Interactive Non-Fiction and Media Teacher’s Guide Unit 1 Newspapers and magazines 1 Newspapers and magazines Activities Electronic activity 1 Look for definitions and effects which suggest: using only keywords o mainly verbs and nouns; grammatical words (‘the’, ‘in’, ‘of’, etc.) are omitted o makes space to increase size and impact of headline focus on human interest o effect or impact on people is emphasised o increases reader’s emotional reaction to story (e.g. compare Building Collapses with Building Collapses on 85 Year-Old Woman) use of present tense o although event is inevitably in the past, present tense is used; compare collapses and collapsed o gives sense of immediacy and relevance to now emotive language choice o language specifically chosen to create an emotional response from the reader o exaggerates drama of story (e.g. compare Building Falls Down with Building Collapses) use of alliteration o two or more words near each other containing the same consonant sound (Collapsing Building Buries 85 Year-Old Betty) o adds impact/drama to the headline. Student Book page 6 Activity 1: Exploring newspaper headlines Student worksheet 1.2 1 Suggested answers Newspaper headlines are designed to catch the reader’s attention/summarise the story. A good newspaper headline is probably no more than 5–7 words long. It might be as short as one word. Headlines are short and snappy because the sub-editors leave out words that are unnecessary/less important. 2 Possible comments Snappy and dramatic: A, F Unexciting: B, I (note the weakening effect of an apparently emphatic really) Long-winded: C, E Inappropriately jokey: D, H, J Uses past tense: G Activities 38 Interactive Non-Fiction and Media Teacher’s Guide Unit 1 Newspapers and magazines 1 Newspapers and magazines Student Book page 7 Activity 2: Unpicking newspaper headlines Student worksheet 1.3 Suggested answers Ingredient Rating 1–4 Example A–J Written in the present tense. 3 A, D, F, G, I, J* Refer to a person involved in the story (= human interest). 3 A, B, H, I Uses emotive words like ‘crisis’, ‘victim’, ‘clash’, ‘fatal’, ‘fury’. 3 B (much-loved), D (hits), G (sparks, war) Leaves out any unnecessary words like ‘the’ and ‘a’. 4 A, B, D, E, F, G, H, I, J Aims to make the story sound dramatic. 3 A, C, D, E, G, H, I Uses alliteration (repeating letters at the start of words – e.g. ‘football fury’). 2 B, E, G, I Uses puns and word play (e.g. bad film review titled ‘Star Bores’). 2 C *Note that while all the headlines are implicitly in the present tense, these are the headlines which explicitly use a main verb. Student Book page 8 Activity 1: Looking at a poorly written news story Student worksheet 1.4 2 Suggested improvements a b c d The headline is long-winded; can be shortened (e.g. School Meals Shaken Up) or rewritten using criteria from Student Book page 6. There are problems with the structure beyond their order: paragraphs 5 and 6 repeat paragraph 1; the key information is spread disjointedly throughout the article. The quotations are long-winded; the final quotation from the Year 9 boy is unnecessary. Sentences are long-winded, particularly in the first paragraph, containing a lot of irrelevant detail (e.g. ‘just across the railway line’ in second paragraph). Student Book page 9 Activity 2: Advice for writing and improving articles Student worksheet 1.5 Possible answers 2 a b The headline is more snappy, using alliterative wordplay (‘Chips face chop’). The first paragraph is dramatic (‘for ever’) and clearly summarises the article. Details of the headteacher given clearly using a ‘label’. Repetition of ‘strict’ (line 1 and 6); could give more details of when guidelines come into force; could include relevant quote from student. Activities 39 Interactive Non-Fiction and Media Teacher’s Guide Unit 1 Newspapers and magazines 1 Newspapers and magazines Student Book page 9 Assess your progress Student worksheets 1.6 and 1.7 Model text Short snappy headline 1st paragraph sums up story Explains why this is happening Adds details and background Teenage knitting club Local school, Grandpont High, is offering students the opportunity to attend an after school knitting club. The club produces blankets and items of clothing which are sold to raise money for local charities. The school already provides a wide range of after school clubs, covering the usual sports, drama, dance and music, but the new knitting option is proving very popular. Since it started in September, fifteen boys and girls have been regularly attending and have already raised nearly £50. Quotation with label Technology teacher and knitting expert, Gail Peason, 32, says: ‘Knitting is something most of us have forgotten about. It’s great to see the kids so enthusiastic about it – and doing something for local charities.’ Final paragraph encourages support Any donations of wool or offers of expertise can be sent to the school, or left at the school’s reception desk. Student Book page 10–11 Activity 1: Understanding and interpreting an article Suggested answers 1 2 a b c d e f g a Gulval Forty minutes Property developer, Adam Gibbard Twelve Lincolnshire and Warwickshire Any one of: a cargo container hurled into the air; a baby thrown across a bedroom; cars stranded in Doncaster; two houses in Finningley hit by lightning. Paul Knightley from PA WeatherCentre. i It contains smaller, grammatical words, e.g. ‘and’, ‘a’; because it is intended to sound like a quotation from a weather report. Activities 40 Interactive Non-Fiction and Media Teacher’s Guide Unit 1 Newspapers and magazines Newspapers and magazines 1 b c d e Where (an unnamed ‘county’); What (‘extreme storms’). Cornwall [where] was struck by a mudslide and a tornado within the space of an hour, affecting hundreds of people [who], as extreme storms ravaged Britain yesterday [when]. Short paragraphs help to hold the reader’s attention, clearly separating each piece of information. lashed: hit, occurred hurled: threw, lifted ripping: pulling, taking out destroying: damaging, breaking The first example is more informal: e.g. the word ‘mucky’; the second uses more formal, technical language, e.g. ‘low pressure’. i ii Student Book page 11 Assess your progress Student worksheet 1.7 and 1.8 Student Book page 14 Activity 1: Reading the same story in different newspapers Student worksheet 1 Suggested answers: 1 a b c d e f g Guardian: Sam Jones; Mirror: Graham Brough. They told the same joke to 4000 people in eleven different regional accents. Received pronunciation. Brummie, Liverpudlian and Geordie. A posh accent. The Mirror tells us that the survey was done for he Paramount Comedy Channel; the Guardian tells us that Harbidge works for the University of Aberdeen. The Brummie accent sounds the most stupid; Yorkshire the warmest (which makes it more suitable for humour than a ‘cold’ accent); Cockney accents are more suited to risque humour. Student Book page 14 Activity 1: Reading the same story in different newspapers Student worksheet 1.9 Suggested answers a Text A: the Guardian Text B: the Mirror How many words are there in the headline? 8 4 How many words are there in the first paragraph? 38 17 How many words are there in the second paragraph? 51 20 Activities 41 Interactive Non-Fiction and Media Teacher’s Guide Unit 1 Newspapers and magazines Newspapers and magazines 1 Write down any words from the whole article that you either do not know or are not very familiar with. Postcode lottery Typified Lilting Respectively Deemed Which newspaper has more of these unfamiliar words? b Students may not associate ‘twang’ with accent however: but reflected: showed, demonstrated, followed perceived: thought of, seen as deemed to be: thought to be, considered to be c Mirror Guardian The research was done for the Paramount Comedy Channel. Examples of people with a Liverpudlian and Geordie accent. f Eleven accents were used for the research. Geordie and Liverpudlian were second and third most unintelligent sounding. Why the particular joke was chosen. The accents that did less well in the survey. Cockney accents are good for risqué humour. More percentages are given. The audience for the Guardian is perhaps looking for more detailed information, more statistical evidence, and is prepared to read more, and in more detail, to get it. The Mirror reader may have a smaller vocabulary, be less prepared to read large amounts of text and have less time for reading. Student Book page 15 Assess your progress Student worksheet 1.10 Student Book page 16 Activity 1: Exploring feature articles Student worksheet 1.11 Suggested answers Cutting News or feature? Text-type Purpose A Feature Opinion piece Inform B News News article Inform C Feature Review Inform/persuade D Feature Opinion piece Persuade E Feature Food writing Persuade/entertain F Feature Celebrity gossip Inform/entertain Activities 42 Interactive Non-Fiction and Media Teacher’s Guide Unit 1 Newspapers and magazines Newspapers and magazines 1 G Feature Opinion piece Persuade H Feature Leader article Persuade I News Sports report Inform Student Book page 19 Assess your progress Student worksheet 1.12 Student Book page 20–21 Activity 1: Studying information in feature articles Suggested answers 1 a b c 2 d e a b c d e Any three of the following. Every year, people in Britain catch the flu virus. Global diseases … that spread around the world are called pandemics. The Black Death killed 75 million people. The chances of most of us catching bird flu are small. Humans must be in close contact with a sick bird to catch bird flu. Coughs and sneezes spread diseases, including bird flu. Sneeze spray can travel at 60mph and land 10m away. One sneeze can project 180,000 flu germs into the air. Flu germs enter humans through the nose, mouth and eyes. Humans must be in close contact with a sick bird to catch bird flu. The bird flu virus could attach itself to the human flu virus and mutate, making it a virus which can be passed between humans. Don’t touch your face. Always cough or sneeze into a handkerchief. All of the above facts are used to inform. The final section (‘Use your hankie’) consists of sentences that persuades or advise. Look for answers containing dramatic or sensationalist language: horror, danger, fear, death, etc. The way the writer has constructed the sentence seems to suggest that it is sad that death can be avoided rather than it is sad that there are many deaths. Subheadings are like signposts, guiding the reader on what they will find next in the article. Young people. 3 Example An informal everyday word or phrase Activities We humans, shock-horror, etc. Why the writer chose to use them How they suit the audience To create an informal, friendly tone, more likely to encourage the reader to follow the advice. To be understood by and appeal to younger readers. 43 Interactive Non-Fiction and Media Teacher’s Guide Unit 1 Newspapers and magazines 1 Newspapers and magazines A technical or scientific word pandemic Suggests the writer knows what s/he is talking about. Limited use of a technical term, clearly explained, for a younger audience. A statement The majority of sentences in the article are statements. Used to give the reader factual background and information to support the advice at the end of the article. To present a complex and frightening subject calmly and informatively. An instruction The majority of sentences in the ‘Use your hankie’ section are instructions. Used to advise the reader on how to avoid bird flu. Younger readers always benefit from good advice! Student Book page 21 Assess your progress Student worksheet 1.13 Student Book page 22–23 Activity 1: Exploring specialist writing Sample answers Text A is from a general publication. The two main clues in the text are it uses description and dialogue like a story and non-technical language (‘black splodges’). Text B is from a specialist publication. The two main clues in the text are it uses a lot of technical language (synonym, temperate) and is written very formally. Text C is from a general publication. The two main clues in the text are it uses a mixture of formal and informal (e.g. ‘kids’) language and it is a news story about humans and a range of animals, not one in particular. Text D is from a specialist publication. The two main clues in the text are it uses a lot of technical language (micro reef systems) and detailed facts/numbers (45 1/10 gal). Text E is from a specialist publication. The two main clues in the text are it is aimed at people who want to keep fish and it offers advice. Text F is from a specialist publication. The two main clues in the text are it gives lots of statistics and lots of detailed facts. Student Book page 24 Activity 2: Reading a specialist article Suggested answers 1 2 a b c d a b c How to use your mountain bike skills outdoors, not in a skate park. Park riding is for BMXs. Mountain biking should be done somewhere more suitable. An abbreviation of ‘Naturally’. It’s great to watch and fun to do. Technical terms are used, e.g. ‘sprint’, ‘blunt’, ‘hop’, etc. He’s good at it! He loves riding them, but wants to ride his mountain bike somewhere more suitable. Activities 44 Interactive Non-Fiction and Media Teacher’s Guide Unit 1 Newspapers and magazines 1 d e f g Newspapers and magazines ‘Britain’s most versatile rider’; ‘a seamless progression of moves’; ‘a pleasure to watch’. e.g. ‘Chris Smith loves riding skate parks’. ‘Once he’s in the zone the riding becomes a seamless progression of moves.’ What the article is about. Describes Chris Smith’s skills in a skate park. Chris has got a complaint. Chris’s complaint is explained. Student Book page 25 Activity 3: Writing for a specialist audience Student worksheet 1.14 Student Book page 25 Assess your progress Student worksheet 1.15 Student Book page 26 Activity 1: Examining a bad review 1 Possible answers 2 Unimaginative and uninteresting choices. It makes it too personal; a review should try to sound more impartial. The structure is unclear and disorganised. Possible opening sentences Once just another face in the background of Take That, Robbie Williams … [background information] Featuring nineteen songs from the last thirteen years, Robbie Williams’ Greatest Hits is … [details] From one of the greatest live performers in living memory comes the Greatest Hits album we’re been waiting for … [opinion] Activity 2: Examining a review Possible answers 1 2 3 4 5 To give background information on Williams’ past and details of the album. Williams is well liked by the public [‘into the hearts of the nation’] and adored by many [who have his poster on their ‘bedroom walls’]. After thirteen years … leaving Take That … After five studio albums … Track 1 is ‘Old Before I Die’ … track 2 is ‘Angels’. For example: ‘interesting dance routines’ ‘… isn’t one of those artists whose singles are great but the rest of the album isn’t much cop’ ‘… Sing When You’re Winning probably … the weakest …’ A review should highlight strengths and weaknesses in detail; not just give an overall opinion. Activities 45 Interactive Non-Fiction and Media Teacher’s Guide Unit 1 Newspapers and magazines 1 6 Newspapers and magazines Although negative points are made, there is a lot of positive language, e.g. stand-out tracks. Student Book page 27 Activity 3: Writing a review Student worksheet 1.16 Student Book page 28–29 Activity 1: Exploring opinions and style Suggested answers 1 2 3 a b c d a b c d e a b c d The engine is turbo charged, fast, thrilling. Feels harsh to drive. Autocar: 9; Times: 2; Auto Express: 8 Autocar: 1; Times: 3; Auto Express: 0 Auto Express The Times The Times (its balance is negative compared to the bias of Autocar and Auto Express). Ensure students explain their opinion. The language in The Times is the most advanced. Comfort (‘extremely comfortable’); price (‘not much more comfortable than other less expensive models’); appearance (‘may not be to everyone’s taste’). All are quite balanced. Emphasise to students the importance of their explanation. Reviews can: help compare similar products; give a balance of good and bad points, where advertising only gives the former; give information on products which you may not have known about. Again, ensure students clearly explain their opinion. Student Book page 29 Activity 2: Write a review Student worksheet 1.17 and 1.18 Student Book pages 30–31 Activity 1: Exploring sports journalism Student worksheet 1.19 and 1.20 Suggested answers 2 1 … uses dramatic language to grab our interest. … made two killer putts (Text A) … powered relentlessly (Text B) Activities 2 … makes the player sound like a hero. … made two killer putts (Text A) Victory… battle (Text C) 3 … gives the writer’s own opinion. Tiger Woods ran away with … (Text A) 46 Interactive Non-Fiction and Media Teacher’s Guide Unit 1 Newspapers and magazines 1 Newspapers and magazines 4 … uses some technical language. putts; major; under par (Text A) 5 … uses jokes or puns. No examples of puns in the three newspaper reports provided 6 … tells us when the match or contest took place (e.g. ‘yesterday’). yesterday (Text A) on Saturday (Text B) 7 … tells us what the sport was. World MotoGP (Text C) 8 … gives us some history on how the team or player have done. 12th major of his career (Text A) … first time in eight years … fourteen years (Text B) 9 … tells us where the event took place. Denmark (Text B) Czech Republic (Text C) Student Book page 32–33 Activity 2: Reading sports journalism Student worksheet 1.21 Suggested answers 1 2 b/c a b c d e f a ‘gets up early’; ‘exasperated by any delay’; ‘doesn’t wait for applause’, etc. She moves swiftly and smoothly. She treats the game like a gun fight. wilting, shame-faced. Gaby Sabatini. Gaby loses; Steffi wins. The writer clearly admires her determination (see question 1a) Statement Agree/Disagree Quotation A Agree ‘She wants to win every set to love’ B Agree ‘a miracle of speed, balance’ C Agree ‘She never smiles’ D Disagree E Disagree F Agree ‘return to her winning ways’ i ‘She looks like a skater’ ii ‘It’s hard to talk right now’ iii ‘And we’ll never know what.’ e Graf is a very determined player; she loses suddenly and surprisingly to Sabatini To inform and entertain; also contains some description. d 3 Student Book page 33 Activity 3: Writing sports journalism Student worksheet 1.22 and 1.23 Student Book page 34 Assessment task Student worksheet 1.24 and 1.2 Activities 47