Motivational Emails and PG Dissertations:
By now you should have written 1000 words!
Kathy Boxall
Department of Sociological Studies
kathy.boxall@sheffield.ac.uk
Motivational Emails and PG Dissertations:
By now you should have written 1000 words!
Session abstract:
In 2010-11, ‘motivational emails’ were introduced as part of the MA Social Work
(MASW) with a view to providing information for students and colleagues regarding new
requirements for the dissertation and motivating students to make regular progress in
completing work for their dissertations. Emails were sent on a regular basis to all MASW
students registered for the dissertation module and to all staff supervising MASW
dissertations. This presentation will describe the content of some of the emails, the
process of their introduction, advantages and disadvantages of the approach and
feedback from students and staff. It will also raise questions about the ‘distance’
between student and supervisor when electronic means of supervision are employed
and the risks and opportunities of such approaches. The presentation will conclude by
arguing that although whole group motivational emails can provide a supportive
framework for both students and supervisors they are no substitute for individual
supervision.
Why will colleagues be interested in this session? How could they adapt the ideas?
Dissertation supervisors, library staff and programme administrators may wish to adapt
these ideas to their area of work. IT staff may be able to ‘automate’ the emails or
arrange for them to be sent as text messages! I also hope there will be some discussion
and ideas from the audience.
Motivational Emails and PG Dissertations:
By now you should have written 1000 words!
• My motivation
• Background
• Method
• Content
• Feedback
• Risks and opportunities
• Face-to-face supervision
• Conclusions, questions and ideas
• References
My motivation
• I was aware that MASW students’ confidence was sometimes
eroded by the task of researching and writing a 15,000 word
document;
• I was already writing emails to individual students – to
reinforce what we had discussed in face-to-face supervision;
• Information by email sometimes seemed to get messages
across more clearly than face-to-face discussions;
• I have found email reminders helpful.
Background
• ‘Motivational emails’ introduced in 2010-11 and continued this year;
• MA Social Work numbers increased from 35 to 65 students over last
few years;
• Supervisors now have up to 10 students each;
• Some new supervisors unfamiliar with the Sheffield SW dissertation;
• Revised requirements for the dissertation – confusing for ‘old staff’
• Dissertation Handbook is 34 pages long.
• Aim was to provide the same information to everyone involved, in
small doses, at around the time they would need this, rather than all at
once.
• And to encourage and motivate students to submit their dissertations
on time!
Method
• The MA Social Work is a two year full time programme of study;
• The MASW dissertation takes place over a 12 month period – from
February in the first year to February in the second year.
• Students have six dissertation workshops during this period.
• At the September workshop (beginning of second year) I asked if
students would like me to send ‘motivational emails’
• Both last year’s and this year’s students responded enthusiastically
to this suggestion.
• Emails sent on a regular basis to all supervisors and MASW students
from September to February of their second year.
My Aim
My aim for each email was to:
• Have an easily identifiable format, so emails would
stand out;
• Include a clear message about requirements and
deadlines;
• Provide encouragement and motivation for students
who would be at a range of different stages;
• Ensure that supervisors and students received the
same information at around the time they would need
it.
CONTENT
DISSERTATION – Motivational Email No.1
4th October 2011
Dear MASW2 Student
I hope you’ve enjoyed the recent good weather and
you're making good progress with your
dissertation. By now you should definitely have
started writing and have your first draft chapter
underway. Working on your dissertation two or
three full days per week, you should aim to write
approximately 1000 words per week ….
DISSERTATION – Motivational Email No.3
1st November 2011
Dear MASW2 Student
I hope you’re getting on OK with writing your dissertation. If
you’re anything like me, you will have good writing days and bad
writing days; and absolutely awful writing days! The important
thing is to keep your spirits up and keep on writing.
Carol Smart, a professor at Manchester University who's written
loads of papers and books, has made a really helpful video about
her experiences of writing. If your writing isn’t going so well at
the moment, you may find it helpful to watch Carol’s video:
http://video.methods.manchester.ac.uk/video/mp4/carolwriting-edited-final.mp4
DISSERTATION – Motivational Email No.6
2nd December 2011
Dear MASW2 Student
I hope you are making good progress with your dissertation.
Now is the time to really focus on dissertation writing and try and
pull everything together for Part A. Having a spurt of writing
activity before the holiday will mean that you enjoy the holiday
break and festivities that bit more, knowing that you have done
your best to write as much as you can beforehand.
If you don’t feel you are making enough progress, try not to
worry, but do get in touch with your supervisor and ask them
for advice (I’ve copied all the supervisors into this message, so
they won’t be surprised to hear from you, even if you haven’t
been in touch for a while).
DISSERTATION – Motivational Email No.7
21st December 2011
[….]if you are feeling overwhelmed by the dissertation task,
the best thing you can do is take a few days rest and try and
relax over Christmas. … As I said in the dissertation
workshop, it really won’t be the end of the world if you are
unable to complete your dissertation by the deadline
(Tuesday 7th February 2012) – there are other options (an
extension, or just submitting what you have been able to
do, even though it may not be complete).
If you think you may need to go for one of these options,
please email your dissertation supervisor and ask for an
appointment to discuss this in the New Year.
FEEDBACK
Staff feedback
• Every time I see a motivational e-mail in my Inbox, I sigh a little as I know I can
expect a flurry of activity and I’ll receive an influx of draft chapters to read and
comment on in the next day or two!
• The emails are amusing and written in a lively style. The students that are
behind don’t seem to have taken them as ‘this has to happen now’, they’ve
taken them as guidelines rather than something you need to be frightened
about.
• The only thing I would perhaps question is the title and whether some may
find it patronising or ‘cheesy’.
• Although I am sure that not all students will find these useful, they are a
resource. They are also useful in terms of knowing the general messages
students are getting and how this should influence our supervision eg points
they should be at, what workshops they have had etc. On a negative note it is
another email to have to read!
• The emails help to keep students on track, and provide some helpful tips. I
would have liked to have received these when I was a student.
Feedback from students 2010-11
• Although I found the module very difficult and did not get
much enjoyment from it the support available was great […]
The emails sent out regularly made me feel that I was not
alone and kept me feeling like I was involved with the
department.
• I think the dissertation handbook could be improved to make
things clearer, especially re: the layout of the work, I tended
to use the information from Kathy's emails where applicable
as this seemed to be more up to date.
Feedback from students 2011-12
(still writing dissertations)
• On 21 October 2011 14:14, X Bloggs
XBloggs1@sheffield.ac.uk wrote:
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
aaaaaaaaaaaaa! Dissertation!
:)
Feedback from students 2011-12
(still writing dissertations)
I think it depends on the type of person you are, but for me the
anonymity of the motivational emails gives me no incentive to
read them, whereas if I received a personal email from my
supervisor I would feel much more motivated because it would
relate specifically to my work and I would feel obliged to
respond.
The information overload we receive through junk mail, adverts
popping up on screen demanding our attention and the internet
in general means that I will only bother to read something which
is relevant to me specifically, particularly if it is more than a
sentence long.
Feedback from students 2011-12
(still writing dissertations)
Speaking as someone who has been struggling with my
dissertation, I have to say that since one of your first emails
stating that we "should" have a draft by December and a
certain number of words by a certain date, I have not opened
any of your emails apart from this one (partly because it had
request for help in the title!).
Rather than motivational, I found the email to be quite scary
and created panic and stress for me at a time that was already
quite stressful. I'm sure this is not everyone's experience of
these emails, but I do think thought needs to be given to
those people who may not be progressing (with their
dissertation) at the same rate as everyone else and I don't
think these emails are for everyone...
Feedback from students 2011-12
(still writing dissertations)
I often didn't read their full contents because I felt that I
was meeting my own targets for where I was up to with my
dissertations. This was fine, in that an email is a nonintrusive way of prodding us - i.e. you can just
move/ignore/delete it if you're not interested.
Occasionally when I did read it though there was actually
some information that was helpful, not motivationally but
practically - I wonder if there's a way to ensure that
students who are not reading the emails (either because
they are feeling self-motivated or because they can't face
seeing how behind they are) DO read the important
information that they sometimes contain.
Feedback from students 2011-12
(still writing dissertations)
I'll admit that one or two I never opened as I was scared about
what they were going to say and as they say ignorance is bliss!
You need not have written anything in these emails at all...a
blank email merely titled 'Motivational Email' was enough to
panic me into writing!
However it was a pleasant surprise to read your emails and find
them A. not as scary as I thought they might be and B. actually
helpful and reminded me that all the worries, anxieties,
procrastination and ''writers block'' that I was experiencing are
all common to people undertaking this sort of academic
challenge, which made me feel not so alone. So thank you for
that.
Risks and opportunities
• Scope for misunderstandings – writing the emails can’t be rushed – need
to think carefully about the content and possible misinterpretations;
• I tend to write the emails with my own students in mind – but students
have very different needs and rates of progress;
• Writing a dissertation is, for most students, a stressful experience – but
for some the stress levels may be intolerable;
• Whole group emails lack a ‘personal touch’;
• But they may help students realise that they are not alone and others are
‘in the same boat’;
• They have generated discussion and interest (motivation?) from a range of
different quarters – students, supervisors, secretaries – which suggests
that (at least some) people are reading the emails.
Face-to-face supervision
• Whole group motivational emails can provide a
supportive framework for both students and
supervisors but they are no substitute for individual
supervision;
• In module feedback students rated individual support
from supervisors very highly;
• But not all students and supervisors have positive
experiences of supervision;
• In these situations, motivational emails may provide an
additional ‘safety net’.
Conclusions, questions and ideas
• Although many students appear to find these emails useful,
for some they are an additional and unwelcome source of
stress;
• Some students are not opening the emails, so are not
accessing the content or potential sources of support;
• Need think about how to encourage students to actually open
the emails before they decide they are not for them.
• Any questions?
• Ideas?
References
• Simpson, Ormond (2010) Supporting Learning
Motivation by email – suggestions for helping
students ‘switch on their learning motivation’
by using email messaging
• Simpson, Ormond (2012) Supporting students
at a distance: Articles on distance education,
http://www.ormondsimpson.com/