2 05.04.09 sundayherald ENGLISH STANDARDGRADE : READING (2007 PAPER) In this passage Kathleen Jamie describes a visit to Maes Howe, one of the most important archaeological sites on Orkney. Her visit takes place in December, just before the winter solstice—the shortest day of the year. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 The building nowadays known as Maes Howe is a Neolithic chambered cairn, a tomb where, 5000 years ago, they interred the bones of the dead. In its long, long existence it has been more forgotten about than known, but in our era it is open to the public, with tickets and guides and explanatory booklets. It stands, a mere grassy hump in a field, in the central plain of Mainland Orkney. There is a startling collection of other Neolithic sites nearby. To reach Maes Howe I took the road that passes over a thin isthmus between two lochs. On the west side is a huge brooding stone circle, the Ring of Brodgar. On the east, like three elegant women conversing at a cocktail party, are the Standing Stones of Stenness. The purpose of these may be mysterious, but a short seven miles away is the Neolithic village called Skara Brae. There is preserved a huddle of roofless huts, dug half underground into midden and sand dune. There, you can marvel at the domestic normality, that late Stone Age people had beds and cupboards and neighbours and beads. You can feel both their presence, their day-to-day lives, and their utter absence. It’s a good place to go. It re-calibrates your sense of time. Two men were standing at the car park at Maes Howe. The taller, older man was wearing a white shirt and improbable tartan trousers. As I stepped out of the car, he shook his head sadly. The younger man was dressed for outdoors, somewhat like a traffic warden, with a woollen hat pulled down to his eyes and a navy-blue coat. For a moment we all looked at each other. The taller man spoke first. “Not looking good, I’m afraid.” The timing was right, the sun was setting, but . . . “Cloud,” said the tall man. “Can’t be helped,” I replied. “Will you go in, anyway? You can’t always tell, you just need a moment when the cloud breaks . . .” Alan, an Englishman in Historic Scotland tartan trousers, led me into a little shop to issue a ticket. The shop was housed in an old water mill, some distance from the tomb, and sold guidebooks and fridge magnets and tea towels. From the window you could see over the main road to the tomb. “Tell you what,” he said. “I’ll give you a ticket so you can come back tomorrow, if you like, but I can’t give you one for the actual solstice, Saturday. We start selling them at two-thirty on the actual solstice. It’s first come, first served.” “How many people come?” “Well, we can accommodate 25, at a pinch.” But today there was only myself. The young guide, Rob, was waiting outside. A workman’s van hurtled past, then we crossed the road, entered through a wicket gate and followed a path across the field. We were walking toward the tomb by an indirect route that respected the wide ditch around the site. Sheep were grazing the field, and a heron was standing with its aristocratic back to us. There was a breeze, and the shivery call of a curlew descending. On all sides there are low hills, holding the plain between them. To the south, the skyline is dominated by two much bigger, more distant hills, a peak and a plateau. Though you wouldn’t know it from here, they belong to another island, to Hoy. Above these dark hills, in horizontal bars, were the offending clouds. * * * You enter into the inner chamber of the tomb by a low passageway more than 25 feet long. It’s more of a journey than a gateway. You don’t have to crawl on hands and knees, but neither can you walk upright. The stone roof bears down on your spine; a single enormous slab of stone forms the wall you brush with your left shoulder. You must walk in that stooped position just a moment too long, so when you’re admitted to the cairn two sensations come at once: you’re glad to stand, and the other is a sudden appreciation of stone. You are admitted into a solemn place. 16 You are standing in a high, dim stone vault. There is a thick soundlessness, like a recording studio, or a strongroom. A moment ago, you were in the middle of a field, with the wind and curlews calling. That world has been taken away, and the world you have entered into is not like a cave, but a place of artifice, of skill. Yes, that’s it, what you notice when you stand and look around is cool, dry, applied skill. Across five thousand years you can still feel their self-assurance. 17 The walls are of red sandstone, dressed into long rectangles, with a tall sentry-like buttress in each corner to support the corbelled roof. The passage to the outside world is at the base of one wall. Set waist-high into the other three are square openings into cells which disappear into the thickness of the walls. That’s where they laid the dead, once the bones had been cleaned of flesh by weather and birds. The stone blocks which would once have sealed these graves lie on the gravel floor. And the point is, the ancients who built this tomb lined it up precisely: the long passageway faces exactly the setting midwinter sun. Consequently, for the few days around the winter solstice a beam of the setting sun shines along the passage, and onto the tomb’s back wall. In recent years, people have crept along the passageway at midwinter to witness this. Some, apparently, find it overwhelming. 15 * * * * * We crossed the field. The heron took to the air. I dawdled behind. My guide, the young Rob, was waiting at the entrance, which is just a low square opening at the bottom of the mound. I glanced back at the outside world, the road, the clouded sky over Hoy’s hills, which did not look promising; then we crept inside and for a long minute walked doubled over, until Rob stood and I followed. 19 Inside was bright as a tube train, and the effect was brutal. I’d expected not utter darkness, but perhaps a dullish red. Rob was carrying a torch but this light revealed every crack, every joint and fissure in the ancient stonework. At once a man’s voice said, “Sorry, I’ll switch it off,” but the moment was lost and, anyway, I’d been forewarned. As he sold me the ticket, Alan had told me that surveyors were inside the cairn, with all their equipment. “A bit of a problem”, was how he’d put it. And here they were. We entered the tomb and, in that fierce white light, it was like that moment which can occur in midlife, when you look at your mother and realise with a shock that she is old. The surveyors were doing a project that involved laser-scanning, photogrammetry, 20 and pulse-radar inspection. They were working inside the tomb, and had been for days. A huge implement, I couldn’t tell if it was a torch or a camera, lay on a schoolroom chair. There was a telephone in one of the grave-cells. There were two surveyors. One was folded, foetus-like, into the little cell in the back wall. I could see only his legs. He grunted as he shifted position. 18 DARKNESS AND LIGHT * 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 “Strange place to spend your working day,” I remarked. “You’re not wrong,” he replied, sourly. His older colleague seemed glad for a break. He stood, a portly man in a black tracksuit and fleece jacket, and stretched his back. Somehow he dimmed the light and the tomb settled back into restful gloom. The outside world was a square at the far end of the long passageway. There would be no sunset. “Too bad,” the surveyor said. “Oh, well.” Rob, hunched in his woolly hat, drew breath and raised his torch as though to begin the guided tour, but he paused. “Been here before?” he asked me. “Several times.” He said, “We’re on the Web now, y’know,” and gestured with the torch to a camera mounted on the Neolithic wall. “Live. Don’t go picking your nose.” “Watch your eyes!” said the voice from the grave-chamber, then came a detonating flash. ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS Reading – Extract is adapted from Findings by Kathleen Jamie ISBN 0 9542217 4 5. Published by Sort of Books. Permission sought from Sort of Books. QUESTIONS Write your answers in the spaces provided. Look at Paragraphs 1 and 2. 1. Give the meaning of “interred” and show how the context helped you to arrive at that meaning. 2. Write down two examples of the writer’s use of contrast from Paragraph 1. 3. “a thin isthmus” (Paragraph 2) Tick the box beside the best definition of “isthmus”. area of land strip of land with water on each side stretch of moorland bridge connecting two islands 4. Identify the figure of speech used by the writer to describe the Standing Stones of Stenness. What does it suggest about the stones? 5. In your own words, explain what the writer finds to “marvel at” in the village of Skara Brae. 6. What do you think the writer means when she says Skara Brae “re-calibrates your sense of time”? Look at Paragraphs 3 to 8. 7. Why do you think the writer uses “improbable” to describe the older man’s tartan trousers? 8. Why does the man shake his head sadly as the writer steps out of her car? Look at Paragraphs 9 to 14. 9. Give three pieces of evidence which suggest that Maes Howe is just like any other tourist attraction. sundayherald 05.04.09 3 10. In your own words, give two reasons why the writer cannot buy a ticket in advance for the solstice. 11. Comment on the writer’s use of word choice and sentence structure in her description of the clouds in the final sentence of Paragraph 14. Look at Paragraphs 15 and 16. 12. In what way is entry to the inner chamber “more of a journey than a gateway”? 13. In your own words, describe two sensations which might be felt by someone entering the cairn. 14. What does a visitor notice and feel about the builders of Maes Howe? Answer in your own words. 15. (a) (b) What style does the writer adopt in Paragraphs 15 and 16? Support your answer with two pieces of evidence. ANSWERS 1.Meaning:buried Context:ref.tochamberedcairn/tomb/bones ofthedead •shop •guides/guidebook/uniform •teatowels/fridgemagnets/souvenirs 2.Anytwofrom: •“forgotten”v.“known”/“opentothepublic” •“mere”v.“startling” •“Neolithic”/“5000yearsago”v.“ourera”/ “nowadays” 10.Anytwofrom: •notonsaleuntilSaturday/dayofsolstice •givenouttothoseattheheadofthequeue (glossof“firstcome,firstserved”) •limitednumber/spaceavailable •againsttherules 3.stripoflandwithwateroneachside 4.simileorfullquotationofsimile(ie“like threeelegantwomenconversingatacocktail party)” closetogether/ina(tight)group/ stylish/attractive 5.ordinary/everydaythingsinthehouses (glossof“domesticnormality”) orcondensedanswer:livedverylikeus 6.changes/alters/redefines(orsimilaridea) yourideasofpastandpresent/ofhistory(or similaridea),ieref.tochange,ref.to perceptionoftime 7.findsthemamusing/odd/surprising/outof place/unusual/garish(orsimilar) ORtosuggestherdisapproval/toamusethe reader 8.ref.tocloud/unsuitableweather 9.Anythreefrom: •tickets 11.(a)“offending”suggestscloudsaredoing somethingwrong/blockingthelightOR “horizontalbars”suggestsimageof restricting thelight (b)inversionref.tocloudsatendofsentence OR parenthesis 12.ref.tolength/25feetofpassageway orideaofmetaphoricaljourney 13.•pleasedtobeupright(glossof“gladto stand”) •awarenessof/beingconsciousofstone (glossof “appreciationofstone”) 14.confidence(1)intheirabilities(1)(glossof “skill”and“self-assurance”) 15.(a)informal/direct(toreader)/reflective (b)Anytwoappropriateexamples,e.g. “Yes,that’sit...”/useofsecondperson/ contractions/tensechange HIGHER: CLOSEREADING (2007 PAPER) DESPITE GOOGLE, WE STILL NEED GOOD LIBRARIES The internet search engine Google, with whom I spend more time than with my loved ones, is planning to put the contents of the world’s greatest university libraries online, including the Bodleian in Oxford and those of Harvard and Stanford in America. Part of me is ecstatic at the thought of all that information at my 5 fingertips; another part of me is nostalgic, because I think physical libraries, booklined and cathedral-quiet, are a cherished part of civilisation we lose at our cultural peril. My love affair with libraries started early, in the Drumchapel housing scheme in the Fifties. For the 60,000 exiles packed off from slum housing to the city’s outer 10 fringe, Glasgow Council neglected the shops and amenities but somehow remembered to put in a public library—actually, a wooden shed. That library was split into two—an adult section and a children’s section. This was an early taste of forbidden fruit. Much useful human reproductive knowledge was gained from certain books examined surreptitiously in the adult biology section. 15 At university, I discovered the wonder of the library as a physical space. Glasgow University has a skyscraper library, built around a vast atrium stretching up through the various floors. Each floor was devoted to a different subject classification. Working away on the economics floor, I could see other students above or below—chatting, flirting, doodling, panicking—all cocooned in their own separate 20 worlds of knowledge. Intrigued, I soon took to exploring what was on these other planets: science, architecture, even a whole floor of novels. The unique aspect of a physical library is that you can discover knowledge by accident. There are things you know you don’t know, but there are also things you never imagined you did not know. 25 There is a stock response to my love affair with libraries: that I am being too nostalgic. That the multi-tasking, MTV generation can access information from a computer, get cheap books from the supermarket and still chatter to each other at a thousand decibels. Who needs old-fashioned library buildings? And why should councils subsidise what Google will provide for free? 30 There is some proof for this line of argument. The number of people in Scotland using their local public library falls every year, with just under a quarter of Scots now borrowing books (admittedly, that was 34 million books). As a result, local authorities have reduced their funding for new books by 30 per cent. Of course, fewer new books mean fewer library users, so guaranteeing the downward spiral. 35 It may well be that public demand and technical change mean we no longer need the dense neighbourhood network of local libraries of yore. But our culture, local and universal, does demand strategically situated libraries where one can find the material that is too expensive for the ordinary person to buy, or too complex to find online. Such facilities are worth funding publicly because the return in informed 40 citizenship and civic pride is far in excess of the money spent. Libraries also have that undervalued resource—the trained librarian. The ultimate Achilles’ heel of the internet is that it presents every page of information as being equally valid, which is of course nonsense. The internet is cluttered with false information, or just plain junk. The library, with its collection honed and developed 45 by experts, is a guarantee of the quality and veracity of the information contained therein, something that Google can never provide. Libraries have another function still, which the internet cannot fulfil. Libraries, like museums, are custodians of knowledge—and should be funded as such. It has become the fashion in recent decades to turn our great national libraries and 50 museums into entertainment centres, with audio-visuals, interactive displays and gimmicks. While I have some enthusiasm for popularising esoteric knowledge, it cannot always be reduced to the level of a child’s view of the universe. We have a duty to future generations to invest in the custodians of our culture, in particular its literature and manuscripts. 55 Of course, I can’t wait for Google to get online with the Bodleian Library’s one million books. Yet here’s one other thing I learned from a physical library space: the daunting scale of human knowledge and our inability to truly comprehend even a fraction of it. On arriving at Glasgow University library, I did a quick calculation of how many economics books there were on the shelves and realised that I could 60 not read them all. Ever. From which realisation comes the beginning of wisdom—and that is very different from merely imbibing information. ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS Close Reading Passage 1 – Article is adapted from “Despite Goo libraries” by George Kerevan, taken from The Scotsman, 15 Decem by permission of The Scotsman Publications Limited. QUESTIONS Questions on Passage 1 MARKS 1. Read lines 1–7. (a) What two contrasting emotions does the writer have about the plan to put the great university libraries online? Use your own words in your answer. (b) How does the writer’s word choice in these lines help to convey his view of the importance of “physical libraries” (line 5)? Refer to two examples in your answer. 2 U 2 A 4 05.04.09 sundayherald 2. In your opinion, does the writer think Glasgow Council gave the library in Drumchapel a high priority? Justify your answer by close reference to lines 8–14. 2 U/ 3. Show how the writer uses imagery and word choice in lines 15–24 to convey the “wonder of the library as a physical space”. 4 A 4. Read lines 25–34. (a) Show how the writer’s language in lines 25–29 conveys his attitude to the “MTV generation”. You should refer in your answer to such features as sentence structure, word choice, tone . . . (b) Explain the “downward spiral” (line 34) to which the writer refers. 3 1 A U 4 U 2 A 1 U 2 A 3 (26) E 5. (a) In your own words as far as possible, give four reasons the writer presents in lines 35–46 in favour of maintaining traditional public libraries. (b) Show how the writer’s word choice in lines 41–46 emphasises the contrast between his attitude to libraries and his attitude to the internet. 6. Read lines 47–54. (a) Twice in this paragraph the writer refers to libraries as “custodians”. What does this word mean? (b) Show how the language of lines 47–54 suggests that the writer has some reservations about the entertainment aspect of present day libraries and museums. 7. How effective do you find the ideas and/or language of the final paragraph (lines 55–61) as a conclusion to the passage as a whole? ANSWERS 1.(a)Acceptableglosson‘ecstatic’:e.g.joyous, thrilled,excited,delighted…;‘happy’byitself isnotacceptable:theremustbesomeideaof intensity Acceptableglosson‘nostalgic’:e.g.looking backfondly,wistful,regretful,reflective,… ‘sad/unhappy’byitselfnotacceptable:there mustbesomeideaofsomethingconnected with pastORtheideathatheisapprehensive, fearful (atpossibleloss/demiseoflibraries) (b)Possibleanswers: 1.‘book-lined’suggestslargenumber/areaof books,implyingorganised,impressive nature… 2.‘cathedral-quiet’hasconnotationsof solemnity,reverence,devotion,large hushedspace… 3.‘cherished’suggestscaredforemotionally (ratherthanjustpractically),warmth… 4.‘civilisation’hasconnotationsofthat whichmarksusoutfromlesssophisticated societies 5.‘lose’hasasenseofbeingdeprived, bereft… 6.‘cultural’suggeststraditions,heritage, civilisedsociety,… 7.‘peril’suggeststhreat,risk,menace,danger (tosomethingprecious) 2.Possibleanswers: ‘Highpriority’: 1.Useof‘remembered’suggeststhatthe library,althoughinitiallyoverlooked,was indeedapriority. 2.Despitethefactthey‘neglectedshopsand amenities’,theystillputinalibrary,which suggeststhatitwasconsideredmore importantthanthese. ‘Lowpriority’: 3.Thehighnumber(60,000)ofpotential userscontrastedwiththesmallnessofthe facility(a‘shed’)suggestsinadequacy. 4.Useof‘remembered’suggestsitwasan afterthought,alast-minuteidea. 5.Thefactitwasa‘woodenshed’suggestsit wasbasic,cheap,unsophisticated, temporaryandthereforeconsideredof littleimportance. 6.Theuseof‘somehow’indicatesthat nobodywassurewhythedecisionhad beentaken;itjusthappened. 7.Thetoneof‘–actually,awoodenshed’as ifaratheramused,sarcasticasidesuggests anafterthought,awryadmissionofits inadequacies. 3.Possibleanswers: Imagery: 1.‘stretching’ givestheimpressionofsomethingbeing pulledorelongatedwithconnotationsof never-ending,upwardmovement,aspiring 2.‘cocooned’ aslarvaeareprotectedandself-contained intheircocoons,soeachfloorinthe libraryisseparateandsheltersthestudents withintheirspecialisedknowledgeareas 3.‘worldsofknowledge’ thenumberoffloorsissogreatandthey aresoseparatethattheyarelikedifferent, independentplanetarysystems,each specialisinginaparticularareaof knowledge 4.‘planets’ theseparationintolarge,distinctlearning areas,eachself-containedliketheisolation andindividualismofeachplanetinspace Wordchoice: 5.‘wonder’ connotationsofawe,freshness,childlike amazement,admiration… 6.‘skyscraper(library)’ slightlyexaggerateddescriptionsuggests sizeandmagnificence(besympatheticto candidateswhochoosetosee‘skyscraper’ asanimage) 7.‘vast’ givestheimpressionofanenormous extentofspace 8.‘atrium’ ideaoflarge,impressivecentralarea– withconnotationsofclassicalideas/ learning 9.‘devoted’ connotationsoflove,reverence,dedication 10.‘chatting,flirting,doodling,panicking’ (anyofthese) suggestionsofhumanfoibles,ordinary behaviourcontrastedwiththe extraordinarynatureofthelibrary 11.‘exploring’ suggestsexcitementofnewdiscovery, senseofquest,hintofsize,… 12.‘unique’ suggestionsofsomethingveryspecial,to bemarvelledat… N.B.wordsfrom1–4abovecouldbethe subjectof appropriatecommentsaswordchoice. 4.(a)Possibleanswers: Sentencestructure: 1.Theclimacticnatureofthesecond sentence:buildsupfromanabruptstartto thenegativeattitudeby‘chatter…ata thousanddecibels’or(possibly)presentsa positiveattitudeinadmiringtheirability tocommunicateloudlyortheirabilityto carryoutmorethanonetaskatatime. 4.(a)2.Useofquestionscouldsuggesta positive attitudebybackinguptheideathatyoung peoplearemodernandthattheydonot approveofsubsidisinglibrariesor combinedwithamock-scornfultonecould suggestthathebelievestheanswertothe questionsisthatwedoneedlibraries ratherthantheslickmediaworldofthe MTVgeneration–ieanegativeattitude. 3.Structureofthefirstsentence:acase mightjustbemadethatthecolonisused tointroduceademonstrationofthe writer’sattitudethatheprefersthepastto thepresentandthereforewillbecriticalof theMTVgeneration. Wordchoice: 4.‘multi-tasking’suggestspositiveattitudein thatthesepeopleareseenastalentedin theirabilitytoperformseveraltasks simultaneouslyorsuggestsanegative attitudeinthatintryingtodosomany thingsatonce,dueattentionisnotgivento theimportantmatters. 5.‘cheapbooks’suggestspositiveaspectsin thatthesebooksarereadilyavailabletoall withoutrecoursetoalibraryornegatively, thebooksarecheapinthesenseofnot worthmuchintellectually. 6.‘chatter’isnegativeinthattheword suggestsinconsequentialcommunication orpositiveinthatitsuggestseasypersonal interaction. 7.‘thousanddecibels’probablynegativein thatitsuggeststhatthenoiseistooloud forrealthought. 8.‘old-fashioned’isprobablynegativeinthat itsuggestshethinkstheMTVgeneration istooreadilydismissive,ortookeento believelibrariesareoutdated. Tone: 9.derogatory(backedupbyanyofthe commentssuggestedabove) 10.admiring(backedupbyanyofthe commentssuggestedabove) 11.mock-scornful/sarcastic(backedupbyany ofthecommentssuggestedabove) (b)Abasicunderstandingthatdiminishinguse of librariesleadstodiminishinglevelsof provision,whichleadstodiminishinguse… 5.(a)Anyfourofthefollowing: 1.ideaofaccessibility(i.e.acceptablegloss on‘strategicallysituated’) 2.ideaoffreeaccess(i.e.acceptableglosson ‘tooexpensive…tobuy’) 3.ideathatresourcesaremoresophisticated (i.e.acceptableglosson‘toocomplexto findonline’) 4.ideaofsupportingdemocratic responsibilities(i.e.acceptableglosson ‘informedcitizenship’) 5.ideaofcommunityawareness/cohesion (i.e.acceptableglosson‘civicpride’) 6.ideaofprofessionalsupport(i.e.acceptable glosson‘trainedlibrarian’) 7.ideaofinformed/refinedselection(i.e. acceptableglosson‘honedanddeveloped byexperts’) 8.ideaofhighstandardofmaterial(i.e. acceptableglosson‘quality…of information’) 9.ideaofauthenticity(i.e.acceptablegloss on‘veracityofinformation’) 10.ideaofselectivityofinformation(in contrastwithjunkonline) (b)Forlibraries,answersshouldmake acceptablecommentonthepositive connotationsofanyofthefollowing: ‘trained’;‘honed’;‘developed’;experts’; ‘guarantee’;‘quality’;‘veracity’ Fortheinternet,answersshouldmake acceptablecommentonthenegative connotationsofanyofthefollowing: ‘Achilles’heel’;‘(ofcourse)nonsense’; ‘cluttered’;‘false’;‘(plain)junk’;‘never’ 6.(a)Anyacceptablegloss,e.g.guardians, protectors,thosewhokeepsomethingsafe,… (b)Possibleanswers: Wordchoice: 1.‘(becomethe)fashion’hasconnotationsof transience,shallowness,… 2.‘entertainmentcentres’/’audio-visuals’has connotationsofpanderingtopopulartaste, lackofseriousness,… 3.‘gimmicks’hasconnotationsofcheap trickery,merelytocaptureattention,… 4.‘popularising’hasconnotationsof dumbingdown,aimingforlowestcommon denominator,… 5.‘reduced’hasconnotationsoflossof quality,depth,sophistication,… 6.‘child’sview’hasconnotationsofnaiveté, lackofsophistication,limitedperspective,… Tone: 7grudging:‘some(enthusiasm)’suggests reluctancetowelcometheideafully 8scornful:appropriatecommentbasedon anyof1–6above 9.didactic:appropriatecommentonlines 52–54(‘cannotalwaysbereduced’,‘duty’, ‘futuregenerations’,‘invest’,‘culture’) Structure: 10.Thelist(‘audio-visuals,interactive displaysandgimmicks’),endinginthe anti-climax(‘gimmicks’),reducestheother itemstomeaninglesstechnicaltricks. 11.Thestructureof‘WhileIhave…universe’ isalimitedconcessionwhichemphasises thedismissivenessofwhatfollows. 7.Possibleanswers: Ideas: 1.GoogleandtheBodleianLibraryare broughttogetheragaininthisparagraph. 2.Theideaoflargenumbers(onemillion books)onGoogle/thevastnessoflibraries leadingtoanunderstandingofthe enormousamountofmaterialwhichcan neverbeknown. 3.Thedifferentiationbetweeninformation andwisdomiswhatthepassagehasbeen leadingupto. Language: 4.‘Ofcourse’maybeastrategicconcession/ ideaofbringingreaderonside/ofbeing reasonable–inpreparationforconclusion. 5.‘Yethere’s’conversationaltoneleadsthe readertocomeonboardandsharehis ideas. 6.‘daunting’isastrongwordsuggestingthe enormousandfrighteningamountof knowledge. 7.‘evenafraction’suggests,incontrast,the verysmallproportionwithwhichone personcancometogrips. 8.‘Ever.’Thisemphatic,onewordsentence closesthedooronthepossibilityof conqueringallknowledge. 9.‘merelyimbibing’Incontrastwith wisdom,thissuggeststhatinformation acquiredsimplyasquantity,without understandingorcontext,isasmechanical asdrinking. 10.Wordorderinlastsentence:theinversion ofnormalorderplacestherealisationvery closetothe‘ever’whichgivesitmore impact,andleavestheimportantword ‘wisdom’tofollowitsverbandtakea centralplaceinthelastsentence