Name: _____________________________________________________________________ February 2015 Course/Instructor/Period: _______________________________________________ Analyzing Poetry UNIT SCHEDULE Monday Tuesday 26 Wednesday 27 Thursday 28 Friday 29 Distribute poetry terms. 30 Focus: Meter and Imagery Focus: Prosody HW: 1. Read “Aunt Jennifer’s Tigers” and “So Much Happiness.” 2. RR#4 and #5 2 Poetry Terms Quiz Focus: Imagery HW: 1. Read “Mother to Son” and “Promise of Spring.” 2. RR #7 and #8 3 HW: 1. Read “This is a Photo…” 2. RR #6 3. Study for Terms Quiz 4 Focus: Metaphor and Personification Focus: Form Poetry HW: 1. Read excerpt from HW: 1. Read “I am Offering…” and “Do Not Go…” 2. RR #11 and #12 5 Focus: Form Poetry Focus: Spoken Word Poetry “Ode on…” and haikus by Basho, Buson, Shiki, Kato HW: 1. Reading journals due tomorrow; be ready. Shuson, Soseki. 2. RR #9 and #10 9 6 RR Journals Due! 10 Focus: Student-Directed Focus: Student-Directed HW: 1. Find a poem; bring a printed hard copy to class on Tuesday. HW: 1. Find a poem; bring a printed hard copy to class on Wednesday. 11 Focus: Student-Directed HW: 1. Choose a poem a poem to analyze using any* critical literary theory of your choice. 12 Minilesson: Writing a Strong Claim Note: Electronic copies not accepted. 13 Teacher-Led Small Group Instruction Writing Workshop Writing Workshop HW: 1. Continue working; analysis due at end of class on F 1/13. Poetry Analysis Due! Note: Electronic Note: Electronic *Except Reader’s Response. copies not accepted. copies not accepted. *The above “Unit Schedule” is subject to revision, based on student need and school closures. UNIT ASSIGNMENTS AND DUE DATES 1. Poetry Terms Quiz 2. Read and annotate assigned poems. 3. Reader’s Response Journals #4-#12 4. Bring poems for discussion. 5. Poetry Analysis HW: 1. Find a poem; bring a printed hard copy to class on Monday. No HW over break! Due: M 2/2 Due: Daily Due: Daily, collected on F 2/6 Due: M 2/9 — W 2/11 Due: F 2/13 READER’S RESPONSE JOURNALS (#4-#12) [Due: Daily, collected on F 2/6] For every poem you read, you must complete one of the following written exercises: 1. What do you like about the poem? Why? 2. What do you dislike about the poem? Why? 3. What surprised you in the poem? Why? 4. What do you think the poem is about? Cite evidence. 5. What figurative language do you see in the poem? What effect does it have on you? 6. What elements of prosody do you see in the poem? What effect do they have on you? 7. Write a poem inspired by the poem you just read. Note for 2/3: Pick two of the haiku and answer ONE of the above prompts based on them. Sample Reading Journal Scoring Guide: ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ POETRY ANALYSIS [Due: F 2/13 by the end of class] Note: Absence from class on 2/13 does not provide you with an extension on this assignment once classes resume; it will be due in class the first day you return from your vacation. Choose one of the poems that you (or a colleague) brought to class this week that you’re interested in exploring further and choose one critical literary theory (Reader’s Response is still not an option) to use as the lens for your analysis. Using that lens as a starting place, develop a strong claim about your chosen poem and support it in a four (or five) paragraph essay. Make sure you apply the information from Thursday’s lesson on writing strong claims (T 2/12). Gerard Manley Hopkins: "The Windhover" I caught this morning morning’s minion, kingdom of daylight’s dauphin, dapple-dawn-drawn Falcon, in his riding Of the rolling level underneath him steady air, and striding High there, how he rung upon the rein of a wimpling wing In his ecstasy! then off, off forth on swing, As a skate’s heel sweeps smooth on a bow-bend: the hurl and gliding Rebuffed the big wind. My heart in hiding Stirred for a bird,—the achieve of; the mastery of the thing! Brute beauty and valour and act, oh, air, pride, plume, here Buckle! AND the fire that breaks from thee then, a billion Times told lovelier, more dangerous, O my chevalier! No wonder of it: shéer plód makes plough down sillion Shine, and blue-bleak embers, ah my dear, Fall, gall themselves, and gash gold-vermillion. Michael Stillman: “In Memoriam John Coltrane” Listen to the coal rolling, rolling through the cold steady rain, wheel on wheel, listen to the turning of the wheels this night black as coal dust, steel on steel, listen to these cars carry coal, listen to the coal train roll. Adrienne Rich: "Aunt Jennifer's Tigers" Aunt Jennifer's tigers prance across a screen, Bright topaz denizens of a world of green. They do not fear the men beneath the tree; They pace in sleek chivalric certainty. Aunt Jennifer's finger fluttering through her wool Find even the ivory needle hard to pull. The massive weight of Uncle's wedding band Sits heavily upon Aunt Jennifer's hand. When Aunt is dead, her terrified hands will lie Still ringed with ordeals she was mastered by. The tigers in the panel that she made Will go on prancing, proud and unafraid. Naomi Shihab Nye: “So Much Happiness” It is difficult to know what to do with so much happiness. With sadness there is something to rub against, a wound to tend with lotion and cloth. When the world falls in around you, you have pieces to pick up, something to hold in your hands, like ticket stubs or change. But happiness floats. It doesn't need you to hold it down. It doesn't need anything. Happiness lands on the roof of the next house, singing, and disappears when it wants to. You are happy either way. Even the fact that you once lived in a peaceful tree house and now live over a quarry of noise and dust cannot make you unhappy. Everything has a life of its own, it too could wake up filled with possibilities of coffee cake and ripe peaches, and love even the floor which needs to be swept, the soiled linens and scratched records….. Since there is no place large enough to contain so much happiness, you shrug, you raise your hands, and it flows out of you into everything you touch. You are not responsible. You take no credit, as the night sky takes no credit for the moon, but continues to hold it, and share it, and in that way, be known. Margaret Atwood: “This Is a Photograph of Me” It was taken some time ago At first it seems to be a smeared print: blurred lines and grey flecks blended with the paper; then, as you scan it, you can see something in the left-hand corner a thing that is like a branch: part of a tree (balsam or spruce) emerging and, to the right, halfway up what ought to be a gentle slope, a small frame house. In the background there is a lake, and beyond that, some low hills. (The photograph was taken the day after I drowned. I am in the lake, in the center of the picture, just under the surface. It is difficult to say where precisely, or to say how large or how small I am: the effect of water on light is a distortion. but if you look long enough eventually you will see me.) Langston Hughes: “Mother to Son” Well, son, I’ll tell you: Life for me ain’t been no crystal stair. It’s had tacks in it, And splinters, And boards torn up, And places with no carpet on the floor— Bare. But all the time I’se been a-climbin’ on, And reachin’ landin’s, And turnin’ corners, And sometimes goin’ in the dark Where there ain’t been no light. So boy, don’t you turn back. Don’t you set down on the steps ’Cause you finds it’s kinder hard. Don’t you fall now— For I’se still goin’, honey, I’se still climbin’, And life for me ain’t been no crystal stair. Elaine George: “The Promise of Spring” I Will Kiss you While you sleep Lady dressed in white And melt your cold heart made of ice Then You Will rise Liquefied High into the sky And fall as raindrops from God’s eyes To The Waiting Buds below Where now you will grow With me – in the bloom of a rose William Wordsworth: excerpt from, “Ode on Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood” There was a time when meadow, grove, and stream, The earth, and every common sight To me did seem Apparelled in celestial light, The glory and the freshness of a dream. It is not now as it hath been of yore;-Turn wheresoe’er I may, By night or day, The things which I have seen I now can see no more. Basho From time to time The clouds give rest To the moon-beholders. In the cicada’s cry No sign can foretell How soon it must die. An old silent pond... A frog jumps into the pond, Buson Over-ripe sushi, The Master Is full of regret. Blowing from the west Fallen leaves gather In the east. splash! Silence again. No one travels Along this way but I, This autumn evening. Shiki Consider me As one who loved poetry And persimmons. Kato Shuson I kill an ant and realize my three children have been watching. Soseki Over the wintry forest, winds howl in rage with no leaves to blow. My life,— How much more of it remains? The night is brief. Toward those short trees We saw a hawk descending On a day in spring. Jimmy Santiago Baca: “I Am Offering this Poem” I am offering this poem to you, since I have nothing else to give. Keep it like a warm coat when winter comes to cover you, or like a pair of thick socks the cold cannot bite through, I love you, I have nothing else to give you, so it is a pot full of yellow corn to warm your belly in winter, it is a scarf for your head, to wear over your hair, to tie up around your face, I love you, Keep it, treasure this as you would if you were lost, needing direction, in the wilderness life becomes when mature; and in the corner of your drawer, tucked away like a cabin or hogan in dense trees, come knocking, and I will answer, give you directions, and let you warm yourself by this fire, rest by this fire, and make you feel safe I love you, It’s all I have to give, and all anyone needs to live, and to go on living inside, when the world outside no longer cares if you live or die; remember, I love you. Dylan Thomas: “Do not go gentle into that good night” Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Though wise men at their end know dark is right, Because their words had forked no lightning they Do not go gentle into that good night. Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight, And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way, Do not go gentle into that good night. Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. And you, my father, there on the sad height, Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray. Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light. "Little Margaret", traditional, performed by the Carolina Chocolate Drops Little Margaret is sitting in her high hall chair Unfold, unfold those snow white robes Be they ever so fine Combing back her long yellow hair For I want to kiss those cold, cold lips Saw sweet William and his new made bride For I know they'll never kiss mine Riding up the road so near Three times he kissed her cold, cold hand She threw down her ivory comb Twice he kissed her cheek Threw back her long yellow hair And once he kissed her cold, cold lips Said "I'll go down and bid them farewell And he fell in her arms asleep And I'll nevermore go there" It was late in the night They were fast asleep Little Margaret appeared all dressed in white Standing at their bed feet Saying "How do you like your snow white pillow? How do you like your sheet? Saying how do you like that pretty, fair maid Who lays in your arms asleep?" "Very well do I like my snow white pillow Well do I like my sheet Much better do I like that pretty, fair maid Who stands at my bed feet" He called a servant man to go Saddled the dappled roan And he rode for her father's house that night Knocked on the door alone Said "Is little Margaret in her room, Or is she in the hall?" "Little Margaret is in her cold black coffin With her face turned toward the wall"