CHAPTER 1 Essay Writing Basics STEP ONE: PRE-WRITING Pre-writing involves exploring a topic and asking yourself what you need to know about it The goal is to narrow the topic to express your approach The thesis statement expresses your approach STEP ONE: PRE-WRITING Pre-writing techniques Freewriting Write without stopping or editing Questioning technique Who, what, where, when, why, how? Brainstorming Linear: listing associations Looking for connections Clustering (mapping) Spatial Looking for connections STEP TWO: FINDING SUPPORT Your aim here is to backing up your thesis (general claim) Support (specific claims) Primary sources (original texts) Secondary sources (commentary found in articles and books) Facts, statistics You may have to change your thesis or adapt it to match the support STEP THREE: ORGANIZING Outline Helps to organize claims logically and consistently Scratch: brief list of points Formal: shows order of points by alternating numberletter arrangement STEP FOUR: COMPOSING Composing Record thoughts completely Expect to revise later STEP FIVE: REVISING AND EDITING Revise means “see again” A “top-down” approach considers large issues before small ones Check purpose, audience, structure, main points Grammar, style, clarity, concision Proofing and mechanics DRAFTING THE ESSAY An essay has three parts: an introduction, middle/body paragraphs, and a conclusion WRITING AN INTRODUCTION The introduction presents an essay’s purpose, topic, approach, and organization Uses persuasion to capture readers’ interest Establishes author credibility and reliability of the THE THESIS STATEMENT A thesis is a general point that applies to entire essay A simple thesis announces and comments on topic An expanded thesis or essay plan includes main points A thesis expresses a claim Value or policy claim made in argumentative writing Fact-based claim made in expository writing CREATING READER INTEREST Logical opening (inverted triangle method) Begins broad and ends specific Dramatic opening Includes personal experience, description, narration Asks a question Makes an emotional appeal WRITING MIDDLE PARAGRAPHS The topic sentence states the main idea of each paragraph The topic sentence is usually the first sentence but could be placed elsewhere in the paragraph The rest of the paragraph should support the topic sentence WRITING STRONG PARAGRAPHS Strong Unified Focused on one idea Coherent paragraphs are Easy to follow Well-developed Organized with relevant support WRITING STRONG PARAGRAPHS, CONT’D Strategies for coherent paragraphs Use logical sentence order Organize by specific patterns Use precise language Use transitions to show relationships Rephrase to clarify difficult concepts Repeat key words or use synonyms Use balanced structures RHETORICAL PATTERNS AND PARAGRAPH DEVELOPMENT Rhetorical patterns help to organize and present information systematically Your topic and approach to it will help determine an appropriate rhetorical pattern Common rhetorical patterns Description Narration Process analysis Definition RHETORICAL PATTERNS AND PARAGRAPH DEVELOPMENT, CONT’D Common rhetorical patterns, cont’d Comparison and contrast Chronology Example Cause and effect Reasons Classification/division Cost–benefit analysis Problem and solution Analogy KINDS OF EVIDENCE The kind of evidence you need can depend on your purpose, audience, topic, and essay type It will vary according to discipline Hard Facts, statistics, research findings Soft evidence has authority evidence may help explain or convince Experts, examples, analogies, anecdotal or personal experience ISSUES OF CREDIBILITY Knowledge Appearing well-informed Providing strong support Reliability Following conventions Writing grammatically and clearly Fairness Avoiding bias Mentioning other sides and viewpoints WRITING A CONCLUSION Circular Reinforce the writer’s thesis Do not repeat the thesis word for word Spiral conclusions conclusions Suggest ideas for further exploration Use appeal or a brief narrative