Key Terms for Mastering the SOL Ubiquitous Terms What terms do I need to know when reading difficult text? How do you analyze & elicit great answers? • Analyze -- examine closely Elicit-- bring forth • I need to analyze the question to elicit the correct answer. SOL Terms Definitions 1.Inference Educated Guess The structure of the writing 2. Organizational Pattern 3. Specific/Essential/ Precise Key information 4. Tone A writer’s tone reveals the attitude he or she has toward a subject. 5. Unclear/Clarity Lacking clearness 6. Awkward Where grammar and syntax collide 7. Bias You support one opinion; subjectivity 8. Elaboration Expanding or adding specific information to paint a clearer picture for the reader 9. Irrelevant Unrelated ideas Underline the tips and examples on the following slides. Inferences Tips When you “read between the lines,” you pick up ideas that are implied: not directly stated in what you are reading. These implied ideas are often important for a full understanding of what an author means. Discovering the ideas that are not stated directly in writing is called making inferences, or drawing conclusions. Inference Example What inferences can you make about this cartoon? Find the two inferences that are most logically based on the information it suggests. A. The couple is not likely to have a good dining experience at the restaurant. B. The couple will never eat at the restaurant. C. The restaurant was recently closed for health violations. D. Whoever is running the restaurant is not doing a good job. REAL LIFE ADVENTURES © 2006 GarLanco, Reprinted with permission of UNIVERSAL PRESS SYNDICATE. All rights reserved. Answers A and D are logical inferences. Here’s why: A. The couple is not likely to have a good dining experience at the restaurant. The “help wanted” sign indicates that the restaurant is seriously understaffed. It would be logical, then, to infer that the restaurant cannot provide patrons with a good dining experience. You should have chosen this item. B. The couple will never eat at the restaurant. The man’s comment that “this isn’t the best time” suggests that he may be willing to try the restaurant once it has solved its staffing problems. Also, experience suggests that it is common for restaurants to change ownership and/or management. You should not have chosen this item. C. The restaurant was recently closed for health violations. Nothing in the cartoon suggests that the restaurant was recently closed for health violations. Perhaps if it continues to operate without sufficient staff, it may be closed, but we have no way of knowing that. You should not have chosen this item. D. Whoever is running the restaurant is not doing a good job. Experience tells us that good managers are able to hire and retain qualified employees. The “help wanted” sign suggests quite the opposite—that a number of employees have recently quit or been fired. The lack of staff, in turn, has caused the couple to decide against dining there. Clearly, this is no way to run a business! You should have chosen this item. HERMAN: © Jim Unger/Dist. By Newspaper Enterprise Association. Inc. Inferences in the SOL 3 Based on the section “Tips to anchor the stakes more firmly,” the reader may best infer that — A players risk potential injury from stakes that are not anchored B stakes that are not anchored may shift during the course of play C the most effective way to anchor the stakes is with concrete D stakes must be anchored according to the official rules of play 2010 RLR Ques. #3 Organizational Patterns Organizational Pattern Tip • Think about the organizational structure of everything that you read! What is the author’s purpose? Organizational Patterns in the SOL Example 4 The organizational structure of the section “Finally, Time to Play” is best described as — • F chronological order • G comparison/contrast • H order of importance • J listing or enumeration 2010 RLR Ques. #4 Specific/Essential Tip What is the difference? Abstract Concrete General info. Detailed info. Specific/Essential Example in the SOL 10 Which fact on the list is least essential to Eileen’s report about Thomas Jefferson’s home? F Construction began 1769—completed 1809 G Drafted the Declaration of Independence H 43 rooms and 11,000 square feet when completed J Sold after Jefferson’s death and fell into disrepair 2010 Writing SOL Ques. #10 Tone Tip •Analyze the emotions Tone Tips Continued A writer’s tone reveals the attitude he or she has toward a subject. Tone is expressed through the words and details the writer selects. Just as a speaker’s voice can project a range of feelings, a writer’s voice can project one or more tones: anger, sympathy, hopefulness, sadness, respect, dislike, and so on. Understanding tone is, then, an important part of understanding what an author has written. 2010 RLR Ques. #3 Tone Example The purpose of the cartoon below, like all cartoons, is to entertain. Can you tell what the tone of each speaker is? Which speaker is sincere in what he says? Which one is insincere? Tone Example: I hope your chest is under them. REAL LIFE ADVENTURES © 2006 GarLanco, Reprinted with permission of UNIVERSAL PRESS SYNDICATE. All rights reserved. Tone Here are four different versions of a murder confession. To appreciate the differences in tone that writers can use, read them aloud—in the tone of voice appropriate in each case. “I just shot my husband five times in the chest with this .357 Magnum.” (Tone: matter-of-fact, objective.) “How could I ever have killed him? I just can’t believe I did that!” (Tone: shocked, disbelieving.) “Oh, my God. I’ve murdered my husband. How can I ever be forgiven for this dreadful deed?” (Tone: guilty, regretful.) “That dirty rat. He’s had it coming for years. I’m glad I finally had the nerve to do it.” (Tone: revengeful, self-satisfied.) Words That Describe Tone Below and on the next two screens are some words commonly used to describe tone. Except for matter-of-fact and objective, each word reflects a feeling or judgment. admiring cruel loving affectionate curious playful amused defensive praising angry doubtful respectful apologetic encouraging self-pitying ashamed excited serious calming forgiving sorrowful caring frightened sympathetic cheerful grateful threatening conceited humorous tragic concerned insulting warm critical joyous worried More words that describe tone—with their meanings: ambivalent uncertain about a choice arrogant full of self importance; conceited bewildered confused; puzzled bitter angry; full of hate compassionate deeply sympathetic depressed sad or discouraged detached emotionally uninvolved disbelieving unbelieving distressed suffering sorrow; misery or pain hypocritical false impassioned filled with strong feeling indignant angry about something unfair or mean instructive teaching ironic meaning the opposite of what is expressed lighthearted happy and carefree matter-of-fact sticking to the facts mocking making fun of and/or looking down upon something nostalgic longing for something or someone in the past Tone in the SOL Example • 37 In paragraph 4, the words “humiliating,” “disgraceful,” and “shameful” evoke what tone? A Cautious B Frightened C Jealous D Bitter 2010 RLR Ques. #37 Tone in the SOL Example 22 How can Julius best revise sentence 7 for appropriate tone? F The feast could easily be held on a weeknight at school. G You have to let us hold the feast on a weeknight at school. H It would be so awesome if we could hold the feast on a weeknight at school! J What do you think about maybe holding the feast on a weeknight at school? 2010 Writing Ques. #22 Unclear/Clarity Tip Analyze the structure of the writing! Look at the sentences above and below to determine the flow of the writing! Unclear/Clarity Terms in the SOL Example 21 Which is the best way to revise sentence 5 for clarity? A Furthermore, I believe for the band this idea to attend the state spring competitions could potentially generate enough money. B Furthermore, I believe this idea could potentially generate enough money for the band to attend the state spring competitions. C Furthermore, to attend the state spring competitions for the band, this idea could, I believe, potentially generate enough money. D Furthermore, for the band, I believe that this idea to attend the state spring 2010 Writing SOL Ques. #21 competitions could potentially generate enough money. Awkward Diction Tips Search for clunky sentences! • She has no reason to grieve in sorrow when she has no one to blame but herself. She has no reason to complain since she herself is to blame. • For example, people sometimes get so angry that they would like to take someone else's life and murder them. Sometimes people become angry enough to contemplate murder. Awkward Structure in the SOL Example 10 Dewayne thinks sentence 5 is awkward. Which of the following is the best way to revise it? F The Summer Student Exchange Program with trips to Mexico, Germany, and France, is offering a language immersion program. G With trips to Mexico, Germany, and France, the language immersion program is a Summer Student Exchange Program. H The Summer Student Exchange Program is a language immersion program that offers trips to Mexico, Germany, and France. J With the Summer Student Exchange Program trips to Mexico, Germany, and France, is a language immersion program. 2007 Writing SOL Ques. #10 Bias Tips Does a person’s opinion exist in the writing? Bias/Accuracy in SOL Ques. Examples • Which source would best help a reader evaluate the accuracy of the information in the document? A A copy of the official rules and regulations B A website advertising outdoor recreation C A news article about an official horseshoe… D A guide to outdoors sports and recreation… Elaboration Tips Use colorful words! Elaboration in the SOL Example 2 When Marty rereads her draft, she realizes that sentence 6 lacks elaboration. Which of the following is the best way for her to revise it? F Christy knew that Roosevelt Park had some water somewhere in it. G Christy knew that Roosevelt Park had a clean, lively creek running through it. H Christy knew that Roosevelt Park had fresh water. J Christy knew that Roosevelt Park had a creek in it. 2007 Writing SOL Ques. #2 “Irrelevant” in the SOL Tips You do not need the information! Irrelevant Term in the SOL Example 14 Dewayne rereads the information under “Germany” and discovers an irrelevant line. Which line should he remove? F Line 19 G Line 20 H Line 21 J Line 22 2007 Writing Ques. #14 Good Luck! • You are ready to master the SOL!