INTO THE WILD READING RESPONSES This is typically an intense unit of reading and writing in English III, so buckle up! However, because we are finally reading a full contemporary work, we hope this will be a text that you find engaging. Why can’t we just read the book and not be required to write and answer questions about it? Although we addressed that question in the English III Syllabus, this time of year—when you’re already dreaming of the freedom of summer—it’s worth repeating the rationale. What we will be asking you to do and why is supported by miles and miles of research, such as the conclusions summarized below from the 2010 Carnegie Corporation report Writing to Read: Evidence for How Writing Can Improve Reading: Writing Practices That Enhance Students’ Reading I. HAVE STUDENTS WRITE ABOUT THE TEXTS THEY READ Students’ comprehension of science, social studies, and language arts texts is improved when they write about what they read, specifically when they Respond to a Text in Writing (Writing Personal Reactions, Analyzing, and Interpreting the Text) Write Summaries of a Text Write Notes About a Text Answer Questions About a Text in Writing II. TEACH STUDENTS THE WRITING SKILLS AND PROCESSES THAT GO INTO CREATING TEXT Students’ reading skills and comprehension are improved specifically when teachers Teach the Process of Writing, Text Structures for Writing, Paragraph or Sentence Construction Skills III. INCREASE HOW MUCH STUDENTS WRITE Students’ reading comprehension is improved by having them increase how often the write about a text. Each reading response assignment requires you to complete some reading in Into the Wild and answer some questions—some for homework and some in class. (Trust us; you’re getting a much lighter load than English III students did in previous years.) But here’s the biggest challenge: Each reading response assignment must be typed and submitted to turnitin.com by 8:45 AM the day of class. No hard copies will be accepted. Why? That’s a fair question. Many students rush through homework, during other classes or lunch, the day it’s due. So for this unit only, we’re taking that option off the table to provide you with some practice in battling procrastination and developing planning skills. Yes, you can still procrastinate and start the assignment at midnight. That option is still available. If access to technology is a serious issue for you, come talk to me immediately, and we will forge a plan. INTO THE WILD: Reading Response Ch. 2-3 Type up and submit your answers for questions 1-3 to turnitin.com by 8:45 am on 2/19 (A) and 2/20 (B). Unless asked to list or answer in note-taking form, you will only receive credit for responses written in complete sentences. Please label your answers with the numbers and letters used on this handout. Do not make me guess which question you are answering. Ch. 2 – THE STAMPEDE TRAIL – NOTES (Complete sentences NOT required.) 1. One of Krakauer’s purposes for this chapter is to help us understand just why Bus 142, the place where Chris was camping and living, is so isolated and difficult to reach. Check the map that Krakauer includes. As you read, record answers to the following questions. A) In 1963, construction stopped on the Stampede Trail because it was determined that what obstacles make it “impassable” (10)? B) Bus 142 is how many miles west from what nearest town? C) Krakauer points out that sometimes how many months will go by without anyone visiting the bus? D) What specific obstacle makes reaching the bus especially dangerous? Ch. 3 – CARTHAGE (Complete sentences required.) 2. PARAPHRASE in your own words a SPECIFIC EXAMPLE that supports each of the following conclusions Wayne Westerberg shares with Krakauer about Chris McCandless. Write each paraphrase as a complete sentence and cite the page number. Remember that paraphrasing requires using synonyms—except for common nouns. Also, change up the author’s order of ideas. But make sure to capture Krakauer’s specific details. A. People were drawn to Chris’s personality. B. Chris was “extremely ethical.” C. Chris was “intelligent” and an active learner. 3. LIST at least THREE decisions/examples that reveal Chris’s commitment to a life of *asceticism and his rejection of material excess. *asceticism is one of our vocab words—so check your packet. In complete sentences, PARAPHRASE details in your own words and cite the page number. (Focus especially on pages 20-22.) A. B. C. #4 , on the next page, is not due until tomorrow in class, but preview the question. THREE-PART LABELED SHORT ANSWER – See the model answer on the next page, which shows you the expectation for this kind of question. *You will write your answer for this question next class, but preview the question and be thinking about it so you are prepared to write next class. 4. A. Krakauer suggests that when Chris left Atlanta he wanted to “wallow in unfiltered experience” (22). What do you think he means by this? Explain in your own words. Consider what we learn about Chris’s background and family in this chapter. Also, think about how an “unfiltered” experience differs from a “filtered” one? When setting up your answer, include the question stem in your answer. When Krakauer suggests that Chris left Atlanta because he wanted to “wallow in unfiltered experience,” I believe he means that … B. Describe an example when you did this in your own life. Or, if you haven’t yet, describe what you would do if your goal was to “wallow in unfiltered experience.” When describing your personal example, make sure to be very specific. Provide DETAILS and ELABORATION. Template Setup: I “wallow[ed] in unfiltered experience” when I ____. (And then describe the experience) Or: If I were to “wallow in unfiltered experience,” I would ______. C. Commentary: Explain why your example meets the definition you chose for what it means to “wallow in unfiltered experience.” When comparing your personal example to McCandless’s, weave and cite a direct quote from the text. (No, the quote from the question does not count .) Put your quote and citation in bold. Here are some templates to help you make the connection clear: Like McCandless, when I ___________, I also wanted to “______________” ( By __________, like McCandless, I would “______________” ( ). ). SEE EXAMPLE OF THREE-PART LABELED SHORT ANSWER ON NEXT PAGE. THREE-PART LABELED SHORT ANSWER – MODEL A. In your own words, explain why Jim Galien believes Chris’s (Alex’s) plan to live in the Alaskan backcountry for a number of months is “foolhardy” (5). B. Describe an example when you were determined to do something—that looking back, may have been “foolhardy”. (Look up this word if you’re not sure what it means.) When describing your personal example, make sure to be very specific. Provide DETAILS and ELABORATION. C. Commentary: Explain why your example connects to Chris or Galien’s observations. When comparing your personal example to Into the Wild, weave and cite a direct quote from the text. (No, the quote from the question does not count ). Bold your quote and citation. MS. BECH’S ANSWER: A. Jim Galien believes Chris’s plan to live in the Alaskan backcountry for a number of months is “foolhardy” because, given that hunting would be very difficult in the area he was heading, McCandless had very little food in his backpack—only a large back of rice. The caliber of Chris’s gun is not strong enough to shoot large game or defeat an attacking bear. Additionally, he’s concerned that Chris is lacking basic supplies, such as snowshoes, waterproof boots, an ax, compass, and insect repellant. B. After college I was accepted into a program called Teach for America, an organization that places college graduates in schools with teacher shortages—namely, high-poverty schools where the students face many challenges both in and out of school. While this decision was not “foolhardy,” looking back, my attitude and expectations definitely were. I certainly was not prepared for the student, who during the first class, exclaimed, “You white hoe b*#^% better let me go to the bathroom!” And I’ll always remember when a fourteen-year-old student showed up to class beyond exhausted because he had spent the night driving his brother to another city to purchase heroin. “I drove him, Ms. Bech, but I told him I wouldn’t cook it for him this time,” he explained. C. Much like Galien’s recollections of Chris’s determination and stubbornness, I think I initially entered teaching thinking “I won’t run into anything I can’t deal with on my own” (Krakauer 6). I could not have been more mistaken. Like Chris’s eagerness to experience living in the middle of the wilderness, I too “couldn’t wait to head out” into the world of teaching “and get started” (6). However, also much like Chris, I had not fully anticipated how difficult the experience would be. Connection Signals - phrases in italics help make it clear to the reader that I’m connecting my experience/outlook to Chris’s. Elaboration – the parts of my sentences that are underlined provide context for what specifically about Chris’s experience/outlook I am referring to in my connection. Quote fragments in bold are details from the text I am weaving into my sentences to help make the connection between Chris’s and my experience strong and clear for a reader. The page citations are also in bold. Ch. 4 Reading Response Ch.4–THE DETRITAL WASH (Questions 1-2 DUE DATE: Mon. 2/23 (A) Tues. 2/24 (B) 8:45 AM to turnitin.com) 5. A. Describe, in your own words, what happens to McCandless’s Datsun and why he does not attempt to get help. (Include elaboration. Where is he? How did he get there?) B. Krakauer points out that Chris’s emotional reaction to the events involving his car are not what we might expect. Describe Chris’s surprising emotional reaction, the symbolic “gesture” he chooses to perform, and why he makes this decision. Weave and properly cite at least one direct quote detail from the text in your answer. Bold any direct quotes and citations. *If you need to see an example of quote weaving, look at the model example on p. 4. 2. In your own words, describe Jan and Bob and explain Jan’s impressions of Chris (Alex). USE AN APPOSITVE PHRASE IN ONE OF YOUR SENTENCES FOR THIS ANSWER AND UNDERLINE THE APPOSITIVE PHRASE. *Remember, an appositive phrase is a noun phrase that renames/describes another noun. Google an example if you’re still unsure. YOUR TURN TO PLAY TEACHER – You will type up this question in class and submit it to schoology, but be thinking about a good question as you finish reading Ch. 4 3. Based on your reading of p. 31-37 of Ch. 4, write up your own three-part question that follows the format we used for question 4 in the Ch. 2-3 RR. Make sure your question contains the following elements: Part A should require students to paraphrase details (specific evidence) from the text (pp 31-37) to answer the question you pose. Don’t ask a question that is just a simple fact, such as What was Chris’s favorite drink? Craft a complex question that requires thinking, close reading, and inferences. Part B should ask students to describe a personal experience or example that connects with the ideas in Part A and/or addresses the same conflict, question, or dilemma in the part of the text you are focusing on. Part C should ask students to explain why or how their example connects to Chris’s ideas or experiences, Krakauer’s observations, or even Chris’s parents. (Depending on your question.) This part of your question must require students to weave and cite a direct quote detail in their answer. Ask students to bold their direct quote detail and citation. *Feel free to use any of the language from the A,B,C directions to help you craft your question. Ch. 5 & 6 Questions 1-3 DUE: 2/25 (A) and 2/26 (B) to turnitin.com by 8:45 AM Ch. 5 – BULLHEAD CITY LIST QUESTION 1. Though living a more conventional life, while working at a McDonald’s, list at least FOUR examples of behaviors and decisions that reveal Chris seems to be “off in his own universe” (40). (Paraphrase details in your own words but cite the page numbers.) SHORT ANSWER 2. Would you like to live for a few weeks at the “Slabs” described in this chapter? Explain why or why not and make sure to include specific details about this location and its regulars in your answer. Show me that you read. Ch. 6 – ANZA-BORREGO D&E Question – AT LEAST THREE COMPLETE SENTENCES 3. Find details from the text that you would use to support the following thesis statement: Ronald Franz felt a deep level of 1affection and 2respect for Chris “Alex” McCandless. (Basically, pretend this was the first thesis sentence of a short analysis). Notice there are TWO parts of the thesis to prove. Find one direct quote to support part 1 (affection) and one direct quote to support part 2 (respect). Your third direct quote detail can support either part of the thesis. Weave and cite the direct quote details into your own sentences. Make sure to include ELABORATION (Who/What/Where/Why/When/How). Bold your direct quotes and citations. You will write question #4 in class, but be thinking about it as your read Ch. 6. 4. A. In this chapter, Chris strongly advises Ronald Franz to change the way he is living— especially in the letter he sends from Carthage, South Dakota (read this very closely). Explain two of the arguments that Chris makes. When describing one of his arguments, paraphrase it in your own words. When describing a second argument, weave and properly cite a direct quote detail when describing another argument. Bold your direct quote detail and citation. B. Pick a specific argument that Chris makes in his letter to Franz and explain why you agree or disagree with his idea. Offer a real or hypothetical example to support and explain and support your opinion. Possible Sentence Templates: Although Chris advocates ___________, I disagree with this advice because _______. Chris suggests that we should _________. I agree that living this way is essential because ________. CHAPTER 7 – CARTHAGE (ALL QUESTIONS DUE:. 2/27 (A) and MON. 3/2 (B) at 8:45 AM to turnitin.com) 1. Paraphrase in your own words examples that prove the following conclusions about Chris reported by Wayne Westerberg: *Remember, paraphrasing requires using synonyms and changing the order of ideas so we do not plagiarize the original writer’s choices. Cite the page number where you found the each detail. A. Chris sometimes lacked common sense. B. Chris was determined to get to Alaska—and not by an easy route. C. In some ways Chris was tough—not a complainer. But in other ways, perhaps he was too sensitive and needed to toughen up. 2. Paraphrase in your own words why, according to Krakauer, the relationship between Chris and his father Walt was strained. Cite the page number where you found the information. 3. Find, list, and cite direct quote details from the text and prove the following conclusions about Chris reported by Wayne’s mom, Mary Westerberg: A. Chris (Alex) seemed mature for his age. B. Chris was musically talented. C. Chris knew that he would be taking big risks on his Alaskan adventure. SHORT ANSWER 4. Read pages 65-66 very closely. What information does Krakauer include to report and observe about the role that chastity played in Chris’s life? Look up the word “chastity” if you do not know its meaning. Consider how Chris’s choices reflect the ideas of Transcendentalist Henry David Thoreau. Weave and cite a direct quote details in your answer. Include elaboration. Bold the quotes and citations. Ch. 9 – DAVIS GULCH DUE: FRI.3/3 (A) * 3/4 (B) *IN-CLASS OPTIONAL ASSIGNMENT* EVERYONE NEEDS TO READ THE CHAPTER, BUT COMPLETING THIS RR IS EXTRA CREDIT. IT CAN REPLACE A RR ZERO OR CAN ADD POINTS TO A RR IN WHICH YOU EARN A LOW GRADE. SHORT ANSWER 1. Krakauer identifies three main ways in which Everett Ruess and Chris McCandless are similar. In your own words, explain them. A. B. C. 2. A. Everett Ruess carved a nom de plume into places he visited. What was it? B. If you were going to change your name or create a nom de plume for yourself, what would it be? 3. What does Ken Sleight find to be both impressive and rare about Ruess and McCandless? THREE-PART SHORT ANSWER 4. A. At the end of the chapter, Krakauer describes how the Irish monks—the papar— endangered their own lives with high-risk voyages, but not because they were seeking money, fame, or land. In your own words, explain—according to Nobel laureate Fridtjof Nansen—what the monks were searching for? B. Describe where you would go to accomplish the same goal as the papar…or…if there is already a place in your life that serves this purpose, describe that. C. Explain why this place or experience would provide you with what the papar were seeking. (Weave and cite at least one direct quote detail from the paragraph about the papar in your explanation.) Bold your quote and citation. Possible Template for Part C Like the papar, ______________ would enable me to “__________” because _____________. If I were to _________, similar to the papar, I might find ________ because I would “___________”. INTO THE WILD CH. 11-13 GRADED DISCUSSION Thurs. 3/5 (A) and Fri. 3/6 (B) You will be assigned to Group A or B. Because this is a “discussion,” if you don’t discuss, you will earn a zero. But—if this is something that causes you anxiety—remember, above all, this is simply you and your classmates having a conversation about the book. To prepare, you need to read these chapters very closely (including the epigraphs) and take notes. You might also find it helpful to use sticky notes to mark important examples that apply to your central topic. The goal is that you know these chapters so well that you can discuss any part. You also need to craft TWO excellent questions that connect to your assigned topic. GROUP A - Central Topic A) In Chapters 11-13, consider Chris’s rejection of authority and rules—both when it comes to his parents as well as society. Evaluate his attitudes and decisions and be prepared to voice your opinion of Chris based on evidence from the text. Write two questions related to your central topic that could generate thoughtful discussion among your classmates. GROUP B - Central Topic B) In Chapters 11-13, consider Chris’s affinity for taking risks. Evaluate his attitudes and decisions and be prepared to voice your opinion of Chris based on evidence from the text. Write two questions related to your central topic that could generate thoughtful discussion among your classmates. HOW TO CRAFT EXCELLENT QUESTIONS: Method One – Start with a specific detail (example, evidence from text) and encourage your classmates to make an inference about that text. Ch. 7 Example: Why does Krakauer include Wayne Westerberg’s story of Chris cooking chicken in the microwave? Follow Up: What’s surprising or, perhaps, not expected about what this story reveals about Chris? Method Two – Start with an inference you made from details in the text and create a question that encourages your classmates to think about the specific evidence that proves that inference. Ch. 3 Example: What details about Chris’s final year in college show that he is committed to leading a life of simplicity and asceticism? Ch. 7 Example: What details in the text show that Chris values reading? TYPES OF QUESTIONS TO AVOID: Questions that just ask for a simple fact Ch. 7 Example: What instrument do we learn Chris plays? Questions where you have done all the thinking and leave nothing for others to discuss Ch. 7 Example: Do you think Krakauer begins the chapter with the Anthony Storr quote about how a person can have meaning in his or her life without being “dependent upon interpersonal relationships” because he’s trying to show that Chris did not always need to be close to people to feel his life had purpose? Questions that merely restate the group topic or that are too general or informal Example: So why does Chris take risks? OR How does Chris act like a rebel? OR What’s Chris’s deal with acting all, like, crazy and stuff? OR Who, like, really is this dude Chris McCandless? CHAPTER 14 & 15 (ALL QUESTIONS DUE: MON. 3/9 (A) * TUES. 3/10 (B) 8:45 AM to TURNITIN.COM) Ch. 14 – THE STIKINE ICE CAP 1. Describe, in your own words, the specific obstacles and setbacks Krakauer faces as he attempts to climb the Devils Thumb. And, in the end, what final obstacle forces him to change his plans. Ch. 15 – THE STIKINE ICE CAP 2. When recalling his experience climbing the Devils Thumb, Krakauer now believes that as a young man he “mistook passion for insight” (155). Using your own words, interpret Krakauer’s quote and explain what he means. Make sure to look at it within the context of the entire paragraph. 3. At the very end of the chapter, in your own words, explain the argument Krakauer makes to point out that neither he nor Chris made the decisions they did because they “want[ed] to die” (156)? THREE-PART “YOUR CHOICE” SHORT ANSWER - CHOOSE ONE of the following questions below to answer: 4. A. In his youth, what philosophy of his father’s did Krakauer rebel against? (147-8) (Weave and cite at least one direct quote from the chapter in your explanation.) Bold any direct quote details and citations. B. Describe a specific goal or belief that a parent/guardian/adult has attempted to instill in you that you disagree with. C. Explain why you disagreed and what you did (or didn’t do) to resist following or conforming to this goal or belief. OR 5. A. Krakauer claims that his father “never understood that the Devils Thumb was the same as medical school, only different” (150). Explain this quote and its context. (Weave and cite at least one direct quote from the chapter in your explanation. Obviously, the quote in the question cannot count as your quoted detail. ) Bold any direct quote details and citations. B. At this point in your life, what is your “Devils Thumb”? Be specific. C. Explain why your “Devils Thumb” is significant in your life and why your passion for it is accepted or misunderstood by others. Ch. 17 RR IS DUE TO TURNIIN.COM at 8:45 AM by Wed. 3/11 (A) and Thurs. 3/12 (B) **CH. 16 RR IS Due the same date but is AN OPTIONAL EXTRA CREDIT RR. Everyone needs to read the chapter, but completing the RR will replace a RR zero or a RR low grade. Ch. 16 – THE ALASKA INTERIOR 1. Explain, in your own words, how, according to Krakauer, Chris was naïve about the following: A. The remoteness/surroundings of his location: B. The best season for traveling in the Alaskan bush: C. Hunting and preserving meat in Alaska: D. The Teklanika River: SHORT ANSWER 2. Why does Chris consider shooting the moose “[o]ne of the greatest tragedies of [his] life” (167)? THREE-PART “YOUR CHOICE” SHORT ANSWER - CHOOSE ONE of the following questions to answer: 3. In the message he carves into a piece of plywood in the bus, Chris suggests that he hopes his experience in Alaska will serve as the “climactic battle to kill the false being within” (163). A. In your opinion, what is the “false being” he hoped to kill? Weave and cite a direct quote detail in your answer. Bold your direct quote details and citation. B. What is the “false being” within you that you’d like to conquer? C. Explain what you could do to conquer it. [If you don’t think you have a “false being” within you that needs conquering, then answer question #4 instead.] OR 4. A. Considering both what he was preparing to do when he finished reading Tolstoy’s “Family Happiness” as well as the particular passages he chose to mark, in your opinion, how might Chris’s attitudes and goals have changed? Weave and cite a direct quote detail in your answer. Bold your direct quote details and citation. B. Describe the speaker’s “idea of happiness” in the Tolstoy novel. Be specific. C. Explain how the Tolstoy idea compares with your future vision of happiness for your own life. Ch. 17 – THE STAMPEDE TRAIL *EVERYONE COMPLETES! SHORT ANSWER 1. Why does Krakauer believe that McCandless made a deliberate decision to not acquire a topographical map of the Stampede Trail and the surrounding wilderness? Weave and cite direct quote details in your answer. Bold your direct quote details and citation. THREE-PART SHORT ANSWER - CHOOSE ONE of the following questions to answer. Weave and cite direct quote details in your answer. Bold your direct quote details and citation. When describing your personal example, make sure to be specific. 2. A. According to Krakauer, what was Chris McCandless’s belief about challenges? (Paraphrase his philosophy in your own words.) B. Describe a specific example of a time when you or someone you know felt the same way about a challenge. C. Explain how or why your example connects to Chris’s philosophy. (Read 182-183 closely) *Also note—there is A LOT of tricky vocab in this section. Use a dictionary. OR 3. A. Explain what Roman Dial admires about Chris McCandless and why he thinks Alaskans were so critical of him. B. Decode Everett Ruess’s father’s statement into simple everyday language: “The older person does not realize the soul-flights of the adolescent” (186). C. Describe a specific example from your life where a person, because of his or her age, did not understand your adolescent “soul-flight”. Ch. 18 – THE STAMPEDE TRAIL YOU DON’T HAVE TO WRITE THESE, BUT MAKE SURE YOU CAN ANSWER THESE QUESTIONS AFTER READING CHAPTER 18: 1. What observation/realization does McCandless record in his copy of Doctor Zhivago? 2. What are the three main theories/scenarios Krakauer addresses when explaining Chris’s demise and journal recording that notes his weakness is “FAULT OF POT. SEED”. 3. List the evidence/reasons that Krakauer uses to refute and counter the claim that vandalized and destroyed the Denali National Park cabins. 4. What final act does Chris choose to complete before his death?