Composition 1 Portfolio Presentation By: Rachel Sand December 2000 Introduction • I have become a better writer with my skills improving throughout this semester. This improvement shows very much with each of my writing assignments. . • This powerpoint shows each of my writing assignments and it gives examples of all four writing styles that we did. They were: definition, narrative, compare and contrast, and persuasive. Changes/Skills Demonstrated • List 6 specific changes in writing or skills developed this semester. Four are required (see next slide); two are student options. • Use the language from the common course syllabus to identify some of the material to cover • Use the language from the Ability/Skill/Levels document—this is what the portfolio should demonstrate. • Hyperlink each point in list to the slide which demonstrates the point . • **Note that the two documents hyperlinked on this page are on the I drive. If you are not on the Network, you cannot access them with these links. Also, students do not have access to the I drive. Changes in my Writing this Semester • I have learned to write an effective summary. • I know how to cite sources correctly in my writing. • I have learned four ways to organize essays. • I know the essential features of a good thesis statement. • Student option 1: for example, I have learned some ways to reduce the wordiness of my sentences. I have learned to write an effective summary. • The essential features are good grammar, and it should be a final wrap up of all the information given in your paper. When you are done with the summary, the writer should be able to describe the whole paper within a few sentences. • This is an example of a summary. I know how to cite sources correctly in my writing. • We learned how to use MLA style of citing a source. Citing sources correctly means to give credit to where you got your information and to show that you didn’t plagiarize the information. . Hyperlink I have learned four ways to organize essays. • Narrative, Definition, Compare and Contrast, Persuasive • We learned how to write four different styles of writing this semester and I have chosen the narrative style as the one paper to show on this slide. I chose to write about a young boy’s unfortunate death. • Paper I know the essential features of a good thesis statement • A good thesis statement can be short sentence or a paragraph. It contains information that tells the reader what is going to be written about in the essay. It can also contain your opinion if you were writing a persuasive paper. • People have the right to own guns. I think that this is my best thesis statement that I made throughout all my papers. This is good because it is clear and it gets to the point. • Hyperlink Student Option 1 • I have learned that there are some types of papers that I am better at writing about. For example, I wrote my narrative essay on a young boy’s death. I think that this is my best essay that I have done. • I have also learned not to be so wordy in my essays and I also learned how to write an effective thesis statement. • Hyperlink Conclusion • Student should indicate the expectations of the Writing Skill/Levels 1 & 2 (they should copy the text!) and self assess. • I feel that I have the writing level of 1 right now. Next semester I will be taking Intro to Professional Writing in order to become a better writer. I think that I know how to express my thoughts, and I use correct grammar and punctuation. Writing Skill / Levels 1 & 2 • Level One: – Expresses clearly thoughts and ideas in informal writing contexts. – Composes structurally correct sentences in Standard American English. – Generates well-developed, coherent paragraphs. • Level Two: – Processes information to produce writing that clearly and accurately summarizes and/or reports. – Writes, well-developed, focused essays. – Searches for information and inserts research appropriately.