Glenfield College Blog all about it Achievement Standard English 91106/2: Form developed personal responses to independently read texts, supported by evidence Credits: 4 Achievement Form developed personal responses to independently read texts, supported by evidence. Achievement with Merit Form developed, convincing personal responses to independently read texts, supported by evidence. Achievement with Excellence Form developed, perceptive personal responses to independently read texts, supported by evidence. Student instructions Introduction This activity requires you to create a book review blog. To complete this assessment you will need to independently select, read, and discuss six texts. To assist you, your teacher may make suggestions of texts you might consider. You must form developed personal responses to each of the texts and support these with evidence. You will provide your assessment by creating and updating a reading blog. This may be in three forms: 1. Written blog: You will write your responses and publish these on the blog. 2. Visual blog: Your blog will consist of a series of videos of you talking about your reading and publishing them to the blog. 3. Oral blog: Your blog will consist of a series of podcasts of you discussing your reading and then publishing them to the blog. You should be selecting, reading, and responding to your texts over an extended period of time. There will be due dates to complete entries on your blog and letters will go home if these due dates are not met. You may complete your six personal responses as soon as you choose but the final deadline will be the start of the second week of term four. Date submitted Title Author Text Type (Written, Visual, Oral, Extended Written) Teacher approved Text choices: Your personal reading must meet the following requirements: All texts must be at Level 7 of the curriculum. All texts must be independently chosen and read. This excludes reading that takes place as a compulsory part of school study. 2 texts = Extended written text: novel, biography, memoir. 2 texts = Written text any form: novel, biography, memoir, drama/film script, poetry, short story, song lyrics, feature article/column. 2 texts = Any choice: written text types and: film, TV series, documentary, graphic novel, animation, play, musical, song album, spoken word poetry, speeches, podcasts. Two texts maximum in a series may be used. This is across all text types. Two texts maximum by the same author. Note: When borrowing books from the library it is best to issue several at a time. That way, if you do not like a book you have you can move onto another one straight away. You may also use electronic/e-reader copies of your texts. Explanations: 1 Level seven of the curriculum is advanced. Level 7 texts will allow you to “think critically.” For example, newspaper stories are not generally acceptable for level 7 of the curriculum, whereas a column piece may well meet level 7.Young Adult fiction is Level 7 while adolescent fiction is not. Refer to the list of recommended texts in this booklet to help guide you. Text(s) must also be suitable for your age (i.e., R18 texts are not allowed). 2 Form developed personal responses involves demonstrating understanding of, engagement with, and/or expressing viewpoints on texts. It also includes responding to links between: text and self, such as personal life and opinion, and prior knowledge text and world, such as making connections between the text and aspects of New Zealand society, other societies, moments in history, and aspects to do with human nature . Form developed, convincing personal responses involves including clearly explained reasons for your ideas and opinions. This will involve quality of ideas and the language and accuracy you use to express your reasoning. Form developed, perceptive personal responses involves demonstrating understandings and expressing viewpoints that are insightful and/or original and go beyond that which is normally expected from a Year 12 student. 3 Supported by evidence is when you refer to the use of specific and relevant details from the text to support your analysis and ideas. This can be quotations or specific description. Evidence must directly link to the explanation. 4 Written texts are: novels, biography/autobiography, memoir, journalism, essays, feature articles and columns, blogs or articles published online, reviews, poetry, drama and film scripts, short stories, song lyrics, non-fiction texts e.g. history books 5 Extended written texts are: novels, biography/autobiography, memoir 6 Visual texts are: film, tv series, documentary, animation, graphic novels 7 Oral texts are: speeches, spoken word poetry, seminars Plagiarism The act of plagiarism is taken very seriously at Glenfield College. Plagiarism is when you include someone else’s work without accurately acknowledging this. Remember to put your specific evidence from the novel in quotation marks. However, if you are referring to another writer’s comments you must acknowledge this through quotation marks and referring to the writer by name or the name of the website. Changing words but, ultimately, including someone else’s ideas and trying to pass them off as your own is also considered plagiarism. You will be assessed on your personal opinion, not your ability to copy someone else’s. Any acts deemed as plagiarism will result in a Not Achieved grade for the entire standard. The responses Your responses need to show that you have formed a personal opinion about the texts and that the texts have made you think about important ideas. You should develop your personal opinion about the text with examples and reasoning to why people should read or not read each text. Each response should be between 150 and 200 words, which translates to about two minutes speaking time per response. You may find the following questions helpful to answer as they may give you ideas when you begin creating your responses. a) What are the main issues that the author is writing about? Do you agree with the author? Why/why not? b) Are there any characters you identify with the most or characters who you see as being similar to friends or family? Why? c) Are there any characters that you especially empathised, sympathised with or hated? Why? d) Are there any lessons that that the characters have learnt? What do you think of the characters’ development/lack of development? What do you think about what they have learnt? Has their development/these lessons helped you to understand anything new? e) How has the writer presented a character? (Language, actions, dialogue, relationships with others etc) Did you find this believable? Why/ why not? What ideas did this character make you think about? f) Describe the setting in the text. Did the setting help you to understand an important idea? Explain what this idea is and how the setting helped you to understand it. g) Describe a moment or event in the text that surprised you and/or affected you emotionally. Why did it affect you so strongly? h) What stood out to you the most in the text? Why did this stand out and what did it make you think about? i) Has the text changed your opinions about a subject? How did it do this and what are your opinions now? j) What genre(s) does the text fall into? How much does it fit the expectations of the genre? How does it differ or subvert these expectations? k) Overall, would you recommend others read this text? Why/why not? What kind of people should definitely read this? The style of a blog Blogs may be in a conversational, colloquial tone. In fact, the idea is that you write/speak in a voice that reflects who you are. You may include pictures that relate to your blog and design its overall look. However, slang, swearing and offensive language/comments of any kind are not appropriate. Also, though you will not be especially marked on accuracy, having correct grammar and punctuation will help make your writing more convincing and perceptive. You may make stylistic choices, though, that do play with the conventions of English. This means deliberately using capitalisation, bolded, different coloured fonts and different stye fonts, multiple exclamation/question marks, and emoticons is acceptable. If it is used deliberately. Plot summaries are not necessary for your responses. You may copy and paste the blurbs/publisher’s descriptions of books to your blog, which will give a brief idea of the story’s plot. Visit inkcrush.blogspot.co.nz and goodreads.com for exemplars of strong blog book reviews.. Exemplars High Excellence– Looking for Alaska by John Green Looking for Alaska explores love, lust, loss and longing. It looks a little pretentious, and the first few chapters ARE a little pretentious, but it’s a lot like a person in the shape of a book – it’s layered and actually requires THINKING to figure out. With quotes like this one “I wanted to be one of those people who have streaks to maintain, who scorch the ground with their intensity. But for now, at least I knew such people, and they needed me, just like comets need tails.” it won’t take you long to realize what a masterpiece this sucker is. Green wrote the most all-rounded characters in Looking for Alaska because even if their IQs are (probably) higher than yours, if you look, you can find a bit of yourself in each of them. Alaska, for example, is the carefree, yet complicated person I’ve always strived to be. The way she preaches feminist dogma but doesn’t let that be the only aspect of her identity. Her character brings out the same desperation I have to be the pink-haired, nose-ringed, toothpicks-for-limbs girl I see on my way to class sometimes, the girl who wears pajamas, to school. I credit the author of this book for using his characters to demonstrate that not all teenagers only get revelations when they’re doped up. Green’s writing is raw but well-polished, and he easily captured my thoughts and eased me into Miles’s – the narrator’s - mind. Green was able to expand my thinking and open up thoughts and emotions that I never knew existed. For example, The Buddha said that suffering was caused by desire, we'd learned, and that the cessation of desire meant the cessation of suffering. When you stopped wishing things wouldn't fall apart, you'd stop suffering when they did.” Looking for Alaska is a lot like that pink-haired girl; you meet her, you can talk to her and you can fall in love with her, but you’ll never really understand her. Green uses the novel to show how growing up is equal parts pain and happiness, confusion and revelation. He captures how it feels to begin growing into your own identity and how much of a labyrinth the real world is. This book is well worth the Printz it won, and I’ll be rereading it over in years to come to find more of the hidden gem inside that I couldn’t seek during my first reading Opinion clearly stated in one introductory sentence. (Rest of review backs this up.) Supporting evidence. Sophisticated language used throughout. Personal opinion given about the writing style. . Supporting evidence. Perceptive comment made about theme. Personal response/reaction to the novel that leaves a ties the review together. Merit – Jasper Jones by Craig Silvey So finally my review of Jasper Jones is done! Ta da: This novel was soooo complex, charting Charlie’s coming-of-age. The mixed-race black sheep of an Australian small town, Jasper startles our young protagonist, Charlie, by choosing to share with him a shocking and haunting secret. A secret that will change their lives forever. “And it happens like that... He’s right. Jasper Jones is right. He’s really in trouble.” And so begins a quest to protect Jasper Jones. What also begins is Charlie's transformation from boy to man. This is the summer where everything changes. Charlie learns the way the world really is. He experiences first love and realises that the world is not as simple as he used to think. There are so many things that I loved about this book. I really loved Silvey’s writing, especially his dialogue. This book just flowed. I also felt that Charlie’s romance with Eliza was much more realistic than that of the YA books I have previously read. I really empathised so much with Charlie when he tried to talk to Eliza. “I am nervous. Where is the sharp ballroom wit that I always imagined would punctuate this moment?” Low Achieved - No Book but the World by Leah Hager Ava and her brother, Fred, grew up in a peaceful, idealistic environment; free to roam and explore the world around them, free to make all of their own decisions. I felt sorry for Fred because he was mentally challenged but his parents didn’t get him help. When Fred is later accused of a terrible crime, Ava is forced to think about how they grew up and how he should have been raised differently. The story is hard to follow because it keeps changing between past and present so it means you really have to think hard while reading. But the ending... wow. It was gut-wrenching. Like I'd been punched in the stomach. No Book but the World brings up big themes for its readers like how should children be raised and how we should look after the mentally disable. Leah Hager Cohen made me think about these themes a lot. This is a good novel well worth reading. Interesting start shows personal voice. Supporting evidence for plot. Complex language used. Character development discussed. Personal opinion about the writing. Supporting evidence. Review lacks overall cohesiveness for Excellence. Ideas are good, but they jump around a lot. Brief plot summary. (You don’t need to include this. You can jump straight to the review) Comment about character. Basic language mostly used. Mature understanding of structure. Nice colloquial expression creating a personal voice. Personal response. (Though undeveloped and no overall linking throughout response.) Sentence Starters Introducing overall opinion My main impression is… Overall, I think… My opinion can best be explained as… Discussing literary elements such as character, theme, setting, style and genre The character develops from… The writer uses the character to express… Through (name) we understand… The character is similar to… The theme of…is developed through the… This helps get across the author’s message of… The book made me think about…in a different way because… This offered a new insight into… The setting of the book is best described as… The setting represents… The writer uses many… The writer’s tone is best described as… The style of the book is…(formal, colloquial, intentionally complicated etc) This book/film etc is within the genre of… This text conforms to the genre because… This text subverts the genre because… This text is an excellent addition to the genre because… Explaining personal opinion The aspect of the book that best involved me was… I especially liked… However, aspects I did not like were… Compared to similar texts I think this is… This made me think about… I was disgusted by… I felt sympathy towards… I empathised the most with… Giving reasoning The reasons I think this are… This is because… I believe this because… For this reason I think… Introducing evidence This is shown when… For example,… This is illustrated by… The writer uses…such as… Comparison This is like… Along the same lines… ? can be compared to… In the same manner… In similar fashion… Contrast This is different from… Even though… However… Nevertheless/nonetheless… Otherwise… Making connections The character that I relate to the most is…This is because… The character I identify the most with is… This is similar to my life/the life of a teenager because… Another books/film/poem/song that has the same characters is…the same theme is… We see this in the world today… This is like when…(describe historical event) Returning to overall opinion As you can see I think… So these are my reasons for believing… It is, thus clear that my opinion is… Planning your responses: Use these graphic organisers to plan responses for your texts either during or after reading. Make sure you include at least two specific opinions and quotes for each text in your planning. Text 1 1. Ideas table Characters Theme Style Setting P – Plus: Positive comments about the book M – Minus: Negative comments about the book I – Interesting: Questions the book raised for you, interesting ideas 2. Connections – use this graphic organiser to help you make connections with your text. o o Text to self: Can you relate to the characters in the story? Does anything in this story remind you of anything in your own life? Text to text: o o How is this text similar/different to other texts? Text: Text to world: What does this remind you of in the real world/history? o How are events in this story similar/different to things that happen in the real world/history? Text to human nature: How is a character in this text similar to how people are in real life? Overall, what kind of view of human nature is the author presenting? Text 2 1. Ideas table Characters Theme Style Setting P – Plus: Positive comments about the book M – Minus: Negative comments about the book I – Interesting: Questions the book raised for you, interesting ideas 2. Connections – use this graphic organiser to help you make connections with your text. o o Text to self: Can you relate to the characters in the story? Does anything in this story remind you of anything in your own life? Text to text: o o How is this text similar/different to other texts? Text: Text to world: What does this remind you of in the real world/history? o How are events in this story similar/different to things that happen in the real world/history? Text to human nature: How is a character in this text similar to how people are in real life? Overall, what kind of view of human nature is the author presenting? Text 3 1. Ideas table Characters Theme Style Setting P – Plus: Positive comments about the book M – Minus: Negative comments about the book I – Interesting: Questions the book raised for you, interesting ideas 2. Connections – use this graphic organiser to help you make connections with your text. o o Text to self: Can you relate to the characters in the story? Does anything in this story remind you of anything in your own life? Text to text: o o How is this text similar/different to other texts? Text: Text to world: What does this remind you of in the real world/history? o How are events in this story similar/different to things that happen in the real world/history? Text to human nature: How is a character in this text similar to how people are in real life? Overall, what kind of view of human nature is the author presenting? Text 4 1. Ideas table Characters Theme Style Setting P – Plus: Positive comments about the book M – Minus: Negative comments about the book I – Interesting: Questions the book raised for you, interesting ideas 2. Connections – use this graphic organiser to help you make connections with your text. o o Text to self: Can you relate to the characters in the story? Does anything in this story remind you of anything in your own life? Text to text: o o How is this text similar/different to other texts? Text: Text to world: What does this remind you of in the real world/history? o How are events in this story similar/different to things that happen in the real world/history? Text to human nature: How is a character in this text similar to how people are in real life? Overall, what kind of view of human nature is the author presenting? Text 5 1. Ideas table Characters Theme Style Setting P – Plus: Positive comments about the book M – Minus: Negative comments about the book I – Interesting: Questions the book raised for you, interesting ideas 2. Connections – use this graphic organiser to help you make connections with your text. o o Text to self: Can you relate to the characters in the story? Does anything in this story remind you of anything in your own life? Text to text: o o How is this text similar/different to other texts? Text: Text to world: What does this remind you of in the real world/history? o How are events in this story similar/different to things that happen in the real world/history? Text to human nature: How is a character in this text similar to how people are in real life? Overall, what kind of view of human nature is the author presenting? Text 6 1. Ideas table Characters Theme Style Setting P – Plus: Positive comments about the book M – Minus: Negative comments about the book I – Interesting: Questions the book raised for you, interesting ideas 2. Connections – use this graphic organiser to help you make connections with your text. o o Text to self: Can you relate to the characters in the story? Does anything in this story remind you of anything in your own life? Text to text: o o How is this text similar/different to other texts? Text: Text to world: What does this remind you of in the real world/history? o How are events in this story similar/different to things that happen in the real world/history? Text to human nature: How is a character in this text similar to how people are in real life? Overall, what kind of view of human nature is the author presenting? Level 2 Extended Text Lists for 2.9 (NB: This is not an exhaustive list.) Fiction Good Omens – Terry Pratchett and Neil Gaiman Ender’s Game – Orson Scott Card Looking for Alaska – John Green The Fault in Our Stars – John Green 1984 – George Orwell Dracula – Bram Stoker Frankenstein – Mary Shelley The Bell Jar – Sylvia Plath The Grapes of Wrath – John Steinbeck The Pearl – John Steinbeck The Call of the Wild – Jack London The Old Man and the Sea – Ernest Hemmingway The Perks of Being a Wallflower – Stephen Chobsky The Maze Runner – James Dashner Dune – Frank Herbert The Power of One – Bryce Courtney Across the Nightingale Floor – Lian Hern The God Boy – Ian Cross The Book of Fame – Lloyd Jones Jasper Jones – Craig Silvey Death of a Superhero – Anthony McCarten My Sister’s Keeper – Jodi Picoult A Thousand Splendid Suns – Khaled Hoissini The Kite Runner - Khaled Hoissini Life of Pi – Yann Mattell The Lovely Bones – Alice Seabold The Wasp Factory – Ian Banks Brave New World – Aldous Huxley Catch-22 – Joseph Heller The Stand – Stephen King On The Road – Jack Kerouac Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas – Hunter S. Thompson The Hitch-Hiker’s Guide to the Galaxy – Douglas Adams Purple Hibiscus Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie Half of the Yellow Sun– Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie Empire of the Sun – J G Ballard March – Geraldine Brooks American Gods – Neil Gaiman The Ocean at the End of the Road – Neil Gaiman Anansi Boys – Neil Gaiman Neverwhere – Neil Gaiman The Amazing Adventures of Cavalier and Clay – Michael Chabon The Final Solution – Michael Chabon Girl with a Pearl Earring – Tracy Chevalier Water for Elephants – Sarah Gruen Apehouse – Sarah Gruen Dreamhunter – Elizabeth Knox The Poinsonwood Bible – Barbara Kingsolver The Namesake – Jhumpa Lahiri Wicked – Gregory Maguire In the Lake of the Woods – Tim O’Brien The Shipping News – Annie Proulx The God of Small Things – Arundhati Roy The Art of Racing in the Rain – Garth Stein The Bonesetter’s Daughter – Amy Tan The Joy Luck Club – Amy Tan Norwegian Wood – Haruki Murakami The Wind Up Bird Chronicle – Haruki Murakami The Wild Sheep Chase – Haruki Murakami Number Nine Dream – David Mitchell Black Swan Green – David Mitchell Speak – Laurie Anderson Triage – Laurie Anderson A Gathering Light – Jennifer Donnelly The Secret Life of Bees – Sue Monk Kidd The Help – Kathryn Stockett Breathe – Tim Winton The Book Thief – Markus Zusak The Lord of the Rings – JRR Tolkien The Motel Life – Willy Vlautin American Rust – Philipp Meyer Empire Falls – Richard Russo Sports Writer – Richard Ford The Hours – Michael Cunnigham The Beach – Alex Garland Everything is Illuminated – Jonathan Saffin-Fower World War Z – Max Brooks Cat’s Cradle – Margaret Atwood The Handmaids Tale – Margaret Atwood Oranges Are Not the Only Fruit – Jeanette Winterson In My Father’s Den – Maurice Gee Watership Down – Richard Adams The Uncle’s Story – Whiti Ihimaera Never Let Me Go – Kazuo Ishiguro The Trial – Franz Kafka Stone Dogs – Craig Marriner Q & A – Vikas Swarp I, Robot – Isaac Asimov I Capture the Castle – Dodi Smtih Open – Andre Agassi The Brief Wondrous Life of Wao – Junot Diaz Before I Fall – Lauren Oliver Nick and Norah’s Infinite Playlist – Rachel Cohn and David Levithan If I Stay – Gayle Forman The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie – Merial Spark Wintergirls – Laurie Halse Anderson Shadow of the Wind – Carlos Ruiz Zafon The Angel’s Game – Carlos Ruiz Zafon The Power of One – Bryce Courtney Tandia – Bryce Courtney Jessica – Bryce Courtney Trinity – Leon Urbis Angela’s Ashes – Frank McCort A Confederacy of Dunces – John Kennedy Toole The Bone People – Keri Hulme Once Were Warriors – Alan Duff What Becomes of the Broken Hearted – Alan Duff The Story of a New Zealand River – Jane Mander A Time to Kill – John Grisham The Pelican Brief – John Grisham Killing Floor – Lee Child Die Trying – Lee Child The Divine Secrets of the YaYa Sisterhood – Rebecca Wells Great Expectations – Charles Dickens The Crucible – Arthur Miller The Glass Menagerie – Tennesse Williams A Raisin in the Sun – Lorraine Hainsbury The Tea Rose – Jennifer Donnelley The Denniston Rose – Jenny Patrick Sense and Sensability – Jane Austen High Fidelity – Nick Hornby Wonderboys – Michael Chabon Night – Ellie Wiesel New Zealand Poetry James K Baxter Glenn Colquhoun Karlo Mila Michelle Leggott Brian Turner Jenny Bronholdt International Poetry Billy Collins Emily Dickinson Stevie Smith Anne Sexton Walt Whitman Maya Angelou Non-Fiction It’s Not About the Bike – Lance Armstrong Between a Rock and a Hard Place – Aron Ralston A Walk in the Woods – Bill Bryson A Short History of Nearly Everything – Bill Bryson Friday Night Lights – HG Bissinger The Language Instinct – Stephen Pinker Outliers – Malcolm Gladwell The Tipping Point – Malcolm Gladwell Queen Bees and Wannabees – Rosalind Wiseman The Discomfort Zone – Jonathan Franzen An Inconvenient Truth – Al Gore Stupid White Men – Michael Moore Into the Wild – John Kraukar Into Thin Air – John Kraukar With the Old Breed – Eugene Sledge Helmet for the Pillow – Robert Licke It’s All About Treo – Dave Heyho Mud, Sweat and Tears – Bear Grylls Soldier Dogs – Lisa Rogak I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings – Maya Angelou Guns, Germs and Steel – Jared Diamond Lean In – Sheryl Sandberg Homage to Catalonia – George Orwell The Teachings of Don Juan: A Yaqui Way Knowledge – Carlos Castaneda The Long Way Round – Euan MacGregor and Charlie Boorman Around the World in 80 Days – Michael Palin Pole to Pole – Michael Palin Scar Tissue – Anthony Kaedis Jar Head – Anthony Swofford Jim Morrison: Life, Death and Legend – Stephen Davis Morrisey Autobiography – Morrisey Freakanomics – Stephen J Dunbar and Steven Levitt Sylvia Plath Constantine Cavafy Carol Ann Duffy Allan Ginsberg Raymond Luczak Playwrights William Shakespeare Tennessee Williams Arthur Miller Eli Kent Graphic Novels Blankets American Born Chinese Scott Pilgrim Lost at Sea Locke and Key Persepolis Maus Palestine Akira De: Tales Daytripper Watchmen Umbrella Academy A History of Violence Some superhero collections: o Kingdom Come o Identity Crisis o Dark Phoenix Saga Albums The Wall – Pink Floyd Dark Side of the Moon – Pink Floyd Pure Heroine – Lorde Born in the USA – Bruce Springsteen Born to Run – Bruce Springsteen American Idiot – Green Day Late Registration – Kanye West Ready to Die – Notorious B.I.G All Eyez on Me – Tupac The Blueprint – Jay-Z Songs of Leonard Cohen – Leonard Cohen The Fame – Lady Gaga Highway 61 Revisited – Bob Dylan Back in Black – Amy Winehouse The Heist - Macklemore Sweet America - Buffy St. Marie Maya - M.I.A Film A Beautiful Mind A Few Good Men Aliens All Quiet on the Western Front Amazing Grace Amistad An Angel at My Table Angela’s Ashes Braveheart Bright Star Children of Men Citizen Kane Dead Man Walking Desert Flower District 9 Donnie Darko Doubt Eight Mile Erin Brokovich Everything is Illuminated Good Will Hunting Gran Torino Hamlet Hotel Rwanda Lars and the Real Girl Life is Beautiful Made in Dagenham Malcolm X Million Dollar Baby Minority Report Mississippi Burning Motorcycle Diaries Moulin Rouge No 2 Redemption Richard III Road to Perdition Run Lola, Run Saving Private Ryan Schindler’s List Silverlinings PlaybookThe Help The Killing Fields The Matrix The Navigator The Pianist The Queen The Social Network Touching the Void True Grit Tsotsi V for Vendetta Winter’s Bone TV Series The Wire The Office Community Parks and Recreation West Wing Being Human Skins Outrageous Fortune Veronica Mars Homeland Grey’s Anatomy Buffy the Vampire Slayer Fireflly