Seat belts Assessment.doc

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Self-Assessment Essay
By: Linda Sabinash
I think this was the best essay I have ever written. I thought it was kind of easy
for me to write about this topic because I have very strong feelings about this subject. It
was something that I could relate to and try to get my point across.
I had three good reasons for why there should be no seat belt laws. I also had two
sources to back two of my reasons up. I explained from my point of view of how I deal
with this law and why I do that.
I have a very clear thesis statement that lets you know right away which side I am
on. When a person reads it he or she has no trouble deciding what side I am on and why.
I thought that I had a strong introduction and it was interesting and would get
people to read it. I think it makes people stop and analyze this situation for a moment
and really think about the direction our country is headed. Which is what this essay was
supposed to accomplish. I think that it was a very easy paper to read and follow.
My punctuation wasn’t the greatest and could have been better if I would have
caught it. I also think that the essay had a clear, logical argument and I had evidence to
support it.
Overall I thought this was a very good essay and one of the easiest to write.
Linda Final ppt..ppt
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