26 March 2006 sundayherald 3 EXAM GUIDE ENGLISH BY ANDY SHANKS Andy Shanks teaches English at Montrose Academy where he has been the Principal Teacher for the past 16 years. He is the current convener of the SQA Assessment Panel and is an experienced marker and vetter of Standard Grade and Higher English, the latter of which he has marked for nine years. I T’S time to start worrying about exams. Bedrooms should start to take on that wasteland of paper look. There should be an arty scattering of weighty volumes open at dense pages of script with no pictures. In short, it is time to get into study mode. What is the first exam most of you are sitting? Standard Grade English; all 59,103 of you? It is the biggest exam of them all by a long, long way. How do you go about this daunting task? What can you expect to meet in that forbidding exam hall? Let’s have a look. STANDARD GRADE Standard Grade is straightforward. The past papers you are looking at are exactly like the paper you will sit, so practice will help. There are two kinds of paper everybody sits; Reading and Writing. Let’s deal with the writing paper first. All candidates sit the same paper – Foundation, General or Credit. Have a good look at the paper. There are pictures on one side and topics for writing on the other. All the writing questions are like this, apart from those on the back page, and we will come to them later. You are asked to write just one essay. Here’s a tip that really works. Weeks before the exam, have a think about the kind of essays that you are good at writing. Are you best when you are writing about yourself or are you better at stories? Do you enjoy writing a good argument about an issue like the smoking ban or the treatment of animals? Whatever it is you are good at, make a decision that this is the kind of writing you are looking for in the exam and you will find that you can gain up to five minutes of time because you will go straight to the topic that suits you best. Try it with the past paper book. If you decide to write about your opinion on a subject look for questions like the example on the right. The most popular kind of essay that candidates choose is a short story, for example: EXAMPLE QUESTION: STANDARD GRADE Global Warming will end us if we do not end it. Do you agree or disagree? Give your views. The bold type tells you what kind of essay to write. Practise finding this kind of question in the past paper book. It is easy and will save you time. Do not try to memorise an essay. The topics are never repeated. You can guarantee that the essay you have memorised will not come up. Do practise the type of writing you intend to use. Let’s face it, if it was a driving test you would practise. It is the same thing. If you want to pass write a few essays prior to the day of the exam. When you are choosing your topic remember to check that the essay question you are using is what you think it is. Do not get the type of essay wrong as this will cost you dearly in the overall marking of your essay. Even a good essay could potentially fail if instead of writing a short story you write a factual piece. This happened to a few candidates last year. So double check that it is a discussion the paper is asking for. Also, watch out for questions that ask you to ‘Write a newspaper article’. Remember to set it out like a newspaper and use the kind of formal language you would expect to find. Write a short story using one of the following titles: Iceworld Hidden Depths Most short story writers would tell you that to write a good story in 1 hour 15 minutes is crazy, yet this is exactly what you are trying to do in this question. Here are some tips to that strange thing that is the Standard Grade short story. If you are like me, a visual sort of person, as soon as you read Iceworld you start to see the opening scenes from a Kevin Costner movie like Waterworld, set in a Turn to next page Proud sponsors of the Sunday Herald Exam Guides 4 sundayherald 26 March 2006 ENGLISH From previous page world covered in ice, then follow your instinct and try to capture the scene on paper in words. In my experience, I create a whole new movie in my head and the story practically writes itself. Deal with one incident in your tale; don’t try and describe the rise and fall of four generations in an hour. Think about how it might finish and start your story somewhere close to the main incident. Personally, I prefer small tales built round small events that might seem familiar to your reader. This kind of writing lets you pause a while in the writing and lets the mind’s eye roam a bit. “The small girl tilted her head into the falling snow and made a gentle wish on every tumbling star …” Give your characters names that suggest a kind of person. Not Bob but Nathaniel. Not Anne but Anaya. We have an instant reaction to some names and this can help us to establish instantly the type of people who are in our stories. It is what Dickens used to do with characters like Scrooge or Uriah Heep. Set the scene in sound and sight and smell too if you like, but create a world for your character to walk about in. Not just the river but “…the stale green smell of the lazy summer Tay”. Use words carefully. Don’t use words that have been beaten to a pulp by overuse such as “nice” and “good” or phrases like “right as rain” or “over the hill”. Try to be original. Avoid lists of pop stars or football players. Don’t retell the film you saw last Friday, or try to shock the marker with details of your wild weekend. The golden rule in writing is to entertain, enlighten or inform. I have sat marking many a night and longed for something to pop out from the vast pile of scripts that might just be entertaining. At the back of the question paper is a page of titles that are not accompanied by photographs. These are a good bet for the creative candidate. There are various quotations from books and poems and very often you can write in any way you choose. Lastly, your timing in this paper is very important. Always leave time to check your work over. This is an English exam so your spelling, paragraphing and punctuation have a significant effect on the grade you can achieve. You should aim to finish five minutes before the actual end of the exam and read over what you have written. You will be amazed at how many mistakes you can find for yourself without the help of your teacher. CLOSE READING The second part of your exam is the Close Reading. Every candidate sits two reading tests – either General and Foundation or General and Credit. The format for these papers is the same whichever paper you are sitting. The exam consists of a passage to read and a series of questions to answer. There are no tricks and all the answers are in the passage. Read the passage carefully first and then go to the questions. Remember the questions will lead you through the passage and direct you to the right place to find your answer, so it should be simple. When you start to answer the questions you will be directed by the paper to the paragraph or even the line that the answer is in, so you end up going though the passage again in detail anyway. Let the layout of the paper help you. It has been designed to be as supportive as it can be. All questions are worth two marks. Some are 2 or 1 or 0 (2/1/0)and these require you to point out two things. Others are worth 2 or 0 (2/-/0); these have only one correct answer. The number of lines that are given for your answer is an indication of how much you should write. Remember, in Standard Grade you do not have to answer in sentences and you are trying to complete the exam within the time – so don’t write too much. The paper will also tell you exactly where to look for the answer. Be smart – don’t look anywhere else. Some questions will require you to find words or phrases from the passage but most answers need you to put the answer into your own words. Where you see this instruction in bold type always write the answer in your own words. There are no trick questions; all the answers are in the passage and all you need to do is find them. There may be words that you don’t know but remember you can work out what something means from the way in which it is used. If in doubt make a guess. There are no marks for blank spaces. It is always worth having a go at all the questions. The most troublesome questions are on sentence structure. The best advice here is to use your common sense. Look for things like lists and the use of dashes and colons. Imagine what the sentence would be like without them. Answer the question by explaining what the punctuation does to the meaning. Do not simply explain what the sentence means. The best advice of all is to practise these papers. Buy the past papers with the answers at the back and test yourself. Try completing the paper in the correct time. Try marking the paper yourself. Keep practising, keep reading, and keep writing. Your folio is finished but Standard Grade is not finished until the last question of the last paper has been answered. INTERMEDIATE 1 INTERMEDIATE 2 AND HIGHER CLOSE READING Close Reading is common to all levels of Higher Still. It is the same skill as the Close Reading you came across in Standard Grade. At Intermediate 1 and 2 there is only one passage to read and answer questions on; at Higher you have two. At all levels, the Close Reading paper amounts to half of the total marks, so if you want to pass English you have to get the hang of this part of the exam. There are two things you need to do: answer all the questions and finish the paper. That sounds simple but it isn’t. Answering all the questions will depend a lot on your preparation, and finishing depends on your timing and how much practice you have had. Let’s deal with preparation. You need to start reading journalistic writing now. You have a copy of the Sunday Herald, so start today; look at the paper and choose a couple of articles that interest you. You will be surprised how painless it is. You need to read a good piece of journalism every day for the next month. It sounds easy because it is. It will improve your performance significantly if you do. Most candidates walk into the exam and try to read, understand and analyse an article from a newspaper with almost no practice at all, with the result that the exercise of interpreting a piece of quality journalism is an experience that they face for the first time in that forbidding hall. You would be surprised how many interpretation passages in the past have been EXAMPLE QUESTIONS: HIGHER Read the following excerpt from a question in the 2005 paper, adapted from an article in a national tabloid newspaper. Some example questions follow. ASTEROID COULD BLAST US BACK TO DARK AGES. (lines 1-8) It would destroy an area the size of Belgium in one and a half seconds and plunge the world back into the Dark Ages. The giant lump of space rock racing towards Earth today at 75,000 miles an hour would unleash a force 20 million times more powerful than the atom bomb dropped on Hiroshima in 1945. If it ends up crashing into us on 21st March 2014, that is. (lines 9-18) Asteroid QQ47, two thirds of a mile wide, was first spotted by astronomers in Mexico ten days ago and is hurtling towards us at twenty miles a second. A direct hit by the huge asteroid would send billions of tons of dust into the sky, blocking out the sun, causing plant life to perish and livestock to starve. The effect on human life, too, would be devastating. But perhaps we needn’t worry too much – because scientists say the chances of it hitting us are just 1 in 909,000. (lines 19-27) Astrophysics expert, Dr Alan Fitzsimmons of Queen’s University, Belfast, who advises the UK NEO (Near-Earth Objects) Information Centre in Leicester, is optimistic that Earth will come through the latest asteroid scare unscathed. “In all probability, within the next month we will know its future orbit with an accuracy which will mean we will be able to rule out any impact. (lines 28-42) Others are, however, convinced that it is only a matter of time before we face Armageddon. Liberal Democrat MP and sky-watcher, Lembit Opik, says: “I have said for years that the chance of an asteroid having an impact which could wipe out most of the human race is 100 per cent.’’ He has raised his worries in the Commons, successfully campaigned for an allparty task force to assess the potential risk and helped set up the Spaceguard UK facility to track near-earth objects. He admits: “It does sound like a science fiction story and I may sound like one of those guys who walk up and down with a sandwich-board saying the end of the world is nigh. But the end is nigh.’’ (lines 43-54) Asteroids have long been a source of fascination for scientists and range in size from tiny dust particles to huge objects nearly 600 miles across. More than 100,000 asteroids have been classified since the first was spotted by Italian astronomer Guiseppe Piazzi in 1801. Some contain carbon-bearing compounds and scientists think they could hold the key to creation. Giant meteors hitting the planet could have delivered chemicals which kick-started life on Earth. n Show how the writer captures your attention in the opening to the article (lines 1-18). You should refer to specific techniques and/or stylistic features in these lines. 1: Use of “It” to open the article – mysterious; mystery is not solved until second paragraph. 2: Choice of words “destroy … plunge … giant … racing … unleash … crashing … hurtling … direct hit … huge … billions … perish … starve … devastating” – vocabulary conveys violence, speed, power, size and disastrous effect of an asteroid striking Earth. (Note that comment on word choice may be on specific examples or be a generic comment on the accumulative effect, supported by several examples). 3: Imagery (eg “unleash” (supply appropriate deconstruction and comment). 4: Illustrative detail – used to convey: size (Belgium is an entire country); time (the Dark Ages suggests the severity of the consequences; speed/power (comparison to the Hiroshima explosion suggests the scale of the potential disaster). 5: Use of climax and anti-climax – tension built up to the final sentence in both paragraphs; use of anti-climax to a lesser extent at the end of paragraph one and much more obviously at the end of paragraph two where the odds are quoted (1 in 909,000). 6: Use of statistics/dates – to convey sheer scale and/or precision. n By commenting on specific words or phrases in lines 19-27, show to what extent you would have confidence in Dr Alan Fitzsimmons. Confidence – 1: “Astrophysics expert”, “Dr”, “University” – suggest academic ability and success. 2: “advises” – recognition in his field; “accuracy”, “rule out”, “will” – suggest knowledge and precision. Lack of confidence – 4: “NEO (Near Earth Objects) – vagueness of title does not inspire. 5: “optimistic” – idea of being hopeful, not necessarily supported by facts. 6: “In all probability” – not complete certainty. n Show how lines 28-42 help you to understand the meaning of the word “Armageddon” (line 29). Meaning – total destruction; an event of such decisiveness and on such a scale that survival is most unlikely. How context helped understanding of meaning – 1: “wipe out most of the human race”; 2: “the end of the world is nigh”; 3: the force of the final short sentence “But the end is nigh”; 4: “face” suggests an ordeal. n The style of writing in lines 43-53 differs from that in the preceding paragraphs. Describe these two different styles and support your answer by brief reference to the text. Lines 1-42 – dramatic, hysterical, sensational, emotive … (support your answers by reference to or comment on the use of opinions, sensationalism etc. Lines 43-53 – factual, scientific, historical … (support by reference to background detail such as research findings or past events etc). Resources designed to suit the way you study 26 March 2006 sundayherald 5 ENGLISH taken from the Sunday Herald and papers like it, at least at the weekend. The second big tip is not much fun, but it is such an easy way of getting better at close reading that you have to try it – do past papers. They are not much fun and you will make lots of mistakes but the candidate who has had a go at all of the papers in the Leckie and Leckie past paper book is going to have a definite advantage over the candidate who has only experienced the papers that they have practised in class. Ask a crossword fan or someone who is into sudoku whether it gets easier the more they do. The Close Reading paper is not that different; practice won’t make you perfect but it will improve your grades. Each question has a code in bold next to the number of marks; a U for understanding, an A for analysis, an E for evaluation or an E/A or U/E for a combination of skills being questioned. Getting to know what kind of answer is required for each of these types of questions will help you on the day of the exam. An Understanding question will ask you to write down, usually in your own words, what the author is saying or to explain what a word or phrase means in the way the author has used it. An Analysis question is looking for an answer which concerns the way the writer has expressed himself in terms of punctuation, structure or word choice. An Evaluation question is asking you to comment on the effectiveness of a bit of the passage. Look at the code and make sure you focus on the correct aspect in your answer. Secondly, you are working against a tight time deadline; 45 minutes at Intermediate 1, one hour at Intermediate 2 and one and a half hours at Higher. Finishing the exam is a major factor in passing this paper because • you cannot afford to miss some of the high mark questions which are at the end. If you try to answer at least 9 marks’ worth of questions every 15 minutes, you should get to the end in time and give yourself the best chance of passing. Look carefully at the number of marks that each question carries as this should give you an idea of the length of answer to give. If the question has only one mark you will not have to give a long answer. If the question has four marks then you will have much more to write. Try to think of each mark you are gaining as you answer. If you only make one point in a long winded answer you will still only gain one mark. So think in terms of four marks meaning finding four parts to your answer. It is not marked quite as rigidly as this but many candidates lose marks by giving vague or “woolly” answers. Don’t waste time repeating the question: the marker knows the question so he or she wants to know what the answer is. Yet again the secret is practice. The more you do, the more you will see that there are questions which come up time and time again. Let’s take a closer look at the Understanding questions which require you to answer “in your own words”. Usually you are being asked to find a phrase or select words from the passage, often something a bit challenging, and express it in your own words. Look for the clues in the question. Often it will tell you exactly where the phrase is or at least the right area. Once you have found it remember if there are two marks there will usually be two words to deal with. Don’t just quote them; there are no marks for this. You must put this in your own words. You should try to be brief but do not get hung up trying to find a word-for- word translation. Sometimes a difficult word or phrase is more easily tackled by using several words. “Utilitarian viewpoint” is difficult to translate in two words but you might answer that the author is “looking at things in a functional or practical way”. Another regular question is what is called the “link” question. In this kind of question you are being asked to explain the link between two sections of the passage made by a word or a phrase or sentence. To answer these you have to show the marker that you understand what the link is. So, first find the linking words and quote from the link, explaining how it connects with the ideas contained in the previous paragraph, then quote again from the linking words and show how they connect with the ideas of the paragraph which follows. So two quotes and two explanations using your own words and this question is dealt with. Practise this with past papers and you will actually enjoy seeing the question appear because you will be confident that you can handle it. A group of questions that you will see a lot of are questions on word choice and imagery. This is not an easy thing to learn but if you are a reader at all you will have developed a sense of what a writer is meaning beyond the literal interpretation of his or her words. Remember that a quote on its own is worth nothing – you need the comment to get the marks. THE CRITICAL ESSAY PAPER The Critical Essay is a feature at all levels of the exam. At Intermediate 1 you are required to write just one essay, at Intermediate 2 and Higher you are required to write two. This is the area of the exam that you can put in the most work to prepare for. The FOR PUPILS web links for homework and revision • FOR PARENTS an essential guide to • National Qualifications FOR TEACHERS free classroom resources visit www.LTScotland.org.uk/NQ to discover more and to download this exam guide texts you have been studying all year should be one of the most reliable aspects of the whole course for you. To write a good essay you need to know your texts really well. Don’t make the mistake of thinking that having written an essay on “Sunset Song” or “Visiting Hour” that you know it.You will face a completely different question which will require you to write a completely new essay. For this task you need to understand the big idea behind the poem, play or novel. It is no good knowing that Norman MacCaig’s nostrils bobbing along that hospital corridor is a wonderful example of synecdoche if you have not yet come to terms with what the poem as a whole is about. If you understand the feelings of helplessness and loss and the wonderful honesty that comes across from the poet then you might be able to answer questions on any aspect of the poem. All the techniques, the onomatopoeia, the imagery, the symbols and any technique used by the author lead to one thing and that is the expression of the author's feelings and ideas. So another big tip for this part of the exam is to put your notes and past papers aside for a while and re-read the texts themselves. Spend some time thinking about them and, if you can bear it, talk to your friends about it. I suggested to a parent last week that she try to discuss “The Great Gatsby” with her son: she was delighted at the prospect, he was not. So it won’t be easy but it can pay off. You need to cover at least two genres in your preparation. It seems like an easy option to study a poem and a short story because you feel that that will take less time but it rarely pays off. The short story is a Turn to next page 6 sundayherald 26 March 2006 ENGLISH From previous page very particular genre and requires you to go into detail about the way in which the writer has used techniques that we associate with this form of writing. There are very few short story questions in the paper so you are limiting your choices in a dangerous way. The same could be said of poetry. If you choose only one poem to prepare, you stand the danger of finding no question that you can answer properly. The question paper is designed with the idea that you have studied a number of poems and several short stories, plays and novels. If you have done this you find you have lots of choice when you go into the exam. You will also need quotations from the texts to support your argument. So you need to start memorising right away. With some poems it is possible to memorise the whole poem. With plays, short stories and novels you need to memorise the lines or passages that will help you answer the questions in the exam. With poetry the more the better; with the others I think five is a healthy number. A good essay should make at least five good points; if you can support them from the text you are writing about, all the better. Make posters of the passages and pin them up around your room. Read them in the morning and again at night and you will start to see them in your sleep and hopefully in the exam. Use quotations wisely in your essays. Don’t lead into a paragraph with a quote. Always start the paragraph with a point related to the question and support it by quoting from the text. Let’s have a look at the questions. At the top of the section it will say Prose, Poetry, Drama or Film and TV Drama. Watch the prose section; it is divided into two bits, the second being non-fiction prose. You are still restricted to answering only one question from the prose section. Unlike previous papers, the section has a box containing the kinds of features that you should try to include in your essay. This used to be the third sentence of every question but it now sits at the top. You are expected to cover at least two of these techniques in your essay. In prose that includes things like character and setting. The questions contain two sentences. The first will tell you whether your text will fit or not – it ENGLISH EXAM TIMETABLE Level/Paper Time Wednesday May 3 F/G/C Writing 9am-10.15am Foundation Reading 10.35am-11.25am General Reading 1pm-1.50pm Credit Reading 2.30pm-3.20pm Friday May 12 Intermediate 1 Close Reading Intermediate 1 Critical Essay Intermediate 2 Close Reading Intermediate 2 Critical Essay Higher Close Reading Higher Critical Essay Advanced Higher 1pm-1.45am 2.05pm-2.50pm 1pm-2pm 2.20pm-3.50pm 9am-10.30am 10.50am-12.20pm 1pm-4pm A Scots Quair has been the subject of several film treatments. Students should know it thoroughly might be something like: Choose a poem which is light-hearted or playful or not entirely serious. This question is from the SQA specimen paper that you can access on the internet. It would not fit poems like “Dulce Et Decorum Est” or be particularly good for “Assisi” but would be excellent for “Mooses” by Ted Hughes, which is mocking and lighthearted. Take your time to read through all the questions and have a think about all the possible essays you could write. Choosing the wrong question will slow you down and lose you marks. Every year I mark papers where the candidate has started one essay and changed their mind. This is usually disastrous. So choose carefully. The second sentence of the question is the part that tells you what aspect of the text you are being asked to discuss. Show how the poet makes you aware of the tone, and discuss how effective the use of this tone is in dealing with the subject matter of the poem. This is the important part of the essay. This tells you that your answer has to deal with the author’s use of tone. So what you have to do is plan an essay which deals with tone. Not tone and a few other things but tone and the author’s use of it. Here’s an important tip for the critical essay. Fix in your head what the big idea behind the text is and make this clear at the outset of your essay and keep relating it to the question. Remind yourself of the question at the outset of every paragraph you start. So if you are answering a question on “Sunset Song” and the question asks you to show how the main character makes a decision that has a significant influence on the outcome of the novel. First of all think about what the novel is about; change, endurance and the place of the land in Scottish culture and history. Then think again of the question. Chris Guthrie makes a decision to keep on her father’s farm rather than go to college. This allows Gibbon to write about her relationship with the land, her marriage to Ewan and his relationship with the land as well as the changes that his going to war brings about in Chris’s life and symbolically in the cultural life of the country. You must make sure that this big idea comes across clearly in your essay. A typical critical essay paragraph would read like this: (The point relating to the question first) Chris Guthrie, the main character in Gibbon’s novel, makes a life-changing decision early on in the story. She decides to keep on the tenancy of Blawearie after her father’s death. (Tie it in with the main thrust of the novel) The author uses Chris’s undying love for the land to symbolise the Scots’ symbiotic relationship with the landscape which is part of the hope that emerges at the end of the novel. (Support this with a quotation from the text) “…two Chrisses there were that fought for her heart and tormented her. You hated the land and the coarse speak of the folk and learning was brave and fine one day; and the next you’d waken with the peewits crying across the hills, deep and deep, crying in the heart of you and the smell of the earth in your face, almost you’d cry for that, the beauty of it and the sweetness of the Scottish land and skies.” (Discuss the significance of the quotation) Gibbon sees this split in Chris Guthrie’s character as being rather like the personality split that can be seen in the character of the Scots as a nation, both loving and hating the work the land represents and seeing the language – “the coarse speak” – as part of that toil. The decision to stick with the land is a significant one in that it means that Chris comes to terms with who her father was and the effects of the toil and his religion had on him. Her realisation at this point in the novel is part of the process that runs all the way through it of finding the real Chris, a process that we as a nation go through as a result of the war. And there it is; the question is being answered, the main idea is being presented, the point is being supported by quotation and the candidate is showing a sound grasp of the technical language he uses and the point being made. It would be too pedantic to structure every paragraph of the essay like this but it would do no harm to bear it in mind while you practise essays prior to the exam and in the exam itself. The safest combination is a novel and a play but it is a mistake to look for the minimum you can get away with. I would recommend preparing a play, a novel and two poems at Higher and Intermediate 2. The Critical Essay is also a test of writing and the marker will check your essay for formal writing competence before trying to award it a mark for your answer. This is something to be aware of as you write. In Standard Grade, I suggested leaving a few minutes at the end of the exam to check the essay over, in Intermediate 1, 2 and Higher you may not have time for this, so you must check as you go. If you intend using words like diffusionism or synecdoche then learn how to spell them before the exam. Avoid overly long sentences. Don’t use a comma where you mean to use a full stop. Separate your quotations from the body of the essay so that it is clear what they are. Keep your writing legible. If the marker cannot read your essay it will prove difficult to mark. Remember to introduce your essay and conclude by answering the question. Finally, try to enjoy this experience and try to stay calm as nearly all candidates finish the exam so you probably will too. Choose literature that you really like to answer on. Avoid using your personal study for the critical essay as you will not have had as much input in terms of writing critical essays. Start memorising those quotations and talking to your parents about those amazing characters and ideas that live in the poems, plays and novels that you have studied this year. Supporting students from Standard Grade to Advanced Higher