I can do the following in my writing… I use full stops to mark the end of sentences and longer pauses I start sentences with capital letters I join up all of my writing carefully I use commas to split words up in lists, or to break up information I keep my tall letters tall and my letters sitting on the line I keep letters which go under the line, under the line I use speech marks to show when someone starts speaking and stops speaking I use a selection of words other than “and” to join sentences, e.g., meanwhile I use brackets to add extra details into sentences I don’t start sentences with “and”, “but” or “because” I can be daring and use words I haven’t used before I use capital letters for names of people, places and countries I use a capital “I” when I am writing about myself I organise my ideas into similar sections to make up paragraphs I use paragraphs to split up sections of similar ideas I use a comma after speech marks, but before the word “said” I use question marks to indicate when a question has been asked I use exclamation marks to indicate surprise or shock I start my sentences in different ways, instead of repeating myself I keep my writing interesting for other people to read by adding twists and turns I keep my writing clear for other people to read it easily I make sure my sentences and ideas are clearly linked I try to use posh words whenever I can to replace other words I describe the feelings of characters in detail I describe the settings in the stories, particularly at the beginning I add some descriptions into every paragraph of my work I use apostrophes correctly – don’t, doesn’t, she’s I develop the characters by explaining things about them, e.g., their thoughts The characters in my stories have conversations with each other I use story language like “suddenly” to make my stories interesting I include a dilemma in my story to make people want to know more I don’t just split my stories up into paragraphs for the beginning, middle and end I use semi-colons for lists e.g., my favourite colours are; green, red and yellow I check my work for mistakes like missed punctuation and silly spellings