四技國企一甲
4A360074
劉昭瑜
My Family
My mother is very cute and beartiful. She likes to cook very much. When she
have time, she will cook delicious food. For example, pumkin vegetable soup, rice
cakes… As long as being the food that my mother cooks, any food I like.
My sister is very kind. If I have something problem in the homework, she will help
me to finish it. So I love her very much.
Michelle is my dog. I like to play ball with her.
the stranger she will become very terrible.
She is very cute but when she see
Revised:
My mother is very cute and beartiful. She likes to cook very much. When she has
time, she will cook delicious food, for example, pumpkin vegetable soup, rice cake.
Whatever food my mother cooks, I like them all.
My sister is very kind.
If I have any problem on my homework, she will help me to
solve it. So I love her very much.
Michelle is my dog. I like to play ball with her.
a stranger, she will become very terrible.
She is very cute but when she sees