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• The three experience when I went to the Meinung, a small town in
Kaohsiung. That was a sunny day, and we arrived there in the morning.
(N: Jane)
• The very first reason that I want to share is that you can adjust the air-conditioner to the perfect temperature you desire.
(L: Tony)
• …, the first advantage comes to most people’s mind is it is easy to make more friends. It is very obvious because small schools have few students.
(L: Anita)
• Everybody wanted to stay in car, so they can warm up their body by the heating machine in the car.
(L: Erin)
• Swimming is the best exercise for everyone . When you are swimming, you can get a lot of advantages.
(L: Wendy)
• TS: Recently, we have faced plenty of food safety problems, and these events caused everyone gradually can not trust…
(L: Elaine)

• Until all the pieces come together that I can find the truth.
(L: Tina)
• At the beginning, I was afraid of making friend in college.
Because I heard that no one will be sincere to other in college, people will try to achieve what they want at any cost.
(N: Jessica)
• My boy friend has bad ability of poise. When he staking from small hill to ground. He bumped into my brother…
(N: Tiffany)
• The three experience when I went to the Meinung, a small town in Kaohsiung.
(N: Jane)
• The last reason is family. If let parents know that their child who be a villain to break others family.
(L: Tiffany)
• For example, taking eyes off the road and read the texts or respond while driving. Some pedestrians use…
(L: Ellen)

• We all enjoyed in the process, the biggest reward to us is our strong friendship.
(N: Astrid)
• This was my first time to visit the island; I really like everything there, I think I will come back soon.
(N: Joyce)
• Even she saw other people cleaning their areas, she still acted the same.
(N: Anita)
• Five days passed, we found that nothing was difficult if…
(N: Tiffany)

• He encouraged me to speak English with people then I tried to do what he wanted me to do.
(N: Belle)
• … we played the popular songs, people stand in the circle then we threw the glow sticks into the circle…
(N: Panerai)
• I keep all my attention on the shops that is why I will not feel tired.
(L: Jessica)
• She was starring in the opera, and disguised as a man however , she was penetrated by the main actor, falling in love with him.
(L: Panerai)

• Last year I joined Mayday concert that I get unforgettable experience. On the December twenty second, we chose different stations to get on the train…
(N: Wenty)
• The other sport I really like is jogging.
(N: Linda)
• Then we went to visit Penghu Bay Bridge where was a splendid view.
(N: Joyce)

• All in all, I think that just have my friends company; it can make me feel relieved and delightful, even in the bad situation.
(N: Jessie)
• Fortunately, I did not have big injury , only got a purple left eye.
(N: Wendy)
• To sum up, the concert brought a special experience for me, so…
(N: Wenty)
• Jogging can sweat a lot and enhance my metabolism.
(N: Linda)
• I deeply felt that people who did not have anything to eat and drink was painful .
(N: Sally)
• The animal which impressed me most were…
(N:
Valentina)
• …, but later the truth told me what I thought was completely wrong.
(N: Anita)

• An extraordinary summer changed me a lot in 2003 .
(N: Winnie)
• … there was an important examination about into a university .
(N: Michelle)
• The first special reason of this trip is experience of ice skating.
(N: Tiffany)
• First of all, I think that independent is important for me.
(L:
Linda)
• Moreover, go abroad for studying can make many friends.
(L:
Linda)
• …, there are always some murder cases happened .
(L: Tina)

• For example, we often go shopping together, after that, we have dinner at restaurant. And we go to mountain to enjoy the view of night.
(N: Jessica)
• We all guess when she would leave the school because of her bad grades. But amazingly, she wasn’t conscious that she did all these things above.
(N: Anita)

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• We held the Christmas Charity Bazaar on Christmas Day, and we sold something that we did not need to use.
(N: Sally)
• We had an experience called “Twelve Hours Famine.” This activity was that we could not…
(N: Sally)
• I had a trouble sending his words to my superior, and it also caused some serious problems.
(N: Belle)
• She never folded and washed her bed quilt. She never clean our public area as well.
(N: Anita)
• It is always helpful for me to drive. The following reasons can fully explain why I think so…
(L: Tony)
• We knew that the was a backpacker , and he came from the US.
• I will forget the trouble which bother me and get rid of bad thing. It is because buy new product that I like will…
(L: Jessica)
• For these reasons, I think I still will attend camp in the future. My life has been more colorful since I joined summer camp.
(L: Winnie)

• There are some benefits when playing basketball.
(N: Ellen)
• I had many special experiences when entered the college and joined in many activities…
(N: Panerai)
• Compare to these two activities, I preferred the second activity to the first…
(N: Panerai)

• On the way to cram school, we found that …
(N: Erin)
• We found a small red car which… Finally, she found us behind a red car.
(N: Erin)
• I received the present wrapped with envelope and… When I opened present and looked…
(N: Louie)
• … she was very excited about this gift and gave me hand-made birthday card and …
(N: Louie)
• A part-time job told me that I should…
(N: Belle)
• Doing the sports regularly profit the body.
(N: Linda)
• Last year I joined Mayday concert that I…
(N: Wenty)

• I have to go to the gym frequently for weight training which can make me become more powerful.
(N: Ellen)
• For example, the main actor was Lee Min Ho who was played the leading role in the famous drama…
(L: Panerai)

• But now, I take part in the basketball team and the kind of service club.
(N: Ellen)
• An irreplaceable thing in my life is the emotion between my friends and I.
(N: Michelle)
• As a Taiwanese, I always hear someone complains that Taiwan was suck, bad, and terrible.
(L: Kox)

• Then her friend asked if I wanted to help pastor, a pastor in my high school, play the piano as they sang poems in the morning.
(N: Tony)

• Why I Like Australia  My love to Australia
• Why I want to travel to Korea  Reasons of
Travelling to Korea
• I Do Not Want to Go Out to Celebrate the New
Year 
• Why I Love Going Shopping  Shopping, My
Love
• Why I Like to Read Detective Novels  In Love with Detective Novels

• However, through our frequently contact, even if he cannot always by my side, but I just can feel that I have his arms.
(L: Astrid)
• 在描述某故事時, 講重要議題即可, 不相關的資
料不需出現, 會讓故事失焦
(Special Experience of Mayday
Concert, N: Wenty; The camp experience vs. family help, N: Winnie)
• 首尾句的呼應 (correspondence), 小心為了使前後
呼應, 卻寫出與文章本文無關的前後句 !
• No contraction! Ex. couldn’t  could not
• 文章中避免自問自答, 不討喜 .