Introduction to Poetry Poetic Devices & Terms Diamante • A diamante poem is made up of 7 lines using a set structure: • Line 1: Beginning subject • Line 2: Two describing words about line 1 • Line 3: Three doing words about line 1 • Line 4: A short phrase about line 1, a short phrase about line 7 • Line 5: Three doing words about line 7 • Line 6: Two describing words about line 7 • Line 7: End subject diamante poem • Bike • Shiny, quiet • Pedaling, spinning, weaving Whizzing round corners, zooming along roads Racing, roaring, speeding Fast, loud, Car The repetition of sounds End rhyme- the last word on each line rhymes. Example: hat, cat, brat, fat, mat, sat My Beard by Shel Silverstein My beard grows to my toes, I never wears no clothes, I wraps my hair Around my bare, And down the road I goes. Internal rhyme- Words INSIDE the sentence rhyme. The repetition of the initial letter or sound in two or more words in a line. To the lay-person, these are called “tongue-twisters”. Example: How much dew would a dewdrop drop if a dewdrop did drop dew? Betty Botter bought some butter But she said the butter’s bitter If I put it in my batter, it will make my batter bitter But a bit of better butter will make my batter better So ‘twas better Betty Botter bought a bit of better butter Alliteration Alliteration Let’s see what this looks like in a poem. These examples use the beginning sounds of words only twice in a line, but by definition, that’s all you need. Alliteration She Walks in Beauty I. She walks in beauty, like the night Of cloudless climes and starry skies; And all that’s best of dark and bright Meet in her aspect and her eyes: Thus mellowed to that tender light Which Heaven to gaudy day denies. Words that spell out sounds; words that sound like what they mean. Examples: growl, hiss, pop, boom, crack, ptthhhbbb. Let’s see what this looks like in a poem. Noise Day by Shel Silverstein Let’s have one day for girls and boyses When you can make the grandest noises. Screech, scream, holler, and yell – Onomatopoeia Buzz a buzzer, clang a bell, Sneeze – hiccup – whistle – shout, Laugh until your lungs wear out, Toot a whistle, kick a can, Several other words not highlighted could also be considered as onomatopoeia. Can you find any? Bang a spoon against a pan, Sing, yodel, bellow, hum, Blow a horn, beat a drum, Rattle a window, slam a door, Scrape a rake across the floor . . .. A comparison between two usually unrelated things using the word “like” or “as”. Examples: Joe is as hungry as a bear. In the morning, Rae is like an angry lion. Simile Ars Poetica By Archibald MacLeish A poem should be palpable and mute as a globed fruit, Silent as the sleeve-worn stone Of casement ledges where the moss has grown— A poem should be wordless As the flight of birds. Simile Let’s see what this looks like in a poem. Simile An implied comparison between two usually unrelated things. Examples: Lenny is a snake. Ginny is a mouse when it comes to standing up for herself. The difference between a simile and a metaphor is that a simile requires either “like” or “as” to be included in the comparison, and a metaphor requires that neither be used. When it comes to using a metaphor device in poetry, a poet can either make the entire poem a metaphor for something, or put little metaphors throughout the poem. • The following poem is one big metaphor. An exaggeration for the sake of emphasis. Examples: I may sweat to death. The blood bank needs a river of blood. Giving human characteristics to inanimate objects, ideas, or animals. Example: The sun stretched its lazy fingers over the valley. What is Symbolism? • A symbol is something that stands for itself, but also something larger than itself. – It may be a person, an animal, an inanimate object, or an action – . A writer often uses a concrete object to express an abstract idea, a quality, or a belief. – A symbol may appeal to a reader's emotions and can provide a way to express an idea, communicate a message, or clarify meaning Mother to Son by Langston Hughes Well, son, I'll tell you: Life for me ain't been no crystal stair. It's had tacks in it, And splinters, And boards torn up, And places with no carpet on the floor -Bare. But all the time I'se been a-climbin' on, And reachin' landin's, And turnin' corners, And sometimes goin' in the dark Where there ain't been no light. So boy, don't you turn back. Don't you set down on the steps 'Cause you finds it's kinder hard. Don't you fall now -For I'se still goin', honey, I'se still climbin', And life for me ain't been no crystal stair. Using words to create a picture in the reader’s mind. Poetry that follows no rules. Just about anything goes. This does not mean that it uses no devices, it just means that this type of poetry does not follow traditional conventions such as punctuation, capitalization, rhyme scheme, rhythm and meter, etc. Fog The fog comes on little cat feet. It sits looking over harbor and city on silent haunches and then, moves on. No Rhyme No Rhythm No Meter This is free verse. A reference to another piece of literature or to history. Example: “She hath Dian’s wit” (from Romeo and Juliet). This is an allusion to Roman mythology and the goddess Diana. The three most common types of allusion refer to mythology, the Bible, and Shakespeare’s writings. Rhythm Rhythm is the flow of the beat in a poem. Gives poetry a musical feel. Can be fast or slow, depending on mood and subject of poem. You can measure rhythm in meter, by counting the beats in each line. Rhythm Example The Pickety Fence by David McCord The pickety fence The pickety fence Give it a lick it's The pickety fence Give it a lick it's A clickety fence Give it a lick it's a lickety fence Give it a lick Give it a lick Give it a lick With a rickety stick pickety pickety pickety pick. The rhythm in this poem is fast – to match the speed of the stick striking the fence. 22 Rhythm Example Where Are You Now? When the night begins to fall And the sky begins to glow You look up and see the tall City of lights begin to grow – In rows and little golden squares The lights come out. First here, then there Behind the windowpanes as though A million billion bees had built Their golden hives and honeycombs Above you in the air. The rhythm in this poem is slow – to match the night gently falling and the lights slowly coming on. By Mary Britton Miller 23 Imagery Imagery is the use of words to create pictures, or images, in your mind. Appeals to the five senses: smell, sight, hearing, taste and touch. Details about smells, sounds, colors, and taste create strong images. To create vivid images writers use figures of speech. Five Senses 24 Lines and Stanzas • Most poems are written in lines. • A group of lines in a poem is called a stanza. • Stanzas separate ideas in a poem. They act like paragraphs. • This poem has two stanzas. March A blue day A blue jay And a good beginning. One crow, Melting snow – Spring’s winning! By Eleanor Farjeon 25 Free Verse • A free verse poem does not use rhyme or patterns. • Can vary freely in length of lines, stanzas, and subject. Revenge When I find out who took the last cooky out of the jar and left me a bunch of stale old messy crumbs, I'm going to take me a handful and crumb up someone's bed. By Myra Cohn Livingston 26 Mood • Mood is the atmosphere, or emotion, in the poem created by the poet. • Can be happy, angry, silly, sad, excited, fearful or thoughtful. • Poet uses words and images to create mood. • Author’s purpose helps determine mood. • (See slides 65-72 for examples.) 27 Mood - Barefoot Days Barefoot Days by Rachel Field In the morning, very early, That’s the time I love to go Barefoot where the fern grows curly And grass is cool between each toe, On a summer morning-O! On a summer morning! That is when the birds go by Up the sunny slopes of air, And each rose has a butterfly Or a golden bee to wear; And I am glad in every toe – Such a summer morning-O! Such a summer morning! The mood in this poem is happy. What clues in the poem can you use to determine the mood? 28 Mood - Mad Song Mad Song I shut my door To keep you out Won’t do no good To stand and shout Won’t listen to A thing you say Just time you took Yourself away I lock my door To keep me here Until I’m sure You disappear. The mood in this poem is angry. What clues in the poem can you use to determine the mood? By Myra Cohn Livingston 29 Mood - Poem Poem I loved my friend. He went away from me. There’s nothing more to say. The poem ends, Soft as it began – I loved my friend: By Langston Hughes The mood in this poem is sad. What clues in the poem can you use to determine the mood? 30 Diction • Diction refers to the language of a poem, and how each word is chosen to convey a precise meaning. • Poets are very deliberate in choosing each word for its particular effect, • It's important to know the denotation and connotations of the words in a poem, not to mention their literal meaning, too. 31 Diction • Example: • T.S. Eliot, "Burnt Norton "Words strain, Crack and sometimes break, under the burden, Under the tension, slip, slide, perish, Decay with imprecision, will not stay in place, Will not stay still.” Notice the choice of harsh words like “burden” and “strain”. 32 Tone is the attitude writers take towards their subject . Would this poem have a different meaning for the reader if the tone was changed? What is an Irregular Ode Poem? • An Irregular Ode is a poem with meter and rhyme just like all other odes but has no set pattern. Each line rhymes somewhere throughout. • Ode To Spring • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • (a) Oh ! Glorious Spring, how amazing you are (b) You are both Truth's beauty and light (a) You travel far (b) Yet always remain bright (c) Baby lambs greet you with a bleat (d) Birds fly stretching their wings (c) Lovers on a seat (d) We are truly thankful for what you bring (e) Spring never leave (f) Oh but can I compare (g) How I feel when you're near? (g) Spreading your joy to those so dear (h) Spring we celebrate your birth (h) And we mourn each year you leave this Earth Oh Spring! Don’t Confuse Tone & Mood! *Tone and mood are two different aspects of a poem! * Tone is the author's or the poet's attitude towards his or her subject. *Mood is how the poem makes the reader or the listener feel. Reading for Meaning • To find meaning in a poem, readers ask questions as they read. There are many things to pay attention to when reading a poem: Title – Provides clues about – topic, mood, speaker, author’s purpose? Rhythm – Fast or slow? Why? Sound Devices – What effects do they have? Imagery – What pictures do we make in our minds? Figures of Speech – What do they tell us about the subject? Voice – Who is speaking - poet or character; one voice or more? Author’s Purpose – Sending message, sharing feelings, telling story, being funny, being descriptive? Mood – Happy, sad, angry, thoughtful, silly, excited, frightened? Plot – What is happening in the poem? Remember, to make meaning, readers must make connections and tap into their background knowledge and prior experiences as they read. 37 • What is a Rhyming Couplet? A Rhyming Couplet is two line of the same length that rhyme and complete one thought. There is no limit to the length of the lines. Rhyming words are words that sound the same when spoken, they don't necessarily have to be spelt the same. • The wind blew very strong - As we scurried along • Plastic snake - Very fake • In the morning the sun shone bright Clearing the thoughts of the dark night What is a Quatrain? • A Quatrain is a stanza of four lines. • • • • He drew a circle that shut me out -Heretic, rebel, a thing to flout. But Love and I had the wit to win: We drew a circle that took him in. What is a Cinquain? • A cinquain poem is a verse of five lines that do not rhyme. The cinquain poem was created by Adelaide Crapsey. • Each line has a set number of syllables see below: • • • • • Line 1: 2 syllables Line 2: 4 syllables Line 3: 6 syllables Line 4: 8 syllables Line 5: 2 syllables EXAMPLE • • • • • My mum (2 syllables) Is so caring (4 syllables) She is always helpful (6 syllables) She is so beautiful and kind (8 syllables) Love you. (2 syllables) What is an Echo Verse Poem? An Echo Verse is when the last word or syllable in a line is repeated or echoed underneath to form a rhyming line, normally ending as the last line being the title to the poem. Example of an Echo Verse • • • • • • • • • • • • What is this that falls from the sky? Echo - I Do you live above the thunder? Echo - Under Are you cold white snow? Echo - No You don’t fall quietly from the cloud Echo - Loud You hit the ground with a spatter Echo - Patter You journey from the sky to the drain Echo - Rain Ottava Rima Poem • An Ottava Rima is an Italian poem made up of eight lines that rhyme. Each line consists of eleven syllables. • • • • • • • • example of an Ottava Rima Poem Quickly did the tiger begin his fast run Over hilly ground you see him fly and leap The passive prey laying grazing in the sun Suddenly its life that it wanted to keep Tiger pounces, quickly getting the job done The prey collapsing in a really big heap Tiger sleeps as night takes over from the day Will we ever see the hunter become prey? Riddle Poem • A Riddle is a type of poem that describes something without actually naming what it is, leaving the reader to guess. A Riddle is a light hearted type of poetry which involves the reader. • Riddles can be about anything, from Riddles about animals to Riddles about objects. There are no rules on how to structure a Riddle poem, a Riddle can be funny or it can rhyme, it depends on the person writing the Riddle. Example of a Riddle Poem • • • • • • • It is an animal It is orange and black it has stripes It has four paws It lives in the jungle What is it? A tiger a Rondeau Poem • A Rondeau is a short poem consisting of fifteen lines that have two rhymes throughout. The first few words or phrase from the first line are repeated twice in the poem as a refrain. Example of a Rondeau Poem • The capital A is the refrain and sentence it is taken from • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • (a) In Summertime we do not go (a) To school for weeks and weeks, no no! (b) We take a day trip to the beach (b) And buy ourselves an ice cream each (a) We run into the surf that's low (a) Get seaweed wrapped around our toes (a) While others sunbathe on a throw (b) We build sandcastles tides can't reach (A) In Summertime. (a) As the light warm breeze begins to blow (a) And our hunger begins to grow (b) From the picnic I grab a peach (b) 'Let's stay longer' I do beseech (a) As the sun sets the sky does glow (A) In Summertime.