and among societies”; supported by Mexico; Indonesia]. [Brazil:
add “True peace is also built on an enlarged sense of development, as emancipation and
fulfillment of multidimensional human aspirations. In order to address the root causes of
threats and challenges to peace, States should consider the relevant economic, political and
social dimensions of conflict.”] In this regard, States should undertake measures
[Indonesia add “and affirm their commitment”] [Russian Federation: call on States to
undertake measures not supported] to bring about, maintain and enhance conditions of
peace [Uruguay: include “the full enjoyment of human rights”], particularly to benefit
people in need in situations of humanitarian crises [Russian Federation: not single out
a particular context] [Uruguay: include an explicit reference to human dignity; supported
by Tunisia]
[United States of America proposal of alternative language, supported by European
Union: “States should promote the protection of all human rights and fundamental
freedoms through non-discrimination, equality and rule of law and strive to meet the
aspirations of freedom from fear and want, as a means to build a foundation of freedom,
justice and peace within their societies. In this regard, States should undertake measures to
bring about, maintain and enhance conditions of all persons without discrimination,
including persons in situations of humanitarian crises.” [Sri Lanka preferred this
formulation on humanitarian crises]
[Algeria: add “States should consistently, unequivocally and strongly condemn terrorism in
all its forms and manifestations committed by whomever, whoever and for whatever
purposes, as it constitutes one of the most serious threats on the right to life, right to peace,
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security and development.”; supported by Sri Lanka; Cuba; China idea of reflecting
terrorism is supported; not supported by the European Union]
Article 3
States, the United Nations [United States of America replace “including” by “and”;
supported by Australia] including its specialized agencies, as well as other [United
States of America: delete “other”; supported by Australia] interested international,
regional, national and local organizations and civil society [Egypt: re-phrase “civil
society, including local organizations”, or delete “local organizations”; Australia: support
language as is], should [United States of America: add “take appropriate” and delete
“adopt all possible”; supported by Uruguay: “take appropriate measures”] [Russian
Federation: “assist in achieving the goal of the declaration” and delete the rest; supported
by European Union; deletion supported by Singapore] [United Kingdom of Great
Britain and Northern Ireland: add “consider where possible, adopting actions”] adopt
all possible actions with the purpose of [Sri Lanka: “facilitating the implementation of
this Declaration, in order to strengthen and elaborate it”, and delete text from
“implementing …. to … declaration”] implementing, strengthening and elaborating
[United States of America: change to “implementing and strengthening”; Uruguay: “to
implement”] this Declaration, including the establishment and enhancement of
[European Union: add “relevant”] national institutions [European Union: add “which
play a role in promoting and safeguarding human rights”] and related infrastructures.
[Russian Federation: alternative text based on art. 9 of Declaration on the rights of persons
belonging to minorities: “States, United Nations organizations and specialized agencies
shall contribute to the full realization of the rights and principles set forth in the present
Declaration, within their respective fields of competence”; supported by European Union;
Morocco]
[European Union: art. 38 of Declaration on the rights of indigenous peoples: “States etc.
should take appropriate measures to achieve the ends of the Declaration”]
Article 4
The provisions included in this Declaration [United States of America “are to be
understood” instead of “shall be interpreted”] shall be interpreted in light of the Charter
of the United Nations, the Universal Declaration of Human Rights and other relevant
international instruments [United States of America delete rest of the sentence;
supported by Australia] ratified by countries [United Kingdom of Great Britain and
Northern Ireland: replace “countries” by “States”; supported by Australia].
[Egypt: alternative text art. 9.2 of Declaration on the Right to Development: “Nothing in
the present Declaration shall be construed as being contrary to the purposes and principles
of the United Nations, or as implying that any State, group or person has a right to engage
in any activity or to perform any act aimed at the violation of the rights set forth in the
UDHR and in the International Covenants on Human Rights”.]
[Russian Federation: art. 8.4 Declaration of the rights of persons belonging to minorities:
“Nothing in the present Declaration may be construed as permitting any activity contrary
to the purposes and principles of the United Nations, including sovereign equality,
territorial integrity and political independence of States”; United States of America
preferred broader language: international law and the Charter of the United Nations].
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II. Compilation of proposals made by non-governmental
organizations and other stakeholders
Preamble
Independent Expert on the promotion of a democratic and equitable order
Insert the following paragraphs:
“Reaffirming General Assembly resolution 39/11 of 12 November 1984 on the Right of
Peoples to Peace”;
“Reaffirming General Assembly resolution 2625 on the Declaration on Principles of
International Law concerning Friendly Relations and Co-operation among States in
accordance with the Charter of the United Nations”;
“Reaffirming General Assembly resolution 3314 and the Definition of Aggression
appended thereto”;
“Reiterating the commitment of all United Nations members to settle international disputes
through negotiation and peaceful means, as stipulated in article 2, paragraph 3, of the
Charter of the United Nations”;
“Repudiating the threat of and the use of force as stipulated in article 2, paragraph 4, of
the Charter of the United Nations”;
“Reaffirming those articles of international treaties, notably of the International Covenant
on Civil and Political Rights and the International Covenant on Economic, Social and
Cultural Rights, which already codify component elements of the right to peace, inter alia
the right to life and the right to security of person”;
“Recalling the commitment to disarmament made by States parties to the Non-Proliferation
Treaty, notably in its article VI”;
“Encouraging the on-going discussions in the United Nations Conference on
Disarmament”;
“Welcoming the adoption of the Arms Trade Treaty by the General Assembly on 3 April
2013 and urging States to ratify it as soon as possible”;
“Concerned that the competition for resources, the scarcity of water, and the growing gulf
between rich and poor in the world lead to instability and may result in armed conflict and
that such imbalances should be reduced by providing debt relief and technology transfer”.
International Fellowship of Reconciliation
New PP: “Being conscious that the designing, testing, manufacturing, possession and
deployment of nuclear weapons are among the greatest threats to the right to life which
confronts the mankind today.”
Preambular paragraphs 1 to 8
Independent Expert on the promotion of a democratic and equitable order
PP3. Insert at the end of the paragraph: “and to take appropriate measure to strengthen
universal peace, including through penal sanctions against aggressors”.
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PP4. Replace “recalling” by “keenly aware”. After peoples insert: “including indigenous
peoples and peoples living under occupation, and convinced that global solidarity is
necessary to solve global problems of an economic, social, cultural and humanitarian
character including climate change and to promote respect for human rights and
fundamental freedoms for all, and in this connection referring to General Assembly
resolution 26/25 on friendly relations”.
PP5. Replace “recalling” by “convinced”
PP6. Replace “recalling” by “deploring”
PP7. Replace “recalling” by “considering”
PP8. Replace “recalling” by “reaffirming”
International Fellowship of Reconciliation
Insert the following paragraph: “Recalling the right to life, liberty and security of the
person enshrined in article 3 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights and in article 6
of the Covenant of civil and Political Rights mostly endangered by armed violence and
war”.
Japan Federation of Bar Associations
New PP2 (bis): “Recalling that some national constitutions and some regional human
rights instruments have incorporated the concept of right to peace in recent decades”.
New PP2 (ter): “Recalling the General Assembly resolution 33/73 of 1978, in which it
declares that every nation and every human being has the inherent right to live in peace”.
International Association of Peace Messenger Cities
Include in the preamble a reference to international and regional instruments that make
reference to the right to peace, as follows:
Declaration on the Preparation of Societies for Life in Peace (1978) (General Assembly
resolution 33/73)
Declaration on the Right of Peoples to Peace (1984) (General Assembly resolution 39/11)
African Charter on Human Rights and Peoples’ Rights
Protocol on the Rights of Women in Africa
Iberoamerican Convention on Rights of Youth
ASEAN Human Rights Declaration
United Network of Young Peacebuilders
PP6. Replace “mankind” by “human kind”.
Insert reference to the UNESCO Constitution, which states: “That since wars begin in the
minds of men, it is in the minds of men that the defences of peace must be constructed”.
Associazione Comunità Papa Giovanni XXIII
PP3. Replace “recalling” by “reaffirming”
PP4. Replace “recalling” by “reaffirming”
PP5. Replace “recalling” by “reaffirming”
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Insert a reference to the 1984 Declaration of the Right of Peoples to Peace and the 1978
Declaration on the Preparation of Societies for Life in Peace and a reference to the right to
development.
Insert a reference to the UNESCO Constitution as follows: “Aware that since wars begin in
the minds of men; it is in the minds of men that the defences of peace must be constructed”.
Preambular paragraphs 9 to 12
Independent Expert of the promotion of a democratic and equitable order
PP9. Replace “recalling” by “considering”
PP10. Replace “recalling” by “reaffirming the Millennium Declaration and the universal
commitment to eradicate poverty”
PP11. Replace “recalling” by “convinced that the maximum and complete”
PP12. Replace “recalling” by “conscious of” and at the end of the paragraph insert: “and in
this connection endorsing the work of the United Nations Conference on Disarmament and
the imperative to negotiate toward complete nuclear disarmament”.
Associazione Comunità Papa Giovanni XXIII
PP10. “Reaffirming the United Nations millennium declaration and the world commitment
to eradicate poverty and promote and sustain economic growth, sustainable development
and global prosperity for all”.
PP12 (bis). “Recalling the importance of the settlement of disputes or conflicts through
peaceful and nonviolent means” (as proposed also by Indonesia).
Preambular paragraphs 13 to 17
Independent Expert on the promotion of a democratic and equitable order
PP13. Replace “recalling” by “confident”
PP14. Replace “recalling” by “persuaded”
PP15. Replace “recalling” by “endorsing”
PP16. Replace “recalling” by “reaffirming”
PP17. Replace “war” by “structural violence”
PP17 (bis): “Concerned that the gap between rich and poor in the world leads to instability
and should be reduced by practicing inter alia debt relief and technology transfer”.
International Fellowship of Reconciliation
Add at the end of PP15: “the training in non-violent conflict resolution”
United Network of Young Peacebuilders
PP17. Insert after stakeholders “, and the importance of education therefor, and supporting
structures”.
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Associazione Comunità Papa Giovanni XXIII
PP14 “Mindful that, since wars begin in the minds of men, it is in the minds of men that the
defences of peace must be constructed, and recalling also that the wide diffusion of
culture...”
PP17. “... to end, reduce and prevent progressively war, armed violence and structural
violence”.
Article 1
Independent Expert on the promotion of a democratic and equitable order
The implementation of the right to peace requires serious disarmament negotiations, since
disarmament promotes peace and releases funds for sustainable development.
The right to peace should be seen in its collective and individual dimensions, and
understood as an enabling right without which no one can fully enjoy civil, cultural,
economic, political and social rights.
The progressive implementation of the right of self-determination as stipulated in the
Charter of the United Nations is a condition for the prevention of internal, regional and
international armed conflict.
Joint proposal made by United Network of Young Peacebuilders 1
Insert in the first sentence reference to the “right to peace” or “right to live in peace” or
“inherent right to life in peace”. (This reference also should be included in the title.)
Associazione Comunità Papa Giovanni XXIII
“Everyone is entitled to the promotion, protection and respect for all human rights and
fundamental freedoms, in particular the right to live in a context of peace with a social and
international order in which all human rights, in particular the right to life, and
development can be fully realised”.
Japan Federation of Bar Associations
“Everyone is entitled to the promotion, protection and respect for all human rights and
fundamental freedoms, in particular the right to peace, which includes the right not to be
deprived of life by illegal use of force”.
United Network of Young Peacebuilders
“Everyone is entitled to the promotion, protection and respect for all human rights and
fundamental freedoms, in particular the right to live in a context in which all human rights,
peace and development are fully implemented. For this purpose, the development of and
access to peace education programs is fundamental”.
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This is a joint proposal made by the following NGOs: International Association of Peace Messenger
Cities, International Association of Democratic Lawyers, Associazione Comunità Papa Giovanni
XXIII, Brahma Kumaris World Spiritual University, Japan Federation of Bar Associations,
Nonviolent Peaceforce, International Fellowship of Reconcialition and the United Network of Young
Peacebuilders.
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International Fellowship of Reconciliation
“Everyone has the right of physical security free from the use of lethal force and free from
the obligation to use lethal force”.
Soka Gakkai International
“Everyone is entitled to the right to life in peaceful society where all human rights and
fundamental freedoms are fully implemented and mutually respected among all people.
Peaceful society requires the full realisation of all human rights, sustainable development
and safe environment as well as the elimination and prevention of humanitarian crisis”.
International Fellowship of Reconciliation
New OP: “In order to preserve peace on Earth and for the sake of life states should commit
themselves to achieve a general and complete disarmament specially a nuclear
disarmament which represents a life danger for humanity as a whole.”
Article 2
Independent Expert on the promotion of a democratic and equitable order
New article 2 (bis):
“States should engage in disarmament negotiations as a necessary condition for peace and
sustainable development. The continued arms race and growing arms trade constitutes a
grave danger to peace”.
New article 2 (ter):
“States should promote the progressive implementation of the right of self-determination of
peoples as a contribution to national and international peace and security”.
International Fellowship of Reconciliation
“States should abstain from recourse to armed violence and should engage in negotiations
in good faith to solve internal or external conflicts. A culture of non-violence should be
taught in schools States should take all necessary measures for complete and general
disarmament”.
Soka Gakkai International
“States should enhance the principles of freedom from fear and want, equality and nondiscrimination, democracy and justice and rule of law”.
At the end of the paragraph and after “humanitarian crises” add the following language:
“and unsafe environment caused by the improper management and disposal of hazardous
substances and waste”.
Associazione Comunità Papa Giovanni XXIII
Proposes to add the following paragraphs:
“States have the duty to refrain from propaganda for war, bearing in mind that such
propaganda should be prohibited by law” (ICCPR art. 20).
“States should commit in a joint and coordinated manner towards further disarmament and
reduce military spending in favour of social and development policies”.
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“States and other stakeholders should respect fully the right to freedom of thought,
conscience and religion from which conscientious objection derives”.
“States should adopt dialogue, negotiation and other non-violent means to prevent and
solve conflicts”.
“States should develop education programmes on human rights, peace education and
nonviolent methods to solve conflicts”.
Article 3
Independent Expert on the promotion of a democratic and equitable order
“States, the United Nations including its specialized agencies, as well as other interested
international, regional, national and local organizations and civil society, should
undertake targeted measures aimed at carrying out and strengthening this Declaration,
including the establishment and enhancement of national institutions and related
infrastructures and appropriate monitoring mechanisms”.
International Association of Peace Messenger Cities
Include reference to a mechanism for monitoring as indicated in the Declaration of Santiago
de Compostela on the Human Rights to Peace and the Advisory’s Committee draft text.
International Association of Democratic Lawyers
“States, the United Nations including its specialized agencies, as well as other interested
international, regional, national and local organizations and civil society, should adopt all
possible actions with the purpose of implementing and strengthening all human rights and
fundamental freedoms enumerated in this Declaration, including the establishment and
enhancement of national institutions and related infrastructures”.
Brahma Kumaris World Spiritual University
“States, the United Nations including its specialized agencies, as well as other interested
international, regional, national and local organizations and civil society, should adopt all
possible actions with the purpose of implementing, strengthening and elaborating this
Declaration and enhance the work of different actors in the field of peace”.
Associazione Comunità Papa Giovanni XXIII
"All States, the United Nations including its specialized agencies, as well as other
interested international, regional, national and local organizations and civil society, must
implement the provisions of the present Declaration by adopting relevant legislative,
judicial, administrative, educational, monitoring and other measures necessary to promote
its effective realization".
Article 4
Independent Expert on the promotion of a democratic and equitable order
“The provisions included in this Declaration shall be interpreted and applied in the light of
the purposes and principles of the Charter of the United Nations, notably the pledge to
spare succeeding generations from the scourge of war, the Universal Declaration of
Human Rights and other relevant international instruments”.
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