Introduction to Poetry: Poetic Scansion; Form and Performance Close Reading: Basic Technique 1. Get some basic information a. For poetry that could mean coming to a consensus about what the poem is trying to say in lay terms. Who is speaking and about what? What is its subject? What are its major themes? b. This step should be the briefest; you want to try to get “the” meaning in nugget form here. But remember, that’s not the task of close reading in general; nor is it the task of analysis. One of the tricky aspects of close analysis is that it’s easy to think that once you “get” the poem, you’re done. But instead of trying to put the text in a nutshell, we want to expand it. Think about it this way: just one of Shakespeare’s comedies, The Tempest, has a minimum of 37,700 scholarly books or articles written about it (and counting!), according to Google. And that’s just what Google has in its databases. c. So how do you get from one piece of text to thousands upon thousands of writings and analyses? 2. Begin by asking questions about language and form a. For poetry, try to identify the meter and rhyme scheme; note where an otherwise regular meter (iambic pentameter, for example) goes awry b. Make notes about the regularity or irregularity of the rhyme and meter c. How many lines are in a stanza? Is each stanza the same length? Is each line the same length (same number of metric feet)? d. Is there a refrain? e. What does the poem sound like? Are there repeated sounds? Repeated words? f. Does the poem contain many or few active words/verbs? g. Alternatively are the words mostly descriptive? If so, what do they describe? h. Are there particular/alternative connotations to the words used in the poem? i. What’s the speaker’s perspective? 3. Next, move from those observations to a consideration of how they create the identified meaning? a. What’s the relationship between these formal characteristics and what we identified as the content (or meaning) of the poem? b. How, for example, might they suggest a deeper meaning than we originally thought? c. Do they demonstrate an irony or contradiction we may have missed before? 4. Finally, you can begin to think about the larger implications of your analysis, and you can pose an argument that answers the question, “So what?” a. So, what does it mean for <fill in the blank: culture, gender, literature, tradition, etc.> that the author uses this particular word/rhyme scheme/meter instead of another one? 1 b. So, what does it mean for <fill in the blank> that the author composes a sonnet instead of free verse or vice versa? 2 Close Reading Fiction Formal analysis of prose fiction depends on (1) proposing possible meanings of the work as a whole, (2) looking closely at the language to notice details governing the diction, figuration, tone, narrative structure, etc., (3) addressing the impact of those details on your original interpretation (how they complicate or nuance your reading), and (4) asking, “So what?”. Though we’ll certainly be attending to the figurative and stylistic features of the language itself and, in many cases, the prose we’re reading can be very poetic, we will also be need to pay careful attention to broader structural elements of the narrative such as the plot and point of view. Indeed, identifying the relationships between the individual linguistic elements—diction, metaphor, metonymy—and the structural elements of the narrative can be one of the most rewarding parts of formal analysis. Steps for Close Reading I. As with close analysis of poetry, we’ll first determine what the story is about on a fundamental level. This is the “nugget” or “nutshell” articulation of the meaning. For literary texts, recognizing the differences between subject and theme will be important here since, in many cases, the meanings are not as readily identifiable as they are in thesis statements or argumentation in prose essays. The following definitions of “Theme” and “Subject” from NTC’s Dictionary of Literary Terms will help to clarify what we’re identifying when we talk about the “meaning” of a work. i. Subject: The topic or thing described in a work of LITERATURE. The subject differs from the THEME of the work in that theme is a comment, observation, or insight about the subject. For example, birth, marriage, and baptism are subjects often found in literature, yet these may be speaking to the themes of cycles, purity, renewal, etc. ii. Theme: In LITERATURE, the central or dominating idea, the “message,” implicit in a work. The theme of a work is seldom stated directly. It is an abstract concept indirectly expressed through recurrent IMAGES, actions, CHARACTERS, and SYMBOLS, and must be inferred by the reader or spectator. Theme differs from SUBJECT (the topic or thing described in a work) in that theme is a comment, observation, or insight about the subject. For example, the subject of a poem may be a flower; its theme, a comment on the fleeting nature of existence. II. Begin posing questions and making observations about a particular passage. In particular, pay close attention to how the story moves by attending to the following: a. How does a passage express or convey the meaning(s) identified above? How, for instance, would you identify the genre? What creative limitations does the genre place on the story’s meaning or structure? b. Make observations about figurative devices like metaphor, simile, word choices (patterns of diction), syntax and sentence structure, definitions and connotations of words (use the OED), and/or punctuation. 3 c. Taken a step further, how does the language affect our understanding of the story? How does the author use language to establish setting, voice(s), characterization, and/or emotional content? How does the language suggest or imply some content not readily identifiable in the denotative content of the words? For instance, are words repeated; what does that repetition suggest or imply? How does it function? How does the language create a humorous, sincere, sad, or contemplative tone? d. What images, symbols, or ideas stand out in the passage? Do any contradict or complement each other in interesting ways? How might they contribute to an understanding of some broader themes? e. What is the perspective or point of view through which the story is told? Does it remain constant or does it shift throughout the narrative? How do you know when the point of view shifts (i.e., what linguistic or context clues indicate as much?) (For more on p.o.v., see Abrams, pp. 271-276 in your readings packet). f. How does the plot unfold? What is the sequence of events (chronology) that constitutes the narrative? Does the chronology differ from the plot (the way in which the telling is ordered)? (for more on plot, see Abrams, pp. 265-268). g. Who are the protagonists? Who/what are the antagonists or “villains”? h. What constitutes the “conflict” or crisis in the action? Is it resolved? If so, how? III. Next, determine how any or all of these elements speak to your original assessment of the story’s meaning? What evidence do they provide for how you have been thinking of the story, the writing, and/or the characters? IV. Finally, what are the broader implications of these details/evidence for: a. its literary, historical, and/or cultural relevance? b. your own argument? c. what others have argued about the work? d. how the author imagines the work as “American”? 4 Close Reading Non-Fiction and Engaging with Literary Criticism Goals of Close Reading: In literary, rhetorical, and cultural study, the first point of analysis is the “text” or cultural object itself. Now that you have an understanding of some of the structural components of expository prose writing, you can embark on a deeper analysis of the conceptual pieces that make up nonfiction, essay, and/or literary critical writing. In turn, your ability to closely analyze such prose in close reading will afford you a greater reflexivity and reflectivity in your own writing. Steps for Close Reading and/or Rhetorical Analysis: I. First, generate a brief (one sentence or less) summary of the text’s main argument, thesis, or central claim. What, in a nutshell, is the piece about? To identify the main argument, you might think about how you would respond to the following questions: a. Though the author makes several claims in this piece, which does s/he most want the audience to grant? b. Does the claim you have identified account for why the writer is making this specific argument at this specific time and/or about this specific topic? In other words, does the claim you identified account for the circumstances that prompted the writing of this argument in the first place? How do you know? What textual clues can you identify in support of those circumstances/responses? II. Once you’ve identified the main argument/thesis, move on to identify its supporting reasons and/or its conceptual framework. a. Most likely, the main argument will be supported by smaller claims or arguments that rely on the development of related concepts, which may or may not be abstract. b. In turn, those concepts may emerge from more solid historical, empirical, and/or textual evidence, or they may emerge from a set of shared assumptions between the author and her/his audience. Teasing out those assumptions is a critical component of analysis. c. In order to emphasize this conceptual framework and, thereby, to more fully understand what the author is saying, you may need to begin by moving chronologically through the piece. As you develop your analysis, however, you’ll want to begin articulating relationships between and among the basic concepts rather than between paragraphs in order. III. After identifying the conceptual structure of the argument, you can begin evaluating the utility of those concepts for the argument as a whole. That is, you may begin to ask whether the reasons offered in support of the main argument are “good” reasons: a. For the text or topic under consideration. b. For the assumed audience, intended audience, or actual audience c. Or for opponents of the claims who may need to be persuaded. For instance, does the author offer any counterarguments that might anticipate potential objections? 5 Does the author represent the opposite views fairly or does s/he construct “straw man” arguments in order to more easily dispose of the oppositions’ arguments? IV. Although last in appearance, this “step” is one that we’ll constantly have to keep in view: it is the issue of language. a. As in all close reading, we need to attend carefully to the denotative and connotative meanings of words. How, for instance, is an author using a particular word and what are the ethical, political, historical, and/or emotional investments of that word or set of words in context? b. Do you notice any idiosyncrasies in the punctuation or syntax structure? Length of paragraphs or sentences? What are the effects of the choices the author makes in syntax or diction? How do these choices affect and effect the conceptual structure of the argument and/or its persuasiveness? c. Does the author use figurative or rhetorical language? What are the effects of such tools as analogy, comparison/contrast, hyperbole, metaphor and metonymy, rhetorical questions, etc.? 6 Engaging with Literary Criticism We begin with close reading/formal analysis in order to demonstrate the importance of understanding a text prior to critiquing its relevance or understanding of its topic. That is, your own discussion of an essay, article, or review will be stronger if you demonstrate a careful and sensitive (or nuanced) understanding of the argument itself. However, a critical interpretation of a text—in which you, perhaps, disagree with some aspect of its argument or argumentation—can be daunting. But it needn’t be so. In the following options, or, if you prefer, templates, for critically engaging secondary and/or non-fiction texts, you should be able to summarize the author’s argument carefully, make every attempt to understand it completely, state why you disagree and/or why and how your additional ideas or arguments actually serve to clarify the published piece(s), and then offer plenty of evidence (perhaps textual evidence from the fiction under consideration, alternative historical explanations, or a cultural artifact that contradicts a philosophical or cultural studies reading) to persuade your own reader of your argument. OPTION 1: The concept of __________ is an integral part of the author’s argument. To support her/his argument, however, s/he could have also included ______________________. OPTION 2: The author of this essay uses the concept of ____________; however, this interpretation does not fit the topic (or literary work) under discussion because _______________. OPTION 3: Select a key quotation from the text that refers to or underlines the significance of the original text or topic under discussion. Referring to that quotation and its implications, complete the following. This (summary of the idea in the quote) may be true; however, the author overlooks ______________. OPTION 4: Select a quotation as with option 3. Use the reference to the topic or the author’s own close-reading of a narrative to complete the following. I read/interpret the events (or interpretation) the author describes here differently. Namely, ____________________ (your own interpretation). OPTION 5: Select a significant quotation or interpretation that you want to qualify. Complete the following based on your own qualification of the author’s interpretation. This (summary of the quote or interpretation) is true, though the author could further clarify this point by mentioning that ____________________. OPTION 6: Select a quote as indicated in option 5 and complete the following. The idea that ______________ is not quite accurate. The author overlooks, for example, that _____________. OPTION 7: I agree with the author’s overall claim that _______. However, the following claim (point, idea, or interpretation) could have been more thoroughly supported if the author had included a reading of ________________. 7 OPTION 8: The author’s specific claim (point, idea, or interpretation) about ____________ is not thoroughly supported as indicated by ________________. OPTION 9: The author’s specific claim (point, idea, or interpretation) about _____________ is contradicted by _________________ (some evidence from the text or topic). 8