“A Quilt of a Country”
The Argument
Writing an Argument:
The following is an example for a claim:
Example:
Revised Example:
My community has a recreational center.
The recreational center in my community benefits many people.
Next, present at least TWO examples of evidence, one related to the claim and
reason, and one that is relevant.
Claim and reason:
The recreational center in my community benefits many people.
People of all ages can take classes at the center.
Evidence:
Doctors say that children should receive at least one hour of
exercise each day. My younger brother participates in a karate
class each week, and my mother takes a yoga class every
Tuesday.
Final thought:
Without access to this facility, my family would not be able to
participate in healthy and fun activities that are beneficial in
both mind and body.
Complete claim:
The recreational center in my community benefits many people. People of all ages
can take classes at the center. Doctors say that children should receive at least one
hour of exercise each day. My brother participates in a karate class each week, and
my mother takes a yoga class every Tuesday. Without access to this facility, my
family would not be able to participate in healthy and fun activities that are
beneficial in both body and mind.