Name____________________ Date /100 ACADEMIC WRITING ESSAY EVALUATION CRITERIA Language use and Sentence structure (40%) 1. Vocabulary Range -Sophisticated range -Adequate range 5 2. Word Choice 5. Idiomatic Language/ Direct Translation Organization (25%) 1. Introduction and Thesis 2. Structure and Cohesion 3. Conclusion - Little evidence of careful vocabulary selection -Frequent word choice and usage errors 5 - Strong evidence of sentence structure selection to achieve a specific rhetorical purpose -Effective simple, compound and complex constructions 4 - evidence of sentence structure selection to achieve a specific rhetorical purpose - Effective but simple constructions - Minor problems in complex constructions( clauses, runons, connectors, fragments, etc - Meaning not obscured 15 14 13 -Effective idiomatic language - No direct translation from another language 5 12 11 10 9 - Occasional idiomatic errors - Occasional direct translation 3-------------------0 - Little/No evidence of sentence structure selection to achieve a specific rhetorical purpose - Major simple construction problems (subj., verb, obj.,etc) Major complex construction problems( clauses, run-ons, connectors, fragments, etc) - Meaning obscured 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 - Frequent idiomatic errors - Frequent direct translations - Topic very effectively introduced - Intro flows naturally into thesis - Thesis: Strong statement containing position and indicates essay outline - succinct thesis -Topic is introduced - Intro and thesis are loosely connected -Thesis: Statement containing position -Clear thesis Ineffective topic introduction -Intro does not flow into thesis - Thesis: Weak statement/ Not present - Unclear or wordy 10 9 - Thorough topic development - Ideas grouped logically Essay is a tight cohesive unit -Ideas flow naturally -Very effective transitions 8 7 6 - Adequate topic development - Adequate grouping of ideas - Essay is a cohesive unit -Ideas flow Some effective transitions 10 9 - Topic included effectively - Effective closure 5 8 7 - Topic loosely included -Adequate closure 4 5 --------------------------0 - Inadequate/ not present - Inadequate development - Not a cohesive unit - Flow of ideas is stilted Frequent transition errors/ not present 5--------------------------- 0 - Topic not included - Weak closure 3 -------------------------- 0 -Essay demonstrates analysis and accurate interpretation of the topic -Ideas are fully developed with details, examples, explanation, etc. - Ideas show much substance and depth -Content is very engaging 20 3 ----------------0 - Some evidence of thinking about accurate vocabulary selection -Occasional word choice and usage errors 8 7 6 -Errors but meaning not obscured 10 9 -Word form mastery and appropriate use in context 4. Sentence Structure Content (20%) 1. Content and Ideas 4 - Clear evidence of thinking about accurate vocabulary selection - Effective word choice/use 3. Word forms Limited range 19 18 17 4 5-----------------0 - Errors causing meaning to be obscured 3------------------------0 6 -Shows some analysis and interpretation of the topic -Ideas are developed with some detail, examples, explanations, etc. -Ideas show some substance and depth - Content is engaging - Insufficient analysis and inaccurate interpretation of topic -Ideas are not developed (insufficient detail, examples, explanation, discussion, etc) - Ideas are superficial -Content is mundane\ - Repetition of point without real support- 17 12 -------------------------- 0 16 15 14 13 Grammar and Mechanics (15%) 1. Grammar: Verbs, Plurals, - No/ Very few errors of Articles, Prepositions agreement, tense, verb form, number, word order, articles, pronouns, prepositions 2. Mechanics: Spelling, Punctuation, Capitalization, 10 9 - Almost no spelling, punctuation and capitalization errors, 5 - Several errors of agreement, tense, verb form, number, word order, articles, pronouns, prepositions - Meaning not obscured 8 7 -Some spelling, punctuation and capitalization errors 4 - Frequent errors of agreement, tense, verb form, number, word order, articles, pronouns, prepositions - Meaning obscured 6------------------------- 0 - Frequent spelling, punctuation and capitalization errors 3 ---------------------- 0