Lesson 3, The EDIT Strategy
Passage 1F: California Redwood
The California Redwood is also known by the name Sequoia and Coast Redwood. It an
evergreen tree that livs for a very long time This species of tree includes the tallest trees on
earth.
Some of them reach over 300 feet and can be 26 feet in diameter. The california
Redwood is the fastest growing tree in the whirld. It can grow one or two feet per year,
Redwoods are found along the west coast of the United states in California and southern
Oregon? The bark of the redwood is very thick and soft.It often a brownish-red color. This is
where the gets its name. The environment were Redwoods grow is damp. It has heavy seasonal
rain and coastal fog. the trees are large, but they often grow very close together. The branches
can form a sealing in the forest that lets in small windows of daylight.
Redwood forests big tourist attractions in the United States. State and national
parks conserve the trees.They also allow the public a place to admire them There are some
scenic public drives through the parks where tirysts can view the from their cars There are also
miles of walking trails. In 1980, the united Nations designated the Redwood State and National
Parks a World Heritage Site.
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Mastery:
92% or above
(23/25 errors)