Self-Assessment
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Rachel Sand
Self-Assessment Essay
I feel as though this paper of mine had a very weak subject and it was a hard to
write about. I don’t think that this was one of my best papers ever written. I am not very
good at comparing two different things in a paper. I can say it out loud but to write it
down on paper is another thing.
My thesis still isn’t very clear and I tried to fix it but it might not make sense to
some people. The wording of the thesis was hard to write because this theme isn’t the
best one to have chosen.
The organization of my paper is very good and I wrote it point-by-point. This
pattern worked well with this theme because it was easy to say one good or bad point
about one subject and say either a good or bad point about the other. The points that I
chose for the subjects were good because some of them showed that the two subjects are
alike in some ways but very different in other ways.
The sentences and the grammar in the paper are complete and clear. The
mechanics may not all be there correctly. I am not quite certain of how to write these
correctly but they might be okay.
The paper contains a sufficient amount of descriptive details. They give the reader
the ability to chose and make a decision about which place they would rather live in and
where would be more advantageous to them and to there lifestyles.
Overall, the paper was okay but it could still use some more work. I think that I
have done a lot better work.