Matakuliah Tahun Versi : Writing III : 2006-2007 :3 Pertemuan 8 From Paragraph to Essay 1 Learning Outcomes • By the end of this session the students are expected to be able to – Expand a paragraph into an essay – Understand what a logical-division paragraph is – Use parallel structure in the thesis statement 2 Outline of Materials • • • • Logical division Topic sentence to thesis statement Paragraph to essay Parallel structure 3 Logical Division • Logical division divides a large, complicated, or abstract topic into parts • For example if we write about a culture, we can look at it from the point of view of architecture, dances or music, customs, religious celebrations, etc. 4 How to write a logical division essay • Select a topic: break a large topic into a smaller ones • Write your topic sentence • Make an outline • Write your supporting points and develop those points 5 Expand a paragraph into an essay • Topic sentence thesis statement • Supporting points body paragraph – Each supporting point will be a topic sentence for a paragraph (i.e. 3 points 3 paragraphs) • Development more development • Concluding sentence Conclusion 6 From topic sentence to thesis statement • In previous meeting, we see that a topic sentence has two parts: the topic and the controlling idea; • The thesis statement also has a topic and controlling ideas. • The supporting points are the parts of the logical division 7 example Chinese New Year celebrations have three parts (topic sentence). Chinese New Year celebrations have three parts: the preparations, New Year’s Eve and New Year’s Day, and the two weeks following New Year’s Day. (thesis statement) 8 Vocabulary • In addition to the word part, you can use the following nouns: – Time: period, stage – Space: district, region, zone – Parts or qualities: aspect, characteristic, element, feature, quality 9 Parallel Structure • When you write a thesis statement, the supporting points must be parallel. That is, they should be in the same part of speech. – In our region, most men work in offices, stores and factories. (all nouns) – Our culture is unique because of its architectural, musical, and artistic traditions. (all adjectives) 10 Conclusions • Logical division essay breaks a large topic into smaller parts • A paragraph can be expanded into an essay • The topic sentence thesis statement • Supporting points body paragraphs • Concluding statement conclusion • The controlling ideas in the thesis statement should be parallel 11