Guidelines for Academic Papers on Literature Paragraphs: 1. Introduction and conclusion paragraphs should be about one-half page, perhaps a bit shorter or a bit longer, and the thesis statement is usually the last sentence of the introductory paragraph. 2. Body paragraphs should begin with a topic sentence (usually the first sentence of the paragraph) and should be about two-thirds to three-quarters of a page (not over a page if possible). Include only evidence that supports the topic sentence. 3. After the first body paragraph, subsequent body paragraphs should have some type of transitional word (or even a complete transitional sentence) at the beginning of the paragraph, usually as part of the topic sentence. In general, do not end body paragraphs with a transition to the next body paragraph. 4. Begin and end paragraphs with your words and ideas; do not begin and end paragraphs with quotations or paraphrased material. Determine when paraphrasing or quoting is more appropriate; do not simply quote because it is easier than paraphrasing. 5. Quoted material is generally not utilized in introductory and concluding paragraphs, except on rare occasions when it is used very sparingly and judiciously. Incorporating Quotations: 1. Sandwich quotations; do not simply drop quoted material into your paper. Sentences usually should begin with your words and ideas, not with a quotation. Do not let a quotation stand alone as its own sentence. 2. Include a “top bun” or introduction to quoted material, as well as a “bottom bun” or commentary on (vs. a paraphrase or repeat of) quoted material. 3. Utilize proper punctuation when quoting. If your “top bun” is a subject and verb, follow these with a comma: Sampson notes, “Mrs. Mallard’s focus during that one hour alone indicates her need for an independent sense of self” (38). 4. If the “top bun” is an independent clause, follow it with a colon: Sampson points out the main reason Mrs. Mallard experiences joy: “‘There would be no powerful will bending her [own] . . .’ now that her husband has died” (55). Utilize no punctuation when you include the word “that” after the subject and verb of a “top bun”: The main reason Mrs. Mallard experiences joy is that “[t]here would be no powerful will bending her [own] . . .” (40) now that her husband has died. (Here the student is analyzing the text.) 5. Note that ellipses indicate when you have deleted part of a quoted passage and that brackets must be used to make changes (such as in the capitalization) if necessary so that the sentence is grammatically correct; also, use single quotation marks when quoting within a quotation. 6. When citing a literary critic, you do not always have to include a reference to the author of the quoted passage in the “top bun”; however, if you do not then you must cite it in parentheses : Mrs. Mallard feels joy because “‘[t]here would be no powerful will bending her [own] . . .’ now that her husband has died” (Sampson 55). 7. Academic Style: 1. Do not use second person (you, your) in academic papers; instead, use third person (one, they, them). 2. Only use first person (I, me, we) if it is appropriate, as in an autobiographical essay, for example. 3. Do not use contractions in academic papers (they’re, it’s, won’t, weren’t, aren’t, haven’t); instead, completely spell out the verb (they are, it is, will not, were not, are not, have not). 4. Avoid beginning sentences with coordinating conjunctions (and, but, for, nor, or, so, yet); use more college-level diction: in addition (vs. and); however (vs. but, yet); therefore or thus (vs. so), etc. Another way to avoid beginning sentences with coordinating conjunctions is to join two independent clauses with a comma and a coordinating conjunction: Kate Chopin wrote many literary works in which the female protagonist resists the restrictive gender roles of the 19th century, but she herself was only able to break out of the stereotypical role of wife and choose a career “after her husband’s death in 1883” (Barnet and Burto qtd. in Cain, et al. 39). 5. Vary the diction (word choice) you use. For example, find more interesting verbs than says or states, such as explains, points out, clarifies, or contends. 6. Avoid vague or imprecise wording such as thing or stuff and use the word this with a noun for clarity. Instead of “This indicates that Mrs. Mallard has been imprisoned her entire married life” utilize “This response indicates that Mrs. Mallard has been imprisoned her entire married life.” Vary sentence structure. Do not begin all of your sentences with a subject and verb or use simple sentences repeatedly. Grammar: 1. Do not use run-ons, comma splices, or fragments. 2. Ensure that apostrophe usage is correct: for example, one researcher’s perspective, several researchers’ perspectives, many people’s perspectives. 3. Check for proper subject/verb agreement and agreement in number. Words like each, everyone, and everybody are singular: Everybody must utilize correct grammar in his or her paper. All students must utilize correct grammar in their papers. A student must utilize correct grammar in his or her paper. Students must utilize correct grammar in their papers. 4. Use proper verb tense and keep it consistent throughout your paper. 5. Utilize commas correctly (and do not overuse them), as well as other forms of punctuation such as semicolons, colons, dashes, and hyphens. 6. Check for correct capitalization, spelling, and diction. 7. Print out the final version of your paper and slowly read it out loud word by word; use a pen to make corrections of grammar and typographical errors, then make changes to the electronic version and reprint the paper.