George 1 “I Always Wanted to Be Historical”: The Crack-Up of the Self from the Outside Sarah George English Honors Thesis Stanislaw Witkiewicz. Self portrait (1910) Private Collection, Warsaw. George 2 “Am I I”: The Crack-Up of the Self from the Outside Sarah George English Honors Thesis April 29, 2010 Professor Mark Schoenfield _________________ Professor Ellen Levy___________________ Professor Roy Gottfried __________________ Table of Contents Introduction: Authors of Time Chapter 1: Me, Myself and Fitzgerald Chapter 2: Physician, Heal Thyself George 3 Chapter 3: Inside Out or Outside In? Chapter 4: Stein's American Self Introduction Authors of Time As a poster boy for American modernism of the Lost Generation, Ernest Hemingway once wrote, “The world breaks everyone, and afterward, some are strong at the broken places.” The process of brokenness, and the possibility of reconstruction, is one that took the fore in American George 4 modernism of the 1930s. The interwar writings of two particular American modernists, F. Scott Fitzgerald and Gertrude Stein, highlight the way in which American authors at home and abroad approached the consideration of identity in the face of external trauma. Their works pivoted toward the exploration of their own selves, an outward turning of the innermost being through the publication of The Crack-Up in Fitzgerald's case and The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas in Stein's. The strange ways in which they view and treat the self and the “I,” and the fragility of that self in the face of external forces, point to the primacy of the historical moment and the impact of trauma on the individual that permeates the rest of their works during this time. Both authors changed the scope and tone of their writing to reflect the destabilizing impact of World War I and the Sock Market Crash. Fitzgerald and Stein both turned to the autobiography, to the exposure of the fragmented self to the outside world in their writing, but each followed this process to a different conclusion. In both cases, however, the interwar modernism takes on a strange fragility that was absent in the boldness of the early modernism, a sense of searching austerity that attempts to reassess the status of the individual in the face of an altered world. The precedent of high modernism, represented tellingly by Gertrude Stein, an American expatriate living in Paris in the nineteen-teens, was one fundamentally concerned with break-up, a shattering of form in response to and further provoking the changing social norms and understanding of the world leading into the roaring 20's. Published in 1914, on the eve of World War I, Tender Buttons serves as the advance guard for Stein's formalist modernism. In its fractured form, comprised of prose poems of varying lengths exhibiting Stein's quintessential ed repetition, Tender Buttons predicts the fragmentation that characterizes Stein's later work. Applying a strange and sharp violence to the interiority of the world Stein created, Tender Buttons mimics the way the coming war would shatter the domestic interiority of European life. Stein described the process of writing this work, “And so in Tender Buttons and then on I struggled with the ridding of myself of George 5 nouns. I knew that nouns must go in poetry as they had gone in prose if anything that is everything was to go on meaning something” (Selected Writings 460). The noun, the signifier of the autonomous being was gone in her writing, as considerations of the individual disappeared as well. By concentrating her focus in this work on the “Objects, Food, and Rooms” of the home, Stein explores the way in which an external, impersonal violence can fracture the internal, highly personal space of the home. The interplay of the impersonal and the personal, the external and the internal, breaks up, compartmentalizes, and defamiliarizes the home. Through Stein's eyes, the gaze turns to each object individually, considering it, defamiliarizing it. The process occurs in the disconnect between the “title” of these sketches and its content. In sketches such as “An Umbrella,” which continues “Coloring high means that the strange reason is in front not more in front behind. Not more in front in peace of the dot” (Tender Buttons 129), the title and the sketch experience a block between them. The process of naming and the thing (the “I,” in other cases) are separated by a whole host of the personal that Stein leaves unsaid. In this consideration of the nominal and the formal essence of each idea, things fall apart. The titles are the centers around which the eyes travel, gathering impressions, the essential “I's” around which conceptions of self rotate. The quick turns between name and essence are emblematic of the modern condition as expressed by literary modernism, reflecting the constancy of the present. This condition focuses on the moment, the transitory “I” as it exists from one second to the next. The “I” is recreated at every present. For Stein, “this which was so kindly a present was constant” (Tender Buttons 126). The trajectory of the moment establishes itself as a line in Stein's terms, offering more insight into that which divides the “titles” from their descriptions of “thing-ness”. She writes “Where is the serene length, it is there and a dark place is not a dark place is not a dark place, only a white and red are black, only a yellow and green are blue, a pink is scarlet, a bow is every color. A line distinguishes it. A line just distinguishes it” (Tender Buttons 126). This faint line of distinction is the in-between George 6 place, the present between past and future, the self of the moment, an “I” kept separate from all those of past and future, “just” distinguished. Stein continues to explore the bonds of strength, order, and brokenness through the centrality of lines and connections to the whole. Her assessment, “No cup is broken in more place and mended, that is to say a plate is broken and mending does do that it shows that culture is Japanese...Supposing a single piece is a hair supposing more of them are orderly, does that show that strength, does that show that joint, does that show that balloon famously. Does it” (Tender Buttons 129). By invoking the possibility that the breaking and mending of a plate, Stein creates a new, stronger entity. Stein raises questions about the fracturing and reordering of the self in the face of some trauma, connecting this reordering to place as the culture becomes “Japanese.” The shards of the sketches Stein presents are emblematic of these same fragments of plates and cups. When recombined into a new “house,” the resulting whole is fundamentally a different “I” than that coherent whole that existed before. Although it is composed of the same pieces, the fragments are swept together by the physical, the psychological, and a whole host of associations unseen, which function as the invisible threads, connecting and occasionally shimmering in the half-light, darting away when one attempts to look at them too directly. Ultimately, this reconstruction is a function of the ability of words to create and change. For Stein, it means no more than a memory, a choice and a reestablishment...All the time that there is use there is use and any time there is a surface there is a surface, and every time there is a dividing there is a dividing. Any time there is a surface there is a surface and every time there is a suggestion there is a suggestion and every time there is silence there is silence and every time that is languid there is that there then and not oftener, not always, not particular, tender and changing and external and central and surrounded and singular George 7 and simple and the same and the surface and the circle and the shine and the succor and the white and the same and the better and the red and the same and the center and the yellow and the tender and the better, and altogether. (Tender Buttons 134) The repetition inherent in Stein's invocation of such seemingly ambiguous and amorphous, or even negative terms as “surface,” “exception,” “dividing,” and “suggestion” is a part of the process of reestablishment of a whole out of the fragmentary parts. The words as arbitrary signifiers impose an order onto those fragmentary parts. More structurally important, however, is the repetition of the phrase “there is.” This repeated affirmation suggests a continued need to reaffirm the presence of the process of externalization through writing. In this recreation of a whole, Stein points to the necessity of the recreation of the “I” in the face of break down. By framing the process of breaking down in Tender Buttons as removed from herself, from an actual “I,” Stein suggests the ultimate unknowableness of another. By contrast, Fitzgerald's Crack-Up is, while a deeply personal story, also the story of the American condition. The experience is articulated to make it acceptable on a national scale. Here, Stein's story is superficially less personal, negating the “I,” but by virtue of its exteriority it takes on an unapproachable quality, suggesting something deeply personal in its structure. Stein approaches this dynamic by writing, “The kindly way to feel separating is to have a space between. This shows a likeness” (Tender Buttons 135). The “space” as constituting a “likeness” is counterintuitive, but the relationship speaks to the destruction of binaries with which Stein deals specifically in later works and which constitutes a part of the breakdown of the sense of the solid self. Stein's distance, morphing into the deeply personal is linked to her understanding of solitude: “Melting and not minding, safety and power, a particular recollection and a sincere solitude all this makes a shunning so thorough and so unrepeated and surely if there is anything left it is a bone. It is not solitary” George 8 (Tender Buttons 137). The condition of solitude is one that puts the “I” outside the purview of all else, allowing a personal “melting” and subsequent “recollection.” For all of that, the final result is something “not solitary,” another binary broken in navigating the internal/external divide. Turning specifically to the war on the horizon and its impending effects on Stein's modernism, Stein explicitly invokes a sense of violence in Tender Buttons. While World War I does not represent a causal mechanism in Stein's destabilization in these passages, the link between warlike violence and the destruction of which she writes simmers beneath the surface. A source for the formal fracturing she exhibits, this violence is manifested in “A sentence of a vagueness that is violence is authority and a mission and stumbling and also certainly also a prison. Calmness, calm is beside the plate and in way in there is no turn in terror. There is no volume in sound” (Tender Buttons 136). The presence of violence here creates the idea of a false essence, a “vagueness” attacking the essential self, and a system in which “there is no volume in sound.” The effects of this breaking violence further require a process of healing, of reconstruction and reconstitution. The process is then “a hurt mended stick, a hurt mended cup, a hurt mended article of exceptional relaxation and annoyance, a hurt mended, hurt and mended is so necessary that no mistake is intended” (Tender Buttons 138). It becomes, through this repetition, routine that an “I” is both hurt and mended, fractured and reconstituted. In “Eating,” Stein reaches her fractured height in Tender Buttons. Stein begins this section, “Eat ting, eating a grand old man said roof and never never re soluble burst, not a near ring not a bewildered neck, not really any such bay. Is it so a noise to be is it a least remain to rest, is it a so old say to be, is it a leading are been. Is it so, is it so, is it so, is it so is it so is it so” (Tender Buttons 145). The set of shattered words and sentences disrupts the building blocks of language. The repetition of the final line points to the process Stein has put forth for reestablishment in the power of those very words that had been de-constructed, as if by the repetition it is possible to reassert wholeness. Stein repudiates this reassertion of wholeness in her George 9 works of the 1930s, leaving the shards of the individual sitting as they were at the moment of breaking. The reassertion of the system broken by the historical moment becomes false. The relationship between this work of high American modernism to her works of the 1930s that rests on her personal relationship with the historical moment: “Stein and her texts present us with peculiar and important difficulties when we attempt to make these measurements and the reasons for these difficulties...[derived] from her understanding of the self's relation to time. Like any number of modernists, she concerns herself centrally with the faculty of memory and the discipline of reading the world historically” (Whittier-Ferguson). In exploring this relation to time in her later works, the constitution of the self is inextricably linked to the breakdown of the divide between internal and external, the externalization of the self through publication and, the way this process leaves the self open to the destructive influence of the external. Fitzgerald's connection with the historical moment has led critics to point to his place as representative of the Jazz Age and the Roaring 20's in the United States. His ability to chronicle the experience of a generation in America, the “flappers and philosophers” as he termed them in a title of short stories, is well-acknowledged. While not the formalist modernism as seen in Stein's Tender Buttons, Fitzgerald's stories of the 1920's tied him to the events and individuals guiding the country and dictated how he viewed the production of identity. Because of his identification with the social situation, “to a large extent Fitzgerald was responsible for his own predicament. From the moment that he burst upon the literary scene in 1920 with his debut novel, This Side of Paradise, the precocious twenty-three year-old encouraged audiences to acknowledge the umbilical connection between his life and art” (Curnutt 4). This self-perpetuating cycle of the increasing ambiguity of the auto-biographical nature of Fitzgerald's work is one that becomes problematic as the historical moment that is informing his sense of identity shifts from the bacchanalian revelry of the 1920's into the effects of the Stock Market Crash. At this moment, however, Fitzgerald battled against this George 10 unilateral identification of his work with the circumstances governing society and his own life. He insisted that the autobiographical elements in his work were not exclusively personal. Rather, his tales of idealistic young 'jelly beans' and the flirtatious flappers...reflected the experiences of peers who like him came of age amid the welter of cultural change...In this way, Fitzgerald was not writing about private concerns, but about the historical transformations that shaped the character of his generation. (Curnett 5) This compounding of the personal and the historical carries through to his work of the 1930's. His break-down was the American break-down. Fitzgerald further understands that the question of the identity of the United States rests on the status of the American Dream, which was shaken from its golden foundations as the economy was crippled by the crash. In a cyclical motion, one confronts Fitzgerald's realization that the American Dream is an internal definition of identity that is contained in individuals as well as the larger nation. In his progression between the decades, gaining the austerity coming forth from the realities of the Great Depression, Fitzgerald went through the process by which no longer dismissed as debutante valentines, for instance, the jazzier of his Jazz Age tales could be read as evidence of the moral confusion that arose from the postwar sexual revolution. Similarly, works inspired by the Fitzgeralds' life abroad (Tender, 'Babylon Revisited') no longer bespoke the couple's personal rootlessness but the felt exile of an entire literary generation for whom expatriation was synonymous with artistic freedom. Finally, Fitzgerald's recurring inquiry into the effect of easy money on individual morality reflects 1920's anxieties over American culture's sudden glorification George 11 of fiscal and emotional irresponsibility. (Curnett 13) The dialectic between internal and external for Fitzgerald and the larger society plays into the destruction of the self that occurred in the face of such trauma as the Stock Market Crash and the resulting Great Depression. This internal construction of the American Dream turns the focus again onto the implications of the internal/external divide, and the way in which the external works upon the internal of the individual, both creating and destroying it. This initial destruction, then, becomes pivotal for making room for reconstruction and rebirth from the shattered and wounded pieces of the self, as Fitzgerald delineates in The Crack-Up. The status of the self as an American and as a self-contained individual is called into question by the extent to which external events, pressures, histories, and individuals are able to dismantle and sway the internal self. George 12 Chapter I Me, Myself, and Fitzgerald F. Scott Fitzgerald's story, his own as well as the ones he writes, is that of the failure of the American dream – the American break-down. Explicitly dealt with in his “Crack-Up” articles published in Esquire, the fragmentation of the self pervades Fitzgerald's work, taking on a peculiarly American form. He explores the implications not only of a self divided, but possibly of the very disintegration of that self as it encounters the trauma of the external. For Gertrude Stein and her European compatriots, this modern conception of the self in all of its fragmentary ruin was largely a product of the break-down of consciousness experienced after World War I. Their form reveled in the fragments left to them to express a new reality. The experience of living abroad, for Stein and her compatriots left the self open to the influence of the external, and created a new sense of self divided. For Fitzgerald, the experience of the war was a far-away specter, as he was on the cusp of the changing of generations. He inhabited a liminal period between generations, in some ways haunted by the war, but also both physically and mentally removed from it. Fitzgerald's fragmentation pivoted on experiences that called into question the American Dream, and ultimately broke it for Fitzgerald: Prohibition and the Great Depression, manifested by his alcoholism and his own inability to hold on to money. His life a distillation of the American experience on the brink of disaster, Fitzgerald sought not to explore the shattered particles of himself, but to emulate Eliot in shoring his fragments against his ruin. The framework for understanding Fitzgerald's crack-up comes from his essay carrying the same name. Coming late in his career, “The Crack-Up,” written for Esquire in the wake of the stock market crash and the crash of Fitzgerald's own authorial stock attempts to explore the way Fitzgerald broke and begin the process of mending. The larger implications of this exploration revolve around Fitzgerald's understanding of the binary between internal and external. In his world George 13 of personal publicity and historical trauma, the external stimuli of war, Depression, alcohol, or money had the power of creation, definition, and destruction. This process runs against the separation of the autonomous self from the external world, suggesting a permeability that allows the historical moment to form the “I.” Fitzgerald begins with an exploration of the way his situation is exceptional and yet the most common situation in America: Of course all life is a process of breaking down, but the blows that do the dramatic side of the work – the big sudden blows that come, or seem to come, from outside – the ones you remember and blame things on and, in moments of weakness, tell your friends about, don't show their effect all at once. There is another sort of blow that comes from within – that you don't feel until it's too late to do anything about it, until you realize with finality that in some regard you will never be as good a man again. The first sort of breakage seems to happen quick – the second kind happens almost without your knowing it but is realized suddenly indeed. (“Crack-Up” 69) This passage detailing Fitzgerald's views of the forces causing breakdown shows the implications of this breakdown for the conception of the “I.” The blows of which Fitzgerald speaks and the process by which the breakdown is happening, impact a mystical “you,” negating the sense of the fragmentation of the self by displacing it onto another. Although he speaks personally later in the essay, the language employed here, creates a milieu in which Fitzgerald's “I” has no place. Significantly, however, Fitzgerald does point to the responsibility the self bears in the process of this breakdown. Exploring first the outside blows that one understands as the root of the crack-up, Fitzgerald then turns to the inner demons that destabilize the self. Continuing with the idea of blame and the “I,” Fitzgerald writes, “I was living hard, too, but: 'Up to forty-nine it'll be all right,' I said. 'I can count on that. For a man who's lived as I have that's all you could ask.' – And then, ten George 14 years this side of forty-nine I suddenly realized that I had prematurely cracked” (“CrackUp” 70). Even here, the sense of the “I” is separate from Fitzgerald as writer. In writing “The Crack-Up,” Fitzgerald is searching for a way to hold his broken pieces together. By identifying these pieces, setting himself as writer apart from them, he seeks to bring them together, “trying to cling to something” (“Crack-Up” 73). By reasserting his identity, projecting the internal out into the public, external realm through publication, Fitzgerald attempts to reconstruct himself. Breezing through some of his past selves, Fitzgerald sets up a divide between himself now and himself then: “The man with the jingle of money in his pocket who married the girl a year later would always cherish an abiding distrust, an animosity, toward the leisure class – not the conviction of a revolutionary but the smouldering hatred of a peasant” (“Crack-Up” 77). The revolutionary, outward-looking, is connected to the historical moment, while the peasant occupies an almost ahistorical interior space. Yet the creation of the interiority directly resonds to the external consideration of class and money. Significantly, Fitzgerald turns to the lens of money through which to assess his past and current selves, looking to monetary figures to bind together the “I.” Further, Fitzgerald's class imagery crystallizes his definition of the monetary self. His sense of petering talent takes on the rhetoric of status symbols in, “In its impact this blow was more violent than the other two but it was the same in kind – a feeling that I was standing at twilight on a deserted range, with an empty rifle in my hands and the targets down. No problem set – simply a silence with only the sound of my own breathing” (“Crack-Up” 77). Fitzgerald's terms of self-definition slowly crumble around him. The presence of this class outside of himself works on his own identity, creating a sense of inferiority. In this case, however, Fitzgerald becomes acutely aware of precisely what he owes to the wealthy classes, and the extent to which they hold George 15 his future in their hands: “I will try to be a correct animal, though, and if you throw me a bone with enough meat on it I may even lick your hand” (“Crack-Up” 84). This loss of autonomy Fitzgerald experiences compounds his sense of fracturing, underscored by his increasingly pronounced ambivalence toward wealth and status. In writing “The Crack-Up,” Fitzgerald unpacks his own neuroses during this time, specifically the fragmentation of the self. He writes, “So there was not an 'I' any more – not a basis on which I could organize my self-respect – save my limitless capacity for toil that it seemed I possessed no more. It was strange to have no self” (“Crack-Up” 79). The wandering inherent in this analysis, combined with the act of writing points to a sense of separation between Fitzgerald's multiple selves. The creation of this self in the exterior space of the written word and more importantly, publication speaks to the permeability of a seemingly concrete binary as Fitzgerald casts himself out into the world in an attempt to reassert coherence for the fragments of his self. The culmination of “The Crack-Up,” and its implication for Fitzgerald's other writings is the manner in which Fitzgerald reconstructs himself after the breakdown. Involved in a process of recreating the self through his writing, he re-glues his fragments, gathering and naming them as shards of his history with characters of their own. He subsequently attempts to assemble them into a coherent whole, although the scars from the breaking have not disappeared with the mending: “Sometimes, though, the cracked plate has to be returned in the pantry, has to be kept in service as a household necessity. It can never again be warmed on the stove nor shuffled with the other plates in the dishpan; it will not be brought out for company, but it will do to hold crackers late at night or to go into the ice box under leftovers...” (“Crack-Up” 75). Like Stein's cups and plates of Tender Buttons, the idea of the re-unified, but still shattered and scarred whole pervades George 16 Fitzgerald's work and creates a strain of his own experience of cracking and reassembling the American dream under extraordinary pressure. Further essays in “The Crack-Up” explore Fitzgerald's views of the process of the dissolution of self, specifically invoking ideas regarding the fundamental “I.” Writing "Early Success" in 1937, Fitzgerald recounts the creation and dissolution of himself as an author through publication of This Side of Paradise. For both Fitzgerald and Stein, the projection of the self into the world through publication solidifies the self in the external, but it also includes a loss of the “I” as the self crosses the internal/external divide. Written at one of his most desperate moments and eventually published in The Crack-Up, "Early Success" is not merely a retelling of Fitzgerald's entry onto the literary scene, but a narrative of his production of identity. Fitzgerald's identification with his novel as a mirror image of himself projected into the world is apparent in his reaction to its criticism: "These weeks in the clouds ended abruptly a week later when Princeton turned on the book...There was a kind but reproachful letter from President Hibben, and a room full of classmates who suddenly turned on me with condemnation" (“Early Success” 88). The imposition of the external here through the critical reaction to the physical manifestation of his self creates a disconnect between former and current self. The translocation into the realms of the external through the publication of his novel, however, completes itself in forswearing against this past and the criticisms lurking therein. He describes the completion of this process, writing, "But one was now a professional -- and the new world couldn't possibly be presented without bumping the old out of the way" (“Early Success” 89). The process and trappings of publication, of casting (as perhaps only Fitzgerald can do so thoroughly) the innermost, most fundamental self into the external world, breaks down the internal/external binary. The work of the external, then, through critical and public George 17 response to the physical manifestation of self, is to create a new identity, that of the professional. Fitzgerald's development in "Early Success" embodies this progression, with the self taking the form of his first novel This Side of Paradise. Considered to be autobiographical, the novel represented his "coming out" to the world. Fitzgerald's creation of his conception of self takes on a particular form in this essay: His transformation from amateur to professional. The body of this transformation is contained in the publication of his novel, as "that week the postman rang and rang, and I paid off my terrible small debts, bought a suit, and woke up every morning with a world of ineffable toploftiness and promise...the metamorphosis of amateur into professional began to take place" (“Early Success” 86). Fitzgerald defines himself by the self that he sees represented in the form of the novel. Through this novel presented to the world as his image, and the work of the external on this image, he begins to understand himself. Fitzgerald points to this transformation of his identity as one that is fundamentally controlled by the externalities of the Other and History -- and one that has to be recreated ad nauseum as he continues to publish. This creation of identity, placed in terms of transformation from “amateur” to “professional” is linked to other considerations revolving around the influence of the external circumstance on the individual “I:” "I had been an amateur before; in October, when I strolled with a girl among the stones of a southern graveyard, I was a professional and my enchantment with certain things that she felt and said was already paced by an anxiety to set them down in a story" (“Early Success” 86). Fitzgerald moves from the real, tangible objects of the girl, the stones, and the graveyard into a sense of existence George 18 dominated by words ready to “set them down in a story.” Fitzgerald's experience in his "Early Success" embodies the permeability self. Taking up the identity of professional wordsmith, Fitzgerald alienates himself through language to send the “I” out into the world via publication, which then comes back to him changed at its foundations by the pressures of the outside. Fitzgerald's understanding of the creation of the "I" is complicated by the idea that, as he continues to publish and construct himself through the negotiation of internal and external through this publication, he consciously creates the image of himself, pushing back against the external. In effect, he understands (at least in hindsight) that in publication he asserted his identity, one subsequently projected to the outside world: "On the other hand, for a shy man it was nice to be somebody except oneself again: to be 'the Author' as one had been 'the Lieutenant.' Of course one wasn't really an author any more than one had been an army officer, but nobody seemed to guess behind the false face" (“Early Success” 88). With the idea of acting or the mask taking primacy in other works, the invocations of the “false face” in “Early Success” is one that points to the transitory nature of identity, and the dangers of attempting to create “just a mask.” Taking up this veil works on the internal, winding itself sinuously around the “I” until the self and the mask are inseparable. The oscillation between internal and external in the definition of self is further complicated by the idea of falsity as Fitzgerald describes his experience of encountering his identity in the form of his novel: "With its publication I reached a stage of manic depressive insanity. Rage and bliss alternated hour by hour. A lot of people thought it was a fake, and perhaps it was, and a lot of others thought it was a lie, which it was not" (“Early Success” 88). Fitzgerald's creation of a self characterized by sturm and drang with his meeting of internal with new self coming back from creation by the external points to the delineation between George 19 "a fake" and "a lie," which is a distinction that buttresses Fitzgerald's conception of his own "I": possibly fake, but always true. In the closing lines of his essay, Fitzgerald points to the transfiguration publication produces. He discusses a sense of loss as the individual enters the vast world of experience and formative influence. For Fitzgerald, this loss and its manifestation takes the form of the mind of the young man with cardboard soles who had walked the streets of New York. I was him again -- for an instant I had the good fortune to share his dreams, I who had no more dreams of my own. And there are still times when I creep up on him...But never again as during that all too short period when he and I were one person, when the fulfilled future and the wistful past were mingled in a single gorgeous moment -- when life was literally a dream." (“Early Success” 90) Fitzgerald's progression from "amateur" to "professional" and his creation of a conception of the self is not merely one characterized by un-circumspect evolution, but is accompanied by a sense in which the realm of the internally constructed “I,” the life of the amateur kid, held a key to life that can never be recovered. The autobiographical work (or autobiography about autobiography) of The Crack-Up feeds into Fitzgerald's fictional works as evidenced by his discussion of This Side of Paradise. Two of Fitzgerald's late stories confront the issues (the break of success and alcoholism) that brought about his own crack-up: “Babylon Revisited” and “A New Leaf.” "Babylon Revisited," written near the time of Fitzgerald's crack-up, explores the harrowing impact of alcoholism and loss of wealth on the family and the individual. In some ways parallel to Fitzgerald's personal history, "Babylon Revisited" pivots on its representation of the self as faced with outside forces set to destroy it. The character Charles travels to Paris to reclaim his daughter from his wife's family, who have been George 20 raising her because of his mental breakdown resulting from drinking and dissolution after his wife's death. The plot is one of the gradual revealing that Charles was responsible for his wife's death, precipitating his own collapse and the unwillingness of his wife's family to relinquish his daughter. When Charles, now sober, returns to Paris to reclaim his daughter, he is suddenly thrust back into a past life and confronted with a past self. Hearkening back to a certain Stein-like Paris, Charles ruminates on the change his personal history has made on his conception of Paris: "He was not really disappointed to find Paris was so empty. But the stillness in the Ritz bar was strange and portentous. It was not really an American bar any more -- he felt polite in it, and not as if he owned it. It had gone back to France" ("Babylon Revisited” 616). This personal change is magnified by the larger changes of country, national feeling, and relatedly, ownership. This change in the experience of Paris for an American reflects the change experienced by Charles, and pervades the larger implications for the effect of outside forces on the "I." Charles puts words to his sense of losing Paris and its implications, "It seems funny, to see so few Americans around." His sister-in-law, Marion, represented as more of an expatriate than an American responds "We've suffered like everybody, but on the whole it's a good deal pleasanter." Seeking to recreate his past life in Paris and put words to the change he senses at having lost that life, Charles responds, "But it was nice while it lasted...We were a sort of royalty, almost infallible, with a sort of magic around us. In the bar this afternoon...there wasn't a man I knew" ("Babylon Revisited" 619). Charles' response in this passage points to a number of different ways in which he conceives of his sense of the "I" and points to how he understands its subsequent dissolution. Most explicitly, his reply evokes the economic definition of self, evoking a past life, a past Paris, that was defined by "royalty," pointing first to the crash of markets and wealth as the fall of the "I." This idea is then immediately extended to the "infallible" self, implying that Charles conceived of his economic self in Paris as protected, whole, and sure. The "infallible" self, however, also raises issues concerning George 21 the creation of the ideal self. The "sort of magic around us" reinforces this idea, suggesting that what has really been dissolved in Charles' loss of Paris is his ability to create an "I" onto which to project his interiority and through which to observe himself. Indeed, when "in the bar this afternoon...there wasn't a man I knew," Charles implies that he has lost himself and the mirror by which he judges himself, the American living in Paris. By invoking his mourning of the loss of the Paris he had known, Charles also points to the extent to which he feels he has lost himself and the conduit through which he defines his own "I." One of the questions at which Fitzgerald prods throughout "Babylon Revisited" is that of the power of naming, of putting words to actions. Through Charles' initial refusal to talk about what happened to his wife (and Marion's refusal to hear it), Fitzgerald points to the importance of the ability to name.. In the first mention of what happened to Charles' wife, the impetus for his breakdown, Charles and Marion skirt actually naming the incident. Marion begins: "From the night you did that terrible thing you haven't really existed for me." The essence of this "terrible thing" underlies the rest of Marion's accusations and she proceeds to a more explicit explanation, "I'll never in my life be able to forget the morning when Helen knocked at my door, soaked to the skin and shivering, and said you'd locked her out." While the act has here been obliquely named, Marion then refuses to speak of (or allow Charles to speak of) the underlying reasons behind this act and its subsequent effects. As Charles begins "the night I locked her out,” and she interrupts “I don't feel up to going over that again" ("Babylon Revisited" 625). The progression of learning the story of Helen's death, the point of entry into Charles' broken sense of self, rests on the slowly developing ability of Charles to put words to the events of that night. The next step in the process of naming occurs in Charles' thoughts, "There was a scene at the Florida, and then he attempted to take her home, and then she kissed young Webb at a table; after that there was what she had hysterically said" ("Babylon Revisited" 628). In this "what she had hysterically said," Charles once again backs George 22 away from the implications of naming his experience, thinking he can thereby avoid reliving it. Eventually, Charles reaches the point at which memory subsumes him; he has gone so far in putting words to his trauma that he cannot stop the flood of his past self into his present: "Again the memory of those days swept over him like a nightmare...The little man Helen had consented to dance with at the ship's party, who had insulted her ten feet from the table; the women and girls carried screaming with drink or drugs out of public places." In these lines, Charles points to the back story of the event that sparked his own dissolution. The following lines, however, tie this event, this break-down specifically, to the American experience happening in parallel, and the effect of this reflection on the individual: "The men who locked their wives out in the snow, because the snow of twenty-nine wasn't real snow. If you didn't want it to be snow, you just paid some money" ("Babylon Revisited" 633). Money is as flimsy and unreal as the snow and there is just as much of it in the days before the Stock Market Crash. The extent to which Charles progresses to the explicit naming of the impetus for his break-down, however, points to the necessity of naming the event. To relive it thoroughly becomes the only way to begin to create a whole self out of the pieces of the crack-up. This process is reminiscent of the one in which Fitzgerald himself advances in "The Crack-Up," attempting to impose the internal self onto the outside world. Although written out of economic necessity, the writing of these essays was also an explicit process of naming that which had destroyed him. Fitzgerald points to the parallel effect of break-down on Charles, and the way in which he recognizes the effect of it on his conception of the "I." Charles' fracturing begins in his evasion of his past and escape from the external, as "it had been given, even in the most wildly squandered sum, as an offering to destiny that he might not remember the things most worth remembering, the things that now he would always remember -- his child taken from his control, his wife escaped to a George 23 grave in Vermont" ("Babylon Revisited" 620). Looking to the cause of Charles' fragmentation, Fitzgerald identifies the effect of disregarding memories on the break-down of the self, implying that by blocking one's past, one denies the building blocks of any recognizable self. Charles, in his own way, independently analyzes the way in which he has been fragmented: "All the catering to vice and waste was on an utterly childish scale, and he suddenly realized the meaning of the word 'dissipate'--to dissipate into thin air; to make nothing out of something. In the little hours of the night every move from place to place was an enormous human jump, an increase of paying for the privilege of slower and slower motion" ("Babylon Revisited” 620). His understanding of his loss of self rests on the idea of "vice and waste," which invokes the actions of the larger America of the 1920's, a country living a present without memory, disconnected from the past. Already hinting at the shattering effects of alcoholism for the individual in "Babylon Revisited," Fitzgerald explores the ramifications of excessive drink in "A New Leaf." Written in 1931, "A New Leaf" concerns Dick Ragland and Julia Ross, two young lovers who meet through Julia's then-fiance, Phil Hoffman. Despite Phil's advice to the contrary and his evidence of Dick's dissolute character, Julia is intrigued by the handsome, confident charm she sees in Dick. On what is to be their first lunch out, Dick arrives at Julia's home in a drunken stupor, displaying the transformation of character that his alcoholism creates. Julia renounces Dick because of his unstable behavior, but they find themselves traveling on the same ocean liner back to America. Dick has sworn that he is going to give up drinking on his twenty-eighth birthday, which passes on the ship. In this controlled environment, after his birthday, Julia is able to monitor his drinking, and falls in love with the version of Dick that he maintains during this period. Their affair continues in New York, where Dick holds on to Julia as his anchor against the demands of his alcoholism. Julia agrees to marry Dick if he is able to stay sober for a period of six months. During this time, however, she travels to California to visit family, an absence that seems to nearly break Dick. George 24 During her absence, he takes up with mutual friends to help him combat his urges to drink. In a final effort, Dick himself takes a steamer to London. In the final scene, Phil Hoffman and Julia are discussing the newspaper article chronicling Dick's disappearance at sea. When Julia asks if Dick had been drinking on the ship, Phil mulls over the rumors of Dick's bar evenings on the steamer and the whisperings of suicide surrounding his death, but tells Julia that he had kept his promise about drinking. In this act, he preserved at least her stability, keeping her perceptions intact. Concerned with the break-up of self in the face of alcoholism, “A New Leaf” is more specifically a story of the transference of self to an exterior Other. Fitzgerald forges a demanding relationship between Julia and Dick with implications for the influence of the external Other on the internal self. Dick transfers the strengths of his character -- his charm, love, and remaining willpower -- onto Julia as the physical manifestation of his self in order to preserve them as the rest of his character self-destructs. Julia accepts this transference for the same reason that Dick initiates it although, "she did not realize that his being a sort of outcast added to his attraction for her -- not the dissipation itself, for never having seen it, it was merely an abstraction -- but its result in making him so alone. Something atavistic in her went out to the stranger to the tribe, a being from a world with different habits from hers, who promised the unexpected, -- promised adventure" ("New Leaf" 637). In this conception of the compatibility of their relationship, Fitzgerald suggests they represent two parts of a whole, although the individual self represented in Dick's half is destined to crumble. A way of confronting his own descent into alcoholism, Fitzgerald gives Dick the words to explore his own addiction. Dick explains, "About the time I came into some money I found that with a few drinks I got expansive and somehow had the ability to please people, and the idea turned my head. Then I began to take a whole lot of drinks to keep going and have everybody think I was wonderful" ("New Leaf" 637). This idea that alcohol creates for Dick a new and better self is the George 25 driving force behind his alcoholism. In this conception, he has created a sense of a deceptively simple, true “I” as the one that has had a few drinks, functioning under the effects of alcohol, and heightening his personal strengths. Dick's alcoholism stems from an attempt to become the manifestation of the “I” that he believes rests in this version of himself. Through Julia's eyes, however, one views this manifestation as dissolution. When he shows up drunk to her home to take her out to lunch, a transformed individual knocks on her door, but not the ideal self Dick believes he is: There in the outer hall stood a man whom she thought she had never seen before. His face was dead white and erratically shaven, his soft hat was crushed bunlike on his head, his shirt collar was dirty, and all except the band of his tie was out of sight. But at the moment when she recognized the figure as Dick Ragland she perceived a change which dwarfed the other into nothing; it was in his expression. His whole face was one prolonged sneer -- the lids held with difficulty from covering the fixed eyes, the drooping mouth drawn up over the upper teeth, the chin wobbling like a made-over chin in which the paraffin had run -- it was a face that both expressed and inspired disgust. ("New Leaf" 638) This description is not merely one of destruction, but is one of complete loss of identity until Julia is finally able to recognize the individual as one that she knows. In unwittingly taking on the role of protector of Dick's self, Julia becomes the external force that works on the shards of his character that remain, and the architect of his reconstruction. In this process, Dick's ability to resist dissolution relies wholly upon her presence. When this stabilizing force is absent, the fragments of his "I" drift further from one another and what remains of Dick's self enters a liminal space in which he does not feel the consequences of his drinking. Fitzgerald George 26 creates a physical presence of this state in his description of Paris: "There were other, small, annoying episodes, but Dick's misdemeanors had, fortunately, been confined to Paris and assumed a far-away unreality" ("New Leaf" 643). Upon their return to New York, Julia's presence wards off this "far-away unreality," until her absence from New York propels Dick's affair and his turn toward alcohol. The extreme of this manifestation of liminal space in which the dissolution of the self is possible comes forth on the steamer Dick takes to London. Utterly disconnected from Julia, disconnected from land, even, what remains of Dick's "I" is left without anything to hold it together. Dick prefers the destruction of the body in suicide to continuance as the shell for a fragmented self. Julia's reaction is telling. Preserved from the knowledge that Dick has killed himself, she still feels the ramifications of a situation in which "it was human to risk the toss between failure and success, but to risk the desperate gamble between adequacy and disaster--" ("New Leaf" 646). Without the strengths that he had placed into Julia for her to protect, Dick was unable to hold himself together in this "adequacy," and the dissolution resulted in his ruin. Although Julia does not know that Dick has committed suicide, there is something in her that makes her say "I believed in him -- and I was right in a way. He broke rather than bent; he was a ruined man, but not a bad man. In my heart I knew when I first looked at him." ("New Leaf" 647). In her connection with Dick, Julia is able to recognize the fractured nature of his final self, the nature of the man who "broke rather than bent." In Fitzgerald's naming the factors that lead to his own dissolution and transferring them onto the character of Dick, he is involved in a process of reverse narcissism. Fitzgerald as author becomes the ideal ego in their relationship. By looking into the mirror of Dick Ragland, Fitzgerald both recognizes and examines his own fractured self, but also uses it as a process of absolution. As author, he has placed the baser self in his writings, driven him to suicide, then subsequently George 27 recreates his clean self outside of the work. Despite the idea here explored that suggests that Fitzgerald was ultimately uncomfortable with the fracturing of the self that accompanied his breakdown, there is also the sense throughout his works that this fragmentation is somehow necessary for the modern author. The process of the creation of the internal “I” requires the work of the external in building this self up, and then in destroying it, leaving the individuals to attempt to collect and reconstitute the self in an outward action of publishing and writing, pushing back against the external. The fragmentation that Fitzgerald puts on display in his works is part of a process of identifying the source and effect of this shattering on the individual, a part of a process to heal himself. Even in the midst of formulating a plan for the preservation of self, Fitzgerald writes that “the test of a first-rate intelligence is the ability to hold two opposed ideas in the mind at the same time, and still retain the ability to function” ('Crack-Up 69). Explicitly evoking the image of one attempting to hold together disparate parts of a whole, Fitzgerald points again to the attempt to create unity and wholeness in the face of a breakdown. The twist, however, is that for this process to have any meaning, for the “first-rate intelligence” to emerge or be recognized, there must first be a break, a fracture of the self. Chapter 2 Physician, Heal Thyself George 28 Fitzgerald's experience of break-up, fragmentation, and rebirth from the ashes of his past that he explores in The Crack-Up informs the creation of the plots and characters of his fiction of the 1930's, particularly his novel of the early part of the decade, Tender is the Night. As a novel, Tender is the Night weaves together the various strains of inquiry regarding identity whichmost interested Fitzgerald and Stein. The relationship of artist to art is explored in the extent to which Tender is the Night is autobiographical. Fitzgerald points to the external impetus of break-down (or crack-up) in Dick Diver's dissolution, and the work of the external Other on the internal of the feminine presences of Rosemary and Nicole Diver. These individuals are tied inextricably to the historical moment in which they are living, as well as the influence of physically separate Others. Fitzgerald's tale of the individual and the “I” in Tender is the Night looks to the external as the driving factor of growth, destruction and rebirth, working on the internal. The story of Dick Diver, his wife Nicole, and the child actress Rosemary, Tender is the Night explores the ability of the external circumstance to both constitute the “I” and destroy it. The individual must then reconstitute the fragments. The Divers' marriage explores these themes through their ability to define one another. Dick meets Nicole when she is a patient in a mental facility and he is a young psychiatrist about to ship off to war. Through Dick's letters, Nicole finds her sanity, and through her reply letters, her writing, Dick understands her recovery. Their life as expatriates in the South of France leads them into contact with the almost-child actress, Rosemary, who falls in love with Dick. Dick takes his place in the script of the love triangle, while Nicole seems on the verge of breakdown again. As they explore Europe, however, Dick suffers the ultimate breakdown, unable to hold himself together against the effects of an increasingly encroaching exteriority of society and history. The dissolution of Abe North foreshadows Dick's downward spiral. As Nicole becomes stronger and more able to impose the self outward, taking a lover, Dick falls more and more into fragments, culminating in a disturbing scene of racist and George 29 classist expulsion that sends him into shattered fragments of a self. Written in an historical moment in which psychology focused increasingly on the individual as the ultimate determinant of identity, Tender is the Night responded by pointing to the work the external does in creating identity. Fitzgerald addresses the expected relationship between the internal world of the self and the external world of history, society, and Other, which exist in opposition to the self. He asks, “When people have so much regard for outsiders didn't it indicate a lack of inner intensity?” (Tender 84), pointing to the internal/external as quite visible and solid. The “I” can define itself against the other, the internal against the external, but the interplay between the two entities is non-existent. Individual experience, however, complicates this relationship, turning it from negative definition to external definition of the internal. Fitzgerald addresses this new conception of the relationship: “You will feel your own reflection sliding along the eyes of those who look at you. You are no longer insulated; but I suppose you must touch life in order to spring from it” (Tender 182). In this new equation, the self is determined from the outside, with “your own reflection sliding along the eyes of those who look at you.” Fitzgerald implies that the power of the Other over the “I” is not the loss of autonomy that it first seems. The “touch” of life on the self is integral in the ability of the individual to learn, grow, and move through the world. The interplay creates a self that functions in the world, “no longer insulated.” Fitzgerald further offers, early in the novel, the example of continued insularity: “She was one of those elderly 'good sports' preserved by imperviousness to experience and a good digestion into another generation” (Tender 8). The idea of “imperviousness to experience” as increasing isolation of the self and also the ending of the self's ability to and progress suggests the importance of this contact for an individual. Fitzgerald creates the transitory divide between the internal and the external in the form of a mask that the characters adopt to show their (perhaps illusory) distance from the external. In Tender is the Night, the fragile shell that protects the “I,” takes the form of the mask of the actor. Most of George 30 this language revolves around Rosemary, a young professional actress with a changeable identity, and her relationship to the world. In order to relate to the world of the adult, Rosemary recites a script to enter into adulthood, which Fitzgerald describes, “Take me.” “Take you where?” Astonishment froze him rigid. “Go on,” she whispered. “Oh, please go on, whatever they do. I don't care if I don't like it – I never expected to – I've always hated to think about it but now I don't. I want you to.” She was astonished at herself – she had never imagined she could talk like that. She was calling on things she had read, seen, dreamed through a decade of convent hours. Suddenly she knew too that it was one of her greatest roles and she flung herself into it more passionately. (Tender 72) Here, the external informs Rosemary's mask/role. The role becomes, however, more real than the real, molding her self, adding “actor” to her most fundamental conception of the “I.” The status of her “I” before this moment was tellingly not defined by the mask. Fitzgerald describes this former self, “But Rosemary triumphed. Her fineness of character, her courage and steadfastness intruded upon by the vulgarity of the world, and Rosemary showing what it took with a face that had not yet become mask-like” (Tender 77). Without the mask acting as barrier, between the interior and exterior, Rosemary is left with the force of her own consciousness, the “fineness of character, her courage and steadfastness” to battle against the forces of history and the Other. Without the mask of actress to defend her, she is vulnerable to the “vulgarity of the world.” Eventually she recognizes the solution to this intrusion as the construction of this barrier: “You do the unexpected thing until you've maneuvered the audience back from the objective fact to yourself. THEN you slide into George 31 character again” (Tender 324). The creation of character is both protective and a conduit through which the outside world enters into the inner consciousness. Fitzgerald links Rosemary's profession as an actress with Diver's appropriation of masks and roles by drawing parallels between the two of them, and then casting Diver off onto his own stage. The parallel is made explicit when “Rosemary stood up and leaned down and said her most sincere thing to him: 'We're such ACTORS – you and I'” (Tender 117). In this process of naming, Fitzgerald creates the label's legitimacy through Rosemary's status as an actress. Hearing himself named by Rosemary as an actor turns Diver into one who wears masks, who takes up roles in his relationship to the world. Fitzgerald points to this status by writing, “So rigidly did he sometimes guard his exposed self-consciousness that frequently he defeated his own purposes; as an actor who underplays a part sets up a craning forward, a stimulated emotional attention in an audience, and seems to create in others an ability to bridge the gap he left open” (Tender 103). Diver's relationship to the world crosses divides between internal and external. The external world of the audience not only enters his consciousness, playing into his identity, but is actively drawn in by his own quality of performance. As he attempts to retreat to himself, the external moves closer in. So in the process of “rigidly” guarding his innermost being by appropriating the role of an actor, Diver actively invites the external world into the formation of “self-consciousness,” both in the form of an understanding of self, and that uneasiness with the self in the presence of the outside world. Fitzgerald further reflects the problems of individual identity, describing Rosemary's reaction entering a restaurant, “There was nothing of the past, nor of any present Rosemary knew. The outer shell, the masonry, seemed rather to enclose the future so that it was an electric-like shock...perverted on a breakfast of oatmeal and hashish, to cross that threshold, if it could so be called, into the long hall of blue steel, of silver gilt, and the myriad facets of many oddly beveled mirrors” (Tender 80). The “perverting” effect of this relationship occurs in the disconnect between George 32 history and the self, exterior and interior. In this way, Fitzgerald suggests that the connection between the interior self and the external world of history and progress creates a normal life, although the historical moment may fracture the self, fundamentally changing an individual's identity. In the same way that Fitzgerald's ability to function in the role of authorship is reliant upon his cracked sense of identity in The Crack-Up, Diver's ability to be whole rests on the permeability of his mask, of his role as actor, and in the ability of the outside world to work upon him. In exploring the increasingly compromised divide between internal and external, Fitzgerald highlights myriad external factors that create and destroy the self. This story of breakdown extends from the internal of psychology to the reflection of the personal onto society, to the external. Dick Diver's identification as a psychiatrist points to his purported ability to heal fractured selves, but he is not able to heal his own self. This profession emphasizes the individual as helpless against outside forces encroaching on his conception of self as it dissolves. Fitzgerald addresses the inevitability of the tide of history, “Dick got to Zurich on less Achilles' heels than would be required to equip a centipede, but with plenty – the illusions of eternal strength and health, and of the essential goodness of people; illusions of a nation, the lies of generations of frontier mothers who had to croon falsely, that there were no wolves outside the cabin door” (Tender 132). Diver's “illusions” point to the strange way the world works the most destructively on those individuals who are the most optimistic, the most insulated, the most interior. Underlying the illusions that Fitzgerald puts forth, particularly “illusions of a nation,” is the understanding that the myth of the American Dream is ultimately being undercut as an “Achilles' heel,” ready to be pierced by the arrow of war and Depression. Fitzgerald's ideas regarding gender identity connect him to Gertrude Stein's writings on the same sense of fragmentation and catalyze his delineation of the breakdown and the rebuilding of the self in the face of the external. Particularly true for the male self, a counterpart to Stein's George 33 construction and deconstruction of the female self in such works as The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas, the relationship between gender roles externalizes fragmentation and deconstruction. He writes in a dialogue between Nicole and Dick, “'I am a woman and my business is to hold things together.' 'My business is to tear things apart.'” (Tender 91) Although many of his female characters are caught up in madness, men are responsible for tearing the world apart. The connection between gender and madness expands the internal/external permeations into a wider social sphere than that of the individual, altering the way Diver understands his own being: A wave of agony went over him. It was awful that such a fine tower should not be erected, only suspended from him. Up to a point that was right: men were for that, beam and idea, girder and logarithm; but somehow Dick and Nicole had become one and equal, not opposite and complementary; she was Dick too, the drought in the marrow of his bones. He could not watch her disintegrations without participating in them. (Tender 216) The inversion of the gender relations in the Diver marriage allows feminine control of such male institutions as finances to work on him internally, creating a bond between two externally autonomous beings so strong that Nicole's dips into madness become Dick's own forays into dissolution. Nicole's understanding of the inverted gender roles in their marriage is incomplete, possibly because he roles appear traditional. Nevertheless, in her estimation, “Always when he turned away from her into himself he left her holding Nothing in her hands and staring at it, calling it many names, but knowing it was only the hope that he would come back soon” (Tender 205). Nicole's understanding of the power dynamic between her self and her husband rests, instead of on an understanding of her financial influence over him, on his power to turn toward himself. The George 34 Nothing that he leaves is impossible for her to name (which she tries to do as a woman who builds things up). The complication of this idea extends, for Fitzgerald, to a further external circle in its relationship to class. Men not only tear themselves apart, but control those institutions that sway the larger forces of the external world that form the individual self. By subverting these systems women wield the same level of power of destruction over men. At the point of Dick's dissolution, he remembers a conversation with his sister-in-law that “came back to him under the form of what Baby had said: 'We must think it over carefully –' and the unsaid lines in back of that: 'We own you, and you'll admit it sooner or later. It is absurd to keep up the pretense of independence'” (Tender 201). This relationship of financial exchange undermines the gender relationships that Fitzgerald displays complicates the gender divide. Because of the inverted gender roles regarding social class, Dick's identity is dictated by Nicole's higher class. The Divers' relationship is perverted by the external of money. The twisted gender relationship ascribed to money and class then works on the two individuals, calling into question the autonomy of those selves from either Others or the outside world. The madness of the individual in Tender is the Night is closely related to the attempts of individual selves to re-form against the outside world. Although it is clear by the final pages of The Crack-Up that Fitzgerald senses the necessity of breakdown for the creation of a truer individual from the fragments, that idea is more subtly underlying Tender is the Night, overshadowed by Dick's inability to reconstitute himself. Other individuals, however, actively recreate themselves in the face of externally induced destruction. Literally mad at the beginning of her relationship with Dick, Nicole experiences externally induced episodes of psychosis. She is (although partially through a feeding off of Diver's own sanity, leading to his own breakdown) rebuilt through the interplay of internal and external, relying on the love of another to reconstruct that sense of self. George 35 For Rosemary, this oscillation between internal and external allows her to rebuild herself after a series of inner meltdowns and a life of living behind the mask of an actress. Fitzgerald describes her exit after dinner with Dick, “The way she paused fractionally in front of the hall mirror on leaving the restaurant, so that the incorruptible quicksilver could give her back to herself” (Tender 155). To “give her back to herself” suggests reconstruction necessitates the external presence. Involved in the creation and destruction of the self, the external world is a surface from which the individual judges that new self in the image given back to her, offering a conduit for selfreconstruction. Dick shares many of the same class anxieties that Fitzgerald exposes in the Crack-Up. Dick's contempt for certain classes emerges during his break down, as he attempts to reassert his self against the invasive Other. Fitzgerald writes in this regard, “At that moment the Divers represented externally the exact furthermost evolution of a class, so that most people seemed awkward beside them – in reality a qualitative change had already set in that was not at all apparent to Rosemary” (Tender 24). This passage points to class's (functioning as an external shell) internal work as superseded by the external. The immediate, physical stimuli of Rosemary's presence, replaces class to wreak fundamental internal change on the selves. This passage represents the shift from the function of the external in creating the internal (class) and the ability of the external to enact a total breakdown of the internal (Rosemary's presence). Closely related to the question of class is that of money, a consideration close to Fitzgerald, highlighted because of the historical events that precipitated his own crack-up. Fitzgerald acknowledges this primacy in Tender is the Night, “'There we have it! Money!'” (Tender 198). Money controls the language of the breakdown in the novel and having, or not having, this physical manifestation of power links to the automatic dissolution of the internal self: “It was hard to know where to go. He glanced about the house that Nicole had made, that Nicole's grandfather had paid George 36 for...Naturally Nicole, wanting to own him, wanting him to stand still forever, encouraged any slackness on his part, and in multiplying ways he was constantly inundated by a trickling of goods and money” (Tender 193). Money is not, then, merely an external force that defines Dick, but also represents ownership by another. The compounding of these external forces on Diver ultimately forces the breakdown of his “I.” Not only defined by the outside, but totally owned, he loses all agency of creation, including the ability to hold the self together in a coherent whole. While Fitzgerald suggests that the seed of an internal self is inherent in an individual, the external Other appropriates the definition of the “I.” The birth of Rosemary's true self occurs only through her perception by an outside force, that of Dick: “He looked at her and for a moment she lived in the bright blue worlds of his eyes, eagerly and confidently” (Tender 13). Specifically in the eyes of an outside force, Rosemary recognizes her innermost self. Sustaining the self through external invasion is more sinister in the case of Mrs. McKisco, who is not merely shaped by her husband, but relies on him for self-validation. Fitzgerald displays the relationship of this fellow American expatriate to her husband by writing, “'Yes,' agreed McKisco, grudgingly. Obviously he had created his wife's world, and allowed her few liberties in it” (Tender 11). The interior “I,” no longer autonomous, relies on the power of the external force. When the self begins to attempt to push back against the formative power of the external, one encounters the inability of the self to exist as a coherent whole. These problems in pushing back against the external foreshadow Dick's problematic attempt to collect and rebuild the fragmented self. Nicole observes that Dick had “uncharacteristic bursts of temper,” in which “he would suddenly unroll a long scroll of contempt for some person, race, class, way of life, way of thinking, it was as though an incalculable story was telling itself inside him, about which she could only guess at in the moments when it broke through the surface” (Tender 300). Diver's reaction to the external of the world and the Other, contained in “person, race, class way of life, way of thinking,” is at first a turn toward the internal, to self- George 37 creation of the “incalculable story,” and outward “bursts of temper” against the external that is attempting to impose itself on Diver's “I,” and further points of breaking “through the surface.” The imposition of the external on the creation of the self is the integral first step in breaking down the binary of internal/external. Dick's relationship to the social concerns of class and race highlights his attempt to push against the external through negative definition and the “not I.” The external work of history and social memory expands the influence of social construction of self. Early in the novel, Fitzgerald crafts images and scenes that link history to an ability to shape and manipulate the “I.” Before Fitzgerald introduces Dick, Rosemary, Abe North, or Nicole, who are alternately built up and destroyed by the fragmentary effects of the historical moment and the physical manifestations of that moment, Fitzgerald presents “three British nannies...knitting the slow pattern of Victorian England, the pattern of the forties, the sixties, and the eighties, into sweaters and socks, to the tune of gossip as formalized as incantation” (Tender 5). The nannies weave History into the very warp and weft of the clothes, and Fitzgerald's depiction of this as a natural, continual process, characterized by “formalized...incantation” sets History as both separate from the internal and influential in shaping the content and formulation of it. Fitzgerald then posits History as the experience of war and the grief involved in death. The language of death and mourning provokes a more broadly-reaching conception of the consequences of sweeping trauma. Fitzgerald writes of Diver, He slept deep and awoke to a slow mournful march passing his window. It was the familiar helmets of 1914, thick men in frock coats and silk hats, burghers, aristocrats, plain men. It was a society of veterans going to lay wreaths on the tombs of the dead. The column marched slowly with a sort of swagger for a lost magnificence, a past effort a forgotten sorrow. The faces were formally sad but Dick's lungs burst for a moment with regret for Abe's George 38 death, and his own youth of ten years ago. (Tender 226) The passage suggests the universality of the individual's response to death. The external event works on the inner consciousness to create a continuity of response that extends even to Diver. Experiences of the “everyman” suffering from trauma, the effect of death and its response, suggest the invasion of the external into the personal, fundamentally changing it. Abe North was literally “broken” to death by an external stimuli, and Diver's own consciousness has been fundamentally changed, aged ten years by the experience. Fitzgerald's understanding of trauma extends to publication, sending out a part of his self to this world, rather than simply accepting its influence (as Stein's conception of publication also explores). The idea of individual creation in Tender is the Night links to the reassertion of internal against the intrusion of history and memory. Dick describes the transformative of the external of the Great War rolling in the background, That's different. This western-front business couldn't be done again, not for a long time. The young men think they could do it but they couldn't. They could fight the first Marne again but not this. This took religion and years of plenty and tremendous sureties and the exact relation that existed between the classes...You had to have a whole-souled sentimental equipment going back further than you would remember. You had to remember Christmas, and postcard of the Crown Prince and his fiancee, and little cafes in Valence and beer gardens in Unter den Linden and weddings at the mairie, and going to the Derby, and your grandfather's whiskers. (Tender 64) The “whole-souled equipment going back generations” is undeniably the “I” of all of those individual soldiers, formed by memory. Those external circumstances build up the innermost being, creating an individual through generations of patient molding of both internal and external to fit one George 39 another. This work, however, leads to a pinnacle at which the external can, through war (paralleled in Fitzgerald's own life by the Stock Market Crash), destroy the internal memory creates. By waging this war, individuals upset the balance and the external comes back to the self swiftly and destructively. Fitzgerald indirectly expresses this sentiment as “But you used to want to create things – now you just seem to want to smash them up” (Tender 300). That is the work of the external upon the internal: creation and destruction of self. Tender is the Night displays both facets of this relationship of the binary, held tenuously separate by the human body. The figure of the expatriate is at the center of the questions Fitzgerald raises about identity and the inability of the self to remain autonomous in an increasingly integrated world. Dick Diver is the first among such figures, supplemented by a whole host of other expatriates in France. His dissolution via the external stimuli of war, love, money, and class considerations highlights the ability of the external to shape and destroy the internal self. This individual dissolution displays the larger anxieties of a displaced generation of Americans and a country dismantled in the wake of economic disaster. Fitzgerald points to the way these strains of identity questions, the historical moment, and the status of the American manifest themselves through Dick Diver as he writes, “Dick tried to dissect it into pieces small enough to store away – realizing that the totality of a life may be different in quality from its segments, and also that life during the forties seemed capable of being observed only in segments” (Tender 276). These pieces, “small enough to store away,” are the foundations of the fragmented, compartmentalized self. Although Dick's break-down relies on his historical moment and circumstances, dissecting his life into pieces points to the necessity of the full process that Fitzgerald describes in Tender is the Night and The Crack-Up. The individual must dissect in order to restore the fragments into a stronger, more complete whole. Diver represents the full cycle of Fitzgerald's identity production: production through the external, destruction by the external, and rebuilding from the fragments. The crux of this novel rests, however, on the George 40 implication that Diver's attempts to collect and reassert the “I”are futile and abortive. The connection between this process of infiltration of the internal/external divide and its implications for the dissolution of self complicates the status of the American in the novel. Tender is the Night explores the ability of the American to respond and adapt as an individual to external and historical stimuli and, by extension, the ability of the nation to do the same. Fitzgerald asks, underscoring the statues of the American, “Why is it just Americans who dissipate?” (Tender 111). The fragmentation of the individual consciousness displayed in Abe North, Nicole, and Dick always dismantle the American. The overt status of the individuals as Americans suggests that their dissolution links to their nationality. Living outside of the United States, they are particularly vulnerable to the influence of outside forces. The displaced and fragile “I” lacks the protection of their home country. The experience of the American abroad takes the following form: “After lunch they were both overwhelmed by the sudden flatness that comes over American travelers in quiet foreign places. No stimuli worked upon them, no voices called them from without, no fragments of their own thought came suddenly from the minds of others, and missing the clamor of Empire they felt that life was not continuing here” (Tender 15). The expatriate exists in a liminal space that excludes them from the workings of the external, with “no stimuli.” The self-definition of the political power of 'the clamor of Empire' is missing– in the final estimation of this turn to the interior, the effect is so extreme that “they felt life was not continuing here.” The external is necessary to define the expatriate's self, but in this scene, the lack of this stimulation suspends life and vitality. The fundamental difference in consciousness between American and Europeans (which concerns both Fitzgerald and Stein) relates to the idea of death and its permanence, or lack thereof. In one scene, Dick talks to his European colleague, who says, 'That's very good – and very American,' he said, 'It's more difficult for us.' He George 41 got up and went to the French window. 'I stand here and I see Zurich – there is the steeple of the Gross-Munster. In its vault my grandfather is buried. Across the bridge from it lies my ancestor Lavater, who would not be buried in any church. Nearby is the statue of Doctor Alfred Escher. And over everything there is always Zwingli – I am continually confronted with a pantheon of heroes. (Tender 149) In the same way that Stein, in The Geographical History of America suggests that the status of the dead constitutes a division between the United States and Europe (in America, the dead are really dead), Fitzgerald points to the way the mass of history constantly invading the European psyche is absent from the American consciousness. The American dead are truly gone because they do not have to join the “pantheon of heroes” that walk the European soil. The external working of the Great War, however, changed the status of the American dead (on European soil, anyway). Fitzgerald writes as Dick observes the widows mourning their losses from World War I, “In their happy faces, the dignity that surrounded and pervaded the party, he perceived all the maturity of an older America. For a while the sobered women who had come to mourn for their dead, for something they could not repair, made the room beautiful” (Tender 112). Fitzgerald links Americans, through the external impetus of war, to the internal experience of grief. The “maturity” in place has been instilled by the Great War, not only an external force working to invoke a fracturing, but also a thoroughly European force that brings the full experience of grief to Americans. Also similar to Gertrude Stein's The Geographical History of America is Fitzgerald's concern with the effect of geography on the internal self. He approaches the implications of location and physical landscapes on the two tendencies of the self: either to coalesce into a coherent whole or to break apart into fragmented shards, spread too thin over the landscape of the sweeping George 42 expanse of the United States. Fitzgerald writes of the effect of geography on the identities of Dick and Nicole, “But the diffused magic of the hot sweet South had withdrawn into them – the softpawed night and the ghostly wash of the Mediterranean far below – the magic left these things and melted into the two Divers and became part of them” (Tender). The Mediterranean becomes an integral part of both individuals, working on their interiors in a way that makes them a part of the landscape. The sea, the sand, the beach, enter the fundamental self, dictating the form of the “I.” Fitzgerald writes of the possibility of geography causing a fracturing, “But when he thought of what he considered his own thin knowledge spread over that whole area, over all those wheat fields, those endless prairies, he had decided against it” (Tender 28). The stretching expanse of land evocative of the geography of the United States and the idea of the self facing such vastness shapes the self, making it small or expanding it. The idea that the individual must stretch over such a scene entirely in order to have an impact over it provokes an image of a self so far expanded that the external landscape is able to poke through, breaking the “I.” The individual cannot have an equal impact on the sweeping forces of landscape and geography. The ability of the landscape to influence the construction and dissolution of the “I” represents the fundamental helplessness of the individual in the face of larger external forces. The question becomes, then, what constitutes the relationship between the internal and the external, and how this relationship constructs and dissolves the self. Fitzgerald alternately suggests that the relationship includes the external as actively forming an individual, at others that it shapes the internal from its previous form, and at still others dismantles it piece by piece to leave a vast landscape of shards of the “I.” The resulting permeable, dismantled internal/external divide suggests power in the external to act upon the innermost self of an individual. Lying underneath the surface of the creation-destruction process, however, is another step: recreation in the interplay between the two sides of the divide. Of this healing process, Fitzgerald writes George 43 One writes of scars healed, a loose parallel to the pathology of the skin, but there is no such thing in the life of an individual. There are open wounds, shrunk sometimes to the size of a pin-prick, but wounds still. The marks of suffering are more comparable to the loss of a finger, or the sight of an eye. We may not miss them, either, for one minute in a year, but if we should there is nothing to be done about it. (Tender 36) Fitzgerald points to the marks of suffering on the individual as those that will heal, perhaps, but leave that individual fundamentally and irrevocably altered. The cracks in a mended plate and the scars on a wounded soul both point to destruction, but also subsequent reconstruction of the “I” under the aegis of externalities outside of the control of the individual. Finally, Fitzgerald points to how this process of building up, destroying, and recreating is necessary to the individual, as it was for him as an author in The Crack-Up. He writes in Tender is the Night “--And Lucky Dick can't be one of those clever men, he must be less intact, even faintly destroyed. If life won't do it for him it's not a substitute to get a disease, or a broken heart, or an inferiority complex, though it'd be nice to build out some broken side till it was better than the original structure” (Tender 26). Dick's inability to recreate himself coherently results in his leaving society, wandering the backwoods of northeastern America. Being “faintly destroyed” – the mark of any character of Fitzgerald's that touches the reader, strikes at reality in Fitzgerald himself. In this faint destruction, one has the opportunity to gather the broken pieces and reconstruct a new whole. This whole may always bear the scars of having once been “less intact,” but at these junctures the new is strongest. The external works inevitably on the internal in both Tender is the Night and in Fitzgerald's own life, and the process is not only one of inevitable destruction or decay of the internal self, but also of rebuilding in the relationship of that permeable binary, creating a fragile new “I.” George 44 Chapter 3 Inside Out or Outside In? Gertrude Stein once wrote, “I always wanted to be historical, from almost a baby on” (Selected Writings vii), stating in her own voice the importance of the historical moment in shaping her identity as a writer and an American. Gertrude Stein's literary response to a historical moment is crucially fashioned by her response to World War I, the build up of America as seen from abroad, and its subsequent dissolution in the wake of the Market Crash and in a global context. These considerations shaped her conception of the continuance of a unified whole. Stein's experience of World War I questioned the identity of the self, what constitutes a whole self, and how to represent this self in the face of an increasingly politically and globally integrated reality. Stein's reaction to the uncertainty wrought by the war manifests itself in her continuation of fragmented stylistic and formalist techniques, now tinged with the concerns of the outside world. The formalist fragmentation strikes at the heart of the increasingly compromised self of the American. The sense George 45 of moral and physical absolutes disintegrated through the experience of war and economic hardship, and the direct experience of these historical externalities allowed for the changing forms Gertrude Stein employed to reflect the dissolution of the internal self. As an American living in Europe during these defining moments, Stein's experience and internalization of the shifting perception was magnified in a way not available to writers outside of Europe. The fragmented nature of Stein's forms in her prose poems, novels, short works, and the “biography/autobiography” of Alice B. Toklas reacts to the ambiguity of self and one's sense of the world as produced by World War I, the 1920s, and the Crash and Depression. Stein's fragmentation attempts to accurately reflect the chaos wrought in this new world order. While Stein's writing only periodically explicitly engages the war, its influence pervades her works, and the political language makes clear the influence of the external circumstance on her writing. Launching discussions of her writing style and its purpose, and reveling in the kaleidoscope view her writing produces, Stein highlights the way her style emerged from a fractured reality. Her own experience in the war sets the groundwork for the associations between her post-war forms. Stein approaches her connections with World War I and her status as an American living abroad explicitly in The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas. These considerations inform her understanding of the fractured and restructured nature of consciousness. Published in 1933, it records the way her visions of the world were fundamentally shifted by the shattering effects of the war on Europe, creating a new basis from which to reconstruct perceptions of the world. This work exemplifies the formal chaos brought by the war and economic crisis which shattered the American psyche. It dismantles the binaries that constitute the internal/external divide by considering the shifting norms regarding a society in flux, particularly concentrated around gender relations. Formally, it is an “autobiography,” written by a woman writing as her companion. The fluidity and/or rupture of Stein's sense of identity establishes the complications of drawing a dividing line George 46 between internal and external, self and other. The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas questions what constitutes an autobiography and, by extension, how one identifies oneself. Stein's ability to reshape and recast her identity into that of Alice B. Toklas exists because the self as she conceives it is no longer stable. The break-up of the formal aspects of Stein's writing in The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas encapsulates a larger phenomenon of crumbling traditions related to the destabilizing effects of the historical moment of the interwar period. Stein integrates the experience of the war with the circumstances of the 1930s explicitly as she deconstructs marriage, gender relations, and other traditional binaries. In her formal disruption of unstructured sentences, lack of nouns, and repetition, one encounters a physical representation of the dizzying disarray enacted by the war and the advent of the modern world. In The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas, Stein points to her experiences (through the eyes of another, which influences the way one understands Stein's fractured sense of the world) as an ambulance driver in World War I. To mark the break instituted by large-scale political fracturing, Stein writes “In short in this spring and early summer of nineteen fourteen the old life was over” (Alice B. Toklas 142). This outright statement of a fundamental break points to an experience of the world that was shifted from its most basic foundations. Stein then immerses herself in understanding this new world. The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas guides one through the lasting impressions of the war and how it produced the new realities facing Europe and its citizens. Even as an American who, “living in Europe before the war never really believed that there was going to be war” (Alice B. Toklas 143), Stein sensed of the death of a way of life because of the war: “The germans were getting nearer and nearer Paris and the last day Gertrude Stein could not leave her room, she sat and mourned. She loved Paris, she thought neither of manuscripts nor of pictures, she thought only of Paris and she was desolate” (Alice B. Toklas 149). Stein enters the concrete effects of the war through this break with the physical existenc of the past, connecting the fall of Paris, her George 47 adopted home and guardian of her identity as author and individual, to the “I.” Fitzgerald parallels this link in his own considerations of location and geography as external definers and destroyers of the self. Stein's disassociation from the description of herself suggests the lasting disconnection fom the “I” and former realities produced by the experience of war. This feeling of disassociation is solidified by Stein's complete displacement of Alice in writing her “autobiography.” Literally inhabiting the space of this Other, externalizing her own self to such an extent that she can insert herself into the innermost identity of another suggests her ability to dismantle the internal/external divide. This process resembles a military invasion, drawing a parallel between the historical moment and its externality, and the constitution of the self. Through Alice, Stein suggests that, in the middle of the violence, the experience of war is one without an imaginable ending or remembered beginning. The intransigent present moment becomes the only reality, unconnected to other feelings or experiences. For those directly involved in the violence, Stein describes “It was our first experience of the tired but watchful eyes of soldiers” (Alice B. Toklas 155). Stein directed her need to reassert the primacy of the self in the world order in the face of the breakdown of the order with which she structured her life by becoming an ambulance driver in France. This reassertion of the power of the individual over the structure of the world at large provides the sense that the foundations of the world and the ordered self as known in the past can be held together by the will of the individual. Stein recognizes this process: “I had been so confidant and now I had an awful feeling that the war had gotten out of my hands” (Alice B. Toklas 166). Stein's recognition of the breakdown of the primacy of the individual begins her understanding of the breakdown of her own writing style. Alice explains the formation of Stein's writing: “They were the beginning, as Gertrude Stein would say, of mixing the outside with the inside. Hitherto she had been concerned with seriousness and the inside of things, in these studies she began to describe the inside as seen from the outside” (Alice B. Toklas 156). Stein points George 48 to the “inside as seen from the outside,” the work of the external on forming the internal through viewing. This process of disconnect that Stein describes in her writing is a product of the dissociative effects of the war. World War I produced, through its desolation and violence, a changed Europe: Soon we came to the battle-fields and the lines of trenches on both sides. To any one who did not see it as it was then it is impossible to imagine it. It was not terrifying it was strange. We were used to ruined houses and even ruined towns but this was different. It was a landscape. And it belonged to no country. I remember hearing a french nurse once say and the only thing she did say of the front was, c'est un paysage passionant, an absorbing landscape. And that was what it was as we saw it. It was strange. (Alice B. Toklas 187) This divide between the “terrifying” and the “strange” brought about by the desolation of the physical violence of World War I provides a key for understanding the effects of the war on the psyches of individuals and societies. The “landscape” that “belonged to no country” was the physical embodiment of the absolute break-down of the self with which Stein is concerned. This distancing of physical space from the myth of the nation, what would once have served as the dominant defining feature of this space, extends to the distancing of the “I” from the former self. The creation of self through physical space resonates with Fitzgerald's understanding of the effects of external space, landscape, and nationality on the self. In dwelling on this landscape and the effects of the fragmentation, Stein creates a self-portrait through the geography. In “it was a landscape. And it belonged to no country,” the discussion shifts from a war-torn country to a wartorn individual, Gertrude Stein. She is the physical embodiment of the mix of English and French language, belonging to neither culture, herself becoming part of the ambiguous subject of “it was strange.” This crucial disconnect produces an anxiety that extends into Stein's discussions of George 49 history, the familiar, the personal, and the self which disintegrated into fragments that required active reconstruction. Through story and form, she offers a process by which to begin this reconstruction. The progression of this passage, however, suggests that attempts at this reconstruction are futile; Stein's initial “strange” landscape is almost reborn in the construction of it as a landscape, even an “absorbing landscape,” but Stein ends with allowing the fragments to fall apart in “it was strange.” Where Fitzgerald would seek to reform the traumatized fragments into a truer conception of reality, Stein allows the fragments to remain. Stein's personal and intimate connection with World War I had lasting implications on her sense of what a coherent reality entailed. Leaving fragmented the internal and external in the face of trauma suggests that she is unwilling to re-establish this binary. Stein's connection to the unified self as created and destroyed in the war extended to the interwar years and is reflected in her discussion of gender norms and relations in the changing cultural sphere. The influence of society on this inner conception of self represents a further intermingling of the internal/external construction of the “I.” The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas represents a work that epitomizes the discourse of the feminine/feminist consciousness. Written by a woman, through a woman's voice, and displaying the complex interworkings of female/male gender relations, the work implicitly criticizes the gender relations, stereotypes, and ideals leading into the twentieth century. At the same time, The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas, by being written in the split manner (neither an autobiography, nor written by Alice) points to Stein’s solid conception of her own self and her recognition of the fluidity of identity. The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas emerges as a work inherently concerned with the idea of women in society with one another, with men, and with society at large. This work complicates the relationship between gender and identity by being authored by a woman, writing as her companion, and being about their life together at the center of a society in a George 50 state of flux. Writing as Alice, Stein explores the way their relationship magnified he changing role of women around them. Stein explores the external of society, imposing a set of norms on the creation of identity through institutions such as marriage. Contrasted against Stein's unmarried state, the marriages of the artists around her are highlighted both in their existence (and therefore the way in which they subscribe to traditional gender relationships) and in their unconventionality in a changing modern world (which undercuts the rigid ideas of the feminist paradigms that are often focused on marriage as a sort of economic exchange that inexorably oppresses women in their relationships to men). Writing in an age in which women gained independence, Stein portrays gender relations in terms of tension between the traditional ideas of marriage and power relationships, and new, liberated women. The changing nature of this external force of society reforms the “I.” Alice's portrayal of her own conception of the relationships between the sexes displays the blossoming confusion: I had often said that I would write, The wives of geniuses I have sat with. I have sat with so many. I have sat with wives who were not wives, of geniuses who were real geniuses. I have sat with real wives of geniuses who were not real geniuses. I have sat with wives of geniuses, of near geniuses, of would be geniuses, in short I have sat very often and very long with many wives and wives of many geniuses. (Alice B. Toklas 14) This confusion is emblematic of the way in which Stein blurs the lines between the dichotomies of gender and power relations. The repetition of the form “who were” and “who were not,” particularly in conjunction with the conception of the “real” questions the status of identity. The relationship between Stein and Toklas is, to some extent defined by Alice's observation here: As she considers Stein the genius, she would seem to take on the role of the wife of the genius who sits with other wives. And yet neither woman entirely fits the role that this configuration would ascribe George 51 to her. Although the male geniuses implied here might at first seem to be dominant in the gender relations set up with their wives (who are conversely not geniuses and are further often mentioned for their usefulness in their roles as models or for the money that they brought to the marriage), the wives do also display their own agency. The possibility of divorce allows women to exercise autonomy and throw off the external of the institution of marriage in order to reassert the individual self. Further, the marriage itself often comes about as much for the benefit of the bride as for the groom: "But it turned out that it was an arranged marriage. Uhde wished to respectabilise himself and she wanted to come into possession of her inheritance, which she could only do upon marriage. Shortly after she married Uhde and shortly after they were divorced" (Alice B. Toklas 98). From such a seemingly traditional idea as an "arranged marriage" emerges a blurred reality in which the power relations of marriage constitute a process instituted for individual and mutual gain. Moving beyond simple marriage relations, Stein suggests in her representations of the feminine and the masculine that the modern world creates the changing status of women. Stein deconstructs this binary through her understanding of the roles of gender regarding the modern. This binary of gender is one that links the feminine to the internal space and the masculine to the external. Through their marriages to geniuses and the camaraderie of Stein's world, the women become the guardians of the modern, even as it is the men that are mostly involved in creation. The first hint of this new relationship emerges as Alice writes of Stein's sister-in-law's relation to the modern, "Mrs. Stein brought with her three little Matisse painting, the first modern things to cross the Atlantic" (Alice B. Toklas 5). Women become not only the guardians of the modern world, but also the advance guard of it, communicating it across gender, space, and time. The strange relationship between women, men, and the modern is, moreover, further confused in the process by which the three interact with one another in the same moment: "It was also Nellie who made Matisse blush by cross-questioning him about the different ways he saw Madame Matisse, how she George 52 looked to him as a wife, and how she looked to him as a picture, and how he could change from one to the other" (Alice B. Toklas 150). Stein's characterization of the intermingling of these roles undercuts clear differentiation in gender relations and suggests that the change is largely a function of the modern world. The strange oscillation of inner identity as posited by the self and viewed through another is crucially related to Stein's conceptions of identity. Stein's presence at the center of the art world in Paris, and her undermining of the oppressed/oppressor paradigm of female/male puts forth a more egalitarian conception of gender relations. This egalitarianism reflects a fragmented binary that Stein refuses to reconstruct. Although unified identity may be found in the reimposition of the ordering, external relations, Stein is unwilling to risk re-establishing a hegemonic, paternalistic system. The process of breaking down the traditional forms that Stein points to in The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas mirrors the breakdown of the gender relations that she describes. Deconstruction traverses and shatters binaries of form, style, and writing. In the descriptions she offers (while not, perhaps, the truest examples of the formal breaks in which she revels, which are most clearly seen in her early Tender Buttons), Stein establishes her own tenets of modernism, and places herself in the midst of the fractured world in the interwar years. Pointing to the inherent difficulty of representing the fractured world she lived in, Stein writes, “Sure, she said, as Pablo once remarked, when you make a thing, it is so complicated making it that it is bound to be ugly, but those that do it after you they don't have to worry about making it and they can make it pretty, and so everybody can like it when the others make it” (Alice B. Toklas 23). With that caveat in mind, the exploration of the evolution of Stein's formalist modernism becomes clearer. By being the first created and because of the work involved in this path-breaking, the necessity of the difficulty of Stein's writing becomes more clear. There is a pain and struggle in this creation that Stein both recognizes and seeks to further explore: “I cannot say I realized anything but I felt that George 53 there was something painful and beautiful there and oppressive but imprisoned” (Alice B. Toklas 22). The coalescing of the qualities of “painful,” “beautiful,” “oppressive,” and “imprisoned” in a single sentence is emblematic of Stein's writing and points to her reality. In itself, The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas is not the pinnacle of Stein's fractured form and its ability to create identity, but it is the work that makes clear how her identity connects to her writing and fragmented form. The shattered quality of Stein's writing makes following her reality difficult, but also makes it her ultimate manifestation of reality, and thus makes that writing the truest form through which she can express her sense of self. Stein explores her relation to these qualities in both her writing and the world around her as she describes her personal relationship to a modernist painting: “She then went back to look at it and it upset her to see them all mocking at it. It bothered her and angered her because she did not understand why because to her it was so alright, just as later she did not understand why since the writing was all so clear and natural they mocked at and were enraged by her work” (Alice B. Toklas 35). Stein's work is so deeply personal that there is a disconnect between what she sees as natural and what the rest of the world sees as natural. By representing reality and the “I” as nearly as the arbitrariness of words as signifiers allows, Stein distances herself from the readers, creating an odd sense of both interiority and distance. Stein addresses this dissociation, Gertrude Stein, in her work, has always been possessed by the intellectual passion for exactitude in the description of inner and outer reality. She has produced a simplification by this concentration, and as a result the destruction of associational emotion in poetry and prose. She knows that beauty, music, decoration, the result of emotion should never be the cause, even events should not be the cause of prose. They should be the material of poetry and prose. They should consist of an exact reproduction of either an outer or an inner reality. George 54 (Alice B. Toklas 211) In her breakdown of a coherent sense of reality, Stein focuses her interest on overt rupture from the past. As opposed to Fitzgerald's conception of breakdown, however, which understands external history as perpetuating a destruction that the individual must reconstruct, Stein is content to allow these fragments to remain without reconstituting it. If understood in terms of Gertrude Stein’s own autobiography, the work links this rupture World War I and creates a reality in which this historical moment changes the external world and, by extension, the understanding of the “I.” In Stein's complex and compounded form as described in the Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas, the links between history and the complications of internal and external binaries pervade issues of identity. The work addresses the understanding of the transitory nature of the present moment, new foci of writing, and the shifting of cultural norms in the form of gender relations in the way in selfdefinition. In two of her short essays, "The Difference Between the Inhabitants of France and the Inhabitants of the United States of America" and "Composition as Explanation," Gertrude Stein is deeply engrossed in the process of creating and destroying binary systems. Through both content and form, Stein sets ideas in contrast with one another, creating a dialectic between them, assigning them an almost scientific dimension of juxtaposition, and then systematically destroys this opposition, as both her "examples" and her linguistic distinction between the entities become more malleable, resulting in an intermingling that breaks down the assumptions and associations with which she begins. In the first of these essays, "The Difference Between the Inhabitants of France and the Inhabitants of the United States of America," the binary system she puts in place at the beginning of the work is the one contained in the title. For "Composition as Explanation," the binaries are several: classic and composition, a thing beautiful and a thing irritating, even the vague notions of alike and different. These binaries translate onto one another, and as one breaks down, it George 55 consequently destabilizes another. By repeating this process in these works, Stein hearkens back to the larger binary of internal and external, subsequently relating it to the creation of identity through the increasing permeability of the dividing lines of these oppositions. In both of these explorations, Stein's initial binaries are transient, decomposing from the moment of their inception. "The Difference Between the Inhabitants of France and the Inhabitants of the United States of America" begins with Stein's ascription of certain characteristics to each of the nationalities that are meant to set them at odds with one another: "The inhabitants of the United States of America have this quality in their character in reference to drama that the things they do and the things that they do do are such things that when they are young are different than when they are older...Drama consists and in this they are so they are so certainly restricted, restricted to that themselves and not any more so" (513). These qualities of the Americans persist in creating the narrative of the American individual and consciousness. France is set up in opposition as "especially so and for this reason especially when they are young and as an example not at all exacting not at all as exacting and when they are young and not any more so not feverishly so not as exacting exactly and as an instance and in collusion and not in very nearly as many cases secondary" (“Difference” 513). Rooted in negative definition, the preponderance of "nots" sets the inhabitants of France as distinct from and opposite of the inhabitants of America. Even in this first description, however, the reader is struck by the feeling that the need for including such a multitude of "nots" means that there is some intrinsic link between these entities, beginning the process of breaking down the tenuous binary system with which Stein commences. Stein continues to deconstruct the binary system of American versus French by setting out a series of "examples" meant to solidify the distinction, but ultimately blur the lines of nationality. The distinction still exists, but the shading of nuance becomes murkier: "The example of the George 56 American lady who has a fan is the one selected for admiration in the same way the example of the french lady who has a fan is the one selected as the one to be chosen to be an example of an admirable frenchwoman" (“Difference” 515). The binary devolves from distinct juxtaposition to similariy once removed. The American lady looks to the fan as a receptacle of praise, as the pinnacle of fanhood. The French lady uses the fan in a system of admiration, but her fan functions instead as a signifier of some level of perfect French-ness that requires admiration. This distinction may point to the true difference between the nationalities -- perhaps there is no essential core to American-ness. The binary, then, could be understood in terms of the presence and absence of a core of national identity. As an expatriate ruling over the sphere of the American intelligentsia in Europe, Stein inhabits the liminal world of identifying as neither French nor American. The delineation between the two entities is blurry, and she explicitly states this blurriness, writing, "The difference between the examples is this, one example shows this and the same example never shows anything else. Another example shows something else and in this way something is proved. Approved by all...The trouble with it is that they may be mistaken" (“Difference” 515). What of this "mistaken?" The mock logic of this passage points to Stein's feeling that all of this scientific, clearly delineated explanation of binaries is fundamentally flawed given the myriad connections (including complications of identity) linking complicated and countervailing binaries. One may be mistaken in the assumption that there is a primary difference between the Americans and the French, but, and perhaps more essentially, one may be mistaken for one identity over another. This idea of being "mistaken" is ambiguous and points to the continued deconstruction of the binary of nationalities. Moreover, the notion of “mistaken” is inextricably linked to the conception of “identity.” Stein points to questions of ambiguous identity and self through her status as an expatriate. For Stein, the deconstruction of the national being envelops ideas of age disparities, exactingness versus laxity, and the dramatic versus the tempered. Beyond the content of Stein's deconstruction of the George 57 national binary, the form that Stein employs when upending the continuum reinforces the increasing bluriness of the delineation. Over the course of the essay, Stein uses myriad repetitions with slight alterations: "The difference between there is a difference between, what is the difference and their difference, to add to them to be added to them, to divide from them to be divided from them, to be sent away by them and if sent away by them would they be willing are they willing have they spoken of it and have they acted...This is partly a beginning" (“Difference” 517). Representative of the way in which Stein builds sentences upon sentences that reverberate and chant reinforcing their own truthfulness, these lines center around the idea of "difference." The lines addressing this difference, however are surprisingly similar and the need to grammatically reassert the presence of a difference suggests that the difference is not as stark as Stein initially asserts. The intrinsic similarities between the two nationalities originally set forth in a binary culminates in a mantra of swirling identities, in which the concept of a binary is ultimately discredited: "Which is which. The first one here. The one here. Guess which is which. I guess which is which. The first there. Which is which. Here and there. Which is which. To guess which is which To guess which is which here which is which there. Which is which. To guess which is which, if to guess which is which, to guess. Which is which" (“Difference” 518). “Which is which”: two sides of an equation, the same as saying x equals x. In a mathematical setting, this sort of tautology is illogical, and the grammar of the equation in a literary setting, in which one is attempting to delineate identity, necessitates guessing to gain an answer. In this structure of repetition all sense of the primacy inherent in a binary is lost, as is the binary itself. Stein addresses the issue of primacy in a binary more directly in "Composition as Explanation." The overarching binary she addresses in this essay might be described as the modern or contemporary versus the classic. Wrapped up in these labels are the subsidiary categories of (respectively) irritating versus beautiful and rejection versus acceptance. Stein intimates that, for George 58 most individuals, the primacy in this binary is placed on the beautiful, accepted classic. It is time, however, that serves to deconstruct this binary: "The only thing that is different from one time to another is what is seen and what is seen depends upon how everybody is doing everything...Nothing changes from generation to generation except the thing seen and that makes a composition" (“Composition” 520). Distance from creation and composition flips the ideas of this binary. Stein explains that "that is the reason why the creator of the new composition in the arts is an outlaw until he is a classic" (“Composition” 521). Distance from composition will destroy the binary, transferring the modern work from the realm of unrecognizability to the realm of the classic. In the process, time works on the public to reverse the binaries that were attached to this major one, as "of course it is wonderfully beautiful, only when it is still a thing irritating annoying stimulating then all quality of beauty is denied to it. Of course it is beautiful but first all beauty in it is denied and then all the beauty of it is accepted" (“Composition” 522). Stein's binary placing modern or contemporary works against the conception and public opinion of a classic crumbles as works gain beauty and acceptance as classics with the passage of time. This discussion of classic and contemporary relates to the idea of publication as an exteriorizing of an interior self. The classic is fully external. The contemporary work, published and outside of the self, is external, but still connected to the author's sense of self and can still work on the internal “I.” History has worked so much on the classic that it is divorced from the self of the author, but a contemporary work still serves as a conduit through which history can form the author's self. Coming full circle in a Steinian fashion, it is fruitful to look once again at the quote that opened this discussion, "I always wanted to be historical, from almost a baby on" (Selected Writings vii). The immediate focus in this statement lies in its relation to the historical moment, to an act of representing a history through the self that works to create a historical narrative of the "I." The final clause of this sentence begins an understanding of the effect of Stein's conception of the George 59 historical moment on individuals. By asserting her identification with the historical and qualifying it as "from almost a baby on," Stein pushes a new sense of what qualifies as history that is consistent with the formal fracturing of her work. Concerned with the recasting of reality because of World War I, Stein's conception of history is one that rests on the ubiquity of the present. For Stein, history (particularly an individual's history) is perpetually restarting in the present moment. It is perpetually being reborn so that she can be historical "from almost a baby on ." Looking again to The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas, one sees how this perpetual restarting and rebirth took hold in Stein's own life. The breakup and recreation that pervade this work are emblematic of the larger process of recreation or not in the face of the uncertainty brought by World War I, and are further explored in Stein's reworking of the traditional conception of gender for herself and society. The genre bending in which Stein operates in The Autobiography of Alice B. Toklas represents a deeply personal manifestation of the disassociation of self in which the shifting distances from self to other are deeply connected to Stein as an individual. By operating in a mode of authorship that blurs the lines between what constitutes a biography (Alice's portrayal of Stein, authored by Stein herself), what constitutes an autobiography (Alice's telling of her own life, revolving around Stein, and authored by Stein), and, by extension, what constitutes the self (where are these lines between Stein and Alice, self and other), Stein creates a system in which all such delineations are deconstructed into their constituent parts in order to rest in a brokenness that more closely reflects reality. Were F. Scott Fitzgerald to be faced with the same disorder or fragmentation of identity, his inclination would be to institute a reconstruction to create a coherent “I,” although this process works in his writings to varying degrees. For Gertrude Stein, the war highlighted the extent to which we are all disconnected from one another, and further disconnected from ourselves. It is in the breakdown of these disconnecting spaces and arbitrary delineations, whether they be physical space, gender dichotomies, or linguistic binaries, that Stein finds the means to reconnect with a true and powerful George 60 reality. Chapter 4 Stein's American Self In The Geographical History of America or the Relation of Human Nature to the Human Mind, Gertrude Stein offers a particularly apt mechanism through which to consider the construction of her novels and texts: “Think how that sentence goes” (369). When one considers the ebbs and flows of nouns and arguments in Stein's writing, it becomes necessary to follow this advice, and by following the structure of a sentence itself, one is able to follow the logic (or antilogic) of Stein's arguments, particularly in the uncovering of the process of Stein's construction, deconstruction, and reconstruction of binaries. Indeed, following the title of The Geographical History of America or the Relation of Human Nature to the Human Mind is one of these instances. By following the title grammatically, the reader gains a mechanism by which to understand Stein's argument regarding the connection between geography history, human nature and the human mind. The critical placement of the “or” in this title suggests a continuity between the social identity of America and the Cartesian question of the human mind and human nature. Further, the title raises the question of the utility of understanding the human mind (the “I”) in relation to human nature (the social being). The Geographical History of America constitutes a work that provides a curious melding of the binary divisions, specifically considering the internal/external divide in terms of human nature/the human mind. This binary is fundamentally linked to the external social question of human nature and the internal, individual human mind. Stein constructs the self through the fragmenting effects of historical circumstances. Because Stein is overarchingly concerned with how one constitutes identity in the face of dismantled binaries, she employs the resulting blurriness of George 61 these former dichotomies to explain how outside views create the inside self, how the external, rather than being defined against the internal, as in a traditional binary, instead works on the internal to define it. The divide between human nature and the human mind traverses the work, serving as a rallying point around which Stein gathers the other binaries she explores. The two sides are a coding system for the terms of these binaries. Her initial explanation of the difference between these two states of being begins, Now the relation of human nature to the human mind is this. Human nature does not know this. Human nature cannot know this. What is it that human nature does not know. Human nature does not know that if every one did not die there would be no room for those who live now. Human nature cannot know this. Now the relation of human nature to the human mind is this. Human nature cannot know this. But the human mind can. It can know this. (Geographical 367) Beginning with a sentence as seemingly concrete and straightforward as “Now the relation of human nature to the human mind is this” suggests the presence of a binary that will be itself concrete and immovable. The grammar of this sentence, being unconventional, automatically undermines the conclusiveness of the statement. Stein undermines these terms with the repetition in this passage of the ambiguous “this,” that undercuts the idea that there might be a relationship in a binary. What is known and unknown to each is unclear. Such a seemingly stable binary between human nature (the external of a larger, social condition) and the human mind (the internal conception of the individual) is immediately problematized. The abrupt transition following this delineation and its breakdown posits of this relationship in conjunction with America as an entity: “In the United States there is more space where nobody is than where anybody is. This is what George 62 makes America what it is” (Geography 367). The human mind is connected with this conception of America in a way that human nature is not. The abstraction of the mind (and it is pure abstraction) leads into America as an abstract, empty space. Conversely, Stein identifies human nature with other ideas tangentially connected with the idea of nation. It is an invented term defined in relation to land, danger, and death. She explores this divide, “This is what makes religion and propaganda and politics this and with this the human mind and human nature. And the human mind can know this but human nature cannot know this and so the human mind pretty well does not know this” (Geography 368). Even as the human mind and human nature converge in this sentence, they are still held separate by the divide between “America” and religion, propaganda, and politics. The creation of the difference remains unclear, although the human mind is related to the thinking, analytical side of politics while human nature encompasses the instinctive of propaganda. The idea of America extends into Stein's use of language of geography in her descriptions of America to create an environment of lines and divisions, which reinforces the created binaries. She lays out a technical vision of this geographical entity, writing, I know so well the relation of a simple center and a continuous design to the land as one looks down on it, a wandering line as one looks down on it, a quarter section as one looks down on it, the shadow of each tree on the snow and the woods on each side and the land higher up between it and I know so well how in spite of the fat that the human mind has not looked at it the human mind has it to know that it is there like that, notwithstanding that the human mind has like what it has which has not been like that. (Geography 387) Stein suggests that the lines of geography, the borders that create nations, a sense of internal and external in relation to national identity, create a clearly delineated space, the external borders that create a myth of nationhood and an autonomous individual, even as it is the imposition of the George 63 external on the internal that creates the self. By abstracting the language of geography to dividing line and division, Stein relates this sense of nationhood and borders to the human mind, making it purely mental. Stein's borders, however, human-created divisions, are problematized by the primacy of nature, with “the woods on each side.” The vagueness of this arbitrary line is further emphasized in its integration with the human mind and the way the human mind understands it as Stein writes “I know so well how in spite of the fact that the human mind has not looked at it the human mind has it to know that it is there like that.” This invocation of vision defines Stein's estimation of the creation of identity. Stein sets up the relationship between geography and the human mind: “If there was no geography no geographical history would there be any human mind not as it is but would there would there be any human mind” (Geographical 376). This question/statement forms the basis for Stein's exploration of the relationship between geography and America, human nature and the human mind, and the broader implications of these divides and subsequent interminglings for the notion of identity. As these ideas link explicitly and implicitly to the binary terms of internal and external through a gloss of stylistic concreteness that covers their essential ambiguity, they reflect the way Stein creates the “I.” Looking at geography, borders, and divisions from the perspective of human nature yields far different results from that of the human mind. The story Stein tells in relation to this connection is one in which When you climb on the land high human nature knows because by remembering it had been a dangerous thing to go higher and higher on the land which is where human nature was but now is an aeroplane human nature is nothing remembering is nothing no matter how many have been killed from up there it is not anything that is a memory, because if you are killed you do not remember no you do not, it is only on land where it is dangerous but where you were not killed that you George 64 remember. (Geographical 374) In this configuration, human nature becomes further coded as external as it pivots on being unconnected to land, memory, and a knowledge of death. Human nature “knows” because it is not thought, not consideration, but instinctual knowledge. The land is linked to the human mind and thought, while the aeroplane, the machine of the air, has changed human nature. The human mind, which is intimately connected with all of these facets of geography and nationhood, takes on a level of internality that rests on deep-seated connections to the land. This land, in turn, is the locus of memory, also an interior idea connected with the human mind and divorced from human nature, which from its place in an aeroplane cannot access the ability to remember. Stein further explores the connection between death, geography, and America in the sentence “One of the things that makes a big country different from a little country makes the Geographical history of America different from the geographical history of Europe is that when anybody is dead they are dead” (Geographical 378). In Europe there is this inherent connection to place and a layering of history that causes Europeans to never be truly dead, much as Fitzgerald discusses regarding those killed in World War I in Tender is the Night. By instituting a coalescing of these qualities Stein further emphasizes the dichotomy that she is creating between human nature and the human mind. She creates whole systems of associations on each side of the divide, building networks of relations that will be either supported or torn down. Even as Stein sets up this systems of associations, however, she plants the seeds of discontent in the placement and concreteness of the dividing line in her rhetoric of geographical divides. She slyly posits, “Wandering around a country has something to do with the geographical history of the country and the way one piece of it is not separated from any other one” (Geographical 392). The ambiguity of this statement lies in the consideration of which “piece” she considers “not separated from any other one.” This ambiguity opens a path to consider other dilemmas of the human nature/human mind divide and its implications for identity. George 65 Turning to more explicit considerations of the dichotomy between human nature and the human mind, Stein simultaneously delineates this division and leaves room for more codings of ambiguity. Stein begins by creating an absolute, rhetorical division between the human mind and human nature, writing, “The human mind has no relation to human nature at all. The question has been asked is it the relation of human nature to the human mind or is it the relation of the human mind to human nature. The answer is there is no relation between the human mind and human nature there is a relation between human nature and the human mind” (Geographical 376). The unequivocal way in which Stein starts this discussion creates not only a dividing line between the human mind and human nature, but a chasm between the two entities. Stein repeats and reemphasizes their fundamental difference, but the final clause of this discussion inserts an uncertainty into this divide, suggesting that “there is a relation.” By ordering the terms such that the external human nature works on the internal human mind, Stein sets up a problematized system to inform the discussion of identity. The stakes of creating and breaking down these binaries in relation to identity rest on the constitution of the self through these binaries. In considering the parameters of the human mind and human nature separately, Stein focuses her discussion on the agency of these entities. The human mind becomes connected with such questions as Has the human mind anything to do with what it sees. Yes I think so. With what it likes. No I do not think so. With what it has. No I do not think so, with communism individualism propaganda politics and women no and yes I think so, I think it is not so. With the world as it has said it was. No I do not think so. Then what is the human mind. Has the human mind anything to do with question and answer. Perhaps no I do not think so. (Geographical 387) Not only does this discourse seek to delineate what does and does not constitute the human mind, George 66 but its form both emphasizes and calls into question its assertions. Asking these questions of the fundamental characteristics of the human mind as statements implies that both question and answer are already established. Further, the incorrect punctuation of this passage foregrounds a later discussion of the relationship of speech to writing by pointing to the way in which her writing signs speech by turning usual markers of punctuation on their head. The reader no longer has a coherent basis of grammatical structure (which would appeal to the human mind) from which to understand her argument. The back and forth becomes a sing-songy learning by rote that invokes speech and the instinctual of human nature. It seems inevitable that the answers given are the only correct answers. This passage plays on the Cartesian questions of what it means to think. For Descartes, the presence of thought indicated the creation of identity. For Stein, however, thought is not enough to create a self without the external societal considerations of human nature shaping the internal “I.” In the question about questions, however, the addition of a “perhaps” to the repeated answer casts a doubt on that answer, calling into question the necessity of all the attributes ascribed to the human mind. “Necessity,” in fact, takes on a peculiar meaning in Stein's discussion of the human mind as, “Nothing is known of the word necessary but Jo Alsop knows something of the word necessary oh yes he does, he does not but oh yes he does and is it because he does know something about the word necessary he does not know anything about the human mind” (Geographical 391). This connection between knowledge of the “necessary” and lack of knowledge of the human mind suggests something inherently unnecessary in the human mind. Jo Alsop, a political reporter of the first half of the century, is connected to this discussion through his conservative political leaning, which becomes linked to the instinctual human nature. There must then be something necessary in human nature, something integral in the external, to which Stein returns in her later discussions of identity. In delineating what constitutes human nature as an entity separate from the human mind, George 67 Stein writes again of the abilities of this entity. She elaborates the binary through its associations: “Now do you see why there is no relation between human nature and the human mind. Human nature can not say yes, how can human nature say yes, human nature does what it does but it cannot say yes. Of course human nature can not say yes. If it did it would not be human nature” (Geographical 417). As an external force, then, human nature “does what it does,” but it cannot reflect on these actions or apply the mind's sense of memory. The agency involved in “saying yes” belongs to the opposite term of Stein's binary system, held as a privilege of the human mind. Stein's fluctuating degrees of distinctness in the dichotomy between the human mind and human nature result in moments of breakdown when they are discussed explicitly in terms of internal and external, within and without. She writes, “Human nature only has to do with in between and in between oh yes in between sleep and peace oh in between. And the human mind” (Geographical 421). The invocation of “in between” complicates the binaries that Stein has worked to impose. First blurring these distinctions with relation to human nature, Stein brings that externality into a liminal world unrestricted by dichotomies, binaries, or dividing lines. Ending the passage with the sentence “And the human mind,” attaches importance to the status of these two terms in relation to one another. They are suddenly occupying the same space, in between internal and external, despite their having “no relation.” This sense of convergence between the sides of a binary rooted in ideas of identity works to form a new conception of the way internal and external coalesce into the confusion that Stein exhibits in writing, “The human mind cannot find out but it is in it is not out. If the human mind is in then it is not out” (Geographical 410). The ambiguity of the status of the human mind in the internal/external dichotomy questions its own standing in the binary systems. Stein employs several other binary systems in The Geographical History of America, coding them alternately under human nature and the human mind. The considerations of writing and George 68 publishing/speech and talking, and reality and imagination serve to both explicate and problematize these binary divides, ultimately suggesting that the breakdown of the distinction between internal and external allows the creation of an identity. In this process, she hints at how these divisions play into this initial collusion of the binaries of internal and external. Stein adds the binary of writing (codes as internal) and talking (external) to the system of internal human mind and external human nature. As an internal manifestation of self, writing takes on an aura of sacredness: “As long as nothing or very little that you write is published it is all sacred but after it is a great deal of it is published is it everything that you write is it as sacred” (Geographical 372). Much the same as for Fitzgerald in his discussion of the implications of publication in “Early Success,” this passage points to two considerations Stein takes into account regarding the interiority of writing: the personal sacredness of writing as an act, and the invasion of the external on this act through the process of publishing. By offering up the inner, written self to the outside world, that self loses some of its sacredness, but it is also through the externalization that one gains identity. This sense of self stems from the encountering of the interior with the exterior, deconstructing this divide in the process of reconstructing the self. Stein begins her discussion of speech and talking by removing it from the purview of the human mind (internal) and placing it on the side of human nature (external). She writes of the act of speech: “I wish I could say that talking had to do with the human mind I wish I could say so and not cry I wish I could” (Geographical 375). By stating “I wish I could say so and not cry,” Stein suggests a fundamental inability to cross the bounds between “talking” and “the human mind.” It is possible, however, that this gap is unbridgeable specifically by speech, given that Stein cannot “say” it. And yet she does say it, or write it, anyway, only claiming not to do so, leaving room for the possibility that the dichotomy that appears to be reinforced here may still be deconstructed by the act of writing. Stein further explores the bounds of the internal/external divide in relation to speech George 69 by taking up the issue of naming and ownership (tellingly applying it to the issue of America, which is coded as internal in the increasingly complicated binary). In deconstructing this divide she writes of the question “How is America. Very well I thank you. This is the reply. If you say I thank you that means that in a way it belongs to you. Very well I thank you” (Geographical 381). By saying, “Very well I thank you,” one uses an externally coded act, talking, to claim ownership and internalize America. Stein then attempts to reestablish the primacy of her crumbling dichotomies and the way the terms she uses are coded, even as she actively tears them down. By reaffirming “Has one anything to do with the other is writing a different thing, oh yes and this is so exciting so satisfying so tender that it makes everything writing has nothing to do with the human speech or human nature and therefore and therefore it has something to do with the human mind” (Geographical 381). Although this passage does seem to unequivocally reassert the dynamic between writing and speech, the human mind and human nature, internal and external, there is a stutter in the writing (itself a curious combination of writing and speech) as Stein says “it makes everything everything,” and again with “and therefore and therefore.” Stein's inability to return to absolute assertions in relation to these binaries suggests that they have been complicated to an irreparable degree. Stein's final move towards deconstructing these binaries in terms of writing and talking also links this crumbling system to the idea of identity. Explicitly, she says that “It carefully comes about that there is no identity and no time and therefore no human nature when words are apart. Or rather when words are together” (Geographical 463). Stein uses these lines to specify the collusion of “words” rather than specifically naming writing or talking. Words, whether “apart” or “together,” constitute identity. Stein's deconstruction of the binary of writing/talking plays into the deconstruction of the human mind/human nature divide as well. Although only “human nature” is mentioned explicitly in the passage, connected with the idea of “when words are apart,” Stein's George 70 immediate shift to “Or rather when words are together” invokes the opposite side of that binary, applying it to its counterpart in a way that complicates the divide, suggesting its breakdown. Closely related to the binary between writing and talking is the binary Stein creates between the imaginary and the real. In the same manner, the imaginary is coded as internal, closely related to the human mind, while reality is coded as external, relating to human nature. In exploring this divide and its coordination with the construction of identity, Stein approaches the way the external acts upon the internal, creating an intermingling relationship that further explores the implications of dismantling binaries. Stein begins this discussion “There is no real reality to a really imagined life any more...What is the difference between remembering what has been happening and remembering what has been dreaming. None. Therefore there is no relation between human nature and the human mind” (Geographical 380). Stein sets up the difference between reality and imagination in this passage to be grammatically clear, with the mock logic of a mathematical proof. There are, however, several ways in which the grammar of the sentence could be read. Stein extends this distinction to “remembering what has been happening” and “remembering what has been dreaming.” The repetition of “remembering” in this equation, however, suggests a certain congruency between these two ideas. What is happening and what is dreaming are more parallel than at first they seem. Stein also points to a one-time coalescing and cohesion between the real and the imaginary in adding “any more” to the statement “there is no real reality to a really imagined life.” In using this distinction as the basis for asserting the fundamental distance between the human mind and human nature, Stein brings these two entities closer together. Stein continues the ambiguity inherent in these statements, “Define what you do by what you see never by what you know because you do not know that this is so” (Geographical 442). Beginning with the distinction between what is seen (reality) and what is known (imagination), Stein blurs this line again by invoking the ambiguous “this,” which could refer to the beginning of that sentence, or some George 71 undefined, amorphous “this.” The imaginary and the real play upon each other. In this relationship they create something bigger than their independent implications: Could one get rid of war by it becoming like dueling and would the way be by stopping saluting, if nobody saluted and nobody received saluting and nobody saluted and nobody wore any clothes that were given to them would that have anything like dueling to do with war ending, oh yes oh yes, and has anything to do with the human mind no it has to do with human nature because it is not like money it might be like romanticism but is it, it might be but is it. (Geographical 447). Stein suggests here that the trappings of war create the reality of war. By losing the imaginary and arbitrary signifiers of war, one has the power to reduce it back down to its status of dueling. Also imaginary and arbitrary, dueling nonetheless lacks the quality and scale of violence that signifies war. The implication, then, is that taking away these trappings would work on reality in the same way. Despite Stein's final assertions that “war ending...has nothing to do with the human mind,” but instead “has to do with human nature,” reasserting the binary between imaginary and real and its relation to the human mind and human nature, there is again a note of uncertainty in “it might be but it is.” The performative nature of the external wreaks internal change by being imposed on the physical self. The relations between this newly deconstructed binary and Stein's conception of identity create a coalescing whole that works against the definitions of binaries. In a final push to explicate and delineate the stark difference she posits between the human mind and human nature, the imaginary and reality, Stein turns to the difference between the insulated idea of “today” and the outside pressings of “any other day,” which she explains, And if they do if they do not think that anything has come to stay what is the George 72 difference between to-day and any other day. But there is a difference. There is no use in saying there is no difference because there is a difference there is a difference between to-day and any other day. There is no need of their being any difference no need at all. (Geographical 443) This difference of which there is no need is further put into terms of “the difference between need and is” (Geographical 443), recalling the divide between imagination and reality. The confusion of this passage, however, is once again indicative of Stein's process of creating binaries, attaching a whole host of associated terms to these binaries, and then subsequently dismantling them. The net implication of this process is to give Stein a grounding from which to explore the creation of identity from the remnants of these destroyed binaries. While simple conceptions of an individual's identity may be grounded on the notion of strict binaries, of defining the self in the face of the other, Stein's modern universe allows this system of definition to stand only fleetingly. As soon as one believes one has a grasp on the premises on which she bases her definitions, Stein undermines these premises, confusing what should be clear lines between ideas such as internal and external, the human mind and human nature, geographical lines, writing and talking, reality and imagination until each side of the divide necessarily works on its counterpart, building a positive sense of definition and identity, rather than a negative one. Stein produces a self-identification that relies on an external validation and recognition. In one of her most famous lines regarding identity, Stein writes, “I am I because my little dog knows me” (Geographical 401). In this first configuration of identity, of “I am I,” Stein creates a system of self-construction (a largely internal affair) that relies on the presence of an external view. Stein goes on to offer this intermingling of internal and external in other guises: I am I yes sir I am I. I am I yes Madame am I I. George 73 When I am I am I I. (Geographical 405) Using the same language of “I am I,” Stein steps through a series of external validations for this statement, relying on the unspoken approval of “sir” and “Madame” in the corroboration of her assertion of identity. When, in the final line, Stein lacks this source of external validity, her former assertion transfigures into a question laced with doubt, “Am I I.” The palindromic feel of this passage relies on its convoluted grammar and the ambiguity of that grammar to point again to the mock logic of a mathematical proof to display that I equals I. The possible ways these lines could be read through their lack of punctuation and layering of the “I” comes to the fore in the last line. Reading the line “When I am I, I am I. I,” it becomes a reassertion in itself. The possibility for a reader's mind to process the line as “When I am, I am I. I?” or “When I am I, am I I?” suggests that the “I” exists in a tenuous status of struggle for definition. Stein universalizes this process of external validation of the internal self as “They are they because all who are there know they are they and on no account cannot they not be no not as long as they are in the race...They are they just the same only they are not because they are no longer identified and if they did not race at all well then not any one is any one” (Geographical 423). The constitution of “they” rests on outside eyes recognizing them as such, and once recognized by the external gaze they can “on no account” change this identity or shed it. The internal condition of the self, once recognized by an external force, be it the little dog or the “they” is both validated and solidified. But if the “they” of this passage chose not to race, the action by which they are initially identified, their self as recognized by the external disappears and “not any one is any one.” Racing, being in the race, is crucial to identity because it represents the opportunity of contact with the external, a conduit through which identity is formed. Without the signifier to the external world, the internal self loses its presence in the world. Stein coalesces the presence of outside eyes in the “little dog” and the “they” by explaining, George 74 “The little dog knows that I am I because he knows me but that is not because of identity but because he believes what he sees and what he hears and what he smells and so that is really superstition and not identity because superstition is true while identity is history and history is not true because history is dependent on an audience” (Geographical 426). Retiring again to the dichotomy of real versus imaginary in conjunction with identity, and further relating this binary to superstition and history, as well as self and other, Stein superficially backtracks her earlier statements of an externally validated or constructed internal identity. She does so in an ambiguous way, however, confusing the binaries that she sets forth as proofs to suggest that the process is more complicated than the phrase “not because of identity” would indicate. By coding what the little dog knows as based in the real, she reaffirms it as part of the external side of the binary. This real/external set-up, however, she first claims is not identity, and further posits as “really superstition.” The odd connection between the real and superstition indicates the blurring of Stein's binary system. Further, Stein defines identity as “history,” creating a binary between superstition and history, associating the terms with the real and the imaginary, respectively. Through this association, Stein's binaries are dismantled. Her link from “identity” to “history” to the necessity of “an audience” displays the dependency of the seemingly internal (identity) on the defining work of the external (audience). In a “play” entitled “Identity” contained within the text, Stein further points to the inability of the self to fully construct identity without external help: “If I know that I say that I will go away and I do not I do not. That makes identity. Thank you for identity even if it is not a pleasure” (Geographical 431). Although there is no indication of who Stein is thanking for the creation of her identity, the beginning of this passage points to her inability to create this identity unilaterally. The act of “saying” is less important for her here than the act of “doing.” It does not matter what she has said, but what she does in spite of speech, much like it is the act of publishing that forms what George 75 she says. Thanking the reader for identity, although it is not a pleasure, suggests that it is in the performative, the eyes of an outsider, that her identity as an author is created. Although she says (and knows that she says) she will do or be something, if that condition does not materialize, she does not know, and this condition “makes identity,” for which Stein subsequently offers gratitude to an external force. Stein later elaborates on the condition of identity in relation to some of the binaries that she has already set forth and broken down (calling into question the status of identity in a system of deconstructed binaries), Now this might mean that there is identity if you were to say that this is so which it is but nevertheless there is not because to-day is never to-morrow or yesterday although if it is if to-morrow is to-day that is what she can say she can say that if to-morrow is nearer to to-day, so some can say so she can say then tomorrow is to-day but if to-morrow is not anywhere near to-day which is what he can say then to-morrow cannot be to-day. (Geographical 453) The shifts between “to-morrow” and “to-day” in this passage recall Stein's earlier explanations of the insular to-day and unknown, outside to-morrow in terms of the real and the imaginary, the internal and the external. This discussion pivots around the idea that “this might mean that there is identity.” This possible identity first rests on “you,” a force and entity outside of Stein's self, saying so. The possibility of this process being completed, however, relies on where Stein comes down on the status of to-day and to-morrow, another manifestation of the internal and external, respectively. This dichotomy is itself complicated, subsequently, by the difficulty of coding “to-day” and “tomorrow” under the system of internal and external and its associations with imagination and reality. Which is internalized, the present or the future? The future is a projection of the imagination, with the present occupying the space of the real, but the idea of “to-day” is easier to internalize than the George 76 unknown of “to-morrow.” In this curious inversion, Stein goes so far as to write, “so she can say then to-morrow is to-day,” which is quickly refuted by “he can say then to-morrow cannot be today.” This quick reversal exhibits not only the instability of the binaries Stein has been laying in front of the reader, but also the larger message of the power of external speech and language in creating internal validity. To-morrow both can and cannot be to-day based solely on the spoken assertion of an outside force. The external creates internal consistency regardless of the extent to which these ideas seem to have inherent qualities of identity and identification. This curious construction becomes more clear when Stein posits the power of internal versus external in the act of creating in an inverted scenario: “Naturally when inside is inside it sees outside but it is inside. Therefore identity and time have nothing to do with from time to time since inside is inside even if it does see outside” (Geographical 453). By considering the creation of identity from the perspective of the internal, where one might have expected the locus of identity to be formed, Stein reasserts the relative lack of power the internal self has in creating an identity. Only able to see the outside, the autonomous inside has no power to create. In fact, “inside is inside” necessarily. Kept in that inside sphere, it only penetrates the external by virtue of its own gaze. By being kept internal, the self is unaffected by “from time to time,” by which Stein means the transitory present. Time is an amophous medium for change. Instead, the internal identity finds itself related to “time” more generally, the ambiguously internal/external, real/imaginary tomorrow. Stein's final word on identity as it relates to the binary of human nature and the human mind, to external defining forces and internal substance, takes the form of “Plainly not identity as much as plainly identity. Human nature plainly worries about identity. And so human nature is all of identity, and who is who. If they asked who is who what would identity do” (Geographical 466). By asserting that “human nature is all of identity, and who is who,” Stein states that the work of the external on the internal, of human nature on the human mind, of the other on the self ultimately George 77 defines this most personal sense of self. The internal becomes the raw material in a relationship that cannot be determined by arbitrary binaries and divisions, but must instead be considered in terms of a melding, a symbiotic relationship that crosses apparent chasms between supposed opposites. The Geographical History of America, by positing binaries in terms of the human mind and human nature, serves to deconstruct the binaries, in the process allowing Stein to explain how, in the remnants of the previous guiding delineations, a new sense of identity and self can be constructed through the intermingling of the remains, and through their work on, rather than against, one another. The stakes involved in the creation, break-down, and possibility of recreation for the individual for Fitzgerald and Stein are intimately linked with their individual selves. For these modernists, the title and implication of “author” rest on the way they conceptualize the influence of the external on the internal. The relationship of History to this binary represents a particularly salient facet of the conception of self, as an external force working to form and deconstruct the individual. The acknowledgement of the historical moment in this process, however, not immediately apparent, for while “the writer lived in the world, as we all do, and suffered its events...the modernists, at least partly because of that suffering, decided to save the world through an art purified of history – an art conceived as the re-invigoration of human capacities blocked, thwarted and denied by modern social existence” (Dekoven 138). The modernism of Tender Buttons, for example, exhibits this conception of modernism on its surface: the turn to interiority, a shattered house that seems to exist outside of the historical moment and only within the individual. Stein's creation of this space pivots on the very lack of the external influence. A countervailing tendency in Stein's and Fitzgerald's works of the 1930's, however, pushed the modernist writer “to George 78 tell the whole truth, to make each fiction the book of the world” (Dekoven 138). The manifestations of history in these works point to the way external history pushes its way into the consciousness of the author, forming the author's sense of identity and thus informing the contours of their works. Suppression and veiled representation of particular historical phenomena snake their way through Fitzgerald's and Stein's works, creating a pervasive thread of History that creates and destroys individual characters and the authors themselves. Despite the supposed ahistorical nature of modernist writing, “in fact, a good deal of modernist fiction generally considered to have escaped (repudiated or denied) history has instead suppressed it, thereby using one of the few feasible strategies, given the modernist disgust with history, for writing about it at all” (Dekoven 137). This sort of side-stepping of the direct question of History and the historical moment in their writing manifests itself in the preponderance of other conduits of the external, working in the same was as History to break down the barriers between the self, the “I” and the external. The 1930's works of Stein and Fitzgerald exhibit “the complex, powerful techniques of figuration available to modernist fiction writers [which] allowed them simultaneously to turn away from the devastating facts of modern history – a gesture of survival as well as of denial – and at the same time to render those facts with greater power than direct representation would give” (Dekoven 151). Underpinning these concerns of history and how this external relates to the “I” is how the authors understand a larger arc of the self's relation to time. The world and the self must be read through the veil of history, carved by the transitory historical moment, and following the larger trajectory of a historical world (Whittier-Ferguson). Fitzgerald and Stein approach the question of the internal/external divide and the process through which the self is formed in the face of the shattering historical moment and exhibiting a fundamental difference of understanding. Both point in their works to the process by which the external invades the internal (not unlike World War I itself), creating and changing the self. George 79 The particular type of traumatic historical moment in which they are writing means that the external is crucial in deconstructing, breaking down the individual “I” into fractured shards of the self. Further, the break-down of the self is necessary for the individual (and particularly the author). As Fitzgerald writes in Tender is the Night, “He mocked at his reasoning, calling it specious and 'American' – his criteria of un-cerebral phrase-making was that it was American. He knew, though, that the price of his intactness was incompleteness” (Tender 26). The confluence of “phrasemaking,” the “incompleteness” of “intactness,” and “American” suggests a turn toward nationality as a formative external consideration. 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