print!rubric!-!The online student and academic community!-!rCampus http://www.rcampus.com/rubricprinteditc.cfm?code=BX3266&sp=no&... RHS - ENGLISH 11B Student: _____________________ Hoffman Grade: _________ Rubric: Argumentative Essay Argumentative Essay A=Excellent (N/A) INTRODUCTION A=Excellent The introductory paragraph has a strong hook or attention grabber that is appropriate for the audience. The position statement (thesis) provides a clear, strong statement of the author's position on the topic. A preview (blueprint) of the main arguments is included. SUPPORT FOR POSITION REFUTATION A=Excellent Includes 2 or more pieces of evidence that support the position statement and all are specific, relevant and show how each piece of evidence supports the author's position. A=Excellent Opposing argument is identified and clear. Refutation is very clear and concise in refuting opponent's POV. SEQUENCING A=Excellent Arguments and support are provided in a logical order that makes it easy and interesting to follow the author's train of thought. 1 of 2 B=Above Average (N/A) B=Above Average C=Average (Satisfactory) (N/A) C=Average (Satisfactory) D=Below Average (N/A) D=Below Average The introductory paragraph has a hook or attention grabber, but it is weak, rambling or inappropriate for the audience. The position statement (thesis) provides a clear, strong statement of the author's position on the topic. A preview (blueprint) of the main arguments is included. The author has an interesting introductory paragraph but the connection to the topic is not always clear. The position statement (thesis) of the author's position on the topic is weak. A preview (blueprint) of the main arguments may be missing. The introductory paragraph is not interesting AND is not relevant to the topic. The position statement (thesis) is missing or not clear. A preview (blueprint) of the main arguments is not included. B=Above Average C=Average (Satisfactory) D=Below Average Includes 1 to 2 pieces of evidence that support the position statement and most are specific, relevant and show how each piece of evidence supports the author's position. Includes 1 piece of evidence that supports the position statement and is relevant to show how that piece of evidence supports the author's position. B=Above Average C=Average (Satisfactory) Opposing argument is identified and clear. Refutation is moderately clear and concise in refuting opponent's POV. Opposing argument is identified, but unclear. Refutation is weak and general in refuting opponent's POV. B=Above Average C=Average (Satisfactory) Arguments and support are provided in a fairly logical order that makes it reasonably easy to follow the author's train of thought. A few of the support details or arguments are not in an expected or logical order, distracting the reader and making the essay seem a little confusing. Includes 1 or fewer pieces of evidence that is NOT relevant AND/OR not explained. D=Below Average Refutation is not recognizable or non-existent. D=Below Average Many of the support details or arguments are not in an expected or logical order, distracting the reader and making the essay seem very confusing. 1/31/08 1:02 PM print!rubric!-!The online student and academic community!-!rCampus CONCLUSION A=Excellent The conclusion is strong and leaves the reader solidly understanding the writer's position. Effective restatement of the position statement begins the closing paragraph. VOICE A=Excellent The author seems to be writing from knowledge or experience. The author has taken the ideas and made them "his own." GRAMMAR & SPELLING WORKS CITED PAGE ESSAY REQUIREMENTS A=Excellent The author makes no errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. A=Excellent Follows all MLA rules for Works Cited list with no errors in citation format. A=Excellent The author meets all of the required components of the essay: Title, Name & Hour, Word-Processed, 12 point font, Double spaced Built at www.RubricStudio.com 2 of 2 http://www.rcampus.com/rubricprinteditc.cfm?code=BX3266&sp=no&... B=Above Average The conclusion is recognizable. The author's position is restated within the first two sentences of the closing paragraph. B=Above Average The author seems to be drawing on knowledge or experience, but there is some lack of ownership of the topic. B=Above Average The author makes 1-2 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. B=Above Average Follows most MLA rules for Work Cited list with one or two errors in citation format. B=Above Average The author meets most of the required components of the essay: Title, Name & Hour, Word-Processed, 12 point font, Double spaced C=Average (Satisfactory) The author's position is restated within the closing paragraph, but not near the beginning. C=Average (Satisfactory) The author relates some of his own knowledge or experience, but it adds nothing to the discussion of the topic. C=Average (Satisfactory) D=Below Average There is no conclusion - the paper just ends. D=Below Average The author has not tried to transform the information in a personal way. The ideas and the way they are expressed seem to belong to someone else. D=Below Average The author makes 3-4 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. The author makes more than 4 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. C=Average (Satisfactory) D=Below Average Follows some MLA rules for Work Cited list with more then two errors in citation format. C=Average (Satisfactory) The author only meets a few of the required components of the essay: Title, Name & Hour, Word-Processed, 12 point font, Double spaced Missing Works Cited list. D=Below Average The author meets few if any of the required components of the essay: Title, Name & Hour, Word-Processed, 12 point font, Double spaced Rubric Code: BX3266 1/31/08 1:02 PM