21W.015: Writing about Sports
Fall 2013/Boiko
Assignment #16
Revision of Essay 2
 Make sure to hand in your 1st draft—the one with my comments—along with your
revision.
 In addition, please respond to these questions and hand in this work sheet with your new
draft.
 FORMAT: Make sure that you have formatted your essay according to the guidelines in
the “FORMAT” doc, including word count and numbering pages.
 Also: Remove parentheses with pages numbers if you included them in Draft 1.
Essay 2/Draft 2
Name:
1) What has changed in this draft? Please point to specific things.
2) What is the main idea in this essay?
3) Why does it matter?
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Fall 2013
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